Comments received on poems by Caring dove
Flower and ladybird
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow. Beautiful, my dear friend. There’s a silence to this that I didn’t want to disturb. It feels like witnessing something sacred in nature’s hush...a shared moment between two beings who simply see each other. The gentleness in this piece settles like mist on the soul. Excellent job. 🌹👏
July 14th, 2025 10:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow. Beautiful, my dear friend. There’s a silence to this that I didn’t want to disturb. It feels like witnessing something sacred in nature’s hush...a shared moment between two beings who simply see each other. The gentleness in this piece settles like mist on the soul. Excellent job. 🌹👏
July 14th, 2025 10:06
Flower and ladybird
sorenbarrett said:
Living in harmony does not require each to be the same in fact in music by definition harmony is not the same note but different notes that combine to make a pleasing sound. A lovely write.
July 13th, 2025 13:54
sorenbarrett said:
Living in harmony does not require each to be the same in fact in music by definition harmony is not the same note but different notes that combine to make a pleasing sound. A lovely write.
July 13th, 2025 13:54
A tree and birds
Goldfinch60 said:
Sitting still and watching nature is a privilege that many do not understand Yellow Rose.
Andy
July 12th, 2025 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Sitting still and watching nature is a privilege that many do not understand Yellow Rose.
Andy
July 12th, 2025 01:21
A tree and birds
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of feeling restrained while we see others freely roaming around, nicely expressed and written
July 12th, 2025 01:18
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of feeling restrained while we see others freely roaming around, nicely expressed and written
July 12th, 2025 01:18
A tree and birds
sorenbarrett said:
Freedom is not total but restricted by nature and our capabilities. A lovely poem
July 11th, 2025 16:53
sorenbarrett said:
Freedom is not total but restricted by nature and our capabilities. A lovely poem
July 11th, 2025 16:53
A tree and birds
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay! First comment! This one touched something deep, dear friend. You captured so honestly that quiet hurt of watching others soar while feeling rooted, unsure. There’s such vulnerability here—and a truth so many of us carry quietly. Thank you for putting it into words. 🌹👏
July 11th, 2025 16:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay! First comment! This one touched something deep, dear friend. You captured so honestly that quiet hurt of watching others soar while feeling rooted, unsure. There’s such vulnerability here—and a truth so many of us carry quietly. Thank you for putting it into words. 🌹👏
July 11th, 2025 16:52
Feeling of home
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Having read both your poem and note, oh, not odd at all—I’ve felt that same haunting dislocation, like the walls haven’t quite accepted me yet, or maybe it’s the self that hasn’t settled. The way you frame that sensation here is beautifully gentle and raw. It’s not just about a place, but the people and feelings that made it home. Thank you for sharing this part of yourself, my dear friend. 🌹👏
July 11th, 2025 09:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Having read both your poem and note, oh, not odd at all—I’ve felt that same haunting dislocation, like the walls haven’t quite accepted me yet, or maybe it’s the self that hasn’t settled. The way you frame that sensation here is beautifully gentle and raw. It’s not just about a place, but the people and feelings that made it home. Thank you for sharing this part of yourself, my dear friend. 🌹👏
July 11th, 2025 09:27
Feeling of home
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure your home is wonderful Yellow Rose and all will be well.
Andy
July 11th, 2025 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure your home is wonderful Yellow Rose and all will be well.
Andy
July 11th, 2025 01:48
Feeling of home
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that to me evokes feelings of something out of place a disassociation from what is familiar and feeling of strangeness to all that is around. Well written.
July 10th, 2025 14:27
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that to me evokes feelings of something out of place a disassociation from what is familiar and feeling of strangeness to all that is around. Well written.
July 10th, 2025 14:27
Feeling of home
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable write especially if it used to be shared with someone else, hopefully tomorrow is a better day for you, have a good evening
July 10th, 2025 12:44
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable write especially if it used to be shared with someone else, hopefully tomorrow is a better day for you, have a good evening
July 10th, 2025 12:44
Feeling of home
Damaso said:
Oh, please, what a tremendous and painful feeling it seems to lose part of your soul in this farewell. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing it. Best regards.
July 10th, 2025 12:03
Damaso said:
Oh, please, what a tremendous and painful feeling it seems to lose part of your soul in this farewell. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing it. Best regards.
July 10th, 2025 12:03
Cat and pigeon
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so wonderful to be seeing life in this way Yellow Rose, fine words.
Andy
July 10th, 2025 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so wonderful to be seeing life in this way Yellow Rose, fine words.
Andy
July 10th, 2025 01:24
Cat and pigeon
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh Caring Dove…this brought such a still, tender peace. 🌳🕊️ The way you described that moment—cat grounded, pigeon held by the tree, and you right there, watching—felt like a soft breath I didn’t know I needed. I’m so sorry the day started rough, but I’m glad the garden gave you that bit of presence. You gave it to us too. 🌹👏 Feel better, my friend!
July 9th, 2025 11:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh Caring Dove…this brought such a still, tender peace. 🌳🕊️ The way you described that moment—cat grounded, pigeon held by the tree, and you right there, watching—felt like a soft breath I didn’t know I needed. I’m so sorry the day started rough, but I’m glad the garden gave you that bit of presence. You gave it to us too. 🌹👏 Feel better, my friend!
July 9th, 2025 11:03
Cat and pigeon
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write and nicely observed, expressing the comfort that little things can bring us, and give us a little break from the stresses of life, enjoyed the read
July 9th, 2025 10:44
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write and nicely observed, expressing the comfort that little things can bring us, and give us a little break from the stresses of life, enjoyed the read
July 9th, 2025 10:44
Cat and pigeon
sorenbarrett said:
You built an image where I drew from it a metaphor. The pigeon or dove of peace, the cat a predator but blinded, and the observer. Make of it what you may but is seems to have peace predators must in some way be blinded and left to be fed by those that care. Loved the poem
July 9th, 2025 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
You built an image where I drew from it a metaphor. The pigeon or dove of peace, the cat a predator but blinded, and the observer. Make of it what you may but is seems to have peace predators must in some way be blinded and left to be fed by those that care. Loved the poem
July 9th, 2025 09:41
Cat and pigeon
Bella Shepard said:
How lovely these simple observations of life can be, and how comforting when needed. Nature does heal us. Beatifully told!
July 9th, 2025 09:15
Bella Shepard said:
How lovely these simple observations of life can be, and how comforting when needed. Nature does heal us. Beatifully told!
July 9th, 2025 09:15
Wanting happiness
Damaso said:
Wow, what a sad but sincere read, fully aware of the pain that afflicts her. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing, and I look forward to reading more. Cheers!
July 8th, 2025 07:13
Damaso said:
Wow, what a sad but sincere read, fully aware of the pain that afflicts her. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing, and I look forward to reading more. Cheers!
July 8th, 2025 07:13
Wanting happiness
Poetic Licence said:
Expressed very well the feeling of not belonging and feeling isolated, hope your day gets better, nicely written
July 7th, 2025 09:19
Poetic Licence said:
Expressed very well the feeling of not belonging and feeling isolated, hope your day gets better, nicely written
July 7th, 2025 09:19
Wanting happiness
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh my dear poet and friend…this sigh is so real, so familiar. 😔 You write with such honesty—no mask, no pretense—and that’s what makes your voice so needed. I feel the ache here. I really do. Sending you love and presence, always. 🌹👏
July 7th, 2025 09:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh my dear poet and friend…this sigh is so real, so familiar. 😔 You write with such honesty—no mask, no pretense—and that’s what makes your voice so needed. I feel the ache here. I really do. Sending you love and presence, always. 🌹👏
July 7th, 2025 09:17
White piece of paper
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend…this moved me in that quiet way your poems always od. 😌 The personification here is so tender—and achingly real. That longing for voice…for space of one’s own…you captured it with such softness. This white paper speaks loud in silence. Love it! 🌹👏 A fave for sure.
July 7th, 2025 08:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend…this moved me in that quiet way your poems always od. 😌 The personification here is so tender—and achingly real. That longing for voice…for space of one’s own…you captured it with such softness. This white paper speaks loud in silence. Love it! 🌹👏 A fave for sure.
July 7th, 2025 08:49
Wanting happiness
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of feeling alienated and left out. Depression follows and this poem conveys it well. Nicely done
July 7th, 2025 08:40
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of feeling alienated and left out. Depression follows and this poem conveys it well. Nicely done
July 7th, 2025 08:40
Wanting happiness
Hollow Enigma said:
Great job with this! I read alot of so called free verse and I get picky but this is what i am freaking talking about. so great on the pace. Very importantly also i wish you a happier day im sorry you are feeling this and i hope you get what your missing out on.
July 7th, 2025 08:20
Hollow Enigma said:
Great job with this! I read alot of so called free verse and I get picky but this is what i am freaking talking about. so great on the pace. Very importantly also i wish you a happier day im sorry you are feeling this and i hope you get what your missing out on.
July 7th, 2025 08:20
White piece of paper
arqios said:
Very interesting concept brought out in delightful verse; much enjoyed 🕊️🙏🏻
July 7th, 2025 04:42
arqios said:
Very interesting concept brought out in delightful verse; much enjoyed 🕊️🙏🏻
July 7th, 2025 04:42
White piece of paper
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words will always come onto the page Yellow Rose.
Andy
July 7th, 2025 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words will always come onto the page Yellow Rose.
Andy
July 7th, 2025 01:59
White piece of paper
Poetic Licence said:
That blank piece of paper we need to fill in ourselves and not let others fill it in for us, a lovely write, hope you have a wonderful week
July 6th, 2025 23:54
Poetic Licence said:
That blank piece of paper we need to fill in ourselves and not let others fill it in for us, a lovely write, hope you have a wonderful week
July 6th, 2025 23:54
White piece of paper
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a sleeping muse that leaves the poet staring at paper and those things around them. Very nicely written.
July 6th, 2025 13:11
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a sleeping muse that leaves the poet staring at paper and those things around them. Very nicely written.
July 6th, 2025 13:11
Ignoring
Damaso said:
Sometimes, in moments of greater sensitivity, I can relate to this text. The coldness of indifference to the impetus of my humble message. Excellent! Thanks for sharing! Best regards.
July 5th, 2025 09:03
Damaso said:
Sometimes, in moments of greater sensitivity, I can relate to this text. The coldness of indifference to the impetus of my humble message. Excellent! Thanks for sharing! Best regards.
July 5th, 2025 09:03
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