Comments received on poems by swingline
Minotaur
Goldfinch60 said:
There are always ways out of the maze, we just need to be patient in finding them. Good write.
May 11th, 2017 07:53
Goldfinch60 said:
There are always ways out of the maze, we just need to be patient in finding them. Good write.
May 11th, 2017 07:53
Oh My Captain
Goldfinch60 said:
Find those new harbours as you travel on. Good write.
May 11th, 2017 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Find those new harbours as you travel on. Good write.
May 11th, 2017 00:53
King Arthur Dreams
swingline said:
Thank you Ephraim your probably right .
I am unhappy with the way the poem ended . Too cumbersome , with the flow broken .
May 9th, 2017 16:43
swingline said:
Thank you Ephraim your probably right .
I am unhappy with the way the poem ended . Too cumbersome , with the flow broken .
May 9th, 2017 16:43
Talking Owls of Evermore
swingline said:
Thank you so much Brian for such radiant words . I\'m posting one about King Arthur tomorrow .
May 8th, 2017 08:41
swingline said:
Thank you so much Brian for such radiant words . I\'m posting one about King Arthur tomorrow .
May 8th, 2017 08:41
Talking Owls of Evermore
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A great FANTASY POEM FRIEND ~ OWLS are so so important in folklore ! The owls in you poem are showing a much greater empathy and respect for the \"self sacrificed whore\" than SOCIETY (of which we are all part) or we ever would ~ to me this is the morale of this sad and yet uplifting ode ! MPS needs a shot of FANTASY ~ now and then ~ to keep our \"Head in the Clouds !\" and our \"Hearts in Evermore !\" Yours BRIAN
May 8th, 2017 08:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A great FANTASY POEM FRIEND ~ OWLS are so so important in folklore ! The owls in you poem are showing a much greater empathy and respect for the \"self sacrificed whore\" than SOCIETY (of which we are all part) or we ever would ~ to me this is the morale of this sad and yet uplifting ode ! MPS needs a shot of FANTASY ~ now and then ~ to keep our \"Head in the Clouds !\" and our \"Hearts in Evermore !\" Yours BRIAN
May 8th, 2017 08:38
Talking Owls of Evermore
Goldfinch60 said:
Evermore is there for all of us. Good write.
May 8th, 2017 07:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Evermore is there for all of us. Good write.
May 8th, 2017 07:53
Blossoms
Michael Edwards said:
Great message well expressed.
He’s a rose between thorns or so he supposes
but to all his friends he’s a prick between roses. :)
May 7th, 2017 06:20
Michael Edwards said:
Great message well expressed.
He’s a rose between thorns or so he supposes
but to all his friends he’s a prick between roses. :)
May 7th, 2017 06:20
Once Upon My Midnight\'s Madness
MendedFences27 said:
Somehow reminded me of 9-11. What with all the jumping and fire. Horrible scene nonetheless. Well depicted, and formatted, rhyming and such. Like it, but the subject scares the hell out of me. - Phil A.
May 6th, 2017 20:45
MendedFences27 said:
Somehow reminded me of 9-11. What with all the jumping and fire. Horrible scene nonetheless. Well depicted, and formatted, rhyming and such. Like it, but the subject scares the hell out of me. - Phil A.
May 6th, 2017 20:45
Definition of Optimist
swingline said:
My someone is feeling froggy this morning , ha ha . Touché ! Thank you for your leg up , hopping on comment , Ephraim Crud .
May 5th, 2017 06:52
swingline said:
My someone is feeling froggy this morning , ha ha . Touché ! Thank you for your leg up , hopping on comment , Ephraim Crud .
May 5th, 2017 06:52
Storms , Sailboats and God at Sea
swingline said:
\"Oh Well\" , song by Fleetwood Mac . Goes something like this . \"I can\'t help about the shape I\'m in . I can\'t sing I ain\'t pretty and my legs are thin . But don\'t ask me what I think of you . I might not give you the answer that you want me to .
Now when I talk to God you know he understands . He said stick by me and I\'ll be your guidin\' hand . But don\'t ask me what I think of you . I might not give the answer that you want me to .\"
May 4th, 2017 17:46
swingline said:
\"Oh Well\" , song by Fleetwood Mac . Goes something like this . \"I can\'t help about the shape I\'m in . I can\'t sing I ain\'t pretty and my legs are thin . But don\'t ask me what I think of you . I might not give you the answer that you want me to .
Now when I talk to God you know he understands . He said stick by me and I\'ll be your guidin\' hand . But don\'t ask me what I think of you . I might not give the answer that you want me to .\"
May 4th, 2017 17:46
Wee Willy
MendedFences27 said:
I\'m sure there\'s a joke here about frog\'s legs and long tongues, but let\'s not jump to any conclusions................
...........Ribbit, over.............
May 4th, 2017 17:26
MendedFences27 said:
I\'m sure there\'s a joke here about frog\'s legs and long tongues, but let\'s not jump to any conclusions................
...........Ribbit, over.............
May 4th, 2017 17:26
Wee Willy
swingline said:
I was hoping for funny but I will take very good anyday . Thank you Gary .
May 4th, 2017 08:28
swingline said:
I was hoping for funny but I will take very good anyday . Thank you Gary .
May 4th, 2017 08:28
Wee Willy
swingline said:
Left or right or down the middle. Thank you Goldfinch 60 for reading .
May 4th, 2017 08:04
swingline said:
Left or right or down the middle. Thank you Goldfinch 60 for reading .
May 4th, 2017 08:04
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