Comments received on poems by Wi11ow
The Puppet Master
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
The devil lures many astray this way, making them tap dance to his evil whims in the disguise and guise of freedom when its a nihilist trap. Kudos for a fab marvelous poem.
February 16th, 2021 09:07
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
The devil lures many astray this way, making them tap dance to his evil whims in the disguise and guise of freedom when its a nihilist trap. Kudos for a fab marvelous poem.
February 16th, 2021 09:07
The Puppet Master
L. B. Mek said:
not easy to portray such free flowing ease within a disciplined rhyme scheme, a wonderful talent you wield dear poet, a great read
thanks for choosing to share
February 16th, 2021 05:52
L. B. Mek said:
not easy to portray such free flowing ease within a disciplined rhyme scheme, a wonderful talent you wield dear poet, a great read
thanks for choosing to share
February 16th, 2021 05:52
The Puppet Master
Goldfinch60 said:
That freedom is within us all but sometimes it needs somebody to \'pull the strings\'. Good write Willow.
Andy
February 16th, 2021 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
That freedom is within us all but sometimes it needs somebody to \'pull the strings\'. Good write Willow.
Andy
February 16th, 2021 02:20
The Puppet Master
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written, Willow! Really enjoyed the read!
February 15th, 2021 20:08
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written, Willow! Really enjoyed the read!
February 15th, 2021 20:08
The Puppet Master
dusk arising said:
I love this, an invite to the thoughtless or those whose brain resides in their scrotum.
Wonderful tease and nicely done without any sleaze whatsoever.
Excellent.
February 15th, 2021 12:50
dusk arising said:
I love this, an invite to the thoughtless or those whose brain resides in their scrotum.
Wonderful tease and nicely done without any sleaze whatsoever.
Excellent.
February 15th, 2021 12:50
One Bird, Two Stones
SerenWise said:
Really nicely written, love the use of formatting :)
March 3rd, 2019 17:01
SerenWise said:
Really nicely written, love the use of formatting :)
March 3rd, 2019 17:01
One Bird, Two Stones
dusk arising said:
Amazing. You had me gripped with this. Usually i get bored with works of this length, give up and go looking for better. Today there are non better. This is a tremendous piece delivering the duality of love so aptly. Been there, done that, scars healing (still) and you describe it all with a grace and as if it is to be accepted as the norm... which of course it is... how wise you are.
Definitely into my favourites.
March 3rd, 2019 16:36
dusk arising said:
Amazing. You had me gripped with this. Usually i get bored with works of this length, give up and go looking for better. Today there are non better. This is a tremendous piece delivering the duality of love so aptly. Been there, done that, scars healing (still) and you describe it all with a grace and as if it is to be accepted as the norm... which of course it is... how wise you are.
Definitely into my favourites.
March 3rd, 2019 16:36
You
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. The time to write is different in differing situations.
May 26th, 2017 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. The time to write is different in differing situations.
May 26th, 2017 00:51
You
valene said:
this is a poem that touched me in a personal way. i know how it feels to miss that someone special, and it\'s even harder on a beautiful sunny day when logically you know you should be taking advantage a the lovely day in someway, but you\'re missing that person a lot and you try to find distractions to help get you thru the day. it\'s not until the day ends, & the sun goes down that you finally give into your emotions and allow yourself to acknowledge the sadness and/or other feelings. writing about the person and you\'re emotional state is a good way to give yourself some relief from what you\'ve kept bottled up. long story short, i\'m glad you shared this and hope it was cathartic for you at least to some extent!
May 25th, 2017 21:04
valene said:
this is a poem that touched me in a personal way. i know how it feels to miss that someone special, and it\'s even harder on a beautiful sunny day when logically you know you should be taking advantage a the lovely day in someway, but you\'re missing that person a lot and you try to find distractions to help get you thru the day. it\'s not until the day ends, & the sun goes down that you finally give into your emotions and allow yourself to acknowledge the sadness and/or other feelings. writing about the person and you\'re emotional state is a good way to give yourself some relief from what you\'ve kept bottled up. long story short, i\'m glad you shared this and hope it was cathartic for you at least to some extent!
May 25th, 2017 21:04
You
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Another beautiful POEM Angel ~ about the increasing intensity of your perfect love ! Things you have had ~ flood you mind with sensuous memories ! \"Things you will never have\" torment your heart and make you ask WHY ? Writing & rereading about your Lover (and the extent of your Love) is very cathartic and will give you release. Thinking of YOU ~ Yours BRIAN
May 25th, 2017 16:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Another beautiful POEM Angel ~ about the increasing intensity of your perfect love ! Things you have had ~ flood you mind with sensuous memories ! \"Things you will never have\" torment your heart and make you ask WHY ? Writing & rereading about your Lover (and the extent of your Love) is very cathartic and will give you release. Thinking of YOU ~ Yours BRIAN
May 25th, 2017 16:52
Soldato
Augustus said:
Every good story creates a visual which is nicely done here plus the beauty of emotion. Kud.
May 24th, 2017 23:08
Augustus said:
Every good story creates a visual which is nicely done here plus the beauty of emotion. Kud.
May 24th, 2017 23:08
Soldato
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANGEL FOR CARING & SHARING ~ I find this Poem very beautiful because some of my GF\'s have GF\'s with whom they are very close. In my experience Love between two Females is very normal and very very precious. Every Blessing ~ Your Friend Brian X
May 24th, 2017 16:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANGEL FOR CARING & SHARING ~ I find this Poem very beautiful because some of my GF\'s have GF\'s with whom they are very close. In my experience Love between two Females is very normal and very very precious. Every Blessing ~ Your Friend Brian X
May 24th, 2017 16:37
Thinking of You
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ I love it. We have all had FANTASY LOVERS (often based on a real person) who is perfect for me and I for them ~ but the real life chasms are too great to bridge ! Your poem reminded my of at least two unobtainable (Fantasy) Ladies I loved ! I love rhyming couplets and your poem had masses of Rhyme and Rhythm ~ great to read and lovely to recite ~ More please ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
May 23rd, 2017 17:46
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ I love it. We have all had FANTASY LOVERS (often based on a real person) who is perfect for me and I for them ~ but the real life chasms are too great to bridge ! Your poem reminded my of at least two unobtainable (Fantasy) Ladies I loved ! I love rhyming couplets and your poem had masses of Rhyme and Rhythm ~ great to read and lovely to recite ~ More please ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
May 23rd, 2017 17:46
