Comments on community poems by lysistrata

• Layla; Part II (The morning after. Distance and tears at dawn.) (JohnThomas) 2nd Day of Eric Clapton Trilogy: 1. Name the painting . 2. In case...
  August 25th, 2016 11:41
• Spiritual matters (Daniel dawes) Oh Daniel, You make me say things that I'd rather NOT... Have you...
  August 25th, 2016 11:15
• Firelight, Fire night (Reivax Camlost) 1. Check OUT this: "Slam the door in the cold and the frost out of...
  August 25th, 2016 10:54
• cliffs of Love (Tony36) Finally Tony, You came back to your Good old Self. Very Nice!👌
  August 24th, 2016 09:37
• Layla; Part I (Dreamed I was dreaming of you. Time lost in various positions.) (JohnThomas) Teddy, I am pretty certain that your Writing has the potential to be...
  August 24th, 2016 09:33
• Layla; Part I (Dreamed I was dreaming of you. Time lost in various positions.) (JohnThomas) Teddy, 1. Revise JOHN UPDIKE or Philip Roth?! 2. Change title...
  August 24th, 2016 03:37
• Alive, not kicking (Daniel dawes) Daniel, Sorry about the typos: smartphone While driving... If I may, I...
  August 23rd, 2016 12:26
• Somedays (JohnThomas) Teddy,are you ready? I breathe into You.😙 Closer.I breathe...
  August 23rd, 2016 09:55
• Alive, not kicking (Daniel dawes) 1st verse: Try change "singing" within resting/nesting (?!) 4th verse:Try...
  August 23rd, 2016 09:39
• Love is a Battlefield (Notapoet) "This emotional war we fight Is brutal and tough But as hard as some...
  August 22nd, 2016 23:55
• Nyctophillia (Ejvazquez17) Nyctophobia 🌚 Requires Algorithms Nyctophilia...
  August 22nd, 2016 11:12
• Invitation (Daniel dawes) There is something romantic and certainly English in your Poetry. Reading...
  August 22nd, 2016 08:20
• Dance With Me (JohnThomas) Saudade?! YOU? Who looks like Ted Hughes?! Thank God, I am NOT Sylvia...
  August 22nd, 2016 03:37
• Socrates\' Bias (Seeker) Polymath George, "To know the self will surely quicken dreams" Do you...
  August 21st, 2016 23:57
• Inertia (The 2 A.M Writer) My answer through truth & facts is that you are gettting IN return NOT...
  August 21st, 2016 23:34