Comments on community poems by jarcher54
- A Day Out in The Country (Neville)
Light-hearted on the surface, but a gut punch of a lament for a more...
May 29th, 2024 17:53 - For a Friend in an Asylum in California (Thomas W Case)
Lazy lithium days and Cheshire madness... very fine imagery, densely...
May 27th, 2024 21:31 - What does AI mean? (Kering.karim)
Your analysis is both insightful and emotionally true. The epitome of...
May 26th, 2024 00:53 - Smokes (Sorenbarrett)
when your fingers go brown, you are savoring every puff down to the...
May 22nd, 2024 13:16 - Under the Clouds of Steel (Gewar)
Very observant! Yes, many things are unable to thrive because they...
May 22nd, 2024 13:12 - Then that gives gets (Hzugman)
I give various elderly and disabled people way too much (ask my wife) but...
May 18th, 2024 22:09 - Any moment now the 5th and last will land (Poetic Dan)
As little Davey Copperfield says, More please!
May 18th, 2024 22:06 - Sarah Origin (BeatrixMacabre)
Your narrative is spot on... like you have personal knowledge? \"Patient...
May 18th, 2024 22:00 - Sarah Origin (BeatrixMacabre)
Oh my... I\'ve written a few gothic pieces but I can\'t keep it going...
May 18th, 2024 21:58 - Conversion (John Prophet)
The way you isolate words make each one a more solid unit... you don\'t...
May 18th, 2024 21:55 - Sleepless Prayer (Quemis)
... color ugly years indeed! Thanks for dropping by and sharing your...
May 18th, 2024 21:51 - if (Jon Nakapalau)
Lovely message as usual Jon!
May 18th, 2024 10:48 - The Universal Soldier (Cully45)
Thanks for sharing your thoughts... most of us can scarcely imagine!
May 18th, 2024 10:47 - haunted (NinjaGirl)
The sincerity of this little ditty comes through... thanks for baring your...
May 16th, 2024 01:52 - The Great Teacher Tojeong (Kinsley Lee)
I am pretty ignorant of Korean history... I assume you refer to Tojeong...
May 16th, 2024 01:30 - A Man With a Bucket and No Hat (Neville)
On the other hand, a bucket makes a very solid hat!
May 16th, 2024 01:22 - One For One (Kurt Philip Behm)
You are truly adept at saying old things so condensed and purely stated...
May 16th, 2024 00:56 - dog friendship (Jim56)
Damn, Jim, how do you stay so positive? Love it... woof
April 17th, 2024 11:51 - world peace (Jim56)
The world needs to move from war to reconciliation. At present, the...
April 17th, 2024 11:49 - Bliss Is A Wound (A Boy With Roses)
So pleased to see a new series from you! This is compact and full of...
April 17th, 2024 11:47 - I AM AFRICA (Aloo Denish Obiero)
My interests in Africa began when I discovered Christopher Obigbo\'s...
April 17th, 2024 04:35 - Two Sisters (Neville)
For interfering, say 10 Hail Marys.
February 12th, 2024 23:35 - Fuck You (13LaurenD)
Such a brilliant catalogue of insults, cheap shots, and boorish...
January 29th, 2024 22:19 - Imagine Me (Semi-deadpoet)
This was a brilliant and poignant idea... many thanks!
January 28th, 2024 21:32 - Inspirations (Accidental Poet)
Your poems and ditties are always fun! Thanks!!
January 27th, 2024 02:08 - Argh, I ne\'er got muffin top before - why now!? (Rew4er2nail)
By the end I was breathless following along with the dance... great fun,...
January 27th, 2024 02:06 - Understanding Love? (Serene)
If we understood it we might ruin it trying to copy or fix it! For a...
January 26th, 2024 20:20 - Ex-lover of mine. (Debbie)
Oh my... I\'m imagining what he said to you... and feeling your hurt... it...
January 26th, 2024 20:17 - How Many More Planets (Neville)
I\'m guessing 43.
January 26th, 2024 20:13 - I Want to Die In Your Arms (A Boy With Roses)
Oh Jordan... the first stanza-- no, the entire poem-- describes your...
January 26th, 2024 20:11 - i have heard it all before (Ace_)
Your dialogues are wickedly honest and compelling. You are witty and have...
January 18th, 2024 02:07 - me against my head (Ace_)
Courageous and a little fierce... take care of yourself and thanks for...
January 18th, 2024 02:04 - Fragile threads (Chiki1601)
Yes, the tapestry of life is strong and resilient in places, but fragile...
January 18th, 2024 02:01 - सपनों की दुनिया (Chiki1601)
I have no Hindi (though I studied a little Sanskrit in grad school decades...
January 18th, 2024 01:59 - Happiness Comes Quietly (Thomas W Case)
Yes stuff rots and rusts... very obvious and beautiful observations. You...
January 18th, 2024 01:53 - Amavasya (Kurt Philip Behm)
Thoughtful and sharp observations... thanks for keeping me on my mental...
January 16th, 2024 02:04 - My Little Rhyming Book (Accidental Poet)
Just so you didn\'t let some AI bot write this I\'m OK with it... does the...
January 16th, 2024 01:55 - A Taste of Hope (Neville)
Wait, did Nev write this uplifting piece? I keep looking for the sarcasm,...
January 16th, 2024 01:52 - Things I Wish I’d Said (Cassie58)
Such a lucky one to be in the beam of your torch. Very old-fashioned...
January 16th, 2024 01:49 - Rolling along (Hzugman)
Driving on the roads without tires may create some firestones. Go slow...
January 16th, 2024 01:44 - Me Myself and I (Narcisa)
Oh, my, a lovely penetrating soliloquy. Yes you earned every good thing...
January 15th, 2024 13:44 - The Death Of Janet Green (Mtrotter1)
You bring Janet to life with this stunning incantation. It is an...
January 15th, 2024 01:30 - Panic Attacks (Lil)
Is it your drawing?
January 15th, 2024 01:26 - Panic Attacks (Lil)
A powerful description... I hope you can find some respite!
January 15th, 2024 01:22 - \"A Quiet FerˈWel, Roese\" (OMONDI ORONY)
I also ran across your music... I am intrigued. I listen to lots of...
January 15th, 2024 01:08 - Fail to Forget (PTSD v. 2) (FallingAwake2)
You are wise and correct... real tragedy does not inspire. Your strength...
January 14th, 2024 22:54 - \"A Quiet FerˈWel, Roese\" (OMONDI ORONY)
Your ponderings on your sister are beautiful, courageous, and haunting. ...
January 14th, 2024 22:39 - Okinawa The 1st Poem (Kinsley Lee)
In my mind, Okinawa is a lovely semitropical paradise, and a place of...
January 14th, 2024 22:33 - nature (NinjaGirl)
Fun to read, and the circling back (in literary terms this is \"ring...
January 14th, 2024 22:21 - Blocking The Light (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Nice work, you halfwit writer you! Very visceral and musical too. Do you...
January 14th, 2024 22:15 - Dreams of the Fish (Thomas W Case)
Enigmatic and haunting. Like Teddy, I find this deeply sad, but it\'s...
January 14th, 2024 22:12 - The Fig Tree and the Bird (Parisab)
Your title evokes Aesop\'s fables... the Fox and the Grapes, the Lion and...
November 19th, 2023 15:35 - Heavy Hearts and Dandelions (Parisab)
They say there are no words... but you found the right ones. I recall as...
November 19th, 2023 15:30 - Sillyness 101 (Hzugman)
What a coincidence! I just read your latest poem not long after you...
November 18th, 2023 23:14 - My Mom is Dying (Gray0328)
Ah, Courtney, so relatable, so human. My mom died after a short intense...
November 18th, 2023 20:00 - Lucifer\'s Flaw (Gray0328)
A succinct and haunting description... you had me on the lookout, scanning...
November 18th, 2023 19:57 - A Pocketful of Catacombs (ADarkerMind)
Streets of London has inspired and haunted me for decades... one of my...
November 18th, 2023 19:39 - an energy of change (ADarkerMind)
Chilling... and HOW did you know June 14 is my birthday?
November 18th, 2023 19:27 - My Thoughts (The Fife Wanderer)
I appreciate the irony of one who can think of nothing to write composing...
November 18th, 2023 19:24 - summer storm (Katdream)
I love the ring composition... soldiers at the beginning and at the end,...
November 18th, 2023 19:18 - Guilt of Longing (Firefall)
A fine soliloquy, simple and honest, very universal. Those fading...
November 18th, 2023 19:14 - Sinking into Sadness (Firefall)
Your poems are consistently rewarding. Simple on the surface, sincere...
November 4th, 2023 20:36 - Haiku # 3 (Norman Flagtea)
Interesting how a few lines can create a whole imagined scene for the...
October 26th, 2023 02:51 - Meet your new friend (Hzugman)
I\'ll drink to that
October 26th, 2023 02:47 - My Fall Loving Cat (Eileen Clark)
I knew you were just a big pussycat at heart!
October 26th, 2023 02:36 - Put My Ashes In A Coffee Can (Eileen Clark)
I laughed so hard it hurt... thank you!
October 26th, 2023 02:35 - The Boys (Quemis)
Made my evening to see you post something... this is so true... it is so...
October 19th, 2023 19:51 - Unholy Alliance (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
So much to ponder in so few words! I enjoyed the contra expectatio at the...
October 9th, 2023 11:38 - Omphalos of Verisimilitude (A Boy With Roses)
However you arrange your poems, they are clearly a moving (auto)biography....
October 7th, 2023 18:31 - Poetic perfumery (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
These days many people turn their noses up at strong perfumes. I...
October 5th, 2023 19:56 - MIX NOT BUSINESS AND FUN (Bobby O)
Oh wow... the parting image is so poignant. A lovely synecdoche... that...
September 23rd, 2023 13:32 - LIFE (Bobby O)
The phrase \"trace my deep footsteps\" is a truly inspired line... many of...
September 23rd, 2023 13:28 - Wants and needs (Hzugman)
Love this little lesson, and how it ends with a little landslide of stuff!
September 23rd, 2023 13:26 - Sunday Morning with Miss Etta James (Parisab)
Wonderful share of your morning music reverie! Yes, she\'s a gem, and...
September 23rd, 2023 13:24 - To a stranger who has died (Amy Michelle Mosier)
Lovely... I hope you leave some of them behind for us? (-:
September 23rd, 2023 13:22 - Young Moon Killers (Parisab)
Thank you... The state murders of Mahsa and all the other brave victims of...
September 16th, 2023 20:49 - Ubuntu: I Am because We Are (Aloo Denish Obiero)
Very moving and thoughtful... thanks for sharing! I have a couple dear...
September 16th, 2023 18:36 - A Bizarre Naked Dance (Aloo Denish Obiero)
Interesting story... thanks for introducing me to Karish and the Gangara...
September 16th, 2023 18:34 - When All Said and Done it’s All Over (Neville)
Not a hint of reality here I trust! Gee, thanks for passing on the kidney...
September 16th, 2023 02:49 - The Sharon\'s Roses At The Gyeong-Ui Line Park (Kinsley Lee)
You teach me something every day! We call it Altheia (Greek for...
September 16th, 2023 02:14 - The New Commandments. (David Wakeling)
God is awfully full of himself. All those nots... not very creative that...
September 16th, 2023 02:08 - I\'ll never understand (Poetic Dan)
Well, you are welcome in my space any time man. This is a little like an...
September 16th, 2023 02:05 - visionary (Teddy.15)
As the saying goes, one page at a time! A lovely little ponder.
September 16th, 2023 02:00 - FATED HERO FAKED (Bobby O)
I saw the courage before I read your comments.. bold and rough, rugged...
September 16th, 2023 01:57 - Bouncy Clouds. (Goldfinch60)
I am not sure it\'s poetry but I am sure you got me! (-:
September 16th, 2023 01:51 - Pills (Miss_Dreamer)
MD, hang in there... I adore this little soliloquy... thanks for letting...
September 16th, 2023 01:48 - My lady kate (Lorenz)
Very sensual, elusive, and rich with mesmerizing, mingling images and...
September 16th, 2023 01:43 - Jacks And Jokers (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Tell us what you really think! I know you don\'t mean to be demeaning,...
September 16th, 2023 01:37 - Beauty in ugly things (PKF)
I am not religious, but I share the thought you explore here... to me...
September 16th, 2023 01:33 - I am human (NafisaSB)
Just when you think everything that can be said has been said! I suspect...
September 16th, 2023 01:30 - that (Jon Nakapalau)
OK, damn you... I might just cry
September 16th, 2023 01:26 - you (Jon Nakapalau)
John, I am both confused and amused, but I am also moved... I think I know...
September 16th, 2023 01:25 - Bed of roses or thorns (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
PS I miss your contributions!
September 16th, 2023 01:17 - Bed of roses or thorns (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
I don\'t agree with your premise but I understand what you feel... I\'m...
September 16th, 2023 01:16 - Howling Winter Wolves (Eileen Clark)
Very lovely poem Eileen. Ominous and moody, and I can feel both the icy...
September 16th, 2023 01:11 - MORE OF THE DISSIMILAR (Michael Edwards)
The pollen of course is the stuff that matters, that keeps it all going! ...
August 20th, 2023 11:11 - Firm Faithfulness (Orchidee)
I can\'t help supporting you MPS old standards... when a poet\'s name...
August 20th, 2023 11:07 - The seasons of a life (Sorenbarrett)
Breathtaking and lovely in its modesty and packed with allusions that...
August 20th, 2023 11:05 - Sonnets are Hard (Bigguy)
Your modesty is as fun as your sonnet! Brave and bravo.
August 20th, 2023 11:01 - Mendacium (Kurt Philip Behm)
Could you use fewer words? (-:
I appreciate the bare bones that don\'t...
August 20th, 2023 11:00
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