Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Through The Mist.
Neil Higgins said:
A brilliantly constructed piece.I can visualize every statement.Very spiritual,and very alive in word play.
August 2nd, 2022 03:49
Neil Higgins said:
A brilliantly constructed piece.I can visualize every statement.Very spiritual,and very alive in word play.
August 2nd, 2022 03:49
Through The Mist.
Neville said:
very atmospheric sir if you dont mind me saying so .. and your metaphors are simply to die for ........ write on my friend & go well ................ Neville
August 2nd, 2022 01:28
Neville said:
very atmospheric sir if you dont mind me saying so .. and your metaphors are simply to die for ........ write on my friend & go well ................ Neville
August 2nd, 2022 01:28
RIP Uhura.
sorenbarrett said:
I too remember watching star trek and each star that passes reminds me of my own age. A very nice write.
August 1st, 2022 06:43
sorenbarrett said:
I too remember watching star trek and each star that passes reminds me of my own age. A very nice write.
August 1st, 2022 06:43
RIP Uhura.
L. B. Mek said:
what a classy dedication!
may she rest in peace
thanks Andy
August 1st, 2022 03:34
L. B. Mek said:
what a classy dedication!
may she rest in peace
thanks Andy
August 1st, 2022 03:34
Dad Dancing.
Bella Shepard said:
You just hit on something dear to my heart. I hear the music and I can\'t help but move. I rarely get to go dancing anymore, but nothing stops me from dancing, by myself, in my living room, to music of the sixties. Only problem is that hips and knees have aged, where the brain has not followed. Thank you for this little trip down memory lane, a great write!
July 31st, 2022 11:18
Bella Shepard said:
You just hit on something dear to my heart. I hear the music and I can\'t help but move. I rarely get to go dancing anymore, but nothing stops me from dancing, by myself, in my living room, to music of the sixties. Only problem is that hips and knees have aged, where the brain has not followed. Thank you for this little trip down memory lane, a great write!
July 31st, 2022 11:18
Dad Dancing.
Justa_Geezer said:
Loved your sentiments and memories of the front room two step Goldfinch !
July 31st, 2022 05:04
Justa_Geezer said:
Loved your sentiments and memories of the front room two step Goldfinch !
July 31st, 2022 05:04
Wonderful Life.
Bella Shepard said:
Amen, my friend! You are so right, every moment is precious. Thank you for this beautiful, life affirming poem!
July 30th, 2022 13:42
Bella Shepard said:
Amen, my friend! You are so right, every moment is precious. Thank you for this beautiful, life affirming poem!
July 30th, 2022 13:42
Wonderful Life.
orchidee said:
We\'re both getting older too. How many millions of years old are we?! lol.
July 30th, 2022 01:31
orchidee said:
We\'re both getting older too. How many millions of years old are we?! lol.
July 30th, 2022 01:31
Laughter And Sleep.
Doggerel Dave said:
Andy, You need to put your sage advises together and write a self help book instead of scattering your pearls of wisdom around here (not suggesting you stop!!)
July 29th, 2022 07:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Andy, You need to put your sage advises together and write a self help book instead of scattering your pearls of wisdom around here (not suggesting you stop!!)
July 29th, 2022 07:17
Laughter And Sleep.
Fay Slimm. said:
Agreed dear Andy - and my feet are still tapping to that Beach Boys number - -wow - those were the days - -I loved and still love their sound.
July 29th, 2022 04:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Agreed dear Andy - and my feet are still tapping to that Beach Boys number - -wow - those were the days - -I loved and still love their sound.
July 29th, 2022 04:04
Laughter And Sleep.
L. B. Mek said:
that\'s why insomnia
is such an evil, hindrance
to our whole wellness
and sleeping pills, are such a dangerous slippery-slope
to addiction\'s or unhealthy over reliance\'s, doors..
but I have found powernaps
are a great way to get your accumulative sleep..
as for laughter
get it wherever you can
laugh till you can\'t breathe and be grateful
for each chuckle..
(such a great read, Andy
and so, so
timely and relevant)
thank you!
July 29th, 2022 03:59
L. B. Mek said:
that\'s why insomnia
is such an evil, hindrance
to our whole wellness
and sleeping pills, are such a dangerous slippery-slope
to addiction\'s or unhealthy over reliance\'s, doors..
but I have found powernaps
are a great way to get your accumulative sleep..
as for laughter
get it wherever you can
laugh till you can\'t breathe and be grateful
for each chuckle..
(such a great read, Andy
and so, so
timely and relevant)
thank you!
July 29th, 2022 03:59
Laughter And Sleep.
Neville said:
I\'m gonna try & put your last four lines to the test the next time I\'m on call and get summoned to the holding cells at the local nick in the middle of the night , just so some other soul can get some shuteye ...
Neville .. :)
July 29th, 2022 03:07
Neville said:
I\'m gonna try & put your last four lines to the test the next time I\'m on call and get summoned to the holding cells at the local nick in the middle of the night , just so some other soul can get some shuteye ...
Neville .. :)
July 29th, 2022 03:07
Laughter And Sleep.
dusk arising said:
Absolutely agree with you here. Above all, be gentle with yourself.
July 29th, 2022 02:47
dusk arising said:
Absolutely agree with you here. Above all, be gentle with yourself.
July 29th, 2022 02:47
Laughter And Sleep.
orchidee said:
Ain\'t no laughing when I sing. Best to be asleep through my recitals! lol.
July 29th, 2022 01:32
orchidee said:
Ain\'t no laughing when I sing. Best to be asleep through my recitals! lol.
July 29th, 2022 01:32
There Will Be No Hurricane Tonight.
Fay Slimm. said:
The worst weather forecast ever given was that time in eighty seven when all hell was let loose and you were there to see it all Andy - - terror you will never forget.
July 28th, 2022 16:01
Fay Slimm. said:
The worst weather forecast ever given was that time in eighty seven when all hell was let loose and you were there to see it all Andy - - terror you will never forget.
July 28th, 2022 16:01
There Will Be No Hurricane Tonight.
dusk arising said:
Something very \'Fishy\' about the weather that night Andy.
There was a less newsworthy hurricane in early 60\'s Nottinghamshire which nealy saw the end of my brother and me when a huge brick chimney was blown over and landed on the roof above where were were in our beds. Had that roof been less robust it would have ended my poetry there and then lol.
A great poem from you today. We brits are known for our \'talking about the weather\' and boy do we have occasions to talk about especially this month.
July 28th, 2022 03:14
dusk arising said:
Something very \'Fishy\' about the weather that night Andy.
There was a less newsworthy hurricane in early 60\'s Nottinghamshire which nealy saw the end of my brother and me when a huge brick chimney was blown over and landed on the roof above where were were in our beds. Had that roof been less robust it would have ended my poetry there and then lol.
A great poem from you today. We brits are known for our \'talking about the weather\' and boy do we have occasions to talk about especially this month.
July 28th, 2022 03:14
There Will Be No Hurricane Tonight.
L. B. Mek said:
so detailed, thanks for sharing
dear Poet
July 28th, 2022 02:47
L. B. Mek said:
so detailed, thanks for sharing
dear Poet
July 28th, 2022 02:47
There Will Be No Hurricane Tonight.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. will there be no singing tonight?! lol
July 28th, 2022 01:49
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. will there be no singing tonight?! lol
July 28th, 2022 01:49
Strange Dream.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Water dreams. A lot of symbols in those. A foreboding write, Andy.
July 27th, 2022 14:52
Jerry Reynolds said:
Water dreams. A lot of symbols in those. A foreboding write, Andy.
July 27th, 2022 14:52
Strange Dream.
Bella Shepard said:
The funny thing is, this sounds like one of my typical days. Keep on dreaming my friend, and giving us these wonderful writes!
July 27th, 2022 10:59
Bella Shepard said:
The funny thing is, this sounds like one of my typical days. Keep on dreaming my friend, and giving us these wonderful writes!
July 27th, 2022 10:59
Strange Dream.
Raven333 said:
What a dream!!! Crazy.. I like dreams, mostly dreams that are pleasant not terror..
July 27th, 2022 10:07
Raven333 said:
What a dream!!! Crazy.. I like dreams, mostly dreams that are pleasant not terror..
July 27th, 2022 10:07
Strange Dream.
Doggerel Dave said:
Glad to know you don\'t remember most dreams, Andy - I\'d get quite discombobulated if exposed to too many of them.....lol
July 27th, 2022 08:23
Doggerel Dave said:
Glad to know you don\'t remember most dreams, Andy - I\'d get quite discombobulated if exposed to too many of them.....lol
July 27th, 2022 08:23
Strange Dream.
arqios said:
Dreams are skittish things. Don\'t remember most of mine either. But the ones that do make an indelible impression. Thanks for sharing.
July 27th, 2022 07:50
arqios said:
Dreams are skittish things. Don\'t remember most of mine either. But the ones that do make an indelible impression. Thanks for sharing.
July 27th, 2022 07:50
Strange Dream.
John Prophet said:
Anxiety dreams happen from time to time. Nice rendition!
July 27th, 2022 07:14
John Prophet said:
Anxiety dreams happen from time to time. Nice rendition!
July 27th, 2022 07:14
Strange Dream.
dusk arising said:
Ah well, now you have uncovered my secret talent... I am able to read from the dreams of others.
Your dream follows a quite frequent theme as recounted by many but more especially in the warmer months when sleep can be restless.
Though not so easily discerned as some more bland dreams of others it is plain to see your dream is telling you, nay, in fact pointing you in the direction of refraint. Stop eating cheese before bedtime!
Keep smiling.
July 27th, 2022 03:38
dusk arising said:
Ah well, now you have uncovered my secret talent... I am able to read from the dreams of others.
Your dream follows a quite frequent theme as recounted by many but more especially in the warmer months when sleep can be restless.
Though not so easily discerned as some more bland dreams of others it is plain to see your dream is telling you, nay, in fact pointing you in the direction of refraint. Stop eating cheese before bedtime!
Keep smiling.
July 27th, 2022 03:38
Strange Dream.
orchidee said:
Oh lol. I dream I am at work sometimes, trying to catch-up on some work after holidays. At one time the work was not shared out, and I dreaded taking too long for holidays, as the work would pile up ready for my return.
I feel tired sometimes after those dreams - trying to work while asleep?
Was it a pink elephant or a kangaroo?!
July 27th, 2022 02:54
orchidee said:
Oh lol. I dream I am at work sometimes, trying to catch-up on some work after holidays. At one time the work was not shared out, and I dreaded taking too long for holidays, as the work would pile up ready for my return.
I feel tired sometimes after those dreams - trying to work while asleep?
Was it a pink elephant or a kangaroo?!
July 27th, 2022 02:54
Strange Dream.
Saxon Crow said:
From a psychological perspective.... You need help!!
July 27th, 2022 02:24
Saxon Crow said:
From a psychological perspective.... You need help!!
July 27th, 2022 02:24
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