Comments received on poems by MaddieJ
Adulting
w c said:
I enjoyed your poem, virago. I also sometimes wish i were a child again. Back then, my father protected me from any danger.
September 22nd, 2018 13:00
w c said:
I enjoyed your poem, virago. I also sometimes wish i were a child again. Back then, my father protected me from any danger.
September 22nd, 2018 13:00
Adulting
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good meaningful write. Those days of youth are always treasured.
September 22nd, 2018 10:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good meaningful write. Those days of youth are always treasured.
September 22nd, 2018 10:41
Adulting
Christina8 said:
Loved this very thoughtful and well written poem! Lots of deep meaningful ideas.
September 21st, 2018 18:06
Christina8 said:
Loved this very thoughtful and well written poem! Lots of deep meaningful ideas.
September 21st, 2018 18:06
Adulting
G84 said:
A thought I’ve pondered many a time they say hatred and negativity aren’t natural - they have to be taught! Children see the good and fun in the world until were taught otherwise love your rhyming style!
Thank you
September 21st, 2018 14:29
G84 said:
A thought I’ve pondered many a time they say hatred and negativity aren’t natural - they have to be taught! Children see the good and fun in the world until were taught otherwise love your rhyming style!
Thank you
September 21st, 2018 14:29
Today I Thought of Five Unique Things
Goldfinch60 said:
It is that \"What if..?\" question again the most unanswered question in the world.
What if you hadn\'t written these words would i have thought of the questions myself.
Thought provoking write.
September 5th, 2018 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
It is that \"What if..?\" question again the most unanswered question in the world.
What if you hadn\'t written these words would i have thought of the questions myself.
Thought provoking write.
September 5th, 2018 00:53
Crush to Crumb
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Love can crush Leya, this was a gat write an o prn honest perspective.
Well done
Andrew
July 7th, 2018 03:18
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Love can crush Leya, this was a gat write an o prn honest perspective.
Well done
Andrew
July 7th, 2018 03:18
Capture Me If You Dare
Goldfinch60 said:
Good wise write, you need to always be aware of those who are out to dupe you.
June 27th, 2018 00:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Good wise write, you need to always be aware of those who are out to dupe you.
June 27th, 2018 00:04
Capture Me If You Dare
Frogspoetry said:
I agree.nobody,man or woman or child should not be a slave to anybody else.stay true to yourself and be your own person.
June 26th, 2018 18:17
Frogspoetry said:
I agree.nobody,man or woman or child should not be a slave to anybody else.stay true to yourself and be your own person.
June 26th, 2018 18:17
10 pm At Target
Lorna said:
I know you are calling it comical but there is something melancholic and other worldly about wandering around in markets at night..... you caught that!
June 7th, 2018 06:29
Lorna said:
I know you are calling it comical but there is something melancholic and other worldly about wandering around in markets at night..... you caught that!
June 7th, 2018 06:29
What If Heaven
SLR said:
I understand the \'profound knowing\' you\'re talking about existing in heaven, although I do tend to agree with orchidee. If God allowed humans to go to heaven, I really can\'t see him taking away the basic ways that humans have lived (and know)to enjoy and process the world and others around them. It would be very disconcerting.
May 18th, 2018 21:58
SLR said:
I understand the \'profound knowing\' you\'re talking about existing in heaven, although I do tend to agree with orchidee. If God allowed humans to go to heaven, I really can\'t see him taking away the basic ways that humans have lived (and know)to enjoy and process the world and others around them. It would be very disconcerting.
May 18th, 2018 21:58
What If Heaven
orchidee said:
I see what you mean at the end. Yet I\'m sure there is feeling, singing, knowing in heaven, enhanced to the heights of perfection!
May 18th, 2018 01:56
orchidee said:
I see what you mean at the end. Yet I\'m sure there is feeling, singing, knowing in heaven, enhanced to the heights of perfection!
May 18th, 2018 01:56
Subway Safehouse
Lorna said:
Very expressive and great images - I don\'t see homelessness.... just reflection and wonderful background images of the coffee smells and subway tiles....... Loved it........ did I read it correctly?
April 8th, 2018 05:33
Lorna said:
Very expressive and great images - I don\'t see homelessness.... just reflection and wonderful background images of the coffee smells and subway tiles....... Loved it........ did I read it correctly?
April 8th, 2018 05:33
Subway Safehouse
Daveyboyz said:
I like it, the first half I am thinking of the commute and then the line about sleeplessness and the pack and suddenly its about homelessness which is quite a contrast.
April 7th, 2018 15:26
Daveyboyz said:
I like it, the first half I am thinking of the commute and then the line about sleeplessness and the pack and suddenly its about homelessness which is quite a contrast.
April 7th, 2018 15:26
Candy Coated Nightmare Love
Goldfinch60 said:
Once the love is there and you are together the love will get stronger and bind you together more firmly.
April 1st, 2018 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Once the love is there and you are together the love will get stronger and bind you together more firmly.
April 1st, 2018 00:34
Candy Coated Nightmare Love
orchidee said:
A fine write Virago. The pic matches too. It seems to me like you\'re in love, yet don\'t want anyone to be TOO near you.
Being in love (what would I know of it? I keep swooning. lol) lifts you to a higher plane.
March 31st, 2018 10:13
orchidee said:
A fine write Virago. The pic matches too. It seems to me like you\'re in love, yet don\'t want anyone to be TOO near you.
Being in love (what would I know of it? I keep swooning. lol) lifts you to a higher plane.
March 31st, 2018 10:13
Revelation
Goldfinch60 said:
The Lord is always with you and it shows in this wonderful write.
March 15th, 2018 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
The Lord is always with you and it shows in this wonderful write.
March 15th, 2018 02:00
Untitled (For now)
MaddieJ said:
Credits to the movie \"Alice in Wonderland\" Directed by Tim Burton, for that last line. \"Magnificently heroic globe\" I have always been in love with that phrase ever since I heard it.
February 28th, 2018 15:39
MaddieJ said:
Credits to the movie \"Alice in Wonderland\" Directed by Tim Burton, for that last line. \"Magnificently heroic globe\" I have always been in love with that phrase ever since I heard it.
February 28th, 2018 15:39
When Yonder- Incomplete
Caring dove said:
hi virago , a brilliant piece of writing ! i love this , truly! :-) i love your ideas throughout this , the man above the cloud with his horse , the glowing rose . its like something out of a fantasy book , a man above the clouds , great idea. it sounds to me as if the rose pulled him in and she wasn\'t a nice rose after all ! the ending caught me off hold a little , i wasn\'t expecting the rose to eat him lol.. i think you wrote this very well , it seems like a very interesting and engaging piece of writing , very enjoyable
February 22nd, 2018 19:11
Caring dove said:
hi virago , a brilliant piece of writing ! i love this , truly! :-) i love your ideas throughout this , the man above the cloud with his horse , the glowing rose . its like something out of a fantasy book , a man above the clouds , great idea. it sounds to me as if the rose pulled him in and she wasn\'t a nice rose after all ! the ending caught me off hold a little , i wasn\'t expecting the rose to eat him lol.. i think you wrote this very well , it seems like a very interesting and engaging piece of writing , very enjoyable
February 22nd, 2018 19:11
\"Falling\"
Lorna said:
I love this Virago - your words are so carefully chosen and clear and uniformly good! You got me with your first line!
February 12th, 2018 04:52
Lorna said:
I love this Virago - your words are so carefully chosen and clear and uniformly good! You got me with your first line!
February 12th, 2018 04:52
\"Singing In The Rain\"
FineB said:
Thank you Virago.
What a beautiful, vivid poem on rain.
Lovely!
Keep writing
FineB
February 1st, 2018 16:43
FineB said:
Thank you Virago.
What a beautiful, vivid poem on rain.
Lovely!
Keep writing
FineB
February 1st, 2018 16:43
\"Singing In The Rain\"
Caring dove said:
such a pleasant read, i truly enjoyed reading this , sometimes there is nothing more pleasant then being in nature... this is quite lovely :-)
January 30th, 2018 04:09
Caring dove said:
such a pleasant read, i truly enjoyed reading this , sometimes there is nothing more pleasant then being in nature... this is quite lovely :-)
January 30th, 2018 04:09
\"Singing In The Rain\"
Goldfinch60 said:
Good positive write, keep singing Virago.
January 10th, 2018 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Good positive write, keep singing Virago.
January 10th, 2018 01:47
Inspirational
MendedFences27 said:
I like the fact that this is an \"Inspirational\" poem. In particular the lines, \"Progress comes with pain\", the last two lines of how \"your future self \" gets fed by \"your present self,\" and how \"in order to grow\' one must be willing to accept some \"hurt.\" All true statements. Life is a series of changes all based on past experiences. Good work and an interesting poem. - Phil A.
December 23rd, 2017 19:34
MendedFences27 said:
I like the fact that this is an \"Inspirational\" poem. In particular the lines, \"Progress comes with pain\", the last two lines of how \"your future self \" gets fed by \"your present self,\" and how \"in order to grow\' one must be willing to accept some \"hurt.\" All true statements. Life is a series of changes all based on past experiences. Good work and an interesting poem. - Phil A.
December 23rd, 2017 19:34
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