Comments on community poems by jarcher54
- Coronation Kiss (Orchidee)
Glad Fido made a friend. Fido is of course the best, most fitting doggie...
May 7th, 2023 10:23 - Dark Effigy (Kurt Philip Behm)
Both clever and thoughtful.
May 6th, 2023 22:33 - Conspiracy Theory (MendedFences27)
Witty and subtly poignant. A whole love story in a few couplets. Not a...
May 6th, 2023 22:30 - Pomegranate (Parisab)
Pomegranates are the sexiest of fruits. Your whole poem is full of heavy...
May 6th, 2023 22:25 - My birthday tomorrow (Ok Waleed)
Happy birthday... but one bit of bad news... you will not be fully...
May 6th, 2023 22:22 - We need (Sorenbarrett)
Very witty little piece!
May 6th, 2023 22:14 - Underground Poet (James Michael)
Rage on brother!
April 12th, 2023 23:46 - Is it true? (Hzugman)
Dark humor is always edgy. Good little aphorism!
April 11th, 2023 23:41 - Ghost Ship (A Song) (AuburnScribbler)
Fresh meaning to the term Ghost Ship. I approve. Very moving.
April 11th, 2023 23:39 - 16 (Kinsey Peterson)
The poems are always about me... what a beautiful painful statement. This...
April 10th, 2023 23:10 - Incredible India (Mottakeenur Rehman)
India is a magnificent conundrum. Your hopeful focus on its better side,...
April 10th, 2023 22:33 - Helpless. (NinjaGirl)
I hope the deep sadness you relate is largely in your imagination! But...
April 8th, 2023 12:33 - Periodically (Dakota)
Wonderful turns of phrase all through... you are very adept at this.
I...
April 7th, 2023 22:46 - A Train (Nafis Light)
Pleasant rhythm and rhyme... not overly heavy and regulated. The endings...
April 7th, 2023 22:43 - \"Little slut\" \"Princess\" \"Baby girl\" (NinjaGirl)
Well this story is beautifully told and I for one hope to never forget it....
April 7th, 2023 22:39
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