Comments on community poems by FredPeyer
- Today is the day (Renzi)
Your pain and emotions leak through every line and nothing we say will...
June 28th, 2017 13:47 - \'I Win\' (ShannonXx)
A very well written poem to honor a very special person, and in a lifetime...
June 28th, 2017 13:36 - When The Words Won\'t Come (Blues Poem #13) (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, I did not think of Alzheimers, but now that you mentioned it, I...
June 28th, 2017 13:31 - When The Words Won\'t Come (Blues Poem #13) (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
I agree with the other comments. The last line is the scary one. All the...
June 28th, 2017 11:10 - As a poet (Tony36)
Yes Tony, every time we publish we are letting it all hang out. A bit like...
June 28th, 2017 11:06 - Writing: (Avigail)
Avigail you captured the spark of creation beautifully!
June 28th, 2017 10:50 - I Should Come With a Warning Label (Fragileheart)
A well written cry for help. There comes a time we just have to take down...
June 28th, 2017 10:47 - Shed (SheWasTheSun)
Man, I read it three times! Personal re-incarnation! Tear yourself down,...
June 27th, 2017 19:52 - \"Cadaver\" (PenguinPoetess)
Your poem is quite graphic, but it fits. Your writing is well thought out,...
June 27th, 2017 19:49 - Growing up (Justagirl)
I am a father of three, all grown up with kids of their own. Believe me,...
June 27th, 2017 19:42 - King of mixed signals (Justagirl)
Good poem! What if you let him dangle for a change? The more you are NOT...
June 27th, 2017 19:40 - My hell (Justagirl)
It has been a long long time, but I still do remember the pressures to...
June 27th, 2017 19:37 - Words that break walls (Avigail)
This is so good, I printed it out.
Mahalo!!!
June 27th, 2017 19:26 - Regeneration (Destiny_s)
Keep writing and keep praying and you WILL be restored!
June 27th, 2017 19:20 - Two bodies contradicting (Meno1972)
Meno, thank you for another really great poem. Sometimes it IS nearly...
June 27th, 2017 19:17
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