Comments received on poems by Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)
Speaking my words
LIZ said:
Very frustrating!! Personally I write it all down....helps sometimes. So, I\'m hoping you letting these emotions out HERE, is giving you at least some relief!! Sending you a big hug!!!!πππππ
October 5th, 2023 17:48
LIZ said:
Very frustrating!! Personally I write it all down....helps sometimes. So, I\'m hoping you letting these emotions out HERE, is giving you at least some relief!! Sending you a big hug!!!!πππππ
October 5th, 2023 17:48
Speaking my words
Introverted Sage said:
Touching write.
I hope things get better for you.
This makes me think of the Nikita Gill quote \"Remember what you must do when they undervalue you, when they think your softness is your weakness, when they treat your kindness like it is their advantage. You awaken every dragon, every wolf, every monster that sleeps inside of you and you remind them what hell looks like when it wears the skin of a gentle human.\"
October 5th, 2023 14:16
Introverted Sage said:
Touching write.
I hope things get better for you.
This makes me think of the Nikita Gill quote \"Remember what you must do when they undervalue you, when they think your softness is your weakness, when they treat your kindness like it is their advantage. You awaken every dragon, every wolf, every monster that sleeps inside of you and you remind them what hell looks like when it wears the skin of a gentle human.\"
October 5th, 2023 14:16
Speaking my words
Bella Shepard said:
A rigid mind is a very small, sad one, that is unable to bend to any other point of view. More\'s the pity for them, for they they lack the flexibility to adapt to the trials of life which may ultimately break them. A very thoughtfully written piece dear friend, your blue sky encompases everyone, as it should all opinions.
October 5th, 2023 14:11
Bella Shepard said:
A rigid mind is a very small, sad one, that is unable to bend to any other point of view. More\'s the pity for them, for they they lack the flexibility to adapt to the trials of life which may ultimately break them. A very thoughtfully written piece dear friend, your blue sky encompases everyone, as it should all opinions.
October 5th, 2023 14:11
piece of paper
Doggerel Dave said:
Good work Yellow rose - I\'ll never look at a bland sheet of paper in quite the same way ever again.
September 28th, 2023 20:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Good work Yellow rose - I\'ll never look at a bland sheet of paper in quite the same way ever again.
September 28th, 2023 20:10
Colours sit still
Pop64 said:
And like people, sometimes we\'re just there and beneath our visage, we just want to be heard, not just looked upon. A wonderful thought inspiring write.
September 22nd, 2023 14:04
Pop64 said:
And like people, sometimes we\'re just there and beneath our visage, we just want to be heard, not just looked upon. A wonderful thought inspiring write.
September 22nd, 2023 14:04
Invisible feeling in the background
Pop64 said:
This blending is so well identified in this write. We all, or at least I, feel this at times, like I\'m looked right past, of no value. But, know this, you have value and you are seen. When writes come from the soul, as this one is, no words will do it justice other than to say it touched me.
September 21st, 2023 14:19
Pop64 said:
This blending is so well identified in this write. We all, or at least I, feel this at times, like I\'m looked right past, of no value. But, know this, you have value and you are seen. When writes come from the soul, as this one is, no words will do it justice other than to say it touched me.
September 21st, 2023 14:19
Invisible feeling in the background
orchidee said:
We can reassure ourselves that we\'re not ALWAYS like that. even if we are, there\'s various help, I\'m sure.
Meanwhile - oops, just saw your poem. It was almost invisible. Do shut up Orchi. lol.
September 21st, 2023 06:33
orchidee said:
We can reassure ourselves that we\'re not ALWAYS like that. even if we are, there\'s various help, I\'m sure.
Meanwhile - oops, just saw your poem. It was almost invisible. Do shut up Orchi. lol.
September 21st, 2023 06:33
Invisible feeling in the background
LIZ said:
This is beautiful! I love how you describe colors! That feeling creeps in sometimes. But we SEE you!! You stand out!!! π πΉ πΈ
September 21st, 2023 04:32
LIZ said:
This is beautiful! I love how you describe colors! That feeling creeps in sometimes. But we SEE you!! You stand out!!! π πΉ πΈ
September 21st, 2023 04:32
Invisible feeling in the background
Teddy.15 said:
I always hear you and I always see you dearest Rose, if I may be so bold to say this is your best poem I have ever read, what a wondering we can all reflect on this subject and all I can say is that you have written a beauty today. πππππ
September 21st, 2023 04:13
Teddy.15 said:
I always hear you and I always see you dearest Rose, if I may be so bold to say this is your best poem I have ever read, what a wondering we can all reflect on this subject and all I can say is that you have written a beauty today. πππππ
September 21st, 2023 04:13
Little Robin
Goldfinch60 said:
Robins are the first bird you hear in the morning and the last bird you hear at night.
Fine words Violet.
Andy
September 20th, 2023 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Robins are the first bird you hear in the morning and the last bird you hear at night.
Fine words Violet.
Andy
September 20th, 2023 01:46
Little Robin
Bobby O said:
Without judgement or criticizing we listen. Thatβs suggest a powerful symbolic association and I wonder what may be the allusion
September 19th, 2023 19:58
Bobby O said:
Without judgement or criticizing we listen. Thatβs suggest a powerful symbolic association and I wonder what may be the allusion
September 19th, 2023 19:58
Little Robin
Beth K said:
Violet bluebell~
Iβm relatively new to this site, but I must tell you that I always look for your poems, read them, and enjoy them immensely!
Each one is so colorful and takes me on a pleasant journey. Thank you for sharing your gift of creative writing with us β€οΈ
~Beth
September 19th, 2023 18:47
Beth K said:
Violet bluebell~
Iβm relatively new to this site, but I must tell you that I always look for your poems, read them, and enjoy them immensely!
Each one is so colorful and takes me on a pleasant journey. Thank you for sharing your gift of creative writing with us β€οΈ
~Beth
September 19th, 2023 18:47
Little Robin
Teddy.15 said:
Dear Rose liked, loved and accepted always, you speak the truth that none of us need to show off or be loud to be noticed. Beautifully expressed. π
September 19th, 2023 16:15
Teddy.15 said:
Dear Rose liked, loved and accepted always, you speak the truth that none of us need to show off or be loud to be noticed. Beautifully expressed. π
September 19th, 2023 16:15
Green talking to white
Goldfinch60 said:
May that colour be forever in your life Violet.
Andy
September 19th, 2023 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
May that colour be forever in your life Violet.
Andy
September 19th, 2023 00:37
Green talking to white
JudyStella said:
The imagery is beautiful πLove this!
September 18th, 2023 20:36
JudyStella said:
The imagery is beautiful πLove this!
September 18th, 2023 20:36
Green talking to white
Beth K said:
Thank you for taking me on a colorful journey! Lovely!
~Beth
September 18th, 2023 19:00
Beth K said:
Thank you for taking me on a colorful journey! Lovely!
~Beth
September 18th, 2023 19:00
Green talking to white
Teddy.15 said:
A beautiful colourful picture you do paint dear Rose. π
September 18th, 2023 14:39
Teddy.15 said:
A beautiful colourful picture you do paint dear Rose. π
September 18th, 2023 14:39
Colours sit still
Teddy.15 said:
So very soothing. Your imagery makes the ready sit and look. Beautiful π
September 15th, 2023 11:14
Teddy.15 said:
So very soothing. Your imagery makes the ready sit and look. Beautiful π
September 15th, 2023 11:14
Colours sit still
orchidee said:
I will have to bring those colourful Autumn leaves indoors soon, if it\'s chilly nights! lol.
September 15th, 2023 10:52
orchidee said:
I will have to bring those colourful Autumn leaves indoors soon, if it\'s chilly nights! lol.
September 15th, 2023 10:52
Colours sit still
peto said:
Violet
This is a belter of a write
Brighten up any readers day
Superb metaphor
I see a few people including myself in these \"colours \"
September 15th, 2023 10:24
peto said:
Violet
This is a belter of a write
Brighten up any readers day
Superb metaphor
I see a few people including myself in these \"colours \"
September 15th, 2023 10:24
Colours sit still
BlessedbyGod said:
They have the most unique and beautiful voice of all, your words dear poet, give them their voice.
September 15th, 2023 08:57
BlessedbyGod said:
They have the most unique and beautiful voice of all, your words dear poet, give them their voice.
September 15th, 2023 08:57
Sky without words
Bella Shepard said:
I\'ve always loved the descriptive phrase \"a quiet beauty\", because it is so true.There is a beauty about quiet that too often goes unrecognized. Once you\'ve tried it however, you find you go back for more. Such a lovely, peaceful write, thank you!
September 4th, 2023 13:32
Bella Shepard said:
I\'ve always loved the descriptive phrase \"a quiet beauty\", because it is so true.There is a beauty about quiet that too often goes unrecognized. Once you\'ve tried it however, you find you go back for more. Such a lovely, peaceful write, thank you!
September 4th, 2023 13:32
Sky without words
L. B. Mek said:
\'And maybe sometimes
we are just comfortable in that space
of just being quiet
without the need to talk\'
(i read and learn, wise Poet)
thank you!
September 4th, 2023 05:55
L. B. Mek said:
\'And maybe sometimes
we are just comfortable in that space
of just being quiet
without the need to talk\'
(i read and learn, wise Poet)
thank you!
September 4th, 2023 05:55
Sky without words
Teddy.15 said:
Peaceful and quiet is how I feel right now, you hypnotized me with this one. π
September 4th, 2023 02:25
Teddy.15 said:
Peaceful and quiet is how I feel right now, you hypnotized me with this one. π
September 4th, 2023 02:25
Sky without words
LIZ said:
Beautiful! I think sometimes more than being listened to, we want to be understood....or at least acknowledged. π
September 4th, 2023 02:24
LIZ said:
Beautiful! I think sometimes more than being listened to, we want to be understood....or at least acknowledged. π
September 4th, 2023 02:24
Sky without words
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine write Violet, I often look up into the sky.
Andy
September 4th, 2023 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine write Violet, I often look up into the sky.
Andy
September 4th, 2023 01:58
Sky without words
orchidee said:
Good write V.
Meanwhile - I\'m not comfy with no words - I go on and on, always use 20 when 5 will do, blah, blah, rambling on like a blithering idiot!
Aww, why they say to me - no change there then?! heehee.
September 4th, 2023 01:56
orchidee said:
Good write V.
Meanwhile - I\'m not comfy with no words - I go on and on, always use 20 when 5 will do, blah, blah, rambling on like a blithering idiot!
Aww, why they say to me - no change there then?! heehee.
September 4th, 2023 01:56
A quite dove needs the blue sky
Teddy.15 said:
Your last words say it all dear Rose, an exquisite write. Beautiful imagery as your writing always has. π
September 3rd, 2023 06:48
Teddy.15 said:
Your last words say it all dear Rose, an exquisite write. Beautiful imagery as your writing always has. π
September 3rd, 2023 06:48
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