Comments received on poems by Caring dove



Truth
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 20th, 2024 10:33

Freedom
Dan Williams said:

Nice, evocative, sincere. Good work.

November 20th, 2024 02:05

Freedom
Thoughtless said:

Are they free? Who knows. Nice one though.

November 19th, 2024 10:39

Distance
dollyu said:

Wow deep
🤔

Nice one x

November 19th, 2024 04:52

Freedom
dollyu said:

Pigeons are certainly reminder of the freedom we desire xx

Well done Caring Dove for this amazing piece xx

November 19th, 2024 04:49

Soft snow
dollyu said:

Lovely 🥰
Makes me crave for snow now

November 19th, 2024 04:46

Freedom
Cassie58 said:

I always find that the natural environment helps for depression. I felt your sadness here. I love watching our avian friends. They are such a delight. A very visual poem Caring dove. Take care.

November 18th, 2024 12:56

Freedom
Tristan Robert Lange said:

I so relate to this poem and I so wish for the same thing. Depression and sadness are awful and you express it so well with this observational poem. Brilliant poem, friend! 🌹👏🖤❤️🖤

November 18th, 2024 09:39

Soft snow
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Beautiful and vivid. A wonderful poem! 🌹👏

November 17th, 2024 18:15

Distance
orchidee said:

I can\'t be you, of course, but not had any, or not much, experience of dissociation. Just getting out of the house may help though, if literally, only a few steps.

November 16th, 2024 03:44

Distance
Cassie58 said:

A difficult position to find yourself in dear Caring dove. You describe that emptiness so well. I found your final words both sad and moving. Take good care of yourself.

November 15th, 2024 16:33

Distance
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wonderful write! \"I sense \'someone\' / but it isn\'t me\" Wow! Powerful ending to a powerful poem. Well done! 🌹👏

November 15th, 2024 16:33

Little Robin
dollyu said:

Beautiful, I love this ❤️🌹

November 14th, 2024 09:33

Little Robin
orchidee said:

Yes, a magpie helped me recently, then a crow another day. Crows are not ugly, as some say.

November 14th, 2024 03:23

Little Robin
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wonderful write and it really is amazing how nature can really speak to us at the right moments. Glad you were sitting there and got to see the robin today. Beautiful indeed! Excellent write!

November 13th, 2024 21:07

Magpie flying the sky
Teddy.15 said:

Lovely tranquil imagery in here. ❤️

November 12th, 2024 15:34

Magpie flying the sky
Cassie58 said:

A bird flying on its own, even in blue sky feels sorrowful, yet your lines speak of freedom. Your poem is visually beautiful and full of movement. Lots of folklore about magpies. An enjoyable read.

November 12th, 2024 11:18

Magpie flying the sky
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Beautifully written and welcome to MyPoeticSide! Looking forward to reading more from you! 🖤❤️🖤🌹👏

November 12th, 2024 08:46