Comments received on poems by Brycycle
In All The Flowers Of Your Garden
Michael Edwards said:
Written with real feeling - she must be a lovely lady.
September 12th, 2018 00:23
Michael Edwards said:
Written with real feeling - she must be a lovely lady.
September 12th, 2018 00:23
Mind Water
WL Schuett said:
I like your title with all the water imagery it fits perfectly ... good poem
November 9th, 2017 20:06
WL Schuett said:
I like your title with all the water imagery it fits perfectly ... good poem
November 9th, 2017 20:06
Mind Water
Goldfinch60 said:
Those chances that you missed are all part of life\'s experience, it ensures that you will not miss them next time.
Good write.
November 9th, 2017 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Those chances that you missed are all part of life\'s experience, it ensures that you will not miss them next time.
Good write.
November 9th, 2017 00:47
Mind Water
FredPeyer said:
Brycycle, maybe you could have called it \"Hopeful Wreckages\".
I do like the metaphors and the way you build up in the first line of a stanza, then take it away again.
Well written!
November 8th, 2017 22:22
FredPeyer said:
Brycycle, maybe you could have called it \"Hopeful Wreckages\".
I do like the metaphors and the way you build up in the first line of a stanza, then take it away again.
Well written!
November 8th, 2017 22:22
A Leaf
MendedFences27 said:
A year in the life, from rebirth in Spring through to the ashes of dead winter. Watch the leaves progress through seasons, an interesting observation point. Some worthy phrasings; \"benevolent ashes, pushed around in disbelief, crisping leaf.\" Is it the time of year? Why are we declaring the season today? Loved your little journey through the annual turnings of the leaves. - Phil A.
November 7th, 2017 19:12
MendedFences27 said:
A year in the life, from rebirth in Spring through to the ashes of dead winter. Watch the leaves progress through seasons, an interesting observation point. Some worthy phrasings; \"benevolent ashes, pushed around in disbelief, crisping leaf.\" Is it the time of year? Why are we declaring the season today? Loved your little journey through the annual turnings of the leaves. - Phil A.
November 7th, 2017 19:12
Hex
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Thanks for the write Green Eyes! Being (or having one put on you) hexed is putting someone in a situation of dire straits! I enjoyed this read. Very Tantalizing!!!
October 1st, 2017 08:32
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Thanks for the write Green Eyes! Being (or having one put on you) hexed is putting someone in a situation of dire straits! I enjoyed this read. Very Tantalizing!!!
October 1st, 2017 08:32
Smudge
orchidee said:
Oh lo, dogs called Smudge too. Got a smudge of colour on its nose or something? Well, some of the cats with that name are brown tabby-type, with \'smudgy\' coat, lovely browns mixed together.
August 8th, 2017 12:32
orchidee said:
Oh lo, dogs called Smudge too. Got a smudge of colour on its nose or something? Well, some of the cats with that name are brown tabby-type, with \'smudgy\' coat, lovely browns mixed together.
August 8th, 2017 12:32
Smudge
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
The uniqueness of your writing intrigues me.. Beautiful words expressed so well.. Thank you for sharing this imagery into your Soul..
August 8th, 2017 11:57
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
The uniqueness of your writing intrigues me.. Beautiful words expressed so well.. Thank you for sharing this imagery into your Soul..
August 8th, 2017 11:57
Smudge
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful, sad poem, Brycycle. I love the line, \"mental plagued tears.\" Well done!
August 8th, 2017 09:01
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful, sad poem, Brycycle. I love the line, \"mental plagued tears.\" Well done!
August 8th, 2017 09:01
Smudge
orchidee said:
A fine write. An aside - why are about 99% (or approximately!) of cats around our ways named Smudge?! lol.
August 8th, 2017 08:45
orchidee said:
A fine write. An aside - why are about 99% (or approximately!) of cats around our ways named Smudge?! lol.
August 8th, 2017 08:45
The Glass Shadow
Michael Edwards said:
Never apologise for the short ones - sometimes I think the short ones are the best. Certainly mine get shorter by the day. This is a great poem B.
August 8th, 2017 04:04
Michael Edwards said:
Never apologise for the short ones - sometimes I think the short ones are the best. Certainly mine get shorter by the day. This is a great poem B.
August 8th, 2017 04:04
The Glass Shadow
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Wow..The Glass Shadow.. Puts you almost in another realm.. Nice write! Thanks so much for sharing!
August 7th, 2017 16:11
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Wow..The Glass Shadow.. Puts you almost in another realm.. Nice write! Thanks so much for sharing!
August 7th, 2017 16:11
The Glass Shadow
FredPeyer said:
Made me think. I like it a lot. Great writing Brycycle.
August 6th, 2017 18:20
FredPeyer said:
Made me think. I like it a lot. Great writing Brycycle.
August 6th, 2017 18:20
The Glass Shadow
Louis Gibbs said:
I really like the \"glass shadow\" metaphor, Brycycle. Well done poem!
August 6th, 2017 11:23
Louis Gibbs said:
I really like the \"glass shadow\" metaphor, Brycycle. Well done poem!
August 6th, 2017 11:23
Sound Of The Music
Accidental Poet said:
Would be a really boring existence without music. When the music stops, my world stops. Great writing here.
August 5th, 2017 19:03
Accidental Poet said:
Would be a really boring existence without music. When the music stops, my world stops. Great writing here.
August 5th, 2017 19:03
Nature
Accidental Poet said:
A little taste of what\'s to come in a few months for me. But Nature in whole is a playground for the adventurous. Which is why I like to go out with my Canon when time allows me. Wonderful write.
August 5th, 2017 18:58
Accidental Poet said:
A little taste of what\'s to come in a few months for me. But Nature in whole is a playground for the adventurous. Which is why I like to go out with my Canon when time allows me. Wonderful write.
August 5th, 2017 18:58
Sound Of The Music
Goldfinch60 said:
Music is a powerful force in my life. Good write.
April 22nd, 2017 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Music is a powerful force in my life. Good write.
April 22nd, 2017 00:37
Sound Of The Music
Warded Seabee said:
Nice rhythm. Nothing wrong with cheesy unless someone\'s lactose intolerant.. badum psht. I\'ll take my leave now.. Good write though
April 21st, 2017 13:09
Warded Seabee said:
Nice rhythm. Nothing wrong with cheesy unless someone\'s lactose intolerant.. badum psht. I\'ll take my leave now.. Good write though
April 21st, 2017 13:09
Your Words
hayles. said:
It\'s a great interpretation to how things happen, amazing!
April 19th, 2017 16:36
hayles. said:
It\'s a great interpretation to how things happen, amazing!
April 19th, 2017 16:36
Nature
Brycycle said:
Thank you guys for all your nice comments, it\'s really appreciated!
April 18th, 2017 03:03
Brycycle said:
Thank you guys for all your nice comments, it\'s really appreciated!
April 18th, 2017 03:03
Nature
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Nature has so many sides and always shows us its glory, if only people would look.
Welcome to MPS.
April 18th, 2017 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Nature has so many sides and always shows us its glory, if only people would look.
Welcome to MPS.
April 18th, 2017 01:13
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