Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



The Lost Words.
SureshG said:

so many times I wish my mind,
too had a button called ‘rewind’,
for while penning my thoughts,
what brought me here, I forgot.

I’ll go over your thoughtful poem a few times, and maybe it will help this poor soul

July 13th, 2021 12:21

The Lost Words.
L. B. Mek said:

yeah brother, yeah - and the rest...
I can so relate!
thank you Andy, so it\'s not just me... lol

July 13th, 2021 05:49

The Lost Words.
Accidental Poet said:

They come and go as the Muse decides their uses. ; )
Well penned Andy.

July 13th, 2021 05:28

The Lost Words.
Saxon Crow said:

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July 13th, 2021 02:33

The Lost Words.
dusk arising said:

I keep a file of lost words, unused phrases. When inspiration fades I will often look at that file and something fires up, starts that chain reaction of creativity, a poem is born.

July 13th, 2021 02:29

The Lost Words.
Doggerel Dave said:

That\'s a little creepy Andy - have you got some kind of access to my skull? I was doing that two minutes ago, gave up and ended up here....
Hopefully lost words will return in another context.
Good \'\'Un....

July 13th, 2021 02:00

I Awake Into A New Day.
myself and me said:

Happy 26,578th day! A wonderful way to start a new day. full of positive energy.

July 12th, 2021 21:46

I Awake Into A New Day.
ron parrish aka wordman said:

it will bring lots of good things

July 12th, 2021 18:49

I Awake Into A New Day.
Accidental Poet said:

A smile a day keeps the blues away. Go Andy. ; )

July 12th, 2021 18:40

I Awake Into A New Day.
Trenz Pruca said:

I think I will try reciting this those mornings when getting out of bed and greeting the day appears far less appetizing than turning back over and returning to sleep. Thanks.

July 12th, 2021 13:28

I Awake Into A New Day.
Jerry Reynolds said:

seventy two trips around
a sun blossom
traveler sips from lake joy


July 12th, 2021 13:20

I Awake Into A New Day.
Fay Slimm. said:

A remarkable testimony again my special friend on how to live life and retain contentment - - such an inspiring read.

July 12th, 2021 06:20

I Awake Into A New Day.
L. B. Mek said:

\'That absolute wonder
Of dots on a page,\'
that simplicity of poetry\'s: poignantly worded imagery,
thank you, another uplifting read Andy
is today just a random day to celebrate
being alive
or something more traditionally meaningful
like your birthday?
(in case it\'s the latter
let me just wish you a happy birthday
just to be safe, my friend
rather be foolishly wrong, than belatedly sorry) lol


July 12th, 2021 05:42

I Awake Into A New Day.
Neville said:


I shall raise my flagon this very eve in your honour sir :)

July 12th, 2021 03:00

I Awake Into A New Day.
Poetic Dan said:

26k hip hop hooray, what wonderful mileage you have to say. I can only hope to reflect some of those awesome rays!

Have a fantastic day

July 12th, 2021 02:15

Field Of Dreams Tanka.
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Andy.
When you relax, your field naturally attunes itself to higher frequencies.

July 11th, 2021 06:53

Field Of Dreams Tanka.
John Prophet said:

Very nice Andy 👍🏼

July 11th, 2021 06:32

Field Of Dreams Tanka.
Poetic Dan said:

A beautiful soundtrack to wake up to and I didn\'t play the tune, just happy with your words and the melody of the mood.

Fantastic as ever, always a pleasure to read

July 11th, 2021 06:31

Field Of Dreams Tanka.
Accidental Poet said:

Beautiful song video as is your words Andy. A perfect match. ; )

July 11th, 2021 06:17

Field Of Dreams Tanka.
Doggerel Dave said:

My Poetic Side -
A poetry writing school.
I’m learning a lot.
Inspiration strikes often
When I’m given a challenge.

Do I get a big tick for that - or a big raspberry, Andy? 😊
(Big difference compared to yours - mine has no soul.)

July 11th, 2021 02:11

Field Of Dreams Tanka.
Neville said:


this is both different and very special my golden friend ... enjoyed no end ..

July 11th, 2021 01:48

Field Of Dreams Tanka.
dusk arising said:

Your river Avon, always there with it\'s tranquil reassuring natural flow confirming the spiritual within us all.

{But we\'ve both seen it necessarily different in times of flood)

July 11th, 2021 01:32

At The Top Of The Hill.
Thekkinkkattil said:

A touching poem.I too feel the same . Hope that loved ones will be waiting for us is a real good thought may it be our parents or friends

July 11th, 2021 00:22

At The Top Of The Hill.
myself and me said:

You are living such a wonderful and true life. A life I am dreaming about.

July 10th, 2021 22:40

Passed The Universe.
Jon Nakapalau said:

Last three lines - powerful.

July 10th, 2021 16:27

At The Top Of The Hill.
Jon Nakapalau said:

Wonderful meditation on what is truly important - inspired.

July 10th, 2021 16:27

At The Top Of The Hill.
Jerry Reynolds said:

Loving write, Andy.

July 10th, 2021 14:34

At The Top Of The Hill.
dusk arising said:

Moved me to tears.

A must for my favourites.

July 10th, 2021 12:48

At The Top Of The Hill.
SureshG said:

She is still your forever love, and stamina to keep climbing that hill and writing these prose

July 10th, 2021 11:36

At The Top Of The Hill.
Accidental Poet said:

Yes Andy, she is with you every step of the way. ; )

July 10th, 2021 08:07



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