Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



To Jail He Went.
sorenbarrett said:

Surprise endings are always great whether movies, books or poems. Only in life itself can they be problematic. A fun read Andy

June 22nd, 2025 03:26

To Jail He Went.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold. Monopoly\'s got silly now. they have skyscrapers too. if you land on one and have to pay up, that\'s it usually.
Doh! I thought I was playing monopoly, but it was a church asking for more money! Some get greedy.

June 22nd, 2025 02:02

The Longest Day Sonnet.
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Andy

June 21st, 2025 17:54

The Longest Day Sonnet.
Doggerel Dave said:

You and your bleedin\' sonnets!!......... Orright it was a good \'un, up to your usual standard (v. high) but where I am we are suffering the winter solstice and Antarctica has visited us to celebrate.
Thanks for the memory of summers past, Andy.

June 21st, 2025 17:04

The Longest Day Sonnet.
Jerry Reynolds said:

Wow! Andy. I loved it, a fine read.

June 21st, 2025 06:08

The Longest Day Sonnet.
David Wakeling said:

This is a wonderful description of the longest day.From endless hues to evening breezes. Wonderfully written with rhyme.Well done amigo

June 21st, 2025 04:49

The Longest Day Sonnet.
Poetic Licence said:

And what a cracker weather wise it was, enjoyed the read

June 21st, 2025 04:07

The Longest Day Sonnet.
sorenbarrett said:

A most beautiful sonnet Andy that gives images of a warm long summer day that lazily lingers into the night. Loved it

June 21st, 2025 03:51

The Longest Day Sonnet.
arqios said:

And we have our shortest day today! Polar opposites๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

June 21st, 2025 02:43

The Longest Day Sonnet.
Teddy.15 said:

Gorgeous poem. ๐ŸŒน


June 21st, 2025 01:41

The Longest Day Sonnet.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.

June 21st, 2025 01:35

The Longest Day.
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Andy. Enjoy your day.

June 20th, 2025 07:37

The Longest Day.
Poetic Licence said:

Very uplifting and enjoyable read

June 20th, 2025 07:15

The Longest Day.
David Wakeling said:

The longest day sounds wonderful. Peace and Love together.Excellent poem

June 20th, 2025 04:14

The Longest Day.
sorenbarrett said:

A day to be marked but no holiday offered. A fun and very summery or in the south wintery day and poem. Nicely said Andy

June 20th, 2025 03:55

The Longest Day.
arqios said:

A long day is ideal with joy sustaining it throughout its length and breadth and depth! ๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

June 20th, 2025 03:13

The Longest Day.
Teddy.15 said:

I know the UK is basking in the heat, enjoy as much as you can dear Andy. Happy weekend my dear friend. ๐ŸŒน

June 20th, 2025 02:49

The Longest Day.
orchidee said:

I thought it was tomorrow, 21st? Last year it was 20th, as there was an extra day for leap year.

June 20th, 2025 01:58

Where Does Time Go?
John Prophet said:

Was not familiar with those fellows. Did a little research. Pleasant sound they had. Nice write Andy.
John

June 19th, 2025 18:14

Where Does Time Go?
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Andy

June 19th, 2025 16:41

Where Does Time Go?
MendedFences27 said:

Andy, I felt this one. For me it was my 21\'st birthday, so. 60 years ago. What I remember are the tortuous few weeks that followed. It was well worth it. Thanks for the memory. - Phil A.

June 19th, 2025 11:43

Where Does Time Go?
Jerry Reynolds said:

Well written, Andy. Great question. Far more of it in the past than left in the future.

June 19th, 2025 07:05

Where Does Time Go?
Poetic Licence said:

In the blink of an eye there\'s more of your past than your future, enjoyed the read

June 19th, 2025 06:07

Where Does Time Go?
David Wakeling said:

I ask the same question. Time just goes so quickly we cant keep up.A frank and honest poem.Well done

June 19th, 2025 04:26

Where Does Time Go?
sorenbarrett said:

Time is a slippery and ephemeral ghost that is hard to grasp. Where does it go indeed

June 19th, 2025 03:54

Where Does Time Go?
Teddy.15 said:

Wow that\'s a triumph for sure. ๐ŸŒน

June 19th, 2025 03:09

Where Does Time Go?
arqios said:

Indeed, where does it go!? And thereโ€™s so much of it still coming our way๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

June 19th, 2025 02:30

Where Does Time Go?
Doggerel Dave said:

For me after many many tries finally gave up 27/12/86 the day I returned to Australia. It took a change of country to achieve success.
At least you have had them (those years). Need I add that if you had continued with those smokes.........
Your good health, Andy.

June 19th, 2025 02:11

Where Does Time Go?
orchidee said:

For us two, 43 years is like, say, 43 hours, with us being millions of years old. lol. Yes, 1980\'s stuff appears in antiques shows these days.

June 19th, 2025 01:55

Daily List.
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Andy

June 18th, 2025 18:45



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