Comments received on poems by swingline
The Old Home
Michael Edwards said:
This really set the imagination working - another great write s.
June 1st, 2017 06:29
Michael Edwards said:
This really set the imagination working - another great write s.
June 1st, 2017 06:29
I Pick Dandelions
orchidee said:
A fine write S. Our guinea pigs, similar to those in my pic, get our dandelion leaves. We have 4 of them! Ahhh!
May 31st, 2017 01:52
orchidee said:
A fine write S. Our guinea pigs, similar to those in my pic, get our dandelion leaves. We have 4 of them! Ahhh!
May 31st, 2017 01:52
I Pick Dandelions
Michael Edwards said:
This is a delightful poem s - simple, unpretentious yet so beautiful - \'I wrap the cloth of your smile\' - lovely line - your work is so good.
May 31st, 2017 00:53
Michael Edwards said:
This is a delightful poem s - simple, unpretentious yet so beautiful - \'I wrap the cloth of your smile\' - lovely line - your work is so good.
May 31st, 2017 00:53
Colors !
Michael Edwards said:
You\'re a colourful character S - and a good write to go with it.
May 30th, 2017 11:54
Michael Edwards said:
You\'re a colourful character S - and a good write to go with it.
May 30th, 2017 11:54
Colors !
Augustus said:
Delightful except for the blue truck. White, beige, or red. Heh, heh.
May 30th, 2017 10:50
Augustus said:
Delightful except for the blue truck. White, beige, or red. Heh, heh.
May 30th, 2017 10:50
Colors !
Louis Gibbs said:
Yours is certainly a colorful world, swingline. Enjoyed this poem.
May 30th, 2017 09:30
Louis Gibbs said:
Yours is certainly a colorful world, swingline. Enjoyed this poem.
May 30th, 2017 09:30
Colors !
Goldfinch60 said:
My wine I like red,
And fresh white bread.
Through clear eyes I see,
All the colours run free.
Good colourful write.
May 30th, 2017 04:06
Goldfinch60 said:
My wine I like red,
And fresh white bread.
Through clear eyes I see,
All the colours run free.
Good colourful write.
May 30th, 2017 04:06
Joy of Desolation
Augustus said:
Line em up bartender, I have a lot of hurt. Kudos.
May 29th, 2017 19:43
Augustus said:
Line em up bartender, I have a lot of hurt. Kudos.
May 29th, 2017 19:43
Joy of Desolation
swingline said:
Great wisdom Michael , thank you for reading .
May 29th, 2017 08:25
swingline said:
Great wisdom Michael , thank you for reading .
May 29th, 2017 08:25
Joy of Desolation
Michael Edwards said:
You can buy many things but not the things that matter - great write.
May 29th, 2017 08:21
Michael Edwards said:
You can buy many things but not the things that matter - great write.
May 29th, 2017 08:21
Fear of God
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write but we know HE WILL return and all will be well.
May 29th, 2017 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write but we know HE WILL return and all will be well.
May 29th, 2017 00:42
Fear of God
Louis Gibbs said:
Enjoyed your four line poem very much, Swingline. A few well chosen words can speak volumes, can\'t they.
May 28th, 2017 10:49
Louis Gibbs said:
Enjoyed your four line poem very much, Swingline. A few well chosen words can speak volumes, can\'t they.
May 28th, 2017 10:49
Fear of God
Augustus said:
Oh, how I dread that, my sins revealed. Great message.
May 28th, 2017 08:58
Augustus said:
Oh, how I dread that, my sins revealed. Great message.
May 28th, 2017 08:58
Fear of God
kevin browne said:
Jesus on the crucifix is now a part of me with a tattoo on my arm to keep me safe. few words sparks a lot of thought. well done x
May 28th, 2017 08:38
kevin browne said:
Jesus on the crucifix is now a part of me with a tattoo on my arm to keep me safe. few words sparks a lot of thought. well done x
May 28th, 2017 08:38
Fear of God
orchidee said:
See my \'Faith Flowings\' poem if you wish, Swingline. Not to draw attention to my own poems, but it\'s related to the theme here.
I always see \'the fear of God\' as meaning \'reverence and awe\' of Him, not a \'terror\' fear.
We should be sorry for our sins. Yet Jesus has come to bring forgiveness to us. We have to ask for it though, as you probably know.
I doubt He will shake His head at you, because He sees you (and all other true believers) as forgiven in Him. There\'s no \'hellfire and brimstone\' stuff for us now, thankfully!
May 28th, 2017 08:06
orchidee said:
See my \'Faith Flowings\' poem if you wish, Swingline. Not to draw attention to my own poems, but it\'s related to the theme here.
I always see \'the fear of God\' as meaning \'reverence and awe\' of Him, not a \'terror\' fear.
We should be sorry for our sins. Yet Jesus has come to bring forgiveness to us. We have to ask for it though, as you probably know.
I doubt He will shake His head at you, because He sees you (and all other true believers) as forgiven in Him. There\'s no \'hellfire and brimstone\' stuff for us now, thankfully!
May 28th, 2017 08:06
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