Comments received on poems by MaddieJ

Hume Lake Inspiration
Goldfinch60 said:

The Creation is a wonder to behold and your words have shown it to us.

October 8th, 2018 01:09

Hume Lake Inspiration
Peaceout said:

Beautiful words that describe the way God shows you his creations for us.

October 7th, 2018 23:01

Hume Lake Inspiration
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Leya, your poem makes us all reflect on the serenity one experiences from nature, and that is a gift from God. I loved your poem and it certainly has transformed my soul. Thanks for posting this well-written tribute to our LORD and Savior. :)

October 7th, 2018 17:01

A Close Stranger
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Impressive and haunting write. I enjoyed it.

\"How could he, a nebulous creature, ever be capable of fulfilling my dreams?\"

How about:

\"How could a nebulous creature; a wraith, ever be capable of fulfilling my dreams?\"

Great read! :)

October 6th, 2018 11:49

A Close Stranger
Crystal Hope said:

a fantastic piece.

October 6th, 2018 11:00

w c said:

I enjoyed your poem, virago. I also sometimes wish i were a child again. Back then, my father protected me from any danger.

September 22nd, 2018 13:00

Goldfinch60 said:

Very good meaningful write. Those days of youth are always treasured.

September 22nd, 2018 10:41

Christina8 said:

Loved this very thoughtful and well written poem! Lots of deep meaningful ideas.

September 21st, 2018 18:06

G84 said:

A thought I’ve pondered many a time they say hatred and negativity aren’t natural - they have to be taught! Children see the good and fun in the world until were taught otherwise love your rhyming style!

Thank you

September 21st, 2018 14:29

Today I Thought of Five Unique Things
Goldfinch60 said:

It is that \"What if..?\" question again the most unanswered question in the world.
What if you hadn\'t written these words would i have thought of the questions myself.
Thought provoking write.

September 5th, 2018 00:53

Crush to Crumb
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Love can crush Leya, this was a gat write an o prn honest perspective.
Well done

July 7th, 2018 03:18

Capture Me If You Dare
Goldfinch60 said:

Good wise write, you need to always be aware of those who are out to dupe you.

June 27th, 2018 00:04

Capture Me If You Dare
Frogspoetry said:

I agree.nobody,man or woman or child should not be a slave to anybody else.stay true to yourself and be your own person.

June 26th, 2018 18:17

By Yourself
minak said:

i appreciate the flow and of your writing, lovely

June 13th, 2018 23:10

10 pm At Target
Lorna said:

I know you are calling it comical but there is something melancholic and other worldly about wandering around in markets at night..... you caught that!

June 7th, 2018 06:29

What If Heaven
SLR said:

I understand the \'profound knowing\' you\'re talking about existing in heaven, although I do tend to agree with orchidee. If God allowed humans to go to heaven, I really can\'t see him taking away the basic ways that humans have lived (and know)to enjoy and process the world and others around them. It would be very disconcerting.

May 18th, 2018 21:58

What If Heaven
orchidee said:

I see what you mean at the end. Yet I\'m sure there is feeling, singing, knowing in heaven, enhanced to the heights of perfection!

May 18th, 2018 01:56

Subway Safehouse
Lorna said:

Very expressive and great images - I don\'t see homelessness.... just reflection and wonderful background images of the coffee smells and subway tiles....... Loved it........ did I read it correctly?

April 8th, 2018 05:33

Subway Safehouse
Daveyboyz said:

I like it, the first half I am thinking of the commute and then the line about sleeplessness and the pack and suddenly its about homelessness which is quite a contrast.

April 7th, 2018 15:26

Candy Coated Nightmare Love
Goldfinch60 said:

Once the love is there and you are together the love will get stronger and bind you together more firmly.

April 1st, 2018 00:34

Candy Coated Nightmare Love
orchidee said:

A fine write Virago. The pic matches too. It seems to me like you\'re in love, yet don\'t want anyone to be TOO near you.
Being in love (what would I know of it? I keep swooning. lol) lifts you to a higher plane.

March 31st, 2018 10:13

Selas A’ Mi
Lorna said:

Lovely picture of a moon friendship.......

March 21st, 2018 03:47

Goldfinch60 said:

The Lord is always with you and it shows in this wonderful write.

March 15th, 2018 02:00

RiverJordan said:

I like

March 14th, 2018 15:17

Untitled (For now)
MaddieJ said:

Credits to the movie \"Alice in Wonderland\" Directed by Tim Burton, for that last line. \"Magnificently heroic globe\" I have always been in love with that phrase ever since I heard it.

February 28th, 2018 15:39

Untitled (For now)
Lorna said:

Wow..... wonderful questions and vision.

February 27th, 2018 05:45

When Yonder- Incomplete
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

hi virago , a brilliant piece of writing ! i love this , truly! :-) i love your ideas throughout this , the man above the cloud with his horse , the glowing rose . its like something out of a fantasy book , a man above the clouds , great idea. it sounds to me as if the rose pulled him in and she wasn\'t a nice rose after all ! the ending caught me off hold a little , i wasn\'t expecting the rose to eat him lol.. i think you wrote this very well , it seems like a very interesting and engaging piece of writing , very enjoyable

February 22nd, 2018 19:11

FredPeyer said:

Great poem, Leya! Love the ending!

February 13th, 2018 20:23

Lorna said:

I love this Virago - your words are so carefully chosen and clear and uniformly good! You got me with your first line!

February 12th, 2018 04:52

ron parrish aka wordman said:

beautiful write

February 11th, 2018 21:23

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