Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
The Road Ahead.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Andy.
More in the rear view than the road ahead.
June 22nd, 2022 09:39
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Andy.
More in the rear view than the road ahead.
June 22nd, 2022 09:39
The Road Ahead.
dusk arising said:
\"it\'s a long long road
with many a winding path
that leads us to who knows where
we\'ll get there\" (Hollies-he aint heavy)
Wherever it is we\'ll get there... and I know that we are likeminded about it and will be thankful.
June 22nd, 2022 02:58
dusk arising said:
\"it\'s a long long road
with many a winding path
that leads us to who knows where
we\'ll get there\" (Hollies-he aint heavy)
Wherever it is we\'ll get there... and I know that we are likeminded about it and will be thankful.
June 22nd, 2022 02:58
The Road Ahead.
orchidee said:
Yes, an extremely long road behind us tow, going back to the dinosaurs, and in front of us two. A blip in the road at 1066, when I turned up! lol.
June 22nd, 2022 01:39
orchidee said:
Yes, an extremely long road behind us tow, going back to the dinosaurs, and in front of us two. A blip in the road at 1066, when I turned up! lol.
June 22nd, 2022 01:39
Fathers Day.
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Gold...hahaha,
The last line stole the show..😁😁
Who took whom out..??
June 21st, 2022 23:56
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Gold...hahaha,
The last line stole the show..😁😁
Who took whom out..??
June 21st, 2022 23:56
So All Is Well.
Vamsi Sudha said:
haha , Gold thats a awesome outlook of life..
June 21st, 2022 23:52
Vamsi Sudha said:
haha , Gold thats a awesome outlook of life..
June 21st, 2022 23:52
So All Is Well.
arqios said:
At that level and layer it is fine and also in others, one usually influences the others. Let us make the most of each day as they are all special.
June 21st, 2022 08:32
arqios said:
At that level and layer it is fine and also in others, one usually influences the others. Let us make the most of each day as they are all special.
June 21st, 2022 08:32
So All Is Well.
orchidee said:
Did ya breathe too?! I tried not breathing for 24 hours, to save a day of air. I didn\'t fell well after it! lol.
June 21st, 2022 03:13
orchidee said:
Did ya breathe too?! I tried not breathing for 24 hours, to save a day of air. I didn\'t fell well after it! lol.
June 21st, 2022 03:13
So All Is Well.
Blueledge said:
Good philosophy. We forgot to remind ourselves of our own mortality and appreciate life more.
June 21st, 2022 02:06
Blueledge said:
Good philosophy. We forgot to remind ourselves of our own mortality and appreciate life more.
June 21st, 2022 02:06
Bumps And Creaks.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Oh My Yes. Just reminded me I did not take anything out for dinner. So I creak and saunter toward the frig.
Great write, Andy.
June 20th, 2022 15:18
Jerry Reynolds said:
Oh My Yes. Just reminded me I did not take anything out for dinner. So I creak and saunter toward the frig.
Great write, Andy.
June 20th, 2022 15:18
Bumps And Creaks.
orchidee said:
Oh woe, the nights will be drawing in again soon. We can\'t change that!
Woof, you old pessimist, says Fido, it\'s a minute or two daylight less per day!
June 20th, 2022 08:44
orchidee said:
Oh woe, the nights will be drawing in again soon. We can\'t change that!
Woof, you old pessimist, says Fido, it\'s a minute or two daylight less per day!
June 20th, 2022 08:44
Bumps And Creaks.
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
that\'s the way, Andy
(personally
when i get up in the middle of the night
the cracking bones, keep me company
and the bruises, let me know
I\'m still here
on my own two feet, giving it
all I got
and so i, slide
a little
sway, a tad
shaking it \'all bout\'
then I offer the universe
a glimpse of a smile
sharing
that private joke, where
I amuse
and it affords me
a few more, cherished
breaths..)
June 20th, 2022 04:56
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
that\'s the way, Andy
(personally
when i get up in the middle of the night
the cracking bones, keep me company
and the bruises, let me know
I\'m still here
on my own two feet, giving it
all I got
and so i, slide
a little
sway, a tad
shaking it \'all bout\'
then I offer the universe
a glimpse of a smile
sharing
that private joke, where
I amuse
and it affords me
a few more, cherished
breaths..)
June 20th, 2022 04:56
Bumps And Creaks.
dusk arising said:
LOL bumps and creaks sounds like my body getting out of bed in the morning.
Well fair play to the pair of you, at least you both know there\'s someone there to oil your hinges when the creaking gets too spooky.
June 20th, 2022 03:38
dusk arising said:
LOL bumps and creaks sounds like my body getting out of bed in the morning.
Well fair play to the pair of you, at least you both know there\'s someone there to oil your hinges when the creaking gets too spooky.
June 20th, 2022 03:38
Bumps And Creaks.
orchidee said:
You and I have a million bumps and bruises then! heehee.
June 20th, 2022 01:48
orchidee said:
You and I have a million bumps and bruises then! heehee.
June 20th, 2022 01:48
Bumps And Creaks.
arqios said:
Growing old together is and has been our motto, my wife and I. And these days, living on the third floor minus an elevator, we feel this truth each time we engage the stairwell. A lovely poem that is close to home. Thanks for sharing. /Rik.
June 20th, 2022 01:23
arqios said:
Growing old together is and has been our motto, my wife and I. And these days, living on the third floor minus an elevator, we feel this truth each time we engage the stairwell. A lovely poem that is close to home. Thanks for sharing. /Rik.
June 20th, 2022 01:23
Seven Wonders.
JudyStella said:
A very positive poem, that helps us to appreciate the wonders around us❤
June 19th, 2022 09:07
JudyStella said:
A very positive poem, that helps us to appreciate the wonders around us❤
June 19th, 2022 09:07
Seven Wonders.
Jerry Reynolds said:
An uplifting read, Andy. On a sunny morning in NY over coffee.
June 19th, 2022 06:50
Jerry Reynolds said:
An uplifting read, Andy. On a sunny morning in NY over coffee.
June 19th, 2022 06:50
Seven Wonders.
dusk arising said:
Well I guess I\'m the awkward one because the biggest \'wonder\' of them all for me is our heartbeat. That throbbing in the chest of every living being. What is this amazing life giving pulse we take for granted.
It\'s my supreme wonder and without it - we are nought. We may be able to bring it back sometimes but we cannot create it other than to procreate, which in itself is another wonderful thing.
June 19th, 2022 06:29
dusk arising said:
Well I guess I\'m the awkward one because the biggest \'wonder\' of them all for me is our heartbeat. That throbbing in the chest of every living being. What is this amazing life giving pulse we take for granted.
It\'s my supreme wonder and without it - we are nought. We may be able to bring it back sometimes but we cannot create it other than to procreate, which in itself is another wonderful thing.
June 19th, 2022 06:29
Seven Wonders.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Ohh, you and I saw all of the original seven wonders in person. Did we help build the pyramids?
June 19th, 2022 02:06
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Ohh, you and I saw all of the original seven wonders in person. Did we help build the pyramids?
June 19th, 2022 02:06
Fathers Day.
Blueledge said:
Before you know it it\'ll be father\'s day 2023 and you can pay again.
June 18th, 2022 12:25
Blueledge said:
Before you know it it\'ll be father\'s day 2023 and you can pay again.
June 18th, 2022 12:25
Fathers Day.
dusk arising said:
Crafty like that aint they. but where did she learn?
June 18th, 2022 06:44
dusk arising said:
Crafty like that aint they. but where did she learn?
June 18th, 2022 06:44
Fathers Day.
John Prophet said:
Yup, just like a caring Dad would. 👍🏼Nicely done!
June 18th, 2022 05:21
John Prophet said:
Yup, just like a caring Dad would. 👍🏼Nicely done!
June 18th, 2022 05:21
Fathers Day.
Paul Bell said:
Your daughter knows what side your wallet\'s buttered. On the plus side, you enjoyed the meal and the company, tipping the waitress, the barman. Does she have a birthday coming up.
June 18th, 2022 04:32
Paul Bell said:
Your daughter knows what side your wallet\'s buttered. On the plus side, you enjoyed the meal and the company, tipping the waitress, the barman. Does she have a birthday coming up.
June 18th, 2022 04:32
Buzzard.
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m all about Pigeons..
their fidgety existence
resonates
with my distrust of fate..
lol
thank Andy, a lovely shorty
June 17th, 2022 04:36
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m all about Pigeons..
their fidgety existence
resonates
with my distrust of fate..
lol
thank Andy, a lovely shorty
June 17th, 2022 04:36
Buzzard.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Are you and I old buzzards as in old fogeys?!
You speak for yourself, says Fido. lol.
June 17th, 2022 02:04
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Are you and I old buzzards as in old fogeys?!
You speak for yourself, says Fido. lol.
June 17th, 2022 02:04
Buzzard.
dusk arising said:
I recall seeing my first buzzard when they were still rare in early nineties. Impressive and statuesque stood watching me across a field as i drove by. Several years later a mating pair lived in a small wood nearby and we were delighted to see their talons locked twirling fall of mating ritual directly above us.
Yes magnificent soaring hawks, now quite plentiful and can be seen over the city often.
I can see the appeal in your wish. I\'d choose to be a cat. Not just for the nine lives but for the superb beautiful multi-talented creatures they are.
Thank you for taking me back to those memories.
June 17th, 2022 01:44
dusk arising said:
I recall seeing my first buzzard when they were still rare in early nineties. Impressive and statuesque stood watching me across a field as i drove by. Several years later a mating pair lived in a small wood nearby and we were delighted to see their talons locked twirling fall of mating ritual directly above us.
Yes magnificent soaring hawks, now quite plentiful and can be seen over the city often.
I can see the appeal in your wish. I\'d choose to be a cat. Not just for the nine lives but for the superb beautiful multi-talented creatures they are.
Thank you for taking me back to those memories.
June 17th, 2022 01:44
Why Do I write Poetry?
arqios said:
Troubles to be forgotten and others to be kept. We write because we have to. This is a powerful read. Thanks for sharing your poetry.
June 17th, 2022 00:26
arqios said:
Troubles to be forgotten and others to be kept. We write because we have to. This is a powerful read. Thanks for sharing your poetry.
June 17th, 2022 00:26
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