Comments received on poems by Caring dove
Finding some freedom
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphor. We are all ultimately trapped within ourselves but we can look out the window we can open our doors and let in the light and receive visits from nature and friends. A most lovely metaphor
May 2nd, 2025 07:56
sorenbarrett said:
Great metaphor. We are all ultimately trapped within ourselves but we can look out the window we can open our doors and let in the light and receive visits from nature and friends. A most lovely metaphor
May 2nd, 2025 07:56
Listening to birds
NafisaSB said:
yes their twitter enchants and keeps you happy and smiling, especially when one is feeling down
April 29th, 2025 00:57
NafisaSB said:
yes their twitter enchants and keeps you happy and smiling, especially when one is feeling down
April 29th, 2025 00:57
Listening to birds
rrodriguez said:
This piece is incredibly vivid and intimate, exploring themes of vulnerability and connection with striking imagery. Nicely written!
April 23rd, 2025 15:50
rrodriguez said:
This piece is incredibly vivid and intimate, exploring themes of vulnerability and connection with striking imagery. Nicely written!
April 23rd, 2025 15:50
Listening to birds
Goldfinch60 said:
Listening to the birds is wonderful Yellow Rose.
Andy
April 23rd, 2025 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Listening to the birds is wonderful Yellow Rose.
Andy
April 23rd, 2025 01:50
Sometimes
NafisaSB said:
that happens quite often - the company around is not the one we crave, and the company we crave is sometimes not around - but that\'s life
April 23rd, 2025 00:20
NafisaSB said:
that happens quite often - the company around is not the one we crave, and the company we crave is sometimes not around - but that\'s life
April 23rd, 2025 00:20
Listening to birds
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Singing birds are a blessing, no matter when. A crowing rooster might be a bit of a stretch, but outside of that, a blessing. 🤣 A wonderful poem, my friend. 🌹👏
April 22nd, 2025 20:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Singing birds are a blessing, no matter when. A crowing rooster might be a bit of a stretch, but outside of that, a blessing. 🤣 A wonderful poem, my friend. 🌹👏
April 22nd, 2025 20:17
Listening to birds
sorenbarrett said:
The birds singing I take to be a metaphor since you said that you have never heard them before. Songs of peace. Lovely
April 22nd, 2025 14:12
sorenbarrett said:
The birds singing I take to be a metaphor since you said that you have never heard them before. Songs of peace. Lovely
April 22nd, 2025 14:12
Sometimes
Goldfinch60 said:
May that loneliness be gone soon Yellow Rose.
Andy
April 18th, 2025 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
May that loneliness be gone soon Yellow Rose.
Andy
April 18th, 2025 02:00
Sometimes
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable to many, not quite in the right place at the right time, nicely expressed
April 17th, 2025 09:12
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable to many, not quite in the right place at the right time, nicely expressed
April 17th, 2025 09:12
Sometimes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It is. I know the feeling well, sadly; though, I\'d imagine for you, the dissociation adds a different and even more difficult layer to this. Well done in expressing this. I\'m sure we\'re not the only ones who have felt that way and thus this will be a healing read for those who have. And for those who haven\'t...awareness is raised. Again, well done. 🌹👏 A fave from me.
April 17th, 2025 08:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It is. I know the feeling well, sadly; though, I\'d imagine for you, the dissociation adds a different and even more difficult layer to this. Well done in expressing this. I\'m sure we\'re not the only ones who have felt that way and thus this will be a healing read for those who have. And for those who haven\'t...awareness is raised. Again, well done. 🌹👏 A fave from me.
April 17th, 2025 08:46
Sometimes
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of being just a little out of place. Nicely said
April 17th, 2025 07:44
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of being just a little out of place. Nicely said
April 17th, 2025 07:44
Lost
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that you will move on Yellow Rose and see new people who will bring joy to your life.
Andy
April 17th, 2025 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that you will move on Yellow Rose and see new people who will bring joy to your life.
Andy
April 17th, 2025 01:49
Lost
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Your poetry, my friend, is a window into an experience many people have never had and I really admire your courage in sharing. The sadness and the longing come through deeply in this. I could feel your pains as I read it. An excellent write. You are in my prayers, friend. 🙏🖤 I hope you have a lovely evening. 🌹👏
April 16th, 2025 13:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Your poetry, my friend, is a window into an experience many people have never had and I really admire your courage in sharing. The sadness and the longing come through deeply in this. I could feel your pains as I read it. An excellent write. You are in my prayers, friend. 🙏🖤 I hope you have a lovely evening. 🌹👏
April 16th, 2025 13:37
Lost
sorenbarrett said:
There is a strong feeling of alienation and separation in this poem that feels a bit sad. Nicely expressed
April 16th, 2025 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
There is a strong feeling of alienation and separation in this poem that feels a bit sad. Nicely expressed
April 16th, 2025 05:16
Lost
Poetic Licence said:
It is a sad feeling to feel disconnected from the world, it is hard to communicate with people especially if it is other people you are missing and longing to reconnect with, a sad but lovely write, nicely expressed and written, hope you have a lovely day
April 16th, 2025 04:37
Poetic Licence said:
It is a sad feeling to feel disconnected from the world, it is hard to communicate with people especially if it is other people you are missing and longing to reconnect with, a sad but lovely write, nicely expressed and written, hope you have a lovely day
April 16th, 2025 04:37
Blossom falls
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Yellow Rose and may your words always be true to us all.
Andy
April 15th, 2025 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Yellow Rose and may your words always be true to us all.
Andy
April 15th, 2025 01:59
Disconnect
NafisaSB said:
this rings so true in my ears - sometimes those near us do not see our pain, while a passerby - a stranger - can see straight into your heart.. lovely
April 15th, 2025 00:05
NafisaSB said:
this rings so true in my ears - sometimes those near us do not see our pain, while a passerby - a stranger - can see straight into your heart.. lovely
April 15th, 2025 00:05
Blossom falls
sorenbarrett said:
Proximity to home is an important part of tranquility. Very nicely written
April 14th, 2025 07:56
sorenbarrett said:
Proximity to home is an important part of tranquility. Very nicely written
April 14th, 2025 07:56
Blossom falls
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Do not blame you for changing location. What a beautiful poem and metaphor that came out of that location. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
April 14th, 2025 07:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Do not blame you for changing location. What a beautiful poem and metaphor that came out of that location. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
April 14th, 2025 07:42
Blossom falls
Poetic Licence said:
That is a lively write, our blossom tree is doing that as we speak, enjoyed the read
April 14th, 2025 06:23
Poetic Licence said:
That is a lively write, our blossom tree is doing that as we speak, enjoyed the read
April 14th, 2025 06:23
Disconnect
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be strange sometimes yellowrose but when you are with very good friends life is amazing.
Andy
April 10th, 2025 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
It can be strange sometimes yellowrose but when you are with very good friends life is amazing.
Andy
April 10th, 2025 01:43
Disconnect
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. I have been and sometimes currently am there. I so relate to this on many different levels. Brilliantly written, a fave from me, Caring Dove. 🌹👏
April 9th, 2025 10:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. I have been and sometimes currently am there. I so relate to this on many different levels. Brilliantly written, a fave from me, Caring Dove. 🌹👏
April 9th, 2025 10:11
Disconnect
Poetic Licence said:
We all long to be excepted socially and feel like we belong, but for many that is not the case. They feel isolated and lonely without understanding why it is like that, a sad but nicely expressed write
April 9th, 2025 06:17
Poetic Licence said:
We all long to be excepted socially and feel like we belong, but for many that is not the case. They feel isolated and lonely without understanding why it is like that, a sad but nicely expressed write
April 9th, 2025 06:17
Disconnect
sorenbarrett said:
Alienation is more powerful because we are a social species. Our existential striving cut off by a drive to unify and fences of estrangement. Well voiced in this poem of loneliness.
April 9th, 2025 05:55
sorenbarrett said:
Alienation is more powerful because we are a social species. Our existential striving cut off by a drive to unify and fences of estrangement. Well voiced in this poem of loneliness.
April 9th, 2025 05:55
Green sits softly
Poetic Dan said:
Hey my friend so good to see your words still shining and just what I needed.
Thank you
March 19th, 2025 23:33
Poetic Dan said:
Hey my friend so good to see your words still shining and just what I needed.
Thank you
March 19th, 2025 23:33
At home
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is a very relatable feeling and poem. Well expressed, my friend! Indeed, much wisdom in this one! 🌹👏
March 19th, 2025 12:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is a very relatable feeling and poem. Well expressed, my friend! Indeed, much wisdom in this one! 🌹👏
March 19th, 2025 12:16
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