Comments received on poems by Caring dove
Breeze
Goldfinch60 said:
That gentle breeze can be so wonderful Yellow Rose, as are your words.
Andy
August 20th, 2025 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
That gentle breeze can be so wonderful Yellow Rose, as are your words.
Andy
August 20th, 2025 01:22
Breeze
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A tender piece, my friend. The softness, the lightness, the hidden leaves...all of it moves like a song of peace. Lovely work, dear poet. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2025 07:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A tender piece, my friend. The softness, the lightness, the hidden leaves...all of it moves like a song of peace. Lovely work, dear poet. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2025 07:47
Breeze
sorenbarrett said:
The presence of the unseen its force just as powerful as if it could be grasped. A lovely metaphor so well written all the way through the last line.
August 19th, 2025 07:25
sorenbarrett said:
The presence of the unseen its force just as powerful as if it could be grasped. A lovely metaphor so well written all the way through the last line.
August 19th, 2025 07:25
Soft sun , wishing
Damaso said:
Poor sun. Although I can relate, perhaps the sun is also suffering from overexploitation. Beautiful writing and development. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
August 12th, 2025 12:08
Damaso said:
Poor sun. Although I can relate, perhaps the sun is also suffering from overexploitation. Beautiful writing and development. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
August 12th, 2025 12:08
Soft sun , wishing
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My dear friend, this is like a tender fable for burnout…how even something as steadfast as the sun might long to step away, to trade constancy for a moment of grounded rest. The “ladder” image works beautifully as a bridge between the unreachable and the touchable, the sky’s work and the earth’s quiet. Gentle, wistful, and relatable in that way that sneaks up on you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave!
August 12th, 2025 10:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My dear friend, this is like a tender fable for burnout…how even something as steadfast as the sun might long to step away, to trade constancy for a moment of grounded rest. The “ladder” image works beautifully as a bridge between the unreachable and the touchable, the sky’s work and the earth’s quiet. Gentle, wistful, and relatable in that way that sneaks up on you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave!
August 12th, 2025 10:00
Soft sun , wishing
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor for those that give but are unable to feel the gifts they bestow on others. Most lovely
August 12th, 2025 07:12
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor for those that give but are unable to feel the gifts they bestow on others. Most lovely
August 12th, 2025 07:12
Blue talks to white
NafisaSB said:
a very beautiful piece that evokes calmness and peace
well done
July 22nd, 2025 01:05
NafisaSB said:
a very beautiful piece that evokes calmness and peace
well done
July 22nd, 2025 01:05
Pigeons on a roof
sorenbarrett said:
Often we do not understand the motives of others we see. Out in the rain is a term often used and why one would choose to sit so voluntarily instead of under a eve we don\'t understand. In need of a shower? Simply like the feel? Need to cool off? Who knows? Do we not do the same with people?
July 19th, 2025 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
Often we do not understand the motives of others we see. Out in the rain is a term often used and why one would choose to sit so voluntarily instead of under a eve we don\'t understand. In need of a shower? Simply like the feel? Need to cool off? Who knows? Do we not do the same with people?
July 19th, 2025 04:39
Blue talks to white
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this poem has such a soft touch to it. It feels like a pause in a world that rarely stops...a moment held gently between sky and sea. “Grey sighs” is such a delicate image. Beautifully still. 🌹👏 A fave.
July 18th, 2025 06:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this poem has such a soft touch to it. It feels like a pause in a world that rarely stops...a moment held gently between sky and sea. “Grey sighs” is such a delicate image. Beautifully still. 🌹👏 A fave.
July 18th, 2025 06:53
Blue talks to white
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write of the calm sky and a sense of longing to feel the same, nicely expressed and written
July 18th, 2025 05:59
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write of the calm sky and a sense of longing to feel the same, nicely expressed and written
July 18th, 2025 05:59
Blue talks to white
sorenbarrett said:
This is a beautiful depiction of the sky but I feel that it may go deeper with metaphor. Well written
July 18th, 2025 05:32
sorenbarrett said:
This is a beautiful depiction of the sky but I feel that it may go deeper with metaphor. Well written
July 18th, 2025 05:32
A tree and birds
NafisaSB said:
the confidence to fly, and then soar high in the sky will come if you keep the faith; all the best
July 16th, 2025 00:33
NafisaSB said:
the confidence to fly, and then soar high in the sky will come if you keep the faith; all the best
July 16th, 2025 00:33
Flower and ladybird
Damaso said:
Such delicacy in describing the joy of nature, even in its most abbreviated scale. A spectacle for the senses. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Best regards.
July 15th, 2025 10:17
Damaso said:
Such delicacy in describing the joy of nature, even in its most abbreviated scale. A spectacle for the senses. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Best regards.
July 15th, 2025 10:17
Flower and ladybird
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow. Beautiful, my dear friend. There’s a silence to this that I didn’t want to disturb. It feels like witnessing something sacred in nature’s hush...a shared moment between two beings who simply see each other. The gentleness in this piece settles like mist on the soul. Excellent job. 🌹👏
July 14th, 2025 10:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow. Beautiful, my dear friend. There’s a silence to this that I didn’t want to disturb. It feels like witnessing something sacred in nature’s hush...a shared moment between two beings who simply see each other. The gentleness in this piece settles like mist on the soul. Excellent job. 🌹👏
July 14th, 2025 10:06
Flower and ladybird
sorenbarrett said:
Living in harmony does not require each to be the same in fact in music by definition harmony is not the same note but different notes that combine to make a pleasing sound. A lovely write.
July 13th, 2025 13:54
sorenbarrett said:
Living in harmony does not require each to be the same in fact in music by definition harmony is not the same note but different notes that combine to make a pleasing sound. A lovely write.
July 13th, 2025 13:54
A tree and birds
Goldfinch60 said:
Sitting still and watching nature is a privilege that many do not understand Yellow Rose.
Andy
July 12th, 2025 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Sitting still and watching nature is a privilege that many do not understand Yellow Rose.
Andy
July 12th, 2025 01:21
A tree and birds
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of feeling restrained while we see others freely roaming around, nicely expressed and written
July 12th, 2025 01:18
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of feeling restrained while we see others freely roaming around, nicely expressed and written
July 12th, 2025 01:18
A tree and birds
sorenbarrett said:
Freedom is not total but restricted by nature and our capabilities. A lovely poem
July 11th, 2025 16:53
sorenbarrett said:
Freedom is not total but restricted by nature and our capabilities. A lovely poem
July 11th, 2025 16:53
A tree and birds
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay! First comment! This one touched something deep, dear friend. You captured so honestly that quiet hurt of watching others soar while feeling rooted, unsure. There’s such vulnerability here—and a truth so many of us carry quietly. Thank you for putting it into words. 🌹👏
July 11th, 2025 16:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay! First comment! This one touched something deep, dear friend. You captured so honestly that quiet hurt of watching others soar while feeling rooted, unsure. There’s such vulnerability here—and a truth so many of us carry quietly. Thank you for putting it into words. 🌹👏
July 11th, 2025 16:52
Feeling of home
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Having read both your poem and note, oh, not odd at all—I’ve felt that same haunting dislocation, like the walls haven’t quite accepted me yet, or maybe it’s the self that hasn’t settled. The way you frame that sensation here is beautifully gentle and raw. It’s not just about a place, but the people and feelings that made it home. Thank you for sharing this part of yourself, my dear friend. 🌹👏
July 11th, 2025 09:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Having read both your poem and note, oh, not odd at all—I’ve felt that same haunting dislocation, like the walls haven’t quite accepted me yet, or maybe it’s the self that hasn’t settled. The way you frame that sensation here is beautifully gentle and raw. It’s not just about a place, but the people and feelings that made it home. Thank you for sharing this part of yourself, my dear friend. 🌹👏
July 11th, 2025 09:27
Feeling of home
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure your home is wonderful Yellow Rose and all will be well.
Andy
July 11th, 2025 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure your home is wonderful Yellow Rose and all will be well.
Andy
July 11th, 2025 01:48
Feeling of home
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that to me evokes feelings of something out of place a disassociation from what is familiar and feeling of strangeness to all that is around. Well written.
July 10th, 2025 14:27
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that to me evokes feelings of something out of place a disassociation from what is familiar and feeling of strangeness to all that is around. Well written.
July 10th, 2025 14:27
Feeling of home
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable write especially if it used to be shared with someone else, hopefully tomorrow is a better day for you, have a good evening
July 10th, 2025 12:44
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable write especially if it used to be shared with someone else, hopefully tomorrow is a better day for you, have a good evening
July 10th, 2025 12:44
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