Comments on community poems by jarcher54

• 575s and 57577s (2) (Michael Edwards) Hope you are rapidly healing so you can keep us delighted a long long...
  May 3rd, 2025 15:04
• Autistic Brother (Demar Desu) He\'s lucky to have you... you can be my brother any time.
  May 2nd, 2025 21:20
• Want love? (Hzugman) You just slay me!! Here you had me transported into deep ponderings......
  May 2nd, 2025 21:17
• Am I Dreaming? (Hzugman) Did you really wake up? (-:
  May 2nd, 2025 21:13
• Hands that grasp (Sorenbarrett) Brilliant ring composition... first the chains and bonds and abuse tighten...
  May 2nd, 2025 21:09
• Good taste (Sorenbarrett) Damn, you ruined wading in the night surf!
  April 30th, 2025 17:06
• One More Open Verdict For the Road (Neville) Oh my... did NOT see that tragic end coming! Master of the unexpected, as...
  April 30th, 2025 17:04
• The Weight of Enlightenment (Neville) As we get older, most of us figure out there\'s less value in getting and...
  April 20th, 2025 19:13
• The Dream (Tony Grannell) I recall some of your work from years ago... please don\'t go away so...
  April 20th, 2025 19:10
• Popular Modern Poets Suck (Quemis) It was worth the wait!! A poem about poems can be dangerous. Nope, not...
  January 25th, 2025 23:40
• Leather Daddy (A Boy With Roses) JC, I love how you drop by and leave a loaded gun with a hair trigger on...
  January 25th, 2025 23:31
• when (NinjaGirl) Short gut punch... in the best way poetry can do that. You always wake me...
  December 25th, 2024 23:25
• Like Butterflies in Snowstorms (Neville) When you get serious you hit like a sledgehammer... wow
  December 25th, 2024 23:22
• Dreams of the Fishes (Thomas W Case) This is why I am a vegetarian... I have glimpsed the dreams of the beasts...
  December 25th, 2024 23:19
• It Took Years (Thomas W Case) I recall a soccer player who went broke after a very successful career, on...
  December 25th, 2024 23:14
• My Granny wears her Pearls (FrasMac) Just wonderful. She lives in this piece!
  November 17th, 2024 02:35
• THE LAST COMMAND (Twizzle48) I like the way you crowded the words into a small space like the confines...
  November 13th, 2024 09:37
• The Maze (Tony36) Amazing insight! (-:
  November 13th, 2024 00:56
• Poetry ocean (Tony36) Poems about poetry are always insightful... no writer\'s block for you it...
  November 13th, 2024 00:55
• A violent gun (RSM0812) If only the last line were to come true... sigh
  November 13th, 2024 00:53
• Hearts That Break (RSM0812) Very compelling reverie... full of fierce images and terse observations......
  November 13th, 2024 00:51
• Night Time Follies (Kerry) Oh my... I must have forgotten to knock...
  November 13th, 2024 00:43
• Trauma (Kerry) Oh Kerry I too have known such guys... too tough to need help, they suffer...
  November 13th, 2024 00:40
• Naked People (Garth Rakumakoe) You are truly a poet after my own naked heart! PS I never wear shoes...
  November 13th, 2024 00:34
• Briefly Mentioned in Dispatches (Neville) As a teenager I theorized that every human being lives and dies as a god,...
  November 11th, 2024 02:09
• The Soldier he killed (Kevin Hulme) Very somber and thoughtful piece. Despite the truisms and trite images a...
  November 11th, 2024 02:01
• Where No Light Breaks (ADarkerMind) I must say I was carried along by the force of your images... I don\'t...
  November 11th, 2024 01:57
• Unrequited Siblinghood (Garth Rakumakoe) Siblings... a vivid image, but exactly whose cord are they using, theirs...
  November 11th, 2024 01:53
• Sacred Pause (Thomas W Case) Breathe and go fishing! Only hope you don\'t catch any fish.
  November 11th, 2024 01:50
• Fatal attraction (2781) I am with Doggerel on this one, but I was kinda hoping the end was...
  November 11th, 2024 01:48
• Emophilia (Neville) Emophilia has a totally new added meaning, you know... it means adoring...
  November 11th, 2024 01:38
• Awakening to the Flame (Introverted Sage) Swore off poetry, then you came along... seriously, I enjoy the pulsing...
  November 11th, 2024 01:31
• Malpractice (CreativelyUninspired) This little soliloquy is near perfect. Modern, sincere, universal yet...
  November 11th, 2024 01:27
• The Price of Pleasure (A Boy With Roses) Addicted to the tears we shed... the very definition of passionate...
  November 11th, 2024 01:25
• What If (Amit.Singh) Sweet, simple, sincere, and universal. Made me happy!
  November 11th, 2024 01:00
• Isn\'t Deja Vu, Like, Badly Overused?! (Cheeky Missy) Great fun... love your dense language and playful inventiveness...
  November 1st, 2024 21:50
• Is This A Sign? (A Boy With Roses) I haven\'t cried at a poem in a while... but now I have. Yes, sleep is a...
  October 13th, 2024 00:06
• Gardens (Lorenz) Nice combination of the magic of painting and poetry. Both tell stories,...
  October 6th, 2024 12:23
• Those black jobs (EvenwheniLie) This is what poetry is about. Brave and dangerous. Sharp like razor wire...
  October 6th, 2024 10:44
• zzzzzzzzzz (Hzugman) Oh my! I wonder why she sleeps so late! Imagination working overtime!
  October 6th, 2024 10:22
• See You, Jimmy (A Boy With Roses) I am sweaty and exhausted reading this! And very satisfied. Go figure. ...
  October 6th, 2024 10:14
• Mad Dog in America (Neville) The hell you say?
  October 6th, 2024 10:10
• The Reading (Tom Dylan) Poems about poetry are always interesting, but seldom profound. This one...
  October 6th, 2024 10:01
• Concept of Conflict (𓆩Mase𓆪) This is the most compelling fusion poem I have ever read on MPS. It is...
  October 6th, 2024 09:54
• () Don\'t make it a permanent break please!
  October 6th, 2024 02:28
• () I have but one machete... it has the brand name \"CORONA\" emblazoned on...
  October 6th, 2024 02:27
• The Deck of Fog (Quemis) What a fortunate friend he or she is to receive this gift-in-progress! I...
  October 6th, 2024 02:24
• Thank you so much for being my friend (Meera Mere) Keep breaking the ice sweetie! I enjoy it!
  October 6th, 2024 02:15
• Oh Dear! (Doggerel Dave) I feel a little like an eavesdropper here... I recall a similar tiff...
  October 6th, 2024 02:12
• Pen (Tristan Robert Lange) TRUTH!
  October 6th, 2024 02:07
• Imagining Death (Jace) I\'ll come to the rescue, promise!
  September 7th, 2024 21:55
• Always (A.L.H) Same old story, told with breathtaking restraint and elegance. Emotional...
  August 20th, 2024 13:58
• GATHERING WONDER (Bobby O) O Bobby!
  August 18th, 2024 21:22
• my poem (Justina) Sometimes you just gotta poem away! Thanks for your courage! (-:
  August 18th, 2024 21:21
• friends (Sheta) May you always have someone with you, but it\'s clear you could do this...
  August 18th, 2024 21:19
• Are poets mad ? (Sami mulaj) Literary critics and literati have debated for centuries what makes poetry...
  August 18th, 2024 21:15
• strange world that waits and watches (Serialseductress) While I was a bit put off by some of the vagueness, the power and...
  August 18th, 2024 18:56
• CLOSE OF DAY (Michael Edwards) For a moment I thought you\'d been spying on me! Deeply pictorial, you...
  August 18th, 2024 18:48
• An Ode to Sunday (Teddy.15) Sharing your Sunday morning thoughts and sights and sounds is a treat! ...
  August 18th, 2024 18:43
• () I can drink to this! Oasis came along when I was in my 40\'s, but I...
  August 18th, 2024 18:10
• Europe Makes Me Nostalgic (A Boy With Roses) But you will love again... and again... and again. But it will hurt I...
  August 18th, 2024 18:04
• 10 Rupees (Gaurav Gurung) Quite relatable. Your boys are so real. I recall occasionally finding a...
  August 18th, 2024 11:57
• PAINFUL TRANSITION I (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) PS My brand new grandson\'s name is Jude Endeavor.
  August 18th, 2024 11:52
• PAINFUL TRANSITION I (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) Very compelling. Told with humanity in all its glory and flaws. You tell...
  August 18th, 2024 11:52
• Beyond Sleep (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) As usual, you take a common observation, distill it, add your wicked...
  August 18th, 2024 11:49
• You, Me and My Dog .. and Blame It on Saint Marlo (Neville) One of these is brilliant and moving, the other a flop! (-:
  August 18th, 2024 11:40
• K.Y.L.A.T.E.K. (Dr.:Kyla~Tek) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) Yes, the last line is like a jack-in-the-box popping out! Nice move sir.
  August 18th, 2024 11:39
• Those Cyclists on the Road (AuburnScribbler) I am 70 but still cycle 5 miles to work every day, rain or shine. I swear...
  August 18th, 2024 11:37
• It all depends on your point of view (Hzugman) You are a modern Aesop today... brilliant observation!
  August 18th, 2024 11:32
• Blackcurrant Squash (AuburnScribbler) For some reason currants (not the little raisins but the fruit) have never...
  August 8th, 2024 04:20
• () I don\'t know if faith has physical size, but it certainly can have...
  August 8th, 2024 04:12
• Interesting Times (John Prophet) Very compelling. New gods in the sky indeed!
  August 8th, 2024 04:05
• () The sudden shift from physical ailments to a psychological spiritual one...
  August 8th, 2024 04:00
• God’s Gifts (Cocamedo) I appreciate the deep sincerity of your piece. I am not religious, but...
  August 8th, 2024 03:54
• Comforting Concerns (Orchidee) While I am not religious, I am often moved by the raw sincerity of your...
  August 8th, 2024 03:49
• Inclusive (Tristan Robert Lange) At some point universal love is the only thing that can achieve...
  August 8th, 2024 03:43
• As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples (Neville) Oh my... at 70 I think I am way too young to understand this! Will I be...
  August 8th, 2024 03:34
• Scatterbrained (Jerry Reynolds) When writing poetry, I find the pen is a welcome control of my purple...
  July 21st, 2024 11:22
• Who’s Responsible? (Doggerel Dave) I didn\'t do it!
  July 3rd, 2024 23:00
• A Day Out in The Country (Neville) Light-hearted on the surface, but a gut punch of a lament for a more...
  May 29th, 2024 17:53
• For a Friend in an Asylum in California (Thomas W Case) Lazy lithium days and Cheshire madness... very fine imagery, densely...
  May 27th, 2024 21:31
• What does AI mean? (Kering.karim) Your analysis is both insightful and emotionally true. The epitome of...
  May 26th, 2024 00:53
• Smokes (Sorenbarrett) when your fingers go brown, you are savoring every puff down to the...
  May 22nd, 2024 13:16
• Under the Clouds of Steel (Gewar) Very observant! Yes, many things are unable to thrive because they...
  May 22nd, 2024 13:12
• Then that gives gets (Hzugman) I give various elderly and disabled people way too much (ask my wife) but...
  May 18th, 2024 22:09
• Any moment now the 5th and last will land (Poetic Dan) As little Davey Copperfield says, More please!
  May 18th, 2024 22:06
• Sarah Origin (Beatrix M) Your narrative is spot on... like you have personal knowledge? \"Patient...
  May 18th, 2024 22:00
• Sarah Origin (Beatrix M) Oh my... I\'ve written a few gothic pieces but I can\'t keep it going...
  May 18th, 2024 21:58
• Conversion (John Prophet) The way you isolate words make each one a more solid unit... you don\'t...
  May 18th, 2024 21:55
• Sleepless Prayer (Quemis) ... color ugly years indeed! Thanks for dropping by and sharing your...
  May 18th, 2024 21:51
• if (Jon Nakapalau) Lovely message as usual Jon!
  May 18th, 2024 10:48
• The Universal Soldier (Cully45) Thanks for sharing your thoughts... most of us can scarcely imagine!
  May 18th, 2024 10:47
• haunted (NinjaGirl) The sincerity of this little ditty comes through... thanks for baring your...
  May 16th, 2024 01:52
• The Great Teacher Tojeong (Kinsley Lee) I am pretty ignorant of Korean history... I assume you refer to Tojeong...
  May 16th, 2024 01:30
• A Man With a Bucket and No Hat (Neville) On the other hand, a bucket makes a very solid hat!
  May 16th, 2024 01:22
• One For One (Kurt Philip Behm) You are truly adept at saying old things so condensed and purely stated...
  May 16th, 2024 00:56
• dog friendship (Jim56) Damn, Jim, how do you stay so positive? Love it... woof
  April 17th, 2024 11:51
• world peace (Jim56) The world needs to move from war to reconciliation. At present, the...
  April 17th, 2024 11:49
• Bliss Is A Wound (A Boy With Roses) So pleased to see a new series from you! This is compact and full of...
  April 17th, 2024 11:47
• I AM AFRICA (Aloo Denish Obiero) My interests in Africa began when I discovered Christopher Obigbo\'s...
  April 17th, 2024 04:35