Comments on community poems by jarcher54
- Where our memories are stored (MMadrid)
Your insightful poem has bounced around my amygdala and I\'m pretty sure...
April 24th, 2020 00:31 - The year (Eve21359)
Eve, your little poem makes one want to fix it all now, for you and your...
April 24th, 2020 00:19 - Powerless (M.E.M.)
Did we imagine starting 2020 that we would enter such enigmatic times? ...
April 23rd, 2020 01:05 - \"Untitled\" (Swavey)
I find great wit in your opening couplet:
People don\'t feel my...
April 21st, 2020 01:29 - Pandora\'s Revenge (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
signed with my blood...
a bit melodramatic... and perfect!
April 20th, 2020 18:42 - A Guy Is Just a Guy (My_Brain)
I WILL remember this:
you\'re just a guy and
the sky is the...
April 20th, 2020 18:38 - The Lost Words. (Goldfinch60)
I like to think that, like in Borges\' story The Library of Babel, all...
April 19th, 2020 08:27 - Two Years (Clarissavibes)
Yes the last line is haunting... I recall spreading the ashes of a dear...
April 17th, 2020 05:08 - Rearview (Clarissavibes)
A totally different poem on second reading, when the last stanza is...
April 17th, 2020 05:01 - prettier on paper (Queer-with-a-pen)
I adore this:
the only heart i’ve ever
broken is my own
Thanks...
April 7th, 2020 08:47 - Hunger. (Fay Slimm.)
Your last line really got me! I\'ve always been a softie for those...
April 7th, 2020 08:44
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