Comments received on poems by swingline



Withering Lows
orchidee said:

A fine write S.

May 18th, 2017 01:41

Withering Lows
Goldfinch60 said:

Good emotive write.

May 18th, 2017 01:32

Withering Lows
Michael Edwards said:

Ah sad - god write S

May 18th, 2017 01:26

Waves
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

May 18th, 2017 00:52

Waves
swingline said:

Thank you Michael Edwards .

May 17th, 2017 21:07

Waves
Michael Edwards said:

Great write full of imagery.

May 17th, 2017 21:03

Jimena and El Cid
swingline said:

Thank you WriteBeLight for reading .

May 17th, 2017 11:58

Jimena and El Cid
WriteBeLight said:

Very nicely done!

May 17th, 2017 11:55

Waves
swingline said:

Squawk ! Watch it Cabin boy ! Squawk !

May 17th, 2017 11:08

Waves
swingline said:

Thank you for reading Orchidee .

May 17th, 2017 09:13

Waves
orchidee said:

Good write S.

May 17th, 2017 08:33

Jimena and El Cid
swingline said:

Thank you Michael Edwards for reading it twice and for your comment .

May 16th, 2017 10:40

Jimena and El Cid
Michael Edwards said:

Read it through twice - great read S

May 16th, 2017 10:32

Jimena and El Cid
swingline said:

Thank you for reading Goldfinch60 .

May 16th, 2017 09:23

Jimena and El Cid
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, I enjoyed the film back in the day.

May 16th, 2017 08:02

The Garden
swingline said:

Thank you WriteBeLight for reading and leaving a comment .

May 15th, 2017 13:37

The Garden
WriteBeLight said:

Excellent poetry swingline! Great story as well.

May 15th, 2017 13:27

Body Language
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write and very understandable with some women.

May 15th, 2017 01:30

Body Language
swingline said:

Ha ha , thank you so much Michael Edwards for a great comment .

May 14th, 2017 14:17

Body Language
Michael Edwards said:

Thought it was great until I got to the last two lines then I thought...brilliant.

May 14th, 2017 13:54

Body Language
swingline said:

Ha Ha , Glad you liked it orchidee . Thank you for reading

May 14th, 2017 11:55

Body Language
orchidee said:

The BL bring on a swoon in me - in me sheltered life! heehee.

May 14th, 2017 10:44

Body Language
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks FRIEND ~ All Jocks can relate to this ! The problem is some Young Ladies don\'t just how loud the BL is shouting ~ others however dress and use cosmetics to deafen us ! Thank Heaven for SUMMER ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN. Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.

May 14th, 2017 09:17

My World
WriteBeLight said:

A great proclamation swingline!

May 14th, 2017 06:32

My World
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, as has been said \'my world is liquid\' resounds.

May 14th, 2017 00:34

My World
Garry said:

Great flow and rhythm. Good stuff.

May 13th, 2017 13:39

My World
Michael Edwards said:

Wish I\'d written this - a great write and a great read.

May 13th, 2017 12:03

My World
orchidee said:

A fine write S.

May 13th, 2017 11:34

Talking Owls of Evermore
swingline said:

Analogy ? Who are the beasts , who are the civilized ? I will say nevermore ! Thank you Diamond for reading .

May 11th, 2017 17:13

Minotaur
swingline said:

Thank you GoldFinch60 for reading and taking the time to comment .

May 11th, 2017 07:55

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