Comments received on poems by swingline
Dead Poets
Augustus said:
I turned the page and found a picture of my x wife. Heh heh.nicely done.
June 4th, 2017 13:28
Augustus said:
I turned the page and found a picture of my x wife. Heh heh.nicely done.
June 4th, 2017 13:28
Dead Poets
Michael Edwards said:
Ah I love this - all the more reason to keep writing.
In fact it\'s just gone into my favourites.
June 4th, 2017 10:06
Michael Edwards said:
Ah I love this - all the more reason to keep writing.
In fact it\'s just gone into my favourites.
June 4th, 2017 10:06
Dead Poets
orchidee said:
Yep, there they are - same (old?) poets - whether for good, or for \'bad\', waffling on, talking rubbish, etc! Oops I don\'t mean anyone on on here!
June 4th, 2017 09:20
orchidee said:
Yep, there they are - same (old?) poets - whether for good, or for \'bad\', waffling on, talking rubbish, etc! Oops I don\'t mean anyone on on here!
June 4th, 2017 09:20
Dead Poets
kevin browne said:
and the pages will keep turning as poetry keeps our passions for it alive. good work swingline.
June 4th, 2017 08:01
kevin browne said:
and the pages will keep turning as poetry keeps our passions for it alive. good work swingline.
June 4th, 2017 08:01
Dead Poets
swingline said:
Ha ha , good morning Outback ! I hope you live a long long time too . And on that I turn the page .
June 4th, 2017 07:29
swingline said:
Ha ha , good morning Outback ! I hope you live a long long time too . And on that I turn the page .
June 4th, 2017 07:29
3:10 A M
Augustus said:
Oh, a fried balonney sandwich, heaven. Some times we need to be alone. Kudos.
June 3rd, 2017 09:38
Augustus said:
Oh, a fried balonney sandwich, heaven. Some times we need to be alone. Kudos.
June 3rd, 2017 09:38
3:10 A M
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write, sitting in the dark and silence can be so rewarding in your Spirit.
June 3rd, 2017 04:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write, sitting in the dark and silence can be so rewarding in your Spirit.
June 3rd, 2017 04:16
3:10 A M
swingline said:
Yes sometimes poets can get a little full of themselves and so much is nothing more than a load of baloney . Thank you as always Michael .
June 3rd, 2017 01:05
swingline said:
Yes sometimes poets can get a little full of themselves and so much is nothing more than a load of baloney . Thank you as always Michael .
June 3rd, 2017 01:05
The Old Home
thehippiepoet said:
Great atmosphere, I enjoy how you described the house almost as a living thing itself
June 2nd, 2017 13:35
thehippiepoet said:
Great atmosphere, I enjoy how you described the house almost as a living thing itself
June 2nd, 2017 13:35
Thirty Years Later
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautiful, heart-rendering poem, swingline! I can relate to the experience of it taking a new love to bring one out of the despair of losing a loved one.
Isn\'t it interesting how Kathy was able to view the scene you portray from the point of view of the lady waiting in the car? She is special, is she not?
June 2nd, 2017 09:43
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautiful, heart-rendering poem, swingline! I can relate to the experience of it taking a new love to bring one out of the despair of losing a loved one.
Isn\'t it interesting how Kathy was able to view the scene you portray from the point of view of the lady waiting in the car? She is special, is she not?
June 2nd, 2017 09:43
Thirty Years Later
Augustus said:
Sorry you had this kind of loss early in you life. Must have devastating. Also sounds like you landed on your feet. To the reader seems you are at grave side. I don\'t hear any anger in your words, only love and understanding. Kudos.
June 2nd, 2017 06:44
Augustus said:
Sorry you had this kind of loss early in you life. Must have devastating. Also sounds like you landed on your feet. To the reader seems you are at grave side. I don\'t hear any anger in your words, only love and understanding. Kudos.
June 2nd, 2017 06:44
Thirty Years Later
P.H.Rose said:
This is my favourite
Favourite poem
So far...
Absolutely love it.
Sad but so very
Beautiful.......
June 2nd, 2017 03:25
P.H.Rose said:
This is my favourite
Favourite poem
So far...
Absolutely love it.
Sad but so very
Beautiful.......
June 2nd, 2017 03:25
Thirty Years Later
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and very emotive write, made me feel emotional.
June 2nd, 2017 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and very emotive write, made me feel emotional.
June 2nd, 2017 02:04
Thirty Years Later
Michael Edwards said:
Beautiful write - really had me feeling emotionally about your position. Love it.
June 2nd, 2017 01:21
Michael Edwards said:
Beautiful write - really had me feeling emotionally about your position. Love it.
June 2nd, 2017 01:21
The Old Home
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, it was as though I was in the house with you.
June 2nd, 2017 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, it was as though I was in the house with you.
June 2nd, 2017 00:22
The Old Home
orchidee said:
A fine write Swing. You reviving there now?! heehee.
June 1st, 2017 13:01
orchidee said:
A fine write Swing. You reviving there now?! heehee.
June 1st, 2017 13:01
The Old Home
swingline said:
Thank you Agustus for reading and wonderful comment .
June 1st, 2017 12:37
swingline said:
Thank you Agustus for reading and wonderful comment .
June 1st, 2017 12:37
The Old Home
Augustus said:
Could be a metaphor for,our aging bodies so full of fun in earlier years, now rusting and creaking. Created a visual. Love \"the moment stands silent\"
June 1st, 2017 12:20
Augustus said:
Could be a metaphor for,our aging bodies so full of fun in earlier years, now rusting and creaking. Created a visual. Love \"the moment stands silent\"
June 1st, 2017 12:20
The Old Home
Rajkumar said:
I stand in silence for the moment and the moment stands silent for me....such an beautiful line...You are an wonderful writer line
June 1st, 2017 12:15
Rajkumar said:
I stand in silence for the moment and the moment stands silent for me....such an beautiful line...You are an wonderful writer line
June 1st, 2017 12:15
The Old Home
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautifully portrayed, swingline! I felt like I was in that house with you. Great last line, the grave yard analogy.
June 1st, 2017 09:52
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautifully portrayed, swingline! I felt like I was in that house with you. Great last line, the grave yard analogy.
June 1st, 2017 09:52
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