Comments received on poems by Brycycle



overwhelming.
L. B. Mek said:

this is an intriguing poem, makes your re-read it a few times to try and understand
a clear sign of good writing, thanks for sharing

April 12th, 2021 05:19

Spaces in Time
Goldfinch60 said:

Those stars above are so important to remind us of loved ones.

Andy

April 10th, 2021 00:12

Spaces in Time
L. B. Mek said:

beautiful, light in tone and subtle in imagery
a wonderful read..
thanks for sharing

April 9th, 2021 05:44

A Lesson of The Sun
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true words BRYCYCLE.

Andy

March 19th, 2021 01:33

dust
Doggerel Dave said:

Fantasy will become reality one day - there is nothing on this earth more certain.
In the meantime, what about a bit of living?

March 7th, 2021 00:40

tired.
L. B. Mek said:

a raw and vulnerable write,
I hope you find a sustainable source of solace, but the mere fact that you\'re writing and externalising your lament is a hopeful sign, sharing helps divide up our problems into more manageable bundles,
so keep doing what you\'re doing, get it out of your system, exhaust yourself completely - if need be,
then maybe you can rebuild, from the ground up and insure your new foundations are better prepared for the inevitable turmoil that life brings
thanks for sharing!

February 26th, 2021 06:00

tired.
Goldfinch60 said:

It is so true at th moment but the light is there and will be full upon us soon.
(Just look at the fill moon this morning to see the light).

Andy

February 26th, 2021 02:02

tired.
dusk arising said:

In empty days after empty days we can turn in on ourselves. It\'s pandemic.

February 26th, 2021 01:38

tired.
Olivia. said:

Hopefully something soon will lift your spirits. Your poem definitely lifted mine as I thought it was beautiful and very raw. X

February 25th, 2021 20:38

Away
Goldfinch60 said:

Don\'t we all.

Andy

February 24th, 2021 01:58

Moving On
dusk arising said:

Beautiful in it\'s honesty and simplicity. Explores the aching chasm in us when the magic of loves aura is gone away.

Into my favourites.

October 22nd, 2020 02:28

Moving On
Goldfinch60 said:

In life we always remember the good things even when we know we have to move on.

Andy

October 22nd, 2020 00:27

Moving On
BlueHeron77 said:

You linger around my heart... great line! Great that you can enjoy the good parts of what was.

October 21st, 2020 17:36

unreciprocated
Goldfinch60 said:

Emotive write but D a is right, if you can do nothing about it move on as that person who will be so special in you life is waiting for you.

Andy

August 25th, 2020 00:57

unreciprocated
dusk arising said:

That\'s a heartfelt piece if ever i read one. It\'s so good to be able to let your feelings flow and post on here.

Tell you what though, as an old geezer who\'s been around the block a few times i\'m going to hand you an ounce of advice. For all the time you spend thinking about the impossible you are missing the opportunities of the possibles all around you which your thoughts are blinding you to. It will continue like that for you so long as you mix with her. Do yourself a favour, walk away from dreams of the impossible and walk into reality where your REAL future awaits you. There\'s a right person out there for you but you\'ll never see them whilst you are dazzled by the impossible.

August 24th, 2020 09:55

Void
L. B. Mek said:

\'everything\'s going to be ok\'
because if you yourself can write it: then you yourself know it!
keep believing, keep writing: stay healing,
then hold out a helping hand to another drowning in the same pain you survived and find yourself: self-healing even faster

August 20th, 2020 04:48

Void
Goldfinch60 said:

You are filling that void with words and your words are showing us that you will come out of that void into the wonder of the world.

Andy

August 20th, 2020 00:06

i hope
Goldfinch60 said:

That love is within you, if others can see it you just need to look deeper within yourself and give yourself that hug.

Very good write.

Andy

February 15th, 2020 01:45

i hope
Unsub said:

Oh don\'t worry; someone here will soon tell you that Jesus loves you!

Don\'t listen though.

If your self-loathing creates such great poetry; keep on hating.

Unsub.

February 14th, 2020 06:08

Hope
Goldfinch60 said:

That hope is with us all - all WILL be well.

May 5th, 2019 00:51

Hope
Neville said:

Hang on to it at all costs.... nicely shared... Neville

May 4th, 2019 13:31

Nightfall
Goldfinch60 said:

God emotive write, the world will die unless those who have the power and money to heal it can see outside of their castles in the air.

May 3rd, 2019 00:55

A Timeless Room
Goldfinch60 said:

That time when you cannot sleep goes so slowly.

September 14th, 2018 01:03

A Timeless Room
Fay Slimm. said:

An ode to the feel of time when insomnia ticks vision away in the silence of night. Good read Bry. and thanks for the share of something to which I relate most nights.

September 13th, 2018 12:57

In All The Flowers Of Your Garden
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write Brycycle, beautiful.

September 12th, 2018 01:04

In All The Flowers Of Your Garden
Michael Edwards said:

Written with real feeling - she must be a lovely lady.

September 12th, 2018 00:23

Mind Water
WL Schuett said:

I like your title with all the water imagery it fits perfectly ... good poem

November 9th, 2017 20:06

Mind Water
Goldfinch60 said:

Those chances that you missed are all part of life\'s experience, it ensures that you will not miss them next time.
Good write.

November 9th, 2017 00:47

Mind Water
FredPeyer said:

Brycycle, maybe you could have called it \"Hopeful Wreckages\".
I do like the metaphors and the way you build up in the first line of a stanza, then take it away again.
Well written!

November 8th, 2017 22:22

A Leaf
MendedFences27 said:

A year in the life, from rebirth in Spring through to the ashes of dead winter. Watch the leaves progress through seasons, an interesting observation point. Some worthy phrasings; \"benevolent ashes, pushed around in disbelief, crisping leaf.\" Is it the time of year? Why are we declaring the season today? Loved your little journey through the annual turnings of the leaves. - Phil A.

November 7th, 2017 19:12

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