Comments received on poems by NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel...
SOMETHING HAPPENED TODAY
swingline said:
Sounds like you are unable to cope emotionally with people you do not know or can trust . In fact you probably can\'t trust anyone at this point . But holding in all your fears will destroy you just as fast as the assault did .
June 8th, 2017 17:32
swingline said:
Sounds like you are unable to cope emotionally with people you do not know or can trust . In fact you probably can\'t trust anyone at this point . But holding in all your fears will destroy you just as fast as the assault did .
June 8th, 2017 17:32
full of shame
swingline said:
Awful tragedy for you to bear . They should be stoned to death then shot and left on their parents doorstep . You will have to rebuild your life making what is wrong into what is right .
June 7th, 2017 18:46
swingline said:
Awful tragedy for you to bear . They should be stoned to death then shot and left on their parents doorstep . You will have to rebuild your life making what is wrong into what is right .
June 7th, 2017 18:46
WEHN IS IT GOING TO STOP?
Hopey_xx said:
I love this. I found it on another website a while ago by someone called Kaylynn though. :)
June 6th, 2017 12:27
Hopey_xx said:
I love this. I found it on another website a while ago by someone called Kaylynn though. :)
June 6th, 2017 12:27
PRICE BEEN PAID
The Invisible said:
I love how descriptive you are. Really helps give a visual in the mind.
June 4th, 2017 19:52
The Invisible said:
I love how descriptive you are. Really helps give a visual in the mind.
June 4th, 2017 19:52
PRICE BEEN PAID
Ethan said:
This is very powerful. I absolutely love, and I can\'t stress this enough, the way you use positive adjectives to describe negative emotions and physical states. Very well done.
June 4th, 2017 15:31
Ethan said:
This is very powerful. I absolutely love, and I can\'t stress this enough, the way you use positive adjectives to describe negative emotions and physical states. Very well done.
June 4th, 2017 15:31
whats depression you ask?
The Invisible said:
Very great word choice and honestly I\'m happy someone actually actual define depression and not as just \"sad for a long time\" so thank you. Good work.
June 2nd, 2017 16:57
The Invisible said:
Very great word choice and honestly I\'m happy someone actually actual define depression and not as just \"sad for a long time\" so thank you. Good work.
June 2nd, 2017 16:57
whats depression you ask?
Louis Gibbs said:
Well structured poem, Rachel! I especially like the last line. Clever.
May 30th, 2017 22:12
Louis Gibbs said:
Well structured poem, Rachel! I especially like the last line. Clever.
May 30th, 2017 22:12
whats depression you ask?
J.D. Treick said:
Knowing and battling depression myself, I can really relate to this. Thank you for the eloquence!
May 30th, 2017 19:18
J.D. Treick said:
Knowing and battling depression myself, I can really relate to this. Thank you for the eloquence!
May 30th, 2017 19:18
depression enclosing
Rajkumar said:
You have expressed the feelings in words nicely
May 28th, 2017 01:53
Rajkumar said:
You have expressed the feelings in words nicely
May 28th, 2017 01:53
goodbye
swingline said:
Don\'t look back at what you lost but forward to being reunited again in a better place .
May 25th, 2017 11:08
swingline said:
Don\'t look back at what you lost but forward to being reunited again in a better place .
May 25th, 2017 11:08
goodbye
alanis98 said:
I\'m so sorry for your loss I lost my great-grandfather a year ago now to cancer so I know how it feels to lose a relative. Just know that with time it does get easier. X
May 25th, 2017 10:39
alanis98 said:
I\'m so sorry for your loss I lost my great-grandfather a year ago now to cancer so I know how it feels to lose a relative. Just know that with time it does get easier. X
May 25th, 2017 10:39
WHAT IF I TOLD YOU?
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
i can relate to this so much i have felt this feeling so many times
May 19th, 2017 10:31
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
i can relate to this so much i have felt this feeling so many times
May 19th, 2017 10:31
tear drops
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL RACHEL ~ Thanks for caring and sharing ! In my experience it is only when our teardrops mingle that we know we are truly LOVED ! You really are too precious to cry ~ alone ! Yours BRIAN Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
May 19th, 2017 08:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL RACHEL ~ Thanks for caring and sharing ! In my experience it is only when our teardrops mingle that we know we are truly LOVED ! You really are too precious to cry ~ alone ! Yours BRIAN Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
May 19th, 2017 08:59
who do they want you to be?
LML said:
😠I love this. I\'ve felt this. Good job
May 16th, 2017 17:55
LML said:
😠I love this. I\'ve felt this. Good job
May 16th, 2017 17:55
GROW TREES NOT ARMIES
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, friends are so important in our lives.
May 15th, 2017 08:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, friends are so important in our lives.
May 15th, 2017 08:01
GROW TREES NOT ARMIES
Fay Slimm. said:
Such good advice in this well written lines Rachel - making peace with applying love is the only way.
May 15th, 2017 05:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Such good advice in this well written lines Rachel - making peace with applying love is the only way.
May 15th, 2017 05:33
this world
swingline said:
It seems nowadays abusive narcissistic liars grow up to be abusive narcissistic lying presidents .
May 13th, 2017 17:44
swingline said:
It seems nowadays abusive narcissistic liars grow up to be abusive narcissistic lying presidents .
May 13th, 2017 17:44
this world
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GREETINGS WELCOME ~ Thanks for the poem which rings a bell with me a few years ago when i was TEEN things are not much worse now than they were ten years ago ! The only difference now is ~ In the UK they are blaming the GIRLS for rape because they wear short skirts and use too much make~up and drink too much ! To me that is shocking especially Men who take advantage of Girls whose drinks they have spiked. They deserve castration ! My MOM taught me to respect LADIES and I always have and always will ~ You are all so lovely and fragrant and beautiful (and that\'s just my MOM ! ) I work in a College and most of my Female Students are over 18 and we do teach them self protection and self respect ! You are wonderful ~ Smart & Pretty and years away from your last breath ~ and I am praying you will have lots of self esteem and know just how valuable you are to your Family and your God. Every Blessing & Hugs BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
May 13th, 2017 17:08
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GREETINGS WELCOME ~ Thanks for the poem which rings a bell with me a few years ago when i was TEEN things are not much worse now than they were ten years ago ! The only difference now is ~ In the UK they are blaming the GIRLS for rape because they wear short skirts and use too much make~up and drink too much ! To me that is shocking especially Men who take advantage of Girls whose drinks they have spiked. They deserve castration ! My MOM taught me to respect LADIES and I always have and always will ~ You are all so lovely and fragrant and beautiful (and that\'s just my MOM ! ) I work in a College and most of my Female Students are over 18 and we do teach them self protection and self respect ! You are wonderful ~ Smart & Pretty and years away from your last breath ~ and I am praying you will have lots of self esteem and know just how valuable you are to your Family and your God. Every Blessing & Hugs BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
May 13th, 2017 17:08
WHAT IF I TOLD YOU?
NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel... said:
\"dont touch the butt\" is a code for \"dont touch the blade\" me nd my best friend made it up
May 11th, 2017 14:06
NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel... said:
\"dont touch the butt\" is a code for \"dont touch the blade\" me nd my best friend made it up
May 11th, 2017 14:06
WHAT IF I TOLD YOU?
SorrowfullyHappy said:
i can relate i could lie and say things get easier or i could tell you the truth that someday you will find something or someone worth living for
May 11th, 2017 12:40
SorrowfullyHappy said:
i can relate i could lie and say things get easier or i could tell you the truth that someday you will find something or someone worth living for
May 11th, 2017 12:40
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