Comments received on poems by yellowrose
coldness in the world, and the spilling out of emotions
Maxine Smith said:
Life throws so much at you, it makes it more difficult each time to try get back up.
But
Keep trying, you are stronger than you think.
Your write beautifully and I’m sending you great vibes, as I know how tough it is to deal with inner demons.’
January 29th, 2020 16:21
Maxine Smith said:
Life throws so much at you, it makes it more difficult each time to try get back up.
But
Keep trying, you are stronger than you think.
Your write beautifully and I’m sending you great vibes, as I know how tough it is to deal with inner demons.’
January 29th, 2020 16:21
coldness in the world, and the spilling out of emotions
FineB said:
Hello Yellowrose,
A brilliant write.
I sympathise with you totally. The world nowadays is rude, cold and heartless.
You are the light in the world.
Don\'t give up in being good, positive and kind believe you me in the long term your good qualities will very much be admired in this world when people can\'t be bothered to be civil.
Keep writing FineB
January 29th, 2020 06:43
FineB said:
Hello Yellowrose,
A brilliant write.
I sympathise with you totally. The world nowadays is rude, cold and heartless.
You are the light in the world.
Don\'t give up in being good, positive and kind believe you me in the long term your good qualities will very much be admired in this world when people can\'t be bothered to be civil.
Keep writing FineB
January 29th, 2020 06:43
the little singing bird
ron parrish aka wordman said:
i used to sit in a near by forest in the summer and watch humming birds eat from a tree
December 22nd, 2019 16:05
ron parrish aka wordman said:
i used to sit in a near by forest in the summer and watch humming birds eat from a tree
December 22nd, 2019 16:05
the soft aspects of nature
FineB said:
Hello Yellow Rose,
A beautiful write with very vivid imagery of nature\'s incredible beauty.
Peace and especially inner peace thats what we individuals aspire and aim for in our lives.
Keep writing FineB
December 18th, 2019 04:47
FineB said:
Hello Yellow Rose,
A beautiful write with very vivid imagery of nature\'s incredible beauty.
Peace and especially inner peace thats what we individuals aspire and aim for in our lives.
Keep writing FineB
December 18th, 2019 04:47
the soft aspects of nature
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Really this is my kind of poem. I will read it often, mainly outside in the beautiful countryside where I live. I will read it to my horses when I need to calm them. I think people will read it in a hundred years time, just as they do Kipling today.
Thank you for this window into tranquility Charlotte, may I grab it as a fave poem please?
Kind regards, Alan
November 27th, 2019 05:43
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Really this is my kind of poem. I will read it often, mainly outside in the beautiful countryside where I live. I will read it to my horses when I need to calm them. I think people will read it in a hundred years time, just as they do Kipling today.
Thank you for this window into tranquility Charlotte, may I grab it as a fave poem please?
Kind regards, Alan
November 27th, 2019 05:43
the soft aspects of nature
Goldfinch60 said:
May that peace be forever with you as in the words of your poem.
November 27th, 2019 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
May that peace be forever with you as in the words of your poem.
November 27th, 2019 02:27
Today I walked amongst the leaves
Poetic Dan said:
Great stuff best things are things that are just them self, authentically!
Beautifully written
November 24th, 2019 14:56
Poetic Dan said:
Great stuff best things are things that are just them self, authentically!
Beautifully written
November 24th, 2019 14:56
Today I walked amongst the leaves
Goldfinch60 said:
The colours of leaves on the ground is such wonder of Natures Artistry.
November 24th, 2019 02:41
Goldfinch60 said:
The colours of leaves on the ground is such wonder of Natures Artistry.
November 24th, 2019 02:41
the bare exposed tree
Goldfinch60 said:
The Spring will be back for them and all will be well.
November 25th, 2018 04:52
Goldfinch60 said:
The Spring will be back for them and all will be well.
November 25th, 2018 04:52
the magical forest
Fiscanto said:
I like your magic poem! I enjoyed it very much.
November 24th, 2018 20:11
Fiscanto said:
I like your magic poem! I enjoyed it very much.
November 24th, 2018 20:11
the magical forest
Unsub said:
yellowR,
intriging & atmospheric feel to this piece.
Was totally engrossed in it; great visuals too.
Unsub.
July 22nd, 2018 07:42
Unsub said:
yellowR,
intriging & atmospheric feel to this piece.
Was totally engrossed in it; great visuals too.
Unsub.
July 22nd, 2018 07:42
the magical forest
Fay Slimm. said:
I agree trees are magical and walking beneath them \"all is alive and full of feeling\" - a truly inspiring poem my friend and a pleasure to read.
July 20th, 2018 15:58
Fay Slimm. said:
I agree trees are magical and walking beneath them \"all is alive and full of feeling\" - a truly inspiring poem my friend and a pleasure to read.
July 20th, 2018 15:58
the magical forest
Stan Rodriguez said:
descriptive -lovely poem - very nicely penned - strong imagery - I enjoyed it very much - thank you for sharing.
July 20th, 2018 10:52
Stan Rodriguez said:
descriptive -lovely poem - very nicely penned - strong imagery - I enjoyed it very much - thank you for sharing.
July 20th, 2018 10:52
the magical forest
dusk arising said:
Yes yes yes for i have felt this mystery. Entering the cool forest there is an overbearing quiescence as if some things living there are holding their breath and hiding.
I sense not their fear but their need to maintain their otherworldliness.
The trees, who know all, see all but tell nothing. Though they do speak to me in ways i don\'t yet understand.
Is this the place of which you write? I am enthralled and want to venture in.
July 20th, 2018 06:25
dusk arising said:
Yes yes yes for i have felt this mystery. Entering the cool forest there is an overbearing quiescence as if some things living there are holding their breath and hiding.
I sense not their fear but their need to maintain their otherworldliness.
The trees, who know all, see all but tell nothing. Though they do speak to me in ways i don\'t yet understand.
Is this the place of which you write? I am enthralled and want to venture in.
July 20th, 2018 06:25
need to grow, need to blossom
Claudelle DeLuna said:
I love it!
I\'ve started a garden last year with lots of herbs, some didn\'t make it we get 105 F temps in my area. I started another one this year, it\'s doing much better. I\'m also a mother of two boys. Both require all my love all my attention.
Meanwhile I cannot forget about ME. Wouldn\'t change my story, definitely comfortable juggling all to the best of my ability.
Blessings! :)
July 4th, 2018 19:28
Claudelle DeLuna said:
I love it!
I\'ve started a garden last year with lots of herbs, some didn\'t make it we get 105 F temps in my area. I started another one this year, it\'s doing much better. I\'m also a mother of two boys. Both require all my love all my attention.
Meanwhile I cannot forget about ME. Wouldn\'t change my story, definitely comfortable juggling all to the best of my ability.
Blessings! :)
July 4th, 2018 19:28
need to grow, need to blossom
kevin browne said:
Sounds just like the garden of Eden. Brilliant bit of writing. Yellowrose, you are growing alongside the garden and are blossoming in a beautiful poet. Well done.
July 4th, 2018 12:26
kevin browne said:
Sounds just like the garden of Eden. Brilliant bit of writing. Yellowrose, you are growing alongside the garden and are blossoming in a beautiful poet. Well done.
July 4th, 2018 12:26
need to grow, need to blossom
Poetic Dan said:
O my days! What an ending. I still don\'t know the answer, sometimes I love my skin sometimes I don\'t but I\'m going to learn to love even the darkness of my soul.
Brilliant work, thank you
July 4th, 2018 06:52
Poetic Dan said:
O my days! What an ending. I still don\'t know the answer, sometimes I love my skin sometimes I don\'t but I\'m going to learn to love even the darkness of my soul.
Brilliant work, thank you
July 4th, 2018 06:52
need to grow, need to blossom
sylviasearcher said:
I love the beauty in nature and how you linked it to loving and nurturing oneself.
It\'s funny because when I was pulling weeds the other day I thought of quite a different metaphor.
I thought about wild natural beauty. I thought about why weeds were ripped from their soil, deemed not right for pretty gardens. I wondered about my wild self. The weeds I had pulled to be more socially acceotable, the instincts and growth I had denied.
Thank you for reminding me about this. Nature is so beautiful and powerful
July 4th, 2018 05:19
sylviasearcher said:
I love the beauty in nature and how you linked it to loving and nurturing oneself.
It\'s funny because when I was pulling weeds the other day I thought of quite a different metaphor.
I thought about wild natural beauty. I thought about why weeds were ripped from their soil, deemed not right for pretty gardens. I wondered about my wild self. The weeds I had pulled to be more socially acceotable, the instincts and growth I had denied.
Thank you for reminding me about this. Nature is so beautiful and powerful
July 4th, 2018 05:19
do not neglect a flower
Heartwriter said:
Well written and truthfully penned. Far too many go neglected.
June 22nd, 2018 05:03
Heartwriter said:
Well written and truthfully penned. Far too many go neglected.
June 22nd, 2018 05:03
do not neglect a flower
orchidee said:
A fine write rose. I suppose they die off eventually because they are put in water, which is needed, and plant food to put in the water, but they have no soil to grow or continue in.
June 22nd, 2018 03:35
orchidee said:
A fine write rose. I suppose they die off eventually because they are put in water, which is needed, and plant food to put in the water, but they have no soil to grow or continue in.
June 22nd, 2018 03:35
don\'t want pain
Unsub said:
yellowrose,
you told it, I read it, I got it.
You took this all the way so the reader isn\'t left with questions that make the whole experience seem a waste of reading time.
Unsub
June 13th, 2018 09:20
Unsub said:
yellowrose,
you told it, I read it, I got it.
You took this all the way so the reader isn\'t left with questions that make the whole experience seem a waste of reading time.
Unsub
June 13th, 2018 09:20
the orange character in the sky
Lorna said:
Phenomenal Charlotte! Wow..... just loved reading this over and over............
June 13th, 2018 05:42
Lorna said:
Phenomenal Charlotte! Wow..... just loved reading this over and over............
June 13th, 2018 05:42
the scared piece of paper
A.H. Browning said:
Browsing and looking looking at poems tonight and I found this one. I very much enjoy your writing here!
I really love the last two lines!
June 11th, 2018 22:19
A.H. Browning said:
Browsing and looking looking at poems tonight and I found this one. I very much enjoy your writing here!
I really love the last two lines!
June 11th, 2018 22:19
maybe they are the beautiful ones
SLR said:
I agree wth lawless. I also want to add that the most beautiful are the ones that don\'t realize it. It keeps them sweet, kind and thoughtful of others.
May 16th, 2018 21:05
SLR said:
I agree wth lawless. I also want to add that the most beautiful are the ones that don\'t realize it. It keeps them sweet, kind and thoughtful of others.
May 16th, 2018 21:05
maybe they are the beautiful ones
Theta the scholar said:
Very nice poem yellow keep up the good work. Stay happy stay pretty
-Theta
May 15th, 2018 11:28
Theta the scholar said:
Very nice poem yellow keep up the good work. Stay happy stay pretty
-Theta
May 15th, 2018 11:28
missing out isn\'t fair
SLR said:
So sad. Heartfelt. But I think your poetry is your therapy. It can help you grieve what\'s wrong and missing in your life and help heal your heart to be able to move on and fight for the happiness you deserve.
May 13th, 2018 18:23
SLR said:
So sad. Heartfelt. But I think your poetry is your therapy. It can help you grieve what\'s wrong and missing in your life and help heal your heart to be able to move on and fight for the happiness you deserve.
May 13th, 2018 18:23
missing out isn\'t fair
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing & caring CHARLOTTE ! It rings a bell with many of us ~ because LIFE for everyone is an UP & DOWN Roller Coaster of Highs & Loves ~ we have had a big funfair in Town ~ so it is a good analogy ! If you read my poems you will know that my Fiancee ANGELA has gone to New Zealand (11,500 miles) for a whole YEAR ! New-castle (on Tyneside) would have been bad enough but AUCKLAND ~ NO ! I should be sadder than I am ~ but we have SKYPE and I will visit NZ for two weeks in August (My DAD has bought the ticket !) I am thinking of you and praying that you will count your Blessing and \"Look on the Bright side of Life\" Please check my Poem for today ~ thanks BRIAN !
May 13th, 2018 04:07
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing & caring CHARLOTTE ! It rings a bell with many of us ~ because LIFE for everyone is an UP & DOWN Roller Coaster of Highs & Loves ~ we have had a big funfair in Town ~ so it is a good analogy ! If you read my poems you will know that my Fiancee ANGELA has gone to New Zealand (11,500 miles) for a whole YEAR ! New-castle (on Tyneside) would have been bad enough but AUCKLAND ~ NO ! I should be sadder than I am ~ but we have SKYPE and I will visit NZ for two weeks in August (My DAD has bought the ticket !) I am thinking of you and praying that you will count your Blessing and \"Look on the Bright side of Life\" Please check my Poem for today ~ thanks BRIAN !
May 13th, 2018 04:07
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