Comments on community poems by lysistrata

• blue traveler (Willyweed) Missed YOU ALL... Καλά Χριστούγεννα Joyeux Noël,...
  December 24th, 2016 13:24
• Passion Flower. (JohnThomas) Nice Poem! But where did you get the painting? It\'s stunning.I hope...
  November 6th, 2016 01:34
• Social Suckerfish (WriteBeLight) Pleaseee Writer Be Light.... You could lock your Twitter & let in only...
  November 6th, 2016 01:21
• Byzantine Woman Scholar (Augustus) Dearest, Please note, It\'s HYPATIA. I find your Poem very...
  October 14th, 2016 10:27
• Cornfields (The 2 A.M Writer) NOT bad,but have you softened?! Or is it my false impression!? Have you...
  October 11th, 2016 04:20
• Marcella (JohnThomas) Really? Does Mexico have a taco joint on 5th Avenu❔❕😮😏 I am...
  October 8th, 2016 08:41
• Eros Imploded (The 2 A.M Writer) One of your best,these last couple of months. Keep Writing😯
  October 8th, 2016 08:34
• Cautious? (The 2 A.M Writer) "I saw the future I though":TYPO? Good Flow,except the closing line.....
  October 8th, 2016 08:30
• Proofread Before Sending (WriteBeLight) I just read all 5? Your first needs editing,the rest are much better and...
  September 23rd, 2016 09:09
• Untrusted Love (John Lee) I missed your Writing John. Keep UP the Good Inspiration...😉
  September 20th, 2016 09:29
• Everything Fades To Nothingness (Emile Dubois) Catchy Title, But I didn't find the treasure...💎 Maybe Next Time?!
  September 15th, 2016 11:25
• A converting Extrovert (Master Sora) "Busy cafe's ":TYPO? A Converting Extrovert 😏 or An Outgoing...
  September 15th, 2016 11:18
• The invitation. (Camille) Camille, I know that when you publish a Poem,you have spend time and have...
  September 13th, 2016 09:34
• When I thought It Couldn\'t Get Any Worse (Petec) Where are you? I could send an ambulance to collect a...
  September 13th, 2016 09:27
• Unrequited #02 (the big lie) (Justsomegeeze) Geeze!! You seem interesting.... And that is NOT a lie?!😮😏
  September 13th, 2016 09:17
• Scattered Mind (Master Sora) I like some Scatterings of your Wicked Poem.😏
  September 12th, 2016 11:33
• Dreaming of mercy (Reivax Camlost) Interesting Dream...😋
  September 12th, 2016 11:19
• Musings on Relationships and Love (Petec) Your musings have NO Poetic Value to Me. So Zzzzzzzz....😪😴
  September 12th, 2016 11:16
• Metonymy (Augustus) For a 77 year old disable,I say "Aha" !? 😏
  September 11th, 2016 01:50
• Autumn traveler\'s friend (Reivax Camlost) I guess I now need to check your Inspiration "La Campanella", because I...
  September 9th, 2016 13:33
• Night Trip (Jeff) This Writing Reminded Me of WW. Nice Flow..
  September 8th, 2016 15:16
• 33 A CROSS (BRIAN & ANGELA) Eat,Pray,Love. Pray,Eat,Love. Love,Eat,Pray.....💞
  September 8th, 2016 15:14
• The Voice (Tony36) I like your Voice in this one Tony. Keep 😯
  September 8th, 2016 07:13
• The love unspoken (Petec) Zzzzzzz.......😴
  September 8th, 2016 07:06
• What If.... (Jeff) You are an Angel 😇 deep inside!!?? But What If, You are faking?!😏
  September 7th, 2016 09:46
• What am I going to do (Petec) "What can I say, I wrote this several months ago and I still don't know...
  September 7th, 2016 09:42
• P O E T R Y IS ................. ? (BRIAN & ANGELA) "You can't stand people who carp and criticise other poets?" Right!...
  September 6th, 2016 12:52
• The quest on Saddleworth Moor (Everton Brome) Thanks for reminding me this case. May my prayers ease the pain of the...
  September 4th, 2016 14:32
• Inspiration (Reivax Camlost) You don't need to 'defend' Severus. Your buddy,neighbor,bro or alter ego...
  September 4th, 2016 10:25
• Slipped Too Far Away (Jeff) Having read all 4 of your Poems,I could honestly say... Keep Writing &...
  September 4th, 2016 03:12
• paranoid about the earths crust (Giantgentlebear) "you see i fear the earths crust maybe to weak for me.." 1.Typo! 2....
  September 4th, 2016 03:08
• I Think (Tony36) Tony, What you call 'silly', I would name 'avant garde'.👍 Well done...
  September 2nd, 2016 13:03
• A lark among the pines (Reivax Camlost) If I tell you that I have a painting in my bedroom where a couple shares...
  September 2nd, 2016 12:56
• A Refugee Child (Shahla Latifi) I find interesting your approach. I adore the Photo-«Faces of...
  September 2nd, 2016 12:48
• An Anthem for Living (JohnThomas) "It's my party, and I'll cry if I want to Cry if I want to, cry if I want...
  August 30th, 2016 08:17
• I do not just want you to love me (JohnThomas) Are you a Man of Sense or Are you 'talking' Nonsense?!
  August 29th, 2016 12:47
• Love Letter (John Lee) word's :typo & check "our love thirst" ?! I enjoyed reading it,John &...
  August 29th, 2016 06:14
• Separation (Daniel dawes) Daniel "My Brother", Don't ask me AGAIN my age. Lila is NOT for your...
  August 28th, 2016 17:53
• A Cry of Life (John Lee) So glad to see You back, Awesome John. Well done❗
  August 28th, 2016 14:30
• The Fire (JohnThomas) There is Nothing to Be Frightened of the Sense of an Ending... Eros &...
  August 28th, 2016 14:21
• Overplayed Radio Song (Ejvazquez17) I was a New Avant Garde Which due to its quality Became an Old...
  August 28th, 2016 14:05
• Ode to Charlie Haden: or stand up and be counted. (JohnThomas) Teddy, 1.🆘 I have an issue with the video. Is it an interview?...
  August 27th, 2016 07:53
• Morning stars (Daniel dawes) Daniel, I enjoyed reading this ONE, especially your detailed descriptions...
  August 26th, 2016 16:47
• Layla; Part II (The morning after. Distance and tears at dawn.) (JohnThomas) 1. TYPOS? "there horrible perversion tear us apart." - 'I'm to...
  August 25th, 2016 16:57
• Spiritual matters (Daniel dawes) "parnters":Typo? You write about mind versus BODY. If your Poetry is...
  August 25th, 2016 15:38
• Layla; Part II (The morning after. Distance and tears at dawn.) (JohnThomas) 2nd Day of Eric Clapton Trilogy: 1. Name the painting . 2. In case...
  August 25th, 2016 11:41
• Spiritual matters (Daniel dawes) Oh Daniel, You make me say things that I'd rather NOT... Have you...
  August 25th, 2016 11:15
• Firelight, Fire night (Reivax Camlost) 1. Check OUT this: "Slam the door in the cold and the frost out of...
  August 25th, 2016 10:54
• cliffs of Love (Tony36) Finally Tony, You came back to your Good old Self. Very Nice!👌
  August 24th, 2016 09:37
• Layla; Part I (Dreamed I was dreaming of you. Time lost in various positions.) (JohnThomas) Teddy, I am pretty certain that your Writing has the potential to be...
  August 24th, 2016 09:33
• Layla; Part I (Dreamed I was dreaming of you. Time lost in various positions.) (JohnThomas) Teddy, 1. Revise JOHN UPDIKE or Philip Roth?! 2. Change title...
  August 24th, 2016 03:37
• Alive, not kicking (Daniel dawes) Daniel, Sorry about the typos: smartphone While driving... If I may, I...
  August 23rd, 2016 12:26
• Somedays (JohnThomas) Teddy,are you ready? I breathe into You.😙 Closer.I breathe...
  August 23rd, 2016 09:55
• Alive, not kicking (Daniel dawes) 1st verse: Try change "singing" within resting/nesting (?!) 4th verse:Try...
  August 23rd, 2016 09:39
• Love is a Battlefield (Notapoet) "This emotional war we fight Is brutal and tough But as hard as some...
  August 22nd, 2016 23:55
• Nyctophillia (Ejvazquez17) Nyctophobia 🌚 Requires Algorithms Nyctophilia...
  August 22nd, 2016 11:12
• Invitation (Daniel dawes) There is something romantic and certainly English in your Poetry. Reading...
  August 22nd, 2016 08:20
• Dance With Me (JohnThomas) Saudade?! YOU? Who looks like Ted Hughes?! Thank God, I am NOT Sylvia...
  August 22nd, 2016 03:37
• Socrates\' Bias (Seeker) Polymath George, "To know the self will surely quicken dreams" Do you...
  August 21st, 2016 23:57
• Inertia (The 2 A.M Writer) My answer through truth & facts is that you are gettting IN return NOT...
  August 21st, 2016 23:34
• PTSD 4 (Tony36) Tony, Now start Writing about Donald Trump who suffers from
  August 21st, 2016 12:33
• The Hooks of Mind (Daniel dawes) Thanks for reading my poem,but before I push you into the river Dart(?!)...
  August 21st, 2016 08:35
• A kind intension (Akamykowski) I appreciate your intension,but I thought frogs were hiding/sleeping...
  August 21st, 2016 03:02
• Rubik\'s Heart (Ejvazquez17) Friend, I have comment to your "Pumpkin" Poem,with just ONE word. Let...
  August 20th, 2016 09:56
• Wherever you are, there I\\\'ll be (Liquidsoul) It touches a chord ?!💑 Why don't you try to touch ✌?! Keep...
  August 20th, 2016 09:11
• What If? (Survivor48) You cannot swim for New Horizons, until you have the courage to lose...
  August 19th, 2016 13:32
• Silent Moon (Daniel dawes) I sit, I watch, I am getting bored😕 Your first attempt was more...
  August 19th, 2016 08:31
• Jenga (Ejvazquez17) Excellence is an art won by training and habituation. You rise,You fall...
  August 15th, 2016 13:29
• Secret (LIGHT WARRIOR) Since You've got 1.000.000 why Don't you move to the👉 Next One?!
  August 15th, 2016 09:15
• The LORD\\\'S Poem! (SparkyKarl) SparkyPoet, That was an inspiring start! Just listen the Artist Moby...
  August 15th, 2016 09:10
• I\'m sorry I\'m too much (Teenageheartbreak) "But it was way to much" Correct the typo & When are adding...
  August 15th, 2016 03:58
• Deathly Defenestration (Ejvazquez17) I got close to nominating this,but needs a bit of work.... Check OUT...
  August 15th, 2016 03:46
• Deadly Flowers (Bill) Your name is NOT Bill. Your name is KILL BILL.💪💣
  August 15th, 2016 03:35
• One Size (Williammae) I think you need to work with your opening line and what about more...
  August 14th, 2016 01:26
• What is Considered Success? (Survivor48) Success is finding your destiny. Successfull is the person who when he...
  August 10th, 2016 16:11
• The Powerball (Ejvazquez17) Don't Complain Don't Complain Don't Complain Because at the end It...
  August 10th, 2016 10:03
• What Do You See (LaRose) Even though I don't see You, I like what I read...🏆
  August 10th, 2016 09:53
• Lava Lamp Love (Ejvazquez17) We met I bloomed You blew Our love was out of season.🍃🍂
  August 9th, 2016 15:37
• She\'s Made of Contradictions (SheWasTheSun) Tonight we'd raise a glass of Vinsanto to your talent....and bright...
  August 9th, 2016 09:25
• Fear of Failure (Survivor48) If a God and a Human have sex,who is going to have the best...
  August 8th, 2016 08:45
• Person vs people (Ronin_kiaran) "If you would like to voice your complaints & grievances at the above...
  August 8th, 2016 08:07
• Seeing you happy keeps me going (Raysonpoems) How would you feel if she was pregnant and decided to have an abortion...
  August 8th, 2016 07:49
• Eta Carinae and All the Rest (Ejvazquez17) Or Bruises after Bruises... This Eta Carinae is a long...
  August 8th, 2016 07:39
• -128.6°F (Ejvazquez17) You are a Prophet! Right,Elijah?!😱
  August 5th, 2016 12:48
• The Treehouse (Tony36) I like it and wanted to participate in your fusion poem,but my mind works...
  August 5th, 2016 12:38
• DRIFTING INTO EL ROJOS CANTINA (Summersounds68) Sonia, I an neither Clint Eastwood nor WillyWeed..But I LIKE it😁🐎
  August 5th, 2016 12:34
• Drip, drop (SilverXball) I like the poem and his subject,but NOT the title.😏
  August 4th, 2016 10:07
• Dust and Leaves (Severus Alexander) There is almost always the sense of wonder through nature,through a forest...
  August 3rd, 2016 09:36
• Head Trip (The 2 A.M Writer) Have you been listening "Alice in Chains" and their "Man in the Box"?
  August 3rd, 2016 09:11
• When words are soft (Tony36) "It can mmake grooves": correct... Your poem brought memories of the...
  August 3rd, 2016 09:05
• The Introvert\'s Anguish (Mrsteww) "Sometimes never noticed by me"?! I don't get it!? lYou don't know...
  August 2nd, 2016 15:59
• Pieces of me (Lyrics- unfinished) (Teenageheartbreak) If you post the rest of it,you would get the honour of reading first my...
  August 2nd, 2016 06:46
• The Year I Was Born (Moontigerntn) Never,never gonna give you up... By the way,you are older.
  August 2nd, 2016 06:11
• From My Heart to Yours (Moontigerntn) I enjoyed reading it. Leave the Surealism, follow the Lyrics Writing...
  August 2nd, 2016 06:09
• The Mask (Tony36) Son, Write to Tony that he needs to wait 10 to 20 more minutes...Mummy...
  August 1st, 2016 10:17
• WATERFALLS and RAINBOWS ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) I like Water in whatever version I get it. Brian,I recently read and very...
  August 1st, 2016 09:59
• Autism... Proving youre right brother (SilverXball) You kinda lost me with the 'use' of autism,but I like your dialogue,your ...
  August 1st, 2016 09:52
• twang twang twang (yes i love you) (Willyweed) Very silly.. Very,very silly... Extremely silly.... The silliest of ALL...
  August 1st, 2016 09:42
• No Respect (So So Bad Official) Have you written anything about your favourite subject? DOGS?! Looking...
  July 31st, 2016 04:45
• A Lost Soul, A Lonely Heart (Mhpoet) You have published 3 poems and you have more than 40 'friends'. Are you...
  July 31st, 2016 03:42