Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Words Of The Wise.
Fay Slimm. said:

Wisdom has to be allowed a hearing with quiet attention which sadly is rare in these noisy days. Good points made here Andy.

October 24th, 2022 16:12

Words Of The Wise.
dusk arising said:

I\'m keeping shtumm.

October 24th, 2022 16:00

Words Of The Wise.
L. B. Mek said:

(i can\'t help but feel these words
apply to more than those fools
on our news screens and front pages, Andy)
I recognise \'the fool\' in your words
I see him lurking in mirrors, where
I try to scrub my reflection, clean
of shower fogged, self-doubts
and reality warping ego\'s, foils
one
morning\'s gleaned wisdom, at a time
(Always appreciate the depths in your wisdom, dear Poet)
I read and attempt to heed!

October 24th, 2022 05:48

Words Of The Wise.
orchidee said:

Doh! it\'s true, even Proverbial, in the Bible book of Proverbs.
Something like: \'A fool utters all his/her mind, but not a wise man/woman\'.
I, of course, like the sound of my own voice in singing. I\'m the only ones who does! lol. Someone\'s gotta like it. heehee.

October 24th, 2022 02:07

Words Of The Wise.
Doggerel Dave said:

And there’s Garrulous Gertie down the road;
Also Blabbermouth Bill across the way -
Loquacious Linda in full throttle mode.
Now Desperate Dave accused of foul play……


October 24th, 2022 01:41

Music For Love.
Bella Shepard said:

I fell in love with Cavalleria Rusticana the very first time I heard it. It never ceases to make me smile and tear up just a little. This is truly beautiful dear Andy and I can understand the depth of love that it reflects.

October 23rd, 2022 15:14

Pie Fever.
Bella Shepard said:

This is such a fun read my friend! For some reason I now have an overwhelming desire to brew a cup of tea. Now, what about the pie?

October 23rd, 2022 13:16

Pie Fever.
Doggerel Dave said:

There ain’t nothing like a good cuppa tea:
Though it’s more like a mug ‘o tea I likes.
Just don’t stint on the leaves and let it be;
Tea a plenty, I’m contented – no gripes.

Fun parody, Andy.


October 23rd, 2022 05:02

Pie Fever.
arqios said:

Oh I do relish the tea version as that is the best part of the day for me. Good show Andy!

October 23rd, 2022 04:15

Pie Fever.
Neville said:



well that\'s a new one on me sir :)

October 23rd, 2022 02:58

Pie Fever.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.
I remember in school with music lessons, singing \'On Ilkley Moor B\'ah Tat!\' Was that the start of all the troubles, i.e. when I first sang? lol.
(The tune fits a hymn too)

October 23rd, 2022 02:11

Music For Love.
arqios said:

Herbert, oh as a child I had this notion to collect all of his recorded work. I also wanted to name a fictive character in a novel or story von Karajan. LOL. But here you are at the 1:50 mark and could only agree. Thanks for sharing Andy!

October 22nd, 2022 09:24

Music For Love.
Neville said:


if that wasn\'t such a wonderful moment .. these words would not even exist ....... now there\'s a thought :)

October 22nd, 2022 03:40

Music For Love.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.
Doh1 I came into a room singing, and the Funeral March played at that moment! lol.

October 22nd, 2022 01:59

Music For Love.
Doggerel Dave said:

Music can enhance many a moment
And add to satisfaction felt all round.
This moment added to the bestowment
Of each other’s love, now more closely bound.

Considering my general aversion to love poetry Andy, I however girded my loins and did the best I could……It’s the challenge, yer see… LOL.


October 22nd, 2022 01:43

Nelson Went to Battle 2
Bella Shepard said:

A wonderful tribute to the tenacity and courage of a great hero. Beautifully written my friend. Also love the accompanying video, a pianist who becomes one with his instrument, it\'s always a marvel to me.

October 21st, 2022 15:02

Nelson Went to Battle 2
Fay Slimm. said:

P.S. - -- oh wow - that jazz is just what I needed this morning - - haven\'t stopped jiggin\' an jivin\' yet Andy - ha - - - thanks a load for including its boogie-magic.

October 21st, 2022 05:30

Nelson Went to Battle 2
Fay Slimm. said:

One of our much loved heroes is Nelson - a write that pays lighter tribute to this special day . Thank you dear Andy for the welcome reminder that Trafalgar\'s battle brought this country many more victories by his example

October 21st, 2022 05:22

Nelson Went to Battle 2
Doggerel Dave said:

This a matter of historical fact?
Doubtless – but please include ‘I see no ships’.
He never would have had brown trousers packed;
He wouldn’t have let such words cross his lips.

Wasn’t he too busy saying “England expects that every man will do his duty – but bring me brahn boots just in case”????


October 21st, 2022 05:17

Nelson Went to Battle 2
L. B. Mek said:

lol
poesy a wonderful tool for keeping our heroes alive, in memorable verse
thank you! Andy

October 21st, 2022 03:42

Nelson Went to Battle 2
arqios said:

It should be filmed this way Andy! Red coat easy target, brown pants easy burial. Don’t find that kind of courage these days; one that would go down with the ship.

October 21st, 2022 01:52

Nelson Went to Battle 2
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write Gold!
Was we there in person, us two? Did I muck it up, as in 1066?!
I think I did. I gave Nelson an eye patch for the eye he could see with. It went wrong from then on. Doh!

October 21st, 2022 01:44

Finding Paradise.
dusk arising said:

Taint what ya get makes ya feel good, it\'s what ya give.

October 20th, 2022 10:06

Finding Paradise.
Doggerel Dave said:

Please now hope it works for more than just you;
Otherwise you are chirping in a storm.
While the personal is political,
Paradise cannot ever be the norm.

Keep it up, Andy - you never know...mine is just one opinion....


October 20th, 2022 03:35

Finding Paradise.
Fay Slimm. said:

Those three steps are vital to stay on that good road of Paradise. A fine reminder and thank you dear Andy,.

October 20th, 2022 01:36

Finding Paradise.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.
I was in a dark place. I forgot to switch the light on and fell down the stairs (did I?)! lol.
Argghhh! ya hear me tumbling. Good acting by me, yes?!

October 20th, 2022 01:34

Finding Paradise.
arqios said:

The goodness of thought, word, and deed appear to be a foreshadowing of Paradise and perhaps by this our appetites are whetted!

October 20th, 2022 01:25

Thoughts In Life.
Jon Nakapalau said:

So true!

October 19th, 2022 21:30

Natures Orchestra.
Jon Nakapalau said:

Well done!

October 19th, 2022 21:29

Strong Love FIBS
Jon Nakapalau said:

Wonderful Andy!

October 19th, 2022 21:29



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