Comments on community poems by lysistrata

• Words Unspoken (C.corsaro73) Gentle Good hearted Soul, Walk on Don't Fear Tell her how you...
  June 25th, 2016 03:39
• The weed. (Camille) I lower myself to this trivial dandelion I caress,I adore,I remove,I...
  June 24th, 2016 11:31
• END OF A LOVE AFFAIR ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) - Don't leave me...😥 - If only you knew how much good it's done to...
  June 24th, 2016 11:24
• untitled (Rose) Rose, do you know "Softly and Tenderly" by Will Thompson? Softly and...
  June 23rd, 2016 16:29
• O NIGHTINGALE ~ A Love Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) John Milton forgives you,Immortal Poet. The voice (yours) I hear this...
  June 23rd, 2016 16:18
• Meadow of dreams. (Camille) Your words,your sentences fall one after the other like seeds that spring...
  June 23rd, 2016 12:26
• A Real Jack the Ripper in a Small American Town (Moontigerntn) LOL & Love your "Real Jack the Ripper in a Small American Town". Thanks...
  June 23rd, 2016 09:51
• Paralyzing (John Lee) John, My only tiny objection is the following bit: "Searching for my...
  June 23rd, 2016 09:37
• Your Purpose (Survivor48) Question: If there is no pole in the hole,how do you climb up? Answer:...
  June 21st, 2016 11:33
• ANOTHER GUN MEASURE PROPOSAL GETS SHOT DOWN (PARDON THE PUN) (DubbleDhee) Thank you so much for this,my friend. I was wondering do Americans carry...
  June 21st, 2016 11:19
• Too Many Mistakes (PattieKat) Last week I was having an intense conversation with a friend about the...
  June 21st, 2016 11:15
• And on the horizon on the calm black water  (Poepoet97) With my black mermaid - like dress and azure necklace I followed you till...
  June 21st, 2016 11:06
• Therapist (John Lee) It is fine. It is splendid. You are going deeper and deeper. You are...
  June 21st, 2016 10:45
• Sand (Rose) How true ! Thank you,even though the last line troubles me?! If you have ...
  June 21st, 2016 10:42
• Atop a hill (Biraj) How pleasant to read Biraj, Who has written so inspiring stuff! Some...
  June 20th, 2016 13:18
• Taking a Chance (Survivor48) So your narrator has overstepped the Animal Perfection and he is up for an...
  June 20th, 2016 06:42
• 33rd Round (John Lee) I think this could be a song! Happy Father's Day,John....
  June 19th, 2016 15:56
• The Climax (Geraldb) Love of your Life? One Life,One Love & No kids?!
  June 19th, 2016 15:39
• Missing (Hanledger) As a 15 year old you should ask your mum whether 5 year olds could be so ...
  June 19th, 2016 08:32
• We weren\'t thinking. (Hanledger) I like the form of your poem,but you still seem to be a prisoner of your...
  June 19th, 2016 08:21
• Lily Sugar by Thehara age10 (Thehara) Honestly? I find Putrid Gassington more amusing. He could actually hang...
  June 19th, 2016 04:07
• ROBOT-1 (Berthold Lippel) You mean your 1st experiment? We ALL enjoyed it.👩👶 I might try...
  June 19th, 2016 02:15
• Tree On A Hill (John Lee) John,I like your symbolism,but I want you to look up again your opening...
  June 18th, 2016 13:25
• SHIVA (Berthold Lippel) "Death is a fisherman, the world we see His fish-pond is, and we the...
  June 17th, 2016 08:01
• Chapters Of Our Love (Samishere) Which Chapter is this Sam? Anyway,I wrote the Introduction... I hope...
  June 16th, 2016 09:10
• Super Dad (John Lee) So you are another Flawed Human Being?! Self Knowledge could bring you...
  June 16th, 2016 08:48
• OH CAPTAIN, MY CAPTAIN (Summersounds68) Thank you so much my friend. I have friends whose father's were captains...
  June 16th, 2016 08:45
• Tea time (Isituorme) Gosh Isituorme, Have you ever heard of the word "Omertà"? How on...
  June 16th, 2016 08:33
• A sleep of saving grace (Reivax Camlost) You obviously are a special case and dreams hold an important part of your...
  June 15th, 2016 09:50
• The Succubus (Ccrees) From 'Your Dear Mother' to " The Succumbus"?! Dumb your mother and Keep...
  June 15th, 2016 09:45
• DEATHDAY (Berthold Lippel) "Careful the things you say, Children will listen...." - Mother
  June 15th, 2016 09:23
• When Angels Sighed (Williammae) William, Well done for your "Three Boxes of Tune". I liked both the...
  June 15th, 2016 09:20
• Mr...Mr... (Monee00) Damn You Mr. and all your horrible filthy Creation, but may Heaven exist,...
  June 15th, 2016 09:15
• A memory of discomfort (Amosj) Your recollection and reflection on depression left me a very good...
  June 14th, 2016 15:00
• You Know Me (Moontigerntn) Well,I know YOU.... You are my Friend And you write Damn Good...
  June 14th, 2016 14:58
• She\'s Happy (Samishere) Hi Sam, I enjoyed her 'Happiness' and your 'unhappiness',especially the...
  June 14th, 2016 08:43
• \"Let It Play\" (Marissaapril) "I think it's time we created new sounds" Very nicely done Marisa. I am...
  June 14th, 2016 08:32
• SOMEWHERE OVER THE RAINBOW ? (BRIAN & ANGELA) Why don't you take a look at planet Venus?It is the most similar planet in...
  June 12th, 2016 12:29
• SOMEWHERE OVER THE RAINBOW ? (BRIAN & ANGELA) "Better (i always say !) to have loved and lost than never to have loved...
  June 12th, 2016 04:51
• Lioness (Hannahcahill) Hannah, My only complaint that for a "Lioness",I would have preferred...
  June 12th, 2016 04:31
• Inside The Box (John Lee) Saints live in flames Wise Men next to them.... Keep writing my friend...
  June 12th, 2016 04:22
• THE SADDEST MOMENT (Berthold Lippel) My friend, The following is a quick one,inspired by your poem and my...
  June 11th, 2016 12:37
• Waiting To Be (Williammae) "Worthless lone lost penny", I found you! This last phrase deserves all...
  June 11th, 2016 12:25
• ALIENS ARE AMONG US ! (Close Encounters II) A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Brian, Monday that Begins on Saturday seems an idea to look at?!...
  June 11th, 2016 12:22
• TIME FOR EVERYTHING ? (BRIAN & ANGELA) Brian, Don't you think that it's time to finish what you started earlier...
  June 11th, 2016 02:58
• ICE CUBES (Berthold Lippel) Dearest, Physics isn't the most important thing. Love is. Don't talk...
  June 9th, 2016 15:09
• Moca Boy (John Lee) You surprised me with your twist,John Lee. I am neither a moca girl nor I...
  June 9th, 2016 14:56
• CADENCE AND CALLIOPE AT CONANICUT ISLAND (Summersounds68) I see my friend ,you have got some good ones up your sleeve. Thanks for...
  June 9th, 2016 10:41
• Reaching (LaRose) I also read some of your previous poems/lyrics and you are a fine,fine...
  June 9th, 2016 09:54
• The Lay of Njøltholir (ThePearlPoet) I picked your message... Thanks for throwing me back to EARTH. In 3 words...
  June 9th, 2016 09:37
• I Know (SheWasTheSun) My New Friend, You should very proud of your poem.It is powerful. It...
  June 9th, 2016 09:30
• My Old Friend (Antivist) Your Confessional Poetry is more successful than my Symbolic Approach...
  June 8th, 2016 15:34
• MIDNIGHT IN SITKA PARK (Summersounds68) Sonia, Would you describe yourself as an Aesthete or simply a Nature...
  June 8th, 2016 08:54
• knowing is not knowing at all (Skye Marlene) Misunderstandings and neglect occasion more mischief in the world than...
  June 8th, 2016 08:42
• Blood Sweat and Tears (John Lee) You nailed it. Are you into death metal? Cheers JohnLee.😭
  June 8th, 2016 08:38
• GRADUATE SCHOOL (Berthold Lippel) Never let your schooling get in the way of your education.... I know.I am...
  June 8th, 2016 08:32
• MIDNIGHT IN SITKA PARK (Summersounds68) I just realized the existence of Mt. Spurr and Sitka Park,thanks to your...
  June 7th, 2016 08:52
• I LOVE TO DO LAUNDRY (Berthold Lippel) Dirty Old Bert, I meditate with a hot iron overloaded with steaming...
  June 7th, 2016 08:00
• Escaping The greatest catch 22 (Jobrand) Jo, The Title is ESCAPE...? Fix it. Along with the category which is...
  June 6th, 2016 09:29
• FORSAKENED (Tropicana) Your poem is not FORSAKEN. I like your small details,e.g. the use of...
  June 6th, 2016 09:22
• This Is Now (Moontigerntn) I have no words.... It's BEAUTIFUL.🙌😀 Thank you, Lysi.
  June 6th, 2016 09:02
• Live Life, Take Chances (Amarea2016) Not only he makes your heart melt,he makes your feet melt from...
  June 5th, 2016 15:19
• ALMOST..... (Lysistrata) I "almost" met the love of my life at the airport. He was getting on an...
  June 5th, 2016 15:11
• TIME IS PRECIOUS ! A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Brian, The visual is a bag inspired by SALVADOR DALI'S CLOCKS?! Timeless...
  June 5th, 2016 05:07
• Pretty Lies (JustABird) Who is telling lies to whom? This poem is indeed a bunch of 'Pretty...
  June 5th, 2016 03:23
• ode to Alcohol (Germanamericanchurch) "So clear to me" Not clear to ME. Is this an OBE or an ODE to...
  June 5th, 2016 03:14
• Was Snoop Dogg Wrong? Or Are We Blaming The Messenger? (DubbleDhee) This is a site dedicated to poetry,so I can't write an essay about "The...
  June 4th, 2016 11:43
• PLAYERS BE PLAYED (Paulamcnealy) My friend, Where are your manners?All the Education was wasted on...
  June 4th, 2016 05:34
• She was the Sun (SheWasTheSun) I am not into confessional poetry, but Thanks for sharing with us your...
  June 4th, 2016 05:25
• DISPOSSESSION (Berthold Lippel) Bert,my friend, You are just tidying up. Then you would decide when to...
  June 3rd, 2016 16:50
• A Journey to Luna-cy (Lysistrata) I had an espresso gelato and then ice lemon tea,because it is too hot ...
  June 3rd, 2016 16:39
• No Home (SheWasTheSun) "No Home" or "A Cage for the Soul". SheWasTheSun brings light with her...
  June 3rd, 2016 10:33
• 26 SHADES OF PURPLE - An ABCDarian Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA) "Real Men love to wear purple" You are a Real Man,right?! Oh,Brian,you...
  June 3rd, 2016 10:27
• SMALL THINGS ARE ENOUGH (Berthold Lippel) BERT'S SMALL REQUIREMENTS: 1.Just make me some tea 2.Just hold my...
  June 2nd, 2016 15:37
• KITTENS ARE LOVELY - An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) From the village girls to the kittens,Brian. Friday tomorrow. What about...
  June 2nd, 2016 15:23
• Who is Responsible for Harambe\'s Death? (DubbleDhee) My new friend,Didi, Should I tell you about all the fools of the...
  June 2nd, 2016 15:19
• Racing Thoughts (Anxiousandartsy) Looking forward to your series....You made a very good start. Can I...
  June 2nd, 2016 09:01
• THE BOOKKEEPER (Berthold Lippel) Bert,my friend, The Bookkeeper would leave with a Bang or a...
  June 2nd, 2016 08:35
• Wonderland. (IPsYcH0) You nailed it .
  June 1st, 2016 14:53
• North Carolina Bathroom Bill Is Not What It Appears To Be (DubbleDhee) Thanks DD. Looking forward now for a piece about the Gun Control...More...
  June 1st, 2016 14:52
• My Sweetie (Tedious) Tedious, Your ' Sweetie' is for diabetics....
  June 1st, 2016 14:45
• THE SCENT OF A LADY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) "In my experience CITY GIRLS & VILLAGE GIRLS react in much the same way in...
  June 1st, 2016 14:42
• THE SCENT OF A LADY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) I am a city girl,so NO COMMENT....Brian
  June 1st, 2016 09:23
• Self doubt an understatement. (NJH) Is your poetry confessional?
  June 1st, 2016 09:10
• LOVELY LONELY LOST LAGOON ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) It has touches from Poe's World. And don't be surprised about diving in...
  June 1st, 2016 09:09
• A Friend Is (Stacey-Leigh) A friend is the person who knows everything about you and still likes...
  June 1st, 2016 09:04
• Otherness (Satishverma) "Fear hauls you up on the brazen rocks, you stand alone in sun to find...
  May 31st, 2016 10:51
• LOVELY LONELY LOST LAGOON ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) There you go Brian.Now you are talking!! I am ready for a swim...
  May 31st, 2016 10:49
• Rita on a Lilly pad (Ola89) Get Rita an iPhone! Are we going to get "Rita: No Sex in the City?"
  May 31st, 2016 10:43
• Marooned (Writer57) I find interesting your story. Keep in mind that " Everything flows"......
  May 31st, 2016 10:41
• Should Bernie Get Out Of The Race? (DubbleDhee) Great Topic! My answer comes with today's "Little Man". AMEN.
  May 31st, 2016 10:24
• BABY FLY (Berthold Lippel) The grey plane sprayed the black fly The black fly poisoned the white...
  May 31st, 2016 10:20
• حبيبتى, My Love (OnMySoul) Joking about "added 70% of it while i was typing it". It's so...
  May 31st, 2016 10:14
• حبيبتى, My Love (OnMySoul) You are joking,right? Feed?Back? Tomorrow... Alas,translate the Title?!
  May 30th, 2016 10:08
• George (Lysistrata) It was the "Love Story" song.
  May 30th, 2016 10:06
• Greatness (Hitbraker) Why is it marked for over 18? I mean,Iam eligible,but under 18 could also...
  May 30th, 2016 09:58
• HOUR GLASS FIGURES (BRIAN & ANGELA) I like the shape,but the content needs more stirring... But very...
  May 30th, 2016 09:49
• Angel Wings (Therainking) "Fly take flight my angel where other Angel's can be found" I think it...
  May 30th, 2016 09:44
• TEEN LAMENT (Berthold Lippel) Seriously BERT? I write Poetry for Kids,You write Poetry for...
  May 30th, 2016 09:34
• IDK (OnMySoul) I like it a LOT,but what does IDK stand for?
  May 29th, 2016 12:55