Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



The Boy Sat On The Burning Deck.
sorenbarrett said:

A fun read indeed Gold another smile put on my face for another Sunday I thank you my friend

October 13th, 2024 05:02

The Boy Sat On The Burning Deck.
arqios said:

Now that will translate to film!

October 13th, 2024 03:12

The Boy Sat On The Burning Deck.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

October 13th, 2024 02:14

The Boy Sat On The Burning Deck.
Doggerel Dave said:


Apparently there be a considerable number of boys standing on burning decks around, Andy.
But in keeping with your general optimism, this is probably one of the happiest – and a brill rhymer too. πŸ‘


October 13th, 2024 01:17

Our Intense Love Tanka.
Dan Williams said:

Simple but effective. Nicely done.

October 12th, 2024 23:38

Our Intense Love Tanka.
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic work.

October 12th, 2024 18:54

Our Intense Love Tanka.
sorenbarrett said:

There is nothing like love when it is felt. It is a very great force. Lovely Gold

October 12th, 2024 05:00

Our Intense Love Tanka.
Neville said:


You are one very lucky fella .. but you clearly know it .. Neville πŸ’›

October 12th, 2024 03:02

Our Intense Love Tanka.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.

October 12th, 2024 02:34

Our Intense Love Tanka.
David Wakeling said:

A love for the ages. Thats amazing

October 12th, 2024 02:19

Music Creation Sonnet.
peet said:

Great composers had no limits of imagination. Music flowed and there was no way they could stop. Great write indeed.

October 11th, 2024 14:00

Earth\'s Birth Sonnet.
Bigguy said:

I love sonnets! Very nice!

October 11th, 2024 11:12

Music Creation Sonnet.
Thad Wilk said:

A wonderful Sonnet
captivating and
thought provoking
thank you!! πŸ€”
I agree, πŸ’―
I\'m astounded too! 🎡 🎢 🎢 🎢
Much enjoyed!! πŸ‘
Best regards peace ✌️. Thad


October 11th, 2024 10:11

Music Creation Sonnet.
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Andy

October 11th, 2024 09:28

Music Creation Sonnet.
sorenbarrett said:

What I find most intriguing is how modern composers borrow, beg or steal from the past. Varriations on tunes is like poets that borrow ideas from past poets and weave them in to their works. I guess nothing is truely orriginal. Good write Gold loved the flow of this piece

October 11th, 2024 05:46

Music Creation Sonnet.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.
Does anyone have my collection of hymn-poems with me singing them all?! Who could bear that? Me singing them, that is! lol.

October 11th, 2024 02:13

Music Creation Sonnet.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.
Does anyone have my collection of hymn-poems with me singing them all?! Who could bear that? Me singing \'em, that is! lol.

October 11th, 2024 02:13

Music Creation Sonnet.
Neville said:


It amazes me too just how many tunes there are already .. am off to see Dylan again in November .. he must surely be among the most prolific .. 🎢🎢🎡🎢🎡🎡🎢

October 11th, 2024 01:46

Earth\'s Birth Sonnet.
Thad Wilk said:

Haaaaa, πŸ˜„
Looks like God has
a sense of humor I\'d say! 🀣 πŸ™
Last two lines
just blew me away! πŸ†
Best regards ✌️ Thad

October 10th, 2024 13:32

Earth\'s Birth Sonnet.
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Andy

October 10th, 2024 12:28

Earth\'s Birth Sonnet.
MaxSmith said:

Very clever Andy

A fab read

October 10th, 2024 11:37

Earth\'s Birth Sonnet.
Accidental Poet said:

No one man is qualified to control the world when he can\'t control himself. A man does his part to make the world a better place. πŸ˜‰πŸ‘

October 10th, 2024 11:00

Earth\'s Birth Sonnet.
Abdullah123 said:

I really like what you have done with this concept. Bravo

October 10th, 2024 08:03

Earth\'s Birth Sonnet.
John Prophet said:

Well said!

October 10th, 2024 08:02

Earth\'s Birth Sonnet.
sorenbarrett said:

You accomplished your promise in several past responses and now you have me chuckeling with your most clever sonnet.

October 10th, 2024 05:23

Earth\'s Birth Sonnet.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

October 10th, 2024 02:51

Earth\'s Birth Sonnet.
David Wakeling said:

This is excellent. The history of the Earth with a twist at the end.No corners on a round Earth, Very clever.

October 10th, 2024 02:05

The Steps Of Life Sonnet.
Teddy.15 said:

Wonderful reflection dear Andy. 🌹

October 10th, 2024 02:02

Earth\'s Birth Sonnet.
Neville said:


Both you & He ..

(assuming He is the correct, most appropriate and or acceptable prefix)

are very cleva indeed .. Neville 🀍

October 10th, 2024 01:25

The Steps Of Life Sonnet.
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work.

October 9th, 2024 11:59



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