Comments received on poems by MaddieJ
You\'re like a deep breath in
BlueDays said:
I adore this feeling, you portrayed it well. Made me smile, thank you 😊
September 1st, 2017 15:33
BlueDays said:
I adore this feeling, you portrayed it well. Made me smile, thank you 😊
September 1st, 2017 15:33
You\'re like a deep breath in
FredPeyer said:
Great poem virago! That\'s why they call it \'floating on cloud 7\'!!! And if you can do that even in a grocery store, you\'ve got it made!
August 31st, 2017 23:58
FredPeyer said:
Great poem virago! That\'s why they call it \'floating on cloud 7\'!!! And if you can do that even in a grocery store, you\'ve got it made!
August 31st, 2017 23:58
Jelly Fish
WL Schuett said:
Title caught my eye first time I\'ve read one of your poems ,very good nice imagery and very poetic...
August 23rd, 2017 22:28
WL Schuett said:
Title caught my eye first time I\'ve read one of your poems ,very good nice imagery and very poetic...
August 23rd, 2017 22:28
\"People With A Past\"
WL Schuett said:
A cool poem and loved your comments you have a good outlook ....
August 17th, 2017 09:38
WL Schuett said:
A cool poem and loved your comments you have a good outlook ....
August 17th, 2017 09:38
The Green Abode
Nicholas Browning said:
You don\'t know what you\'ve got until it\'s gone. Beautiful.
August 17th, 2017 00:20
Nicholas Browning said:
You don\'t know what you\'ve got until it\'s gone. Beautiful.
August 17th, 2017 00:20
The Green Abode
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Must be an idyllic place that makes u express in prose nostalgic way. Yes we don\'t appreciate things until we lose them.
Thumbs up.
Do have a look at my writings But comment only on the one u like best.
August 17th, 2017 00:19
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Must be an idyllic place that makes u express in prose nostalgic way. Yes we don\'t appreciate things until we lose them.
Thumbs up.
Do have a look at my writings But comment only on the one u like best.
August 17th, 2017 00:19
Jelly Fish
FredPeyer said:
Virago your description of a jellyfish is so poetic and true. They are beautiful creatures. But living where I do, they are also to be avoided. Got stung a few times, meat tenderizer seems to help with the burning sensation created. But it\'s their ocean, not mine.
July 7th, 2017 12:57
FredPeyer said:
Virago your description of a jellyfish is so poetic and true. They are beautiful creatures. But living where I do, they are also to be avoided. Got stung a few times, meat tenderizer seems to help with the burning sensation created. But it\'s their ocean, not mine.
July 7th, 2017 12:57
Jelly Fish
kevin browne said:
stunning creature but can also turn deadly sometime when you swim in the wrong waters. love this.
July 7th, 2017 12:08
kevin browne said:
stunning creature but can also turn deadly sometime when you swim in the wrong waters. love this.
July 7th, 2017 12:08
Jelly Fish
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautiful imagery here, virago! A well written poem, indeed.
July 7th, 2017 10:16
Louis Gibbs said:
Beautiful imagery here, virago! A well written poem, indeed.
July 7th, 2017 10:16
\"Cycles\"
Louis Gibbs said:
A finely expressed rough outline of life ... but you omitted the exquisite moments in between, like love. Good poem, Virago!
June 29th, 2017 22:51
Louis Gibbs said:
A finely expressed rough outline of life ... but you omitted the exquisite moments in between, like love. Good poem, Virago!
June 29th, 2017 22:51
\"Cycles\"
FredPeyer said:
Virago, Love your poem! Remembered a definition of life I wrote quite a while ago during one of my more humorous days: You are born with nothing, then you study like crazy to learn things you never use, then you work like crazy to buy things you don\'t need, with money you don\'t have, then you die.
June 29th, 2017 19:55
FredPeyer said:
Virago, Love your poem! Remembered a definition of life I wrote quite a while ago during one of my more humorous days: You are born with nothing, then you study like crazy to learn things you never use, then you work like crazy to buy things you don\'t need, with money you don\'t have, then you die.
June 29th, 2017 19:55
The Green Abode
MaddieJ said:
Just wanted to throw out there that the photo is actually taken by me! @ my secret hideout near my new house.
June 7th, 2017 09:27
MaddieJ said:
Just wanted to throw out there that the photo is actually taken by me! @ my secret hideout near my new house.
June 7th, 2017 09:27
The Green Abode
swingline said:
Sounds like a much lower life of stress . Where \"Simple\" can\'t be stressed enough . And I sense coping with new environs is taxing your everything and you long for those purer days of your childhood .
June 7th, 2017 03:08
swingline said:
Sounds like a much lower life of stress . Where \"Simple\" can\'t be stressed enough . And I sense coping with new environs is taxing your everything and you long for those purer days of your childhood .
June 7th, 2017 03:08
For the Singles
Augustus said:
Where did a 20 year old come up with the word \"dreamboat\" that is from my era. Very nicely done.
June 4th, 2017 11:08
Augustus said:
Where did a 20 year old come up with the word \"dreamboat\" that is from my era. Very nicely done.
June 4th, 2017 11:08
For the Singles
swingline said:
We are all to be with someone by God\'s design . We often go about mucking it up most of the time . Mainly because we do not let God pick our mate but instead we go about it ourselves with all too often disastrous results .
June 4th, 2017 07:25
swingline said:
We are all to be with someone by God\'s design . We often go about mucking it up most of the time . Mainly because we do not let God pick our mate but instead we go about it ourselves with all too often disastrous results .
June 4th, 2017 07:25
To My Future Self
Augustus said:
All that turmoil takes one out of the present. Yet there are important questions to answer prior to moving on. Well done.
June 3rd, 2017 09:35
Augustus said:
All that turmoil takes one out of the present. Yet there are important questions to answer prior to moving on. Well done.
June 3rd, 2017 09:35
To My Future Self
P.H.Rose said:
Don\'t change a word !!!
It\'s very very good.
I love it......
June 3rd, 2017 03:04
P.H.Rose said:
Don\'t change a word !!!
It\'s very very good.
I love it......
June 3rd, 2017 03:04
To My Future Self
swingline said:
\"Make your worries small , mistakes forgot \" . Two essential keys to a successful life . One need not worry if their faith in Christ is strong and to cast our mistakes aside and forget about then because they will weigh us down like a boat anchor .
June 3rd, 2017 01:03
swingline said:
\"Make your worries small , mistakes forgot \" . Two essential keys to a successful life . One need not worry if their faith in Christ is strong and to cast our mistakes aside and forget about then because they will weigh us down like a boat anchor .
June 3rd, 2017 01:03
To My Future Self
MaddieJ said:
hahah posted my rough draft by accident so be kind in your judgements!!!!
June 3rd, 2017 00:11
MaddieJ said:
hahah posted my rough draft by accident so be kind in your judgements!!!!
June 3rd, 2017 00:11
Untitled
The Invisible said:
I like the poem. It\'s short yet holds a huge meaning.
June 2nd, 2017 18:51
The Invisible said:
I like the poem. It\'s short yet holds a huge meaning.
June 2nd, 2017 18:51
Untitled
MaddieJ said:
Thanks everyone for the warm welcome!! I have been searching for a place like this for a long time. Finally found a poetic community! I am in the great state of California! - Leya (US)
June 2nd, 2017 17:43
MaddieJ said:
Thanks everyone for the warm welcome!! I have been searching for a place like this for a long time. Finally found a poetic community! I am in the great state of California! - Leya (US)
June 2nd, 2017 17:43
Untitled
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LEYA ~ Thanks for your first poem which is bursting with positivity and possibility ! We all lie awake thinking of the future ~ and of course planning & praying for it. Thanks for caring ~ Every Blessing ~ BRIAN (UK) Are you in ALASKA or CALIFORNIA ? Both great States to be in ~ but there is a difference ! Please check my Poems ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK)
June 2nd, 2017 12:50
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LEYA ~ Thanks for your first poem which is bursting with positivity and possibility ! We all lie awake thinking of the future ~ and of course planning & praying for it. Thanks for caring ~ Every Blessing ~ BRIAN (UK) Are you in ALASKA or CALIFORNIA ? Both great States to be in ~ but there is a difference ! Please check my Poems ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK)
June 2nd, 2017 12:50
Untitled
Augustus said:
Welcome to MPS. There is excitement about plans for the future. We obscess about them awake and asleep. How wonderful to awaken excited. Nicely done.
June 2nd, 2017 06:49
Augustus said:
Welcome to MPS. There is excitement about plans for the future. We obscess about them awake and asleep. How wonderful to awaken excited. Nicely done.
June 2nd, 2017 06:49
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