Comments received on poems by swingline
What Makes A Poet
Goldfinch60 said:
A super write, like Michael my time for writing is normally in the mornings but sometimes I see situations that give me an idea and end up writing at other times.
June 9th, 2017 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
A super write, like Michael my time for writing is normally in the mornings but sometimes I see situations that give me an idea and end up writing at other times.
June 9th, 2017 01:44
What Makes A Poet
Michael Edwards said:
And a poet\'s pen - My best work is done first thing before my wife wakes - it\'s now nearly 7am (I have been up since 5) and even though I have been transfixed by the UK election results I have still spent an hour writing another poem which is now in my draft box awaiting several reviews over the next few days before I am happy with it.
June 9th, 2017 00:53
Michael Edwards said:
And a poet\'s pen - My best work is done first thing before my wife wakes - it\'s now nearly 7am (I have been up since 5) and even though I have been transfixed by the UK election results I have still spent an hour writing another poem which is now in my draft box awaiting several reviews over the next few days before I am happy with it.
June 9th, 2017 00:53
A Bird without A Nest
Michael Edwards said:
Serious message with a twinkle - nice one s.
June 8th, 2017 02:13
Michael Edwards said:
Serious message with a twinkle - nice one s.
June 8th, 2017 02:13
A Bird without A Nest
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, fun last line after a very emotive write.
June 8th, 2017 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, fun last line after a very emotive write.
June 8th, 2017 01:30
Crescent Moon Memorial Buried Blues Band
swingline said:
Ha ha , yes I can see that . That would be great . Thank you James Michael Schawb for reading .
June 7th, 2017 14:59
swingline said:
Ha ha , yes I can see that . That would be great . Thank you James Michael Schawb for reading .
June 7th, 2017 14:59
Crescent Moon Memorial Buried Blues Band
Augustus said:
Could not help but think of the crescent city New Orleans on the river. Close to the French quarter where often there are jazz funerals. Great story and visual.
June 7th, 2017 14:48
Augustus said:
Could not help but think of the crescent city New Orleans on the river. Close to the French quarter where often there are jazz funerals. Great story and visual.
June 7th, 2017 14:48
Crescent Moon Memorial Buried Blues Band
swingline said:
Ha ha , thank you Michael for reading .
June 7th, 2017 10:24
swingline said:
Ha ha , thank you Michael for reading .
June 7th, 2017 10:24
Crescent Moon Memorial Buried Blues Band
Michael Edwards said:
Started to read this and got really drawn in - great writing and it\'s the sort of place I\'d like my ashes to be spread.
June 7th, 2017 10:21
Michael Edwards said:
Started to read this and got really drawn in - great writing and it\'s the sort of place I\'d like my ashes to be spread.
June 7th, 2017 10:21
Crescent Moon Memorial Buried Blues Band
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a wonderful write. We could do a concert me with my All Dead Stars Jazz Band and you withthe Crescent Moon Memorial Buried Blues Band, we will only then need a Country Band lead by the Man in Black and we can have a roaring time.
June 7th, 2017 03:02
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a wonderful write. We could do a concert me with my All Dead Stars Jazz Band and you withthe Crescent Moon Memorial Buried Blues Band, we will only then need a Country Band lead by the Man in Black and we can have a roaring time.
June 7th, 2017 03:02
Poems (Definition)
Louis Gibbs said:
Wow! A good Three-Line poem! You win the brevity prize, swingline.
June 6th, 2017 10:36
Louis Gibbs said:
Wow! A good Three-Line poem! You win the brevity prize, swingline.
June 6th, 2017 10:36
Poems (Definition)
poetboy123 said:
This is so simple, yet at the same time very powerful. A great write!
June 6th, 2017 05:19
poetboy123 said:
This is so simple, yet at the same time very powerful. A great write!
June 6th, 2017 05:19
Poems (Definition)
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. MRIs are fine, I have had six of them on my head and I can prove that I have something between my ears as I have a cd of one of the scans.
June 6th, 2017 02:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. MRIs are fine, I have had six of them on my head and I can prove that I have something between my ears as I have a cd of one of the scans.
June 6th, 2017 02:52
Poems (Definition)
orchidee said:
Oops sorry - I mean - fine write Swing. Well, it\'s a fine comment as well from you Michael!
June 6th, 2017 02:17
orchidee said:
Oops sorry - I mean - fine write Swing. Well, it\'s a fine comment as well from you Michael!
June 6th, 2017 02:17
Poems (Definition)
Michael Edwards said:
When I was working I was a first scan guinea pig for a couple of new MRIs - I can confirm that all my bits are present and correct. Its a day for shorties and this is a good one.
June 6th, 2017 02:13
Michael Edwards said:
When I was working I was a first scan guinea pig for a couple of new MRIs - I can confirm that all my bits are present and correct. Its a day for shorties and this is a good one.
June 6th, 2017 02:13
Sneha\'s Eyes
Augustus said:
I know one by that name who wears a red dot on her forehead ---drop dead gorgeous. May you drop anchor my friend.
June 5th, 2017 21:41
Augustus said:
I know one by that name who wears a red dot on her forehead ---drop dead gorgeous. May you drop anchor my friend.
June 5th, 2017 21:41
Sneha\'s Eyes
Michael Edwards said:
If her eyes are as intriguing as her name: wow
June 5th, 2017 10:19
Michael Edwards said:
If her eyes are as intriguing as her name: wow
June 5th, 2017 10:19
Sneha\'s Eyes
swingline said:
Thank you Damaged Soul/Kindred Spirit for your comment .
June 5th, 2017 07:15
swingline said:
Thank you Damaged Soul/Kindred Spirit for your comment .
June 5th, 2017 07:15
Sneha\'s Eyes
kevin browne said:
wish I could see Sneha\'s eyes. you make them sound scrumptiously poetic. good write my friend x
June 5th, 2017 02:45
kevin browne said:
wish I could see Sneha\'s eyes. you make them sound scrumptiously poetic. good write my friend x
June 5th, 2017 02:45
Sneha\'s Eyes
swingline said:
I hope the tide stays high . Thank you Goldfinch60 .
June 5th, 2017 01:00
swingline said:
I hope the tide stays high . Thank you Goldfinch60 .
June 5th, 2017 01:00
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