Comments on community poems by lysistrata

• Thunderstorms (SheWasTheSun) I love your subject matter and your writing. But it could always be...
  July 31st, 2016 03:33
• just another day in paradise (Willyweed) I enjoyed the story.There is nothing good in a war except its ending. But...
  July 26th, 2016 03:25
• postcard (AAA) I agree with Willy.Very good start. The Best of your 3 pieces.How I love...
  July 25th, 2016 03:06
• When they Say You Can’t, You Can (Survivor48) You should embrace uncertainty and explore your errors. Some people are...
  July 25th, 2016 02:51
• Motivation (Survivor48) "Running without stopping to victory" I wouldn't recommendations...
  July 25th, 2016 02:48
• the crooked heart (Willyweed) Be careful,my friend. Don't translate fast. The translator's job is to...
  July 25th, 2016 02:39
• Hiding from the light. (Camille) Camille, Thamks for your comment about my Lullaby.I like both the...
  July 19th, 2016 15:57
• Clawing (The 2 A.M Writer) Comfort should be given free,but Trust is something that needs to be...
  July 19th, 2016 13:12
• FRAYED ANGEL HAIR (A TANGLED MESS) (Ooznozz) There are some interesting thoughts within the Mess of this Mass.
  July 19th, 2016 11:07
• The War (SheWasTheSun) Friend, What you might have missed about me is that I don't make KIND...
  July 18th, 2016 23:22
• \" Katharina IIII (Willyweed) Can I add " Bohemian Rhapsody" as the background music for your...
  July 18th, 2016 13:15
• Second glance (SilverXball) I am afraid only today I gave a first glance at your poems. They are...
  July 18th, 2016 08:17
• A Riveting Story (SheWasTheSun) I am here my friend. I never miss a riveting story,a love story,a dying...
  July 18th, 2016 00:45
• Sugar Coating? No. (DarkkQueen) There is a terrible sameness to the euphoria of alcohol and the euphoria...
  July 17th, 2016 07:11
• vagabond (Willyweed) Why don't you take part in the #ComedyBookWeek(16-23 july 2016)? -"Got...
  July 17th, 2016 03:03
• Lost in the lines (Jakewelty) The sun shines.It is too hot to play,so I read poetry in VAIN.
  July 16th, 2016 11:51
• When a Dream Leads to Greed (Survivor48) A dream that comes true and brings along fame and money is a different...
  July 16th, 2016 10:40
• Rapture (LIGHT WARRIOR) If you are Published,I suggest not only to share some of your work...
  July 15th, 2016 12:43
• Writing Exercise #4 (The 2 A.M Writer) Of course this is all goddamn Tiring. U are an Alphard...
  July 14th, 2016 15:33
• Feel what I feel (Frankyflowmandella.nyc) Frankygoestogym, That was the first thing you wrote after her death and...
  July 14th, 2016 07:26
• Robotic. (The 2 A.M Writer) "Neither in the sky or down in the dirt"=? Apathy is NOT the answer, but...
  July 14th, 2016 07:11
• the little orange pony (Willyweed) Willy, Do you have a special affection for horses or is it my...
  July 13th, 2016 15:51
• If I could... (Camille) One of your best.One day I hope you'd add photos etc and create an e -...
  July 13th, 2016 15:46
• THE RAVEN HAS FLOWN ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Brian, I got it & also noticed something else that I found strange &...
  July 13th, 2016 15:38
• Does the End Justify the Means? (Survivor48) "If the journey is kept righteous" It is a matter of character to keep...
  July 13th, 2016 15:34
• The 2am kebab (Daniel) That was a delicious suprise,Daniel. You are invited next week to a...
  July 13th, 2016 15:27
• Close your eyes / It\'s an early day (Severus Alexander) I am going to take your advice: close my eyes and dream of the...
  July 13th, 2016 15:18
• Heart Astray (BCR64) Opposites are not the same for the same reason they are the same. I have...
  July 13th, 2016 08:56
• 3AM (NJH) And what do you actually do for this World,except writing words at 3 or 4...
  July 12th, 2016 12:11
• If You Need a Friend (Moontigerntn) Ok,you've convinced me.... Anytime you visit Greece,call one of your...
  July 12th, 2016 12:02
• Writing Exercise #3 (The 2 A.M Writer) Don't beg me . .Thanks my friend. I enjoyed your metaphors and
  July 12th, 2016 11:58
• I try (Jlhowell) I'm walking on sunshine, whoaaa I'm walking on sunshine, whoaaa I'm...
  July 10th, 2016 13:00
• i hate it (Segolene) Are you Agoraphobic? Relax,Grow up and Know Yourself. And thanks for the...
  July 10th, 2016 02:12
• Letters II (Severus Alexander) Thanks for this & a U2 song you posted a while ago.
  July 10th, 2016 02:07
• Judgment (Daniel) Do you want me to JUDGE it as a piece of poetry or as a piece of ...
  July 10th, 2016 01:44
• Experiment, Pump, Scream, Paradise, and repeat (The 2 A.M Writer) We need to fry your brain and tongue Boil your eyes and lung Not to...
  July 9th, 2016 12:07
• Never Surrender (Survivor48) I NEVER surrender.I like the being sure but not too sure and expect the...
  July 9th, 2016 11:52
• GUNS \'N ROSES ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) We are getting our water pistols and we are off to start a war....Which...
  July 9th, 2016 03:55
• Salvation lies within (Daniel) I have one mission on earth: to save souls from soulless clowns . What is...
  July 9th, 2016 03:52
• Self pity (Daniel) "Are they just an anchor To keep us moored in our sorrow?!" PD James...
  July 8th, 2016 09:13
• VENUS RULES ~ MARS SERVES ~ HILLARYOUS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Mars, I need an ice cream.I feel so hot! Venus
  July 8th, 2016 09:00
• ROBOT-2 (Berthold Lippel) Berty, How HOT is in Tuscon? Here is the deal: Either you sing "I would...
  July 8th, 2016 08:55
• ROBOT-2 (Berthold Lippel) Berty, How HOT is in Tuscon? Here is the deal: Either you sing "I would...
  July 8th, 2016 08:55
• ROBOT-2 (Berthold Lippel) Berty, How HOT is in Tuscon? Here is the deal: Either you sing "I would...
  July 8th, 2016 08:55
• To the girl a met on Friday night (Kyro) I am the Saturday Night Fever Girl So I can't take part... Good...
  July 7th, 2016 16:03
• Pure? (The 2 A.M Writer) No serious meaning?! This is Damn serious with or without the music...
  July 7th, 2016 15:55
• Tears by moonlight. (Camille) You nailed this warm beating tired heart... then you moved to the...
  July 7th, 2016 15:50
• When Waking Up Feels Meaningless (Survivor48) Allow yourself to get distracted when you go to bed...and at least then...
  July 7th, 2016 15:44
• Lone Souls IV (Inink) I need time to read the previous ones... Dry your INK and Wait!
  July 7th, 2016 07:56
• Man of the Earth (Tony36) Man of the Earth, I'm just a cosmic girl From another galaxy My heart's...
  July 7th, 2016 07:40
• Don\'t Laugh At Me (Tony36) I was trying yesterday for almost 10 minutes to pronounce "Herzlichen...
  July 7th, 2016 07:31
• \"Poncho\" (Willyweed) I send you Lana del Rey singing " Born to Die".... I envy you,SOMETIMES!
  July 7th, 2016 07:26
• The dawn (Daniel) The beauty of words,of language, Thanks Daniel.
  July 7th, 2016 07:24
• To… (written on a train to Nottingham) (AuburnScribbler) To Tony,To Las Palmas To Crete,To my Brother To M.Olympus,for a...
  July 5th, 2016 16:07
• Freedom\'s Fight (Tony36) God Bless you & Keep you Safe. Thank you,your poem has been very...
  July 5th, 2016 16:01
• Atom Smasher. (Trevsteiger) Smashing Hit! Write more....
  July 5th, 2016 07:02
• Challenging Decisions (Survivor48) Evidently, you have begun practising spiritual automatic wtiting or...
  July 4th, 2016 15:25
• Fake \"Love\" (Teenageheartbreak) Did you get her a box of mysterious chocolates? Teenager,it's a wild...
  July 4th, 2016 09:21
• Questioning the wreckage (The 2 A.M Writer) Your subjective sense matches my objective intuition. You use poetry to...
  July 4th, 2016 09:14
• DADDY (Nicole37) Father is not the one who creates you,but the one who raises you. Kids...
  July 3rd, 2016 03:38
• \'\'Sandusky nights ( a dreamland fairytale)\'\' (Willyweed) "Meet me in Sandusky and raise the periscope...." I can't make it to...
  July 3rd, 2016 02:08
• SPERM RACE (Berthold Lippel) Let it go, let it go...👣 Let it free your body... Let it move your...
  July 3rd, 2016 01:58
• Broken Trust (Teenageheartbreak) "Whoever is careless with the truth in small matters,cannot be trusted...
  July 1st, 2016 09:03
• \"The Poet and the King\" (Willyweed) "Well, when the poet did rise, the King was surprised, the most beautiful...
  July 1st, 2016 08:55
• What is broken? (Justme) So Happy BIrthday!💐 Best Wishes for Good Health,Happiness and...
  July 1st, 2016 08:50
• Always or Never? (Lk) "Have you ever done such a thing? Used such a word Then did away with it...
  June 30th, 2016 09:38
• Dawn Prayer (Dee) For many many years I go swimming at dawn. Just me ,the seagulls,a...
  June 30th, 2016 08:18
• The Unknown (Survivor48) "Live in the present mind frame" And...
  June 30th, 2016 08:09
• O\'Lord (John Lee) Every time you follow your instinct when it comes to writing, you gain...
  June 30th, 2016 08:02
• \"the puppet master\" (Willyweed) "Who's pulling the strings?" Unknown Forces are pulling the...
  June 29th, 2016 12:29
• I Do Wonder (Eeva) If you become a Mother, maybe you'd stop wondering... Your child would...
  June 29th, 2016 12:17
• STREAMS & WATERFALLS OF LIFE & LOVE (BRIAN & ANGELA) This is one of your best, still young and carefree Brian(33). My...
  June 29th, 2016 12:05
• Heaven Can Wait (Survivor48) Indeed Survivor, Heaven can wait for a long time.... We need you...
  June 29th, 2016 11:58
• dreaming (Samishere) Do what you can,with what you have,where you are (in your lonely...
  June 28th, 2016 17:18
• Land\'s End (Toomanypetals) Merci beaucoup pour Erik Satie. Je t'adore. A demain un poème pour toi ...
  June 28th, 2016 17:09
• \"The un-haunted house\" (Willyweed) Questions: 1.Do you have a wife? 2.Do you drink wine? Dedicated to...
  June 28th, 2016 11:56
• Alone (TheYoungPoet) Allow me to add another ending: Alone.It's dark at Home Alone,with the...
  June 28th, 2016 11:45
• Out of the fog. (Camille) What am I thinking now? That you are killing me...Slowly...with your...
  June 28th, 2016 11:26
• Writers Block (Sai) You know what happens to people who stay in the middle of the road? They...
  June 28th, 2016 08:16
• ENGLAND ~ LOST IN FRANCE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) C' est fini,mon ami....🙋😭😭😭 FINITO la musica, Passato la...
  June 28th, 2016 07:21
• Midnight Confessions (John Lee) My friend, I just finished my confession to Bert. But if we start writing...
  June 27th, 2016 15:29
• Selfishness (Lk) But in the end one needs more courage to live than to kill himself. So if...
  June 27th, 2016 08:13
• Broken doll. (Camille) Camille, You know I have faith in your talent and imagination. Be...
  June 27th, 2016 07:50
• LOVE ALPHBETICALLY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) So if you want to describe Love,you open up a DICTIONARY,Brian? Innocent...
  June 27th, 2016 07:42
• An Epistle to my Late Father (Nadair) Nicholas, I had an Irish boyfriend who looked so much like You? You...
  June 27th, 2016 07:38
• legends | sunshine (Char) A dark haired teenager called CHAR Dreams in a narrow concrete...
  June 27th, 2016 07:28
• A confirmation of sadness. (Amosj) "A helping hand would be nice with some of this pressure, full steam ahead...
  June 26th, 2016 16:52
• pronouns | they (Char) My 7 year old son convinced his best friend to steal his mum's golden...
  June 26th, 2016 15:24
• Seosamh (Headhunterv3) You are referring to Joseph Mary Plunkett,Irish Nationalist...
  June 26th, 2016 12:33
• The storm (Daniel) If you shut your door to errors (storms) If you shut your door to...
  June 26th, 2016 11:06
• VENGEANCE (Berthold Lippel) I appreciate your forgiveness. What do you think of compassion as an...
  June 26th, 2016 02:17
• Seventeen (John Lee) Wait. Is all this stuff you write autobiographical/confessional? If they...
  June 26th, 2016 02:11
• Destination nothingness (Camille) Just a tiny typo in "It's bars a prison "... I am intrigued by the...
  June 26th, 2016 02:04
• Wallow in Sorrow (HylianLoftwing) Mental Silence is worse than Death. Only a corpse does not feel...
  June 25th, 2016 13:16
• colours | white (Char) First of all you look more like a18 year old poet,but feedback should be...
  June 25th, 2016 13:07
• The Monster In My Closet (John Lee) No objections.It flows nicely... I yet need to check you out...
  June 25th, 2016 10:58
• The World Outside (Daniel) You missed a (?) right at the end. I followed your instructions and the...
  June 25th, 2016 10:48
• Wallow in Sorrow (HylianLoftwing) Instead of fading away,why don't you simply stay awake? And embrace the...
  June 25th, 2016 09:50
• Accepting Myself (Survivor48) Accept a mirror as a gift from me,my friend. Reflect the beauty and...
  June 25th, 2016 09:06
• PRAISE THE LORD ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) We praise the Lord on Sundays. On Saturdays we praise the Sea,the...
  June 25th, 2016 03:47