Comments received on poems by Caring dove
Sometimes
sorenbarrett said:
Self blame is often used as a justification for where we are Inequality is not always due to individual lack of effort and this poem comes down hard. A lovely write that inspires strong feelings
May 29th, 2025 15:51
sorenbarrett said:
Self blame is often used as a justification for where we are Inequality is not always due to individual lack of effort and this poem comes down hard. A lovely write that inspires strong feelings
May 29th, 2025 15:51
Avoided
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Faved. Yes, I have felt that way and you are spot on. People avoid you because they are trying to avoid themselves, ultimately. When one sees that for what it is, it becomes clear how foolish it is. But that is what people do. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
May 28th, 2025 19:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Faved. Yes, I have felt that way and you are spot on. People avoid you because they are trying to avoid themselves, ultimately. When one sees that for what it is, it becomes clear how foolish it is. But that is what people do. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
May 28th, 2025 19:48
Feeling quiet
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another very relatable piece, Caring Dove. Wonderful job! 🌹👏
May 28th, 2025 12:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Another very relatable piece, Caring Dove. Wonderful job! 🌹👏
May 28th, 2025 12:39
Avoided
Poetic Licence said:
Although it is wrong many people tend to avoid or ignore when they see someone unhappy or feeling a bit negative, instead of a little chat with a smile that will make all the difference, they run for the hills, human nature I guess. Lovely write expressed very well
May 28th, 2025 08:13
Poetic Licence said:
Although it is wrong many people tend to avoid or ignore when they see someone unhappy or feeling a bit negative, instead of a little chat with a smile that will make all the difference, they run for the hills, human nature I guess. Lovely write expressed very well
May 28th, 2025 08:13
Avoided
sorenbarrett said:
Recognition of human flaws in this poem. We live in a world that has little tolerance for pain, suffering, hard work, patience and this extends to our conversations that would rather ignore reality than face it. Nicely written
May 28th, 2025 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
Recognition of human flaws in this poem. We live in a world that has little tolerance for pain, suffering, hard work, patience and this extends to our conversations that would rather ignore reality than face it. Nicely written
May 28th, 2025 05:42
Feeling quiet
Poetic Licence said:
A very honest, open and sad write, hoping it gets better
May 27th, 2025 10:24
Poetic Licence said:
A very honest, open and sad write, hoping it gets better
May 27th, 2025 10:24
Feeling quiet
sorenbarrett said:
Hello is the first line of defense, it is the code word of recognition to pass the wall after that one must scale the the walls and break down the doors and that is not an easy task. To have the doors open you must be recognized and accepted as friend. A raw and powerful write
May 27th, 2025 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
Hello is the first line of defense, it is the code word of recognition to pass the wall after that one must scale the the walls and break down the doors and that is not an easy task. To have the doors open you must be recognized and accepted as friend. A raw and powerful write
May 27th, 2025 08:37
Groundhog Day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Such a great movie. And yes, I have felt this way before. Very relatable. Loved it.
May 26th, 2025 09:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Such a great movie. And yes, I have felt this way before. Very relatable. Loved it.
May 26th, 2025 09:06
Groundhog Day
Goldfinch60 said:
That time will come Yellow Rose when all will fit together and life will be wonderful.
Andy
May 26th, 2025 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
That time will come Yellow Rose when all will fit together and life will be wonderful.
Andy
May 26th, 2025 01:28
Groundhog Day
Poetic Licence said:
How it is easy to get in that cycle of feeling lonely and sad, the longer it goes on the harder it is to break, wish you all the best, nicely expressed write
May 25th, 2025 13:13
Poetic Licence said:
How it is easy to get in that cycle of feeling lonely and sad, the longer it goes on the harder it is to break, wish you all the best, nicely expressed write
May 25th, 2025 13:13
Groundhog Day
sorenbarrett said:
Have had that feeling at times and Groundhog day was one of my favorite movies. Stuck in a loop of time he was able to find how to improve and be a better person through repetition. Fun read
May 25th, 2025 11:40
sorenbarrett said:
Have had that feeling at times and Groundhog day was one of my favorite movies. Stuck in a loop of time he was able to find how to improve and be a better person through repetition. Fun read
May 25th, 2025 11:40
Confusing
Goldfinch60 said:
Silence on your own can be a healing property Yellow Rose.
Andy
May 23rd, 2025 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Silence on your own can be a healing property Yellow Rose.
Andy
May 23rd, 2025 01:01
Confusing
Poetic Licence said:
Feeling of isolation and loneliness in this write, being quiet doesn\'t make you read, we all have and need quiet times, take care
May 22nd, 2025 14:10
Poetic Licence said:
Feeling of isolation and loneliness in this write, being quiet doesn\'t make you read, we all have and need quiet times, take care
May 22nd, 2025 14:10
Confusing
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of alienation and disassociation in this poem. Being quiet is one solution. Well written
May 22nd, 2025 13:28
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of alienation and disassociation in this poem. Being quiet is one solution. Well written
May 22nd, 2025 13:28
A smile
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a lovely write and i am glad it made you feel a bit better, have a good day
May 21st, 2025 02:23
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a lovely write and i am glad it made you feel a bit better, have a good day
May 21st, 2025 02:23
Sad
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Yellow Rose, may the sun shine in your life again soon.
Andy.
(I always comment on your poems. 🌹🌹🌹)
May 17th, 2025 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Yellow Rose, may the sun shine in your life again soon.
Andy.
(I always comment on your poems. 🌹🌹🌹)
May 17th, 2025 02:15
Sad
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sad write, powerful, write my friend. Wishing for some better times for you. Be well. ❤️🩹🌹👏
May 16th, 2025 20:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sad write, powerful, write my friend. Wishing for some better times for you. Be well. ❤️🩹🌹👏
May 16th, 2025 20:38
Beach
sorenbarrett said:
The mind drifts like the current in this poem of helping hands rebuilding what once was and how all of life is a cycle of creation and deterioration. Very nicely done I somehow felt at the beach with the waves crashing
May 15th, 2025 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
The mind drifts like the current in this poem of helping hands rebuilding what once was and how all of life is a cycle of creation and deterioration. Very nicely done I somehow felt at the beach with the waves crashing
May 15th, 2025 04:21
Beach
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, with a helping hand they will be built back up, nicely expressed and written
May 15th, 2025 03:43
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, with a helping hand they will be built back up, nicely expressed and written
May 15th, 2025 03:43
Trapped
NafisaSB said:
it [confidence in self] will come one day - and it has to be grasped, and not allowed to be released
enjoyed the beautiful poem
May 13th, 2025 01:03
NafisaSB said:
it [confidence in self] will come one day - and it has to be grasped, and not allowed to be released
enjoyed the beautiful poem
May 13th, 2025 01:03
Invisible
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of feeling they are not noticed in the world, feeling lonely and not cared for, nicely written and expressed
May 12th, 2025 02:08
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of feeling they are not noticed in the world, feeling lonely and not cared for, nicely written and expressed
May 12th, 2025 02:08
Invisible
Goldfinch60 said:
I am here and can see you through your words Yellow Rose.
Andy
May 12th, 2025 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
I am here and can see you through your words Yellow Rose.
Andy
May 12th, 2025 01:25
Invisible
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of that uncomfortable feeling of not being noticed meaning not being cared about. It conveys the feeling well
May 11th, 2025 14:45
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks of that uncomfortable feeling of not being noticed meaning not being cared about. It conveys the feeling well
May 11th, 2025 14:45
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