Comments received on poems by MaddieJ
What Do I Do?
LauraBerry said:
Being open without fear, is a beautiful state to be in. Lovely poem.
November 15th, 2022 05:17
LauraBerry said:
Being open without fear, is a beautiful state to be in. Lovely poem.
November 15th, 2022 05:17
What Do I Do?
J.H.Byron-Nuel said:
No you are just a miss guided soul such as myself
November 14th, 2022 23:51
J.H.Byron-Nuel said:
No you are just a miss guided soul such as myself
November 14th, 2022 23:51
Battlegrounds in the Mind
L. B. Mek said:
refreshing in its ingenuity of delivery and well measured pace of rhythmic unfolding
October 8th, 2020 03:45
L. B. Mek said:
refreshing in its ingenuity of delivery and well measured pace of rhythmic unfolding
October 8th, 2020 03:45
Battlegrounds in the Mind
Fay Slimm. said:
Slow and rhythmic the fall of these words down the page give the pace and the me-time we all need dear Maddie - thanks for sharing them.
October 7th, 2020 02:10
Fay Slimm. said:
Slow and rhythmic the fall of these words down the page give the pace and the me-time we all need dear Maddie - thanks for sharing them.
October 7th, 2020 02:10
Battlegrounds in the Mind
orchidee said:
Good write Maddie.
Doh! There would be a battle in my mind too, but I only got 3 brain cells, and they\'re on holiday at present. When will they be back? Who knows?! lol.
October 7th, 2020 02:02
orchidee said:
Good write Maddie.
Doh! There would be a battle in my mind too, but I only got 3 brain cells, and they\'re on holiday at present. When will they be back? Who knows?! lol.
October 7th, 2020 02:02
My Speech to the Genie
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
To MadieJ
Be the change M
You can do more today than you will be able to tomorrow so do it now
Youth is your greatest friend make all your mistakes early while there still time to forget them.
Lone wolves never find each other... go looking for him... he IS out there I promise
Take care
Genie
September 7th, 2020 07:47
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
To MadieJ
Be the change M
You can do more today than you will be able to tomorrow so do it now
Youth is your greatest friend make all your mistakes early while there still time to forget them.
Lone wolves never find each other... go looking for him... he IS out there I promise
Take care
Genie
September 7th, 2020 07:47
My Speech to the Genie
L. B. Mek said:
I think you have a genuine quality of relatability in your choice phrasing and imagery,
it is a unique skill to make the seemingly straightforward, delve deep and tickle those dark shadows that exist within us all,
great effort
but, never stop dreaming of genie\'s or fairies: for when we let ourselves outgrow them, we subject ourselves to an existence where magic, happenstance and good old luck - are obsolete,
where then will we source our guiding tethers of hope, in these bleak wilderness of masked reality streets
August 20th, 2020 03:39
L. B. Mek said:
I think you have a genuine quality of relatability in your choice phrasing and imagery,
it is a unique skill to make the seemingly straightforward, delve deep and tickle those dark shadows that exist within us all,
great effort
but, never stop dreaming of genie\'s or fairies: for when we let ourselves outgrow them, we subject ourselves to an existence where magic, happenstance and good old luck - are obsolete,
where then will we source our guiding tethers of hope, in these bleak wilderness of masked reality streets
August 20th, 2020 03:39
My Speech to the Genie
orchidee said:
I tried a genie - it didn\'t work! He went up in a puff of smoke. Well, I stood the lamp on a stove by mistake, and he burnt up. Doh! lol.
August 20th, 2020 02:07
orchidee said:
I tried a genie - it didn\'t work! He went up in a puff of smoke. Well, I stood the lamp on a stove by mistake, and he burnt up. Doh! lol.
August 20th, 2020 02:07
My Speech to the Genie
dusk arising said:
Been there, done that, the wish for a gene dies and you\'re left all alone to accept yourselfhowever you are and then.... (fanfare of trumpets) you start living in earnest. Don\'t look for that other wolf, your new self assured personna will attract them for sure and thats when you have to learn being choosey....
Enjoyed reading this today. The world will fulfill your ever changing wishes and those wishes will come to terms with what you actually need.... smile often.
August 20th, 2020 02:05
dusk arising said:
Been there, done that, the wish for a gene dies and you\'re left all alone to accept yourselfhowever you are and then.... (fanfare of trumpets) you start living in earnest. Don\'t look for that other wolf, your new self assured personna will attract them for sure and thats when you have to learn being choosey....
Enjoyed reading this today. The world will fulfill your ever changing wishes and those wishes will come to terms with what you actually need.... smile often.
August 20th, 2020 02:05
Dreamer In the Wind
peto said:
Seemed a few memories are in amongst the dreams
You will see and experience much more
As you have had a taste
Excellent writing
June 12th, 2020 04:05
peto said:
Seemed a few memories are in amongst the dreams
You will see and experience much more
As you have had a taste
Excellent writing
June 12th, 2020 04:05
Dreamer In the Wind
dusk arising said:
A masterful write. Each line is poetry itself. Beguiling, you held me as I eased into your poetic environment feeling the breeze teasing me, to take me.
You last three lines fill me with envy. Your poetic vision here is second to none.
June 11th, 2020 23:13
dusk arising said:
A masterful write. Each line is poetry itself. Beguiling, you held me as I eased into your poetic environment feeling the breeze teasing me, to take me.
You last three lines fill me with envy. Your poetic vision here is second to none.
June 11th, 2020 23:13
Golden Soul
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
still haven\'t found the courage to do this M but I am going to
To me this means beauty is in the eye of the beholder something, sometimes no-one else can see but it\'s there special and true to you or anyone who can see them
That is true beauty
Thank you
I love these streams of consciousness writes
June 6th, 2020 02:15
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
still haven\'t found the courage to do this M but I am going to
To me this means beauty is in the eye of the beholder something, sometimes no-one else can see but it\'s there special and true to you or anyone who can see them
That is true beauty
Thank you
I love these streams of consciousness writes
June 6th, 2020 02:15
(Cake and Candles ) This is Not a Poem.
MaddieJ said:
Well, thank you matt! I enjoy twisting things that are seen one way in culture, and imagining them in the opposite light. It makes for a fun writing topic, as well as a new perspective on things in life. Something to giggle to myself about once in a while... Anyway, thanks again for reading! Perhaps I will post a part two!
May 17th, 2020 01:50
MaddieJ said:
Well, thank you matt! I enjoy twisting things that are seen one way in culture, and imagining them in the opposite light. It makes for a fun writing topic, as well as a new perspective on things in life. Something to giggle to myself about once in a while... Anyway, thanks again for reading! Perhaps I will post a part two!
May 17th, 2020 01:50
(Cake and Candles ) This is Not a Poem.
matt15rsp said:
I like how you take something typically light and fun and make it feel heavy, you can almost feel the weight on the character, especially with the titular Cake and Candles line. I\'m intruiged to see more
May 16th, 2020 14:54
matt15rsp said:
I like how you take something typically light and fun and make it feel heavy, you can almost feel the weight on the character, especially with the titular Cake and Candles line. I\'m intruiged to see more
May 16th, 2020 14:54
Saying I Love You and Not Really Meaning It
matt15rsp said:
This really connects with a recent experience of mine, I enjoyed it a lot
April 30th, 2020 16:12
matt15rsp said:
This really connects with a recent experience of mine, I enjoyed it a lot
April 30th, 2020 16:12
Untitled
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Loving this FREE concept of writing I get so obsessed with what ends up on the page
How did that feel now it\'s out there
BRAVO well done I like it
I may even give it a go
THANK YOU!!!
April 28th, 2020 15:46
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Loving this FREE concept of writing I get so obsessed with what ends up on the page
How did that feel now it\'s out there
BRAVO well done I like it
I may even give it a go
THANK YOU!!!
April 28th, 2020 15:46
On Your Way Back Home (Angel You\'re Flyin)
FredPeyer said:
Love the lyrics, would love to hear the music too.
April 20th, 2020 20:40
FredPeyer said:
Love the lyrics, would love to hear the music too.
April 20th, 2020 20:40
On Your Way Back Home (Angel You\'re Flyin)
My_Brain said:
I love how easy this is to read through, it defiantly has a good flow to it. Keep writing :) Bella
April 20th, 2020 18:15
My_Brain said:
I love how easy this is to read through, it defiantly has a good flow to it. Keep writing :) Bella
April 20th, 2020 18:15
H20
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks DUENA for your elegant Poem in praise of H2O ! Brian is an Environmental Scientist so is fully aware of the essential importance of WATER (Solid - Liquid - Vapour) and the WATER CYCLE on Planet Earth. Without WATER we woul be lifeless like the MOON ! It is a complex MOLECULE a Universal Solvent which expands when it freezes and each ice crystal is a hexagonal diamond. I am a PHYSIOTHERAPIST and I stress to my Clients the importance of drinking EIGHT PINTS of water based fluids each day ! I love SCUBA DIVING and being a Water Baby ! Loved every word in your in your elegant Poem - Super Structure - Supa Subject H2O - AMEN. Please check our POEMS we have one on WATERFALLS - AWESOME !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA BRIAN
🧡 💙 🧡 💙 🧡
September 22nd, 2019 03:29
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks DUENA for your elegant Poem in praise of H2O ! Brian is an Environmental Scientist so is fully aware of the essential importance of WATER (Solid - Liquid - Vapour) and the WATER CYCLE on Planet Earth. Without WATER we woul be lifeless like the MOON ! It is a complex MOLECULE a Universal Solvent which expands when it freezes and each ice crystal is a hexagonal diamond. I am a PHYSIOTHERAPIST and I stress to my Clients the importance of drinking EIGHT PINTS of water based fluids each day ! I love SCUBA DIVING and being a Water Baby ! Loved every word in your in your elegant Poem - Super Structure - Supa Subject H2O - AMEN. Please check our POEMS we have one on WATERFALLS - AWESOME !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA BRIAN
🧡 💙 🧡 💙 🧡
September 22nd, 2019 03:29
DIABEETUS
kevin browne said:
I feel for you, Duenna Leya. I have had 21 years of type 1 diabetes which make a mockery of tryin to live a normal life. I have chronic pancreatitis and frequently end up in hospital for a week or two. I have wasted so much of my time trying to protect myself against the demise of my sickening body. I am now down to just under 9 stone since a year ago when I was always 12 stone throughout my life. You wrote an emotional poem which caught my heart. I wish you well together hand in hand to beat this aweful desease. Good luck at hitting your goals...
August 28th, 2019 01:17
kevin browne said:
I feel for you, Duenna Leya. I have had 21 years of type 1 diabetes which make a mockery of tryin to live a normal life. I have chronic pancreatitis and frequently end up in hospital for a week or two. I have wasted so much of my time trying to protect myself against the demise of my sickening body. I am now down to just under 9 stone since a year ago when I was always 12 stone throughout my life. You wrote an emotional poem which caught my heart. I wish you well together hand in hand to beat this aweful desease. Good luck at hitting your goals...
August 28th, 2019 01:17
LOFTY LOSER
sylviasearcher said:
When you think you have found it and then you realise it wasn’t what you thought. This made me want to be strong.
February 22nd, 2019 02:43
sylviasearcher said:
When you think you have found it and then you realise it wasn’t what you thought. This made me want to be strong.
February 22nd, 2019 02:43
Peaceful Town
orchidee said:
A good write D. Awasis = oasis?
Not morbid or depressing, and neither a fascination with death.
A sort of sub title might be: \'A walk through a graveyard\'.
December 16th, 2018 08:49
orchidee said:
A good write D. Awasis = oasis?
Not morbid or depressing, and neither a fascination with death.
A sort of sub title might be: \'A walk through a graveyard\'.
December 16th, 2018 08:49
Peaceful Town
Michael Edwards said:
This is a delightful read and you ask for reviews. I am predominantly an artist but in poetry as in art, to quote that awful idiom: beauty is in the eye of the beholder. You can seek the views of several \'experts\' and get different views from each of them. For me it reads as something from you and and I certainly couldn\'t have written it as you have. I could suggest some changes which I would make and which I feel might \'improve\' it but they may not be right for you. As for rules they are there to be broken and if you do you are not going to be arrested - if they are right for you go ahead and break them. Gosh aren\'t I rambling on - please forgive me.
December 16th, 2018 06:02
Michael Edwards said:
This is a delightful read and you ask for reviews. I am predominantly an artist but in poetry as in art, to quote that awful idiom: beauty is in the eye of the beholder. You can seek the views of several \'experts\' and get different views from each of them. For me it reads as something from you and and I certainly couldn\'t have written it as you have. I could suggest some changes which I would make and which I feel might \'improve\' it but they may not be right for you. As for rules they are there to be broken and if you do you are not going to be arrested - if they are right for you go ahead and break them. Gosh aren\'t I rambling on - please forgive me.
December 16th, 2018 06:02
A Rhyme for These Times
Poeticpayne said:
It speaks to me!
\'Satisfied through the feed\' is a life goal for some.... : (
Nice write.
December 14th, 2018 19:18
Poeticpayne said:
It speaks to me!
\'Satisfied through the feed\' is a life goal for some.... : (
Nice write.
December 14th, 2018 19:18
Body
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Addiction to chemicals is definitely a true mutha fucka...not sure what it is that you Are into but if it is heroin, it\'s the devil ..all of the opium in the world is owned and manufactured by he British Monarchy, who are not actually British at all..they are German Reptilians , but that\'s a whole other story...drugs have energies that they absorb, like everything else, and they come from who is in control of them...meth can be used for mind expansion if used in moderation, but people generally are unable to moderate anything that they become addicted to...if you are personally dealing with an addiction in your body, remember that the mind is much more powerful and that, ultimately, you are in control...nice write anyway...
December 2nd, 2018 14:20
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Addiction to chemicals is definitely a true mutha fucka...not sure what it is that you Are into but if it is heroin, it\'s the devil ..all of the opium in the world is owned and manufactured by he British Monarchy, who are not actually British at all..they are German Reptilians , but that\'s a whole other story...drugs have energies that they absorb, like everything else, and they come from who is in control of them...meth can be used for mind expansion if used in moderation, but people generally are unable to moderate anything that they become addicted to...if you are personally dealing with an addiction in your body, remember that the mind is much more powerful and that, ultimately, you are in control...nice write anyway...
December 2nd, 2018 14:20
Body
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Addiction to chemicals is definitely a true mutha fucka...not sure what it is that you Are into but if it is heroin, it\'s the devil ..all of the opium in the world is owned and manufactured by he British Monarchy, who are not actually British at all..they are German Reptilians , but that\'s a whole other story...drugs have energies that they absorb, like everything else, and they come from who is in control of them...meth can be used for mind expansion if used in moderation, but people generally are unable to moderate anything that they become addicted to...if you are personally dealing with an addiction in your body, remember that the mind is much more powerful and that, ultimately, you are in control...nice write anyway...
December 2nd, 2018 14:20
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Addiction to chemicals is definitely a true mutha fucka...not sure what it is that you Are into but if it is heroin, it\'s the devil ..all of the opium in the world is owned and manufactured by he British Monarchy, who are not actually British at all..they are German Reptilians , but that\'s a whole other story...drugs have energies that they absorb, like everything else, and they come from who is in control of them...meth can be used for mind expansion if used in moderation, but people generally are unable to moderate anything that they become addicted to...if you are personally dealing with an addiction in your body, remember that the mind is much more powerful and that, ultimately, you are in control...nice write anyway...
December 2nd, 2018 14:20
Body
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Your writings of the heart speak directly to the truth. You give only a glimpse of your world to the reader, that trumpets your words of desperation, but it is also a cry for help.
Although I enjoyed your poem of honesty, I would suggest you find ways of being with friends or calling them when you feel a bout of depression coming on.
Enjoy your life. Nothing is worth death. Write poetry, as you;ve done, instead. Cheer up! :-)
December 1st, 2018 17:43
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Your writings of the heart speak directly to the truth. You give only a glimpse of your world to the reader, that trumpets your words of desperation, but it is also a cry for help.
Although I enjoyed your poem of honesty, I would suggest you find ways of being with friends or calling them when you feel a bout of depression coming on.
Enjoy your life. Nothing is worth death. Write poetry, as you;ve done, instead. Cheer up! :-)
December 1st, 2018 17:43
Botany of Love Poem
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Nicely expressive write on lost love. Your images are vivid and I enjoyed the read. :-)
Thanks for sharing.
October 31st, 2018 15:06
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Nicely expressive write on lost love. Your images are vivid and I enjoyed the read. :-)
Thanks for sharing.
October 31st, 2018 15:06
Adulting
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
The lessons we learn as children will follow us through life. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem on growing up. Nicely written. Keep up the good work! :)
October 8th, 2018 15:40
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
The lessons we learn as children will follow us through life. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem on growing up. Nicely written. Keep up the good work! :)
October 8th, 2018 15:40
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