Comments received on poems by MaddieJ
\"Singing In The Rain\"
FineB said:
Thank you Virago.
What a beautiful, vivid poem on rain.
Lovely!
Keep writing
FineB
February 1st, 2018 16:43
FineB said:
Thank you Virago.
What a beautiful, vivid poem on rain.
Lovely!
Keep writing
FineB
February 1st, 2018 16:43
Comfort in the Winds
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
lovely.. very nice .:-)
January 30th, 2018 04:13
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
lovely.. very nice .:-)
January 30th, 2018 04:13
\"Singing In The Rain\"
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
such a pleasant read, i truly enjoyed reading this , sometimes there is nothing more pleasant then being in nature... this is quite lovely :-)
January 30th, 2018 04:09
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
such a pleasant read, i truly enjoyed reading this , sometimes there is nothing more pleasant then being in nature... this is quite lovely :-)
January 30th, 2018 04:09
\"Singing In The Rain\"
Goldfinch60 said:
Good positive write, keep singing Virago.
January 10th, 2018 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Good positive write, keep singing Virago.
January 10th, 2018 01:47
Inspirational
MendedFences27 said:
I like the fact that this is an \"Inspirational\" poem. In particular the lines, \"Progress comes with pain\", the last two lines of how \"your future self \" gets fed by \"your present self,\" and how \"in order to grow\' one must be willing to accept some \"hurt.\" All true statements. Life is a series of changes all based on past experiences. Good work and an interesting poem. - Phil A.
December 23rd, 2017 19:34
MendedFences27 said:
I like the fact that this is an \"Inspirational\" poem. In particular the lines, \"Progress comes with pain\", the last two lines of how \"your future self \" gets fed by \"your present self,\" and how \"in order to grow\' one must be willing to accept some \"hurt.\" All true statements. Life is a series of changes all based on past experiences. Good work and an interesting poem. - Phil A.
December 23rd, 2017 19:34
Inspirational
WL Schuett said:
Lovely “ progress comes with pain “ great line .... very cool 😎 poem
December 1st, 2017 08:55
WL Schuett said:
Lovely “ progress comes with pain “ great line .... very cool 😎 poem
December 1st, 2017 08:55
Iced Water
WL Schuett said:
That is short and sweet , but that special feeling for someone you expressed very well
November 13th, 2017 22:57
WL Schuett said:
That is short and sweet , but that special feeling for someone you expressed very well
November 13th, 2017 22:57
\"Cravings Get The Best of Me\"
WL Schuett said:
Very nice makes me wonder what you’ve kept hidden and why it was effecting you so deeply and how you’ve overcome it ... all of which you of course don’t have to answer .. good poem Leya glad you got to a good place
November 7th, 2017 23:17
WL Schuett said:
Very nice makes me wonder what you’ve kept hidden and why it was effecting you so deeply and how you’ve overcome it ... all of which you of course don’t have to answer .. good poem Leya glad you got to a good place
November 7th, 2017 23:17
\"Cravings Get The Best of Me\"
FredPeyer said:
Leya, this is so well written, and I remember how it feels. One step forward, two back! Well done!
November 7th, 2017 22:03
FredPeyer said:
Leya, this is so well written, and I remember how it feels. One step forward, two back! Well done!
November 7th, 2017 22:03
\"Cravings Get The Best of Me\"
Syd said:
I can relate to this virago. Although I\'m not religious and not yet running to win the race. Great write - Syd
November 7th, 2017 21:09
Syd said:
I can relate to this virago. Although I\'m not religious and not yet running to win the race. Great write - Syd
November 7th, 2017 21:09
What Could Be.......
rrodriguez said:
Wonderfully expressed. We all have longings inside too afraid to manifest. Naturally human.
November 3rd, 2017 15:06
rrodriguez said:
Wonderfully expressed. We all have longings inside too afraid to manifest. Naturally human.
November 3rd, 2017 15:06
Comfort in the Winds
rrodriguez said:
Yes there is comfort in hearing the wind whispering secrets to your ears. Enjoyed your poem.
November 3rd, 2017 15:02
rrodriguez said:
Yes there is comfort in hearing the wind whispering secrets to your ears. Enjoyed your poem.
November 3rd, 2017 15:02
Comfort in the Winds
Alex Arnot said:
Such a great rhythm. I like the way it\'s structured too. Adding the words with more syllables at the end of the lines gives it a sort of undulating flow.
November 2nd, 2017 15:47
Alex Arnot said:
Such a great rhythm. I like the way it\'s structured too. Adding the words with more syllables at the end of the lines gives it a sort of undulating flow.
November 2nd, 2017 15:47
Comfort in the Winds
FredPeyer said:
Welcome back, Leya! Glad to hear (read) from you again. You are so right, sitting on my lanai, watching the sunset, listening to the sounds of nature....there is nothing better to sooth the mind.
November 2nd, 2017 12:23
FredPeyer said:
Welcome back, Leya! Glad to hear (read) from you again. You are so right, sitting on my lanai, watching the sunset, listening to the sounds of nature....there is nothing better to sooth the mind.
November 2nd, 2017 12:23
Comfort in the Winds
WL Schuett said:
Miss you being around , very sweet little poem Leya , hope you do some more writing soon
November 1st, 2017 22:59
WL Schuett said:
Miss you being around , very sweet little poem Leya , hope you do some more writing soon
November 1st, 2017 22:59
What Could Be.......
MendedFences27 said:
\"Soulda, woulda. coulda,\" cal all be replaced by one word, \"DID.\' First though, you must love yourself, realize your own worth, consider yourself an equal to all other people, which incidentally, is true of every living human being. Engaging another person then becomes a judgement on how they will respond. Negatively? They lose. Positively? You win. Now go get \'em!
As to your poem - Well, you can see I was moved.That spells good poetry. Not a silly little write, because we\'ve all been there.We judge ourselves more harshly than we should. We worry too much about being embarrassed, whatever the hell that is. Everyone\'s afraid, courage is going ahead and doing with disregard for fear. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
October 7th, 2017 17:08
MendedFences27 said:
\"Soulda, woulda. coulda,\" cal all be replaced by one word, \"DID.\' First though, you must love yourself, realize your own worth, consider yourself an equal to all other people, which incidentally, is true of every living human being. Engaging another person then becomes a judgement on how they will respond. Negatively? They lose. Positively? You win. Now go get \'em!
As to your poem - Well, you can see I was moved.That spells good poetry. Not a silly little write, because we\'ve all been there.We judge ourselves more harshly than we should. We worry too much about being embarrassed, whatever the hell that is. Everyone\'s afraid, courage is going ahead and doing with disregard for fear. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
October 7th, 2017 17:08
What Could Be.......
WL Schuett said:
I felt the longing , but would Virago the female Warrior really just sit passively without even a hello ....
October 7th, 2017 08:45
WL Schuett said:
I felt the longing , but would Virago the female Warrior really just sit passively without even a hello ....
October 7th, 2017 08:45
What Could Be.......
FredPeyer said:
Leya, your very well penned poem is right on track. How many times are we so sorry we did not try, did not contact somebody, did not approach somebody, etc. And therefore dream of what could have been.
Next time, just get up and do it! The worst that can happen is to hear a \'no\'.
October 7th, 2017 02:59
FredPeyer said:
Leya, your very well penned poem is right on track. How many times are we so sorry we did not try, did not contact somebody, did not approach somebody, etc. And therefore dream of what could have been.
Next time, just get up and do it! The worst that can happen is to hear a \'no\'.
October 7th, 2017 02:59
What Could Be.......
dusk arising said:
Great expression of that longing and it\'s accompanying loneliness, unfulfillment. Such things we poets are made of.... Would be fun if you just picked your desert up and took it over to his table with an extra spoon \"hi, i thought you looked like you\'d help me eat some apple pie\". ..... There\'d be more poetry to write after that LOL
October 7th, 2017 00:37
dusk arising said:
Great expression of that longing and it\'s accompanying loneliness, unfulfillment. Such things we poets are made of.... Would be fun if you just picked your desert up and took it over to his table with an extra spoon \"hi, i thought you looked like you\'d help me eat some apple pie\". ..... There\'d be more poetry to write after that LOL
October 7th, 2017 00:37
Remembrance
FredPeyer said:
Leya, this is very, very beautiful. You caught the mood perfectly with some incredible and imaginative word combinations like smelling the past, clouds falling onto the heart, addictive flavor on the tongue, and then the sad ending with the memory fading, just like they do in real life.
I just love your poem, a favorite for sure.
September 27th, 2017 11:15
FredPeyer said:
Leya, this is very, very beautiful. You caught the mood perfectly with some incredible and imaginative word combinations like smelling the past, clouds falling onto the heart, addictive flavor on the tongue, and then the sad ending with the memory fading, just like they do in real life.
I just love your poem, a favorite for sure.
September 27th, 2017 11:15
Remembrance
WL Schuett said:
This is just lovely , I know the feeling . Nice writing you envoked the feeling perfectly , well done
September 27th, 2017 09:21
WL Schuett said:
This is just lovely , I know the feeling . Nice writing you envoked the feeling perfectly , well done
September 27th, 2017 09:21
\"Untitled\"
WL Schuett said:
Very lyrical I love poetry that just sounds good , I\'m not sure what it means but I don\'t care ... well done Leya
September 11th, 2017 07:43
WL Schuett said:
Very lyrical I love poetry that just sounds good , I\'m not sure what it means but I don\'t care ... well done Leya
September 11th, 2017 07:43
\"Untitled\"
Seek said:
Sentiments of a fiercely independent soul so well articulated.
September 11th, 2017 03:59
Seek said:
Sentiments of a fiercely independent soul so well articulated.
September 11th, 2017 03:59
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