Comments received on poems by NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel...



SOCIETY IS CRACKED
Kadijah Siddique said:

woah! I love this! Just... no words

September 21st, 2017 22:37

7th august 2017 !!!
Tris Eaton said:

I\'m so sorry that happened, this is a very good poem though

August 18th, 2017 20:57

I HATE YOU DAD!!
burning-embers said:

Strong stuff and good for you too! You are obviously worth better, much better. There\'s a blessing in this though - you haven\'t had to grow up with an ogre of a father ruining your every day. So hey-ho could have been worse. Smile and think about tomorrow. Good writing by the way. (afterthought, i left home age 15 because of misery, its told in some of my stuff published earlier this month, mssg me if you\'d like to know which pieces).

July 27th, 2017 06:19

I HATE YOU DAD!!
ShannonXx said:

Very emotional piece! But loved the way you expressed it

July 26th, 2017 15:23

I HATE YOU DAD!!
Bibbeck said:

Rachel, I so totally agree with Fred! Easy for me to say as I had my Dad. However, I still spent many years \'hating\' him because of his strictness and lacking show of love - because I loved him so much. They\'re too sides of the same coin. I carried the feeling with me for many years until I realised that I was holding myself back and was the only one destroying my life through bitterness. Be annoyed with him not being there, but look beyond that and how you\'ve got through and become such a wonderful and talented person without him. I believe that you are strong enough to let it go and make a great life for yourself.

July 26th, 2017 13:19

I HATE YOU DAD!!
FredPeyer said:

Rachel, as a dad I feel for you, feel your hurt and your anger. You write so well, the feelings practically leap off the page. From your writing I perceive you as a strong and smart woman. I know it sounds cliche, easy to say, maybe unnecessary, but sometimes there is nothing else we can do but to forgive, forget, and move on. Otherwise the hatred and hurt will destroy your own life. I do hope you will have good people come into your life to give you love and understanding.

July 26th, 2017 13:01

SOCIETY IS CRACKED
Saima said:

This society is fucked but one thing I learnt is to just be yourself

July 26th, 2017 12:28

I HATE YOU DAD!!
Saima said:

Well you seem like amazing person and a wonderful poet, he doesn\'t deserve to know you x

July 26th, 2017 12:27

I HATE YOU DAD!!
willyweed said:

well expressed but a sad situation

July 26th, 2017 11:23

THE EFFECT OF RAPE
AAA said:

wonderfully put, i am very sorry to hear that you went through that, as someone who is currently going through the grief of healing over my rape and attack i can tell you this: it\'s not your fault no matter what you think or people tell you and take it one day at a time, it will never leave you but it is not who you are, eventually you will not think about it everyday and you will be able to live not full of fear but of understanding that most people are good but some are evil... you will become very strong and if you ever need someone i am here

July 20th, 2017 18:31

THE TOUCH LIKE FIRE
Q said:

Remember it isn\'t your fault. The sickness within this world is the fault of those that flame it.

July 18th, 2017 20:57

THE EFFECT OF RAPE
Q said:

So sorry for such a horrible experience to have happened. Your poem is well written. I hope the scars can fade.

July 18th, 2017 20:54

hear me please
kevin browne said:

hey, where did this poet come from. how I have missed you before I\'m not too sure. none-the-less, this stunning little piece needs to be taken note of also, for I perceive the horizon to be brighter than it normally is if you\'re about. good on you girl.

July 18th, 2017 18:30

hear me please
Poetic Dan said:

Tell it for all to hear, if not just for yourself as it\'s the one you should love first.

Great write

July 18th, 2017 17:23

WHAT I SAW
burning-embers said:

What a magical poet you are. This really is a work of art. I wish i could paint like this. +fav\'s

July 17th, 2017 11:59

FREAK
burning-embers said:

I love it, full of fire and fight. \" i may be tall i may be thick, but you sir are a fucking dick\" deserves a prize on its own. Well said to all of it.

July 12th, 2017 04:10

THE EFFECT OF RAPE
Louis Gibbs said:

Women have been victimized in this insidious manner throughout history, which makes me admire them all the more for choosing that role. You all have my utmost admiration! Good poem, Rachel.

July 1st, 2017 22:48

THE EFFECT OF RAPE
Heather T said:

Oh little love, I am so sorry. It\'s not beyond healing, even though it steals so much. You are fearfully and wonderfully made, look at how brave you are, to not only write about this but post it here!

July 1st, 2017 19:49

THE EFFECT OF RAPE
kevin browne said:

you sound such a beautiful poet, just such a shame what the contents are. this intoxicated me with your grief. our thoughts are with you all the way through x

July 1st, 2017 19:47

THE TOUCH LIKE FIRE
NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel... said:

thankyou i just wished my experiences had been easier

June 24th, 2017 11:08

THE TOUCH LIKE FIRE
P.H.Rose said:

Brilliant, love this poem
Just reads so very well
Well done lady.
Believe me you are
Needed......

June 23rd, 2017 17:47

THE TOUCH LIKE FIRE
ron parrish aka wordman said:

funny how love can bring such pain
a distant love,or maybe one close


June 23rd, 2017 16:09

THE TOUCH LIKE FIRE
Poetic Dan said:

Beautifully sad, when I write like this
I try to get comfort knowing every tear is unique. Then a line from a song, \"they are the water to clear the window of the soul.\"

Thank you for sharing your heart

June 23rd, 2017 14:03

I WILL ALWAYS BE A VICTIM
swingline said:

He took your flower but the garden will grow back . Listen to Heather Nova\'s cd called \"Oyster\" . It will give you peace .

June 12th, 2017 02:23

I WILL ALWAYS BE A VICTIM
HeartfullyFallen said:

Holy... this. This is so powerful, even though I don\'t know you I\'m proud of you. For making it this far, for sharing, for living. I\'m proud of you, great job, keep it up

June 11th, 2017 20:20

I WILL ALWAYS BE A VICTIM
juliathequeen16 said:

This made me cry and it hit my soul.

June 11th, 2017 20:13

I WILL ALWAYS BE A VICTIM
The Invisible said:

That is very powerful and horrible. The fact you are willing to share that with everyone takes a person with strength and courage. He took something that you can\'t ever get back but don\'t dwell on that. Learn from this learn the things he did that made him do this awful thing, and see it in other guys and steer clear of them. He took your virginity don\'t let him take your ability to love. Great job.

June 11th, 2017 18:51

SOCIETY IS CRACKED
swingline said:

Great words to live by . You can\'t control others but you can be an example .

June 10th, 2017 22:39

SOCIETY IS CRACKED
Louis Gibbs said:

Strong, well written poem, Rachel. You did yourself proud!

June 10th, 2017 19:12

SOMETHING HAPPENED TODAY
swingline said:

Sounds like you are unable to cope emotionally with people you do not know or can trust . In fact you probably can\'t trust anyone at this point . But holding in all your fears will destroy you just as fast as the assault did .

June 8th, 2017 17:32

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