Comments received on poems by MaddieJ
Inspirational
WL Schuett said:
Lovely “ progress comes with pain “ great line .... very cool 😎 poem
December 1st, 2017 08:55
WL Schuett said:
Lovely “ progress comes with pain “ great line .... very cool 😎 poem
December 1st, 2017 08:55
Iced Water
WL Schuett said:
That is short and sweet , but that special feeling for someone you expressed very well
November 13th, 2017 22:57
WL Schuett said:
That is short and sweet , but that special feeling for someone you expressed very well
November 13th, 2017 22:57
\"Cravings Get The Best of Me\"
WL Schuett said:
Very nice makes me wonder what you’ve kept hidden and why it was effecting you so deeply and how you’ve overcome it ... all of which you of course don’t have to answer .. good poem Leya glad you got to a good place
November 7th, 2017 23:17
WL Schuett said:
Very nice makes me wonder what you’ve kept hidden and why it was effecting you so deeply and how you’ve overcome it ... all of which you of course don’t have to answer .. good poem Leya glad you got to a good place
November 7th, 2017 23:17
\"Cravings Get The Best of Me\"
FredPeyer said:
Leya, this is so well written, and I remember how it feels. One step forward, two back! Well done!
November 7th, 2017 22:03
FredPeyer said:
Leya, this is so well written, and I remember how it feels. One step forward, two back! Well done!
November 7th, 2017 22:03
\"Cravings Get The Best of Me\"
Syd said:
I can relate to this virago. Although I\'m not religious and not yet running to win the race. Great write - Syd
November 7th, 2017 21:09
Syd said:
I can relate to this virago. Although I\'m not religious and not yet running to win the race. Great write - Syd
November 7th, 2017 21:09
What Could Be.......
rrodriguez said:
Wonderfully expressed. We all have longings inside too afraid to manifest. Naturally human.
November 3rd, 2017 15:06
rrodriguez said:
Wonderfully expressed. We all have longings inside too afraid to manifest. Naturally human.
November 3rd, 2017 15:06
Comfort in the Winds
rrodriguez said:
Yes there is comfort in hearing the wind whispering secrets to your ears. Enjoyed your poem.
November 3rd, 2017 15:02
rrodriguez said:
Yes there is comfort in hearing the wind whispering secrets to your ears. Enjoyed your poem.
November 3rd, 2017 15:02
Comfort in the Winds
Alex Arnot said:
Such a great rhythm. I like the way it\'s structured too. Adding the words with more syllables at the end of the lines gives it a sort of undulating flow.
November 2nd, 2017 15:47
Alex Arnot said:
Such a great rhythm. I like the way it\'s structured too. Adding the words with more syllables at the end of the lines gives it a sort of undulating flow.
November 2nd, 2017 15:47
Comfort in the Winds
FredPeyer said:
Welcome back, Leya! Glad to hear (read) from you again. You are so right, sitting on my lanai, watching the sunset, listening to the sounds of nature....there is nothing better to sooth the mind.
November 2nd, 2017 12:23
FredPeyer said:
Welcome back, Leya! Glad to hear (read) from you again. You are so right, sitting on my lanai, watching the sunset, listening to the sounds of nature....there is nothing better to sooth the mind.
November 2nd, 2017 12:23
Comfort in the Winds
WL Schuett said:
Miss you being around , very sweet little poem Leya , hope you do some more writing soon
November 1st, 2017 22:59
WL Schuett said:
Miss you being around , very sweet little poem Leya , hope you do some more writing soon
November 1st, 2017 22:59
What Could Be.......
MendedFences27 said:
\"Soulda, woulda. coulda,\" cal all be replaced by one word, \"DID.\' First though, you must love yourself, realize your own worth, consider yourself an equal to all other people, which incidentally, is true of every living human being. Engaging another person then becomes a judgement on how they will respond. Negatively? They lose. Positively? You win. Now go get \'em!
As to your poem - Well, you can see I was moved.That spells good poetry. Not a silly little write, because we\'ve all been there.We judge ourselves more harshly than we should. We worry too much about being embarrassed, whatever the hell that is. Everyone\'s afraid, courage is going ahead and doing with disregard for fear. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
October 7th, 2017 17:08
MendedFences27 said:
\"Soulda, woulda. coulda,\" cal all be replaced by one word, \"DID.\' First though, you must love yourself, realize your own worth, consider yourself an equal to all other people, which incidentally, is true of every living human being. Engaging another person then becomes a judgement on how they will respond. Negatively? They lose. Positively? You win. Now go get \'em!
As to your poem - Well, you can see I was moved.That spells good poetry. Not a silly little write, because we\'ve all been there.We judge ourselves more harshly than we should. We worry too much about being embarrassed, whatever the hell that is. Everyone\'s afraid, courage is going ahead and doing with disregard for fear. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
October 7th, 2017 17:08
What Could Be.......
WL Schuett said:
I felt the longing , but would Virago the female Warrior really just sit passively without even a hello ....
October 7th, 2017 08:45
WL Schuett said:
I felt the longing , but would Virago the female Warrior really just sit passively without even a hello ....
October 7th, 2017 08:45
What Could Be.......
FredPeyer said:
Leya, your very well penned poem is right on track. How many times are we so sorry we did not try, did not contact somebody, did not approach somebody, etc. And therefore dream of what could have been.
Next time, just get up and do it! The worst that can happen is to hear a \'no\'.
October 7th, 2017 02:59
FredPeyer said:
Leya, your very well penned poem is right on track. How many times are we so sorry we did not try, did not contact somebody, did not approach somebody, etc. And therefore dream of what could have been.
Next time, just get up and do it! The worst that can happen is to hear a \'no\'.
October 7th, 2017 02:59
What Could Be.......
dusk arising said:
Great expression of that longing and it\'s accompanying loneliness, unfulfillment. Such things we poets are made of.... Would be fun if you just picked your desert up and took it over to his table with an extra spoon \"hi, i thought you looked like you\'d help me eat some apple pie\". ..... There\'d be more poetry to write after that LOL
October 7th, 2017 00:37
dusk arising said:
Great expression of that longing and it\'s accompanying loneliness, unfulfillment. Such things we poets are made of.... Would be fun if you just picked your desert up and took it over to his table with an extra spoon \"hi, i thought you looked like you\'d help me eat some apple pie\". ..... There\'d be more poetry to write after that LOL
October 7th, 2017 00:37
Remembrance
FredPeyer said:
Leya, this is very, very beautiful. You caught the mood perfectly with some incredible and imaginative word combinations like smelling the past, clouds falling onto the heart, addictive flavor on the tongue, and then the sad ending with the memory fading, just like they do in real life.
I just love your poem, a favorite for sure.
September 27th, 2017 11:15
FredPeyer said:
Leya, this is very, very beautiful. You caught the mood perfectly with some incredible and imaginative word combinations like smelling the past, clouds falling onto the heart, addictive flavor on the tongue, and then the sad ending with the memory fading, just like they do in real life.
I just love your poem, a favorite for sure.
September 27th, 2017 11:15
Remembrance
WL Schuett said:
This is just lovely , I know the feeling . Nice writing you envoked the feeling perfectly , well done
September 27th, 2017 09:21
WL Schuett said:
This is just lovely , I know the feeling . Nice writing you envoked the feeling perfectly , well done
September 27th, 2017 09:21
\"Untitled\"
WL Schuett said:
Very lyrical I love poetry that just sounds good , I\'m not sure what it means but I don\'t care ... well done Leya
September 11th, 2017 07:43
WL Schuett said:
Very lyrical I love poetry that just sounds good , I\'m not sure what it means but I don\'t care ... well done Leya
September 11th, 2017 07:43
\"Untitled\"
Seek said:
Sentiments of a fiercely independent soul so well articulated.
September 11th, 2017 03:59
Seek said:
Sentiments of a fiercely independent soul so well articulated.
September 11th, 2017 03:59
You\'re like a deep breath in
BlueDays said:
I adore this feeling, you portrayed it well. Made me smile, thank you 😊
September 1st, 2017 15:33
BlueDays said:
I adore this feeling, you portrayed it well. Made me smile, thank you 😊
September 1st, 2017 15:33
You\'re like a deep breath in
FredPeyer said:
Great poem virago! That\'s why they call it \'floating on cloud 7\'!!! And if you can do that even in a grocery store, you\'ve got it made!
August 31st, 2017 23:58
FredPeyer said:
Great poem virago! That\'s why they call it \'floating on cloud 7\'!!! And if you can do that even in a grocery store, you\'ve got it made!
August 31st, 2017 23:58
Jelly Fish
WL Schuett said:
Title caught my eye first time I\'ve read one of your poems ,very good nice imagery and very poetic...
August 23rd, 2017 22:28
WL Schuett said:
Title caught my eye first time I\'ve read one of your poems ,very good nice imagery and very poetic...
August 23rd, 2017 22:28
\"People With A Past\"
WL Schuett said:
A cool poem and loved your comments you have a good outlook ....
August 17th, 2017 09:38
WL Schuett said:
A cool poem and loved your comments you have a good outlook ....
August 17th, 2017 09:38
The Green Abode
Nicholas Browning said:
You don\'t know what you\'ve got until it\'s gone. Beautiful.
August 17th, 2017 00:20
Nicholas Browning said:
You don\'t know what you\'ve got until it\'s gone. Beautiful.
August 17th, 2017 00:20
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