Comments received on poems by Saima



Used To Be Daddy\'s Little Girl.
Poetic Dan said:

This was so beautifully sad, I thank you so much for sharing this pain.
My mother did the same now she is nothing but a name
But I promise you in life there is much to gain from this pain

With a style like yours, you\'ll learn to surf any wave!




April 7th, 2019 16:23

My mum\'s an actress.
Gino said:

Nice write Saima, but flawless expectations are always a dread upon anyone who is constantly victimized by the error of their ways.

January 23rd, 2019 13:10

My mum\'s an actress.
Claudelle DeLuna said:

Nice intuitive write! Syeda
it is unfortunate to not have a good relationship with our own mum
perhaps she has pain inside & might mirror it towards the daughter/mum relationship, just another way to understand.
😊

January 4th, 2019 22:20

Superficial Sea Soul.
whisperingquill said:

Exquisite

January 4th, 2019 18:39

The Reason I’m Hanging On•
Gino said:

Great write Saima. You are a very talented writer,...

October 27th, 2018 18:35

Justice Or Shame.
Saima said:

Don\'t be sorry it\'s ok and well it\'s just my opinion I guess I find all men shady. Thank you x

October 21st, 2018 08:14

Justice Or Shame.
Gino said:

Sorry for what happened to you, but you shouldn\'t think way of all men in general. It\'s tragic what happened, but I hope you\'ll heal surrounded by true people who love you. I\'m your friend if you need me...

October 21st, 2018 00:19

when will I get out?
Gino said:

Nice write my friend.

October 21st, 2018 00:11

They make my skin crawl.
Gino said:

Great write in a dark, and tragic way...I hope your past doesn\'t catch up to you, and you begin to heal...

October 21st, 2018 00:00

The Reason I’m Hanging On•
Crystal Hope said:

so incredibly written. very nice penning!

August 10th, 2018 19:22

All the Other Feelings With Love.
germanamericanchurch said:

Just add children into the mix
Then cheating is a childs tragedy,
Home wrecking, but control is for
The retentive :) Expression and creativity set us free, sky dive like monkeys amazed

December 14th, 2017 03:03

All the Other Feelings With Love.
deepthoughts said:

LOVE THIS!

December 13th, 2017 18:12

All the Other Feelings With Love.
Hoopie said:

U wrote a book lol nice write though

December 10th, 2017 01:43

Do You know what it\'s like?
Kat1 said:

Amazing writing. Love your style

December 9th, 2017 17:15

All the Other Feelings With Love.
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Lovely!

December 4th, 2017 13:05

Do You know what it\'s like?
Isabella said:

I like the truth in this. A lot of people either throw themselves out there for people to eat up, or don\'t say enough. This is brutally honest. I love that.

September 22nd, 2017 22:15

Deadly Choice
Saima said:

Wow thank you so much, honestly this has made me smile a lot and made my day! You don\'t know how much it means :)

July 27th, 2017 17:20

Accept the flaws of My Family
Poetic Dan said:

Nicely done, family is for life and we all definitely have our faults! Mine has a lot, and it\'s been hard get over being emotionally scarred. I\'ve broken the cycle as my own is forever, with this quote that stays in my heart.

While we teach our children about life
Our children teach us that life is about

July 24th, 2017 01:30

Accept the flaws of My Family
burning-embers said:

Fairy tale world. Try telling people who are abused by their birth parents that family is for life.

July 23rd, 2017 19:50

Accept the flaws of My Family
Krazee Poetry said:

Very intriguing and power in that. I love it.

July 23rd, 2017 18:14

Sleep away the Misery.
swingline said:

My dream world is so much nicer than reality . Fortunately I don\'t have to be asleep or in bed to drift off into my dream wold .

June 10th, 2017 12:11

~Smokes full of Pain~
Gino said:

When hope and love has been lost
And you fall to the ground
You must find a way
When the darkness descends
And you\'re told it\'s the end
You must find a way
When God decides to look the other way
And a clown takes the throne
We must find a way
Face the firing squad
Against all the odds
You will find a way

Dig down
Dig down
Dig down
And find faith
When you\'re close to the edge
With a gun to your head
You must find a way

When friends are thin on the ground
And they try to divide us
We must find a way
We have entered the fray
And we will not obey
We must find a way
Yeah

Dig down
Dig down
Dig down
And find faith
When they\'ve left you for dead (dig down)
And you can only see red (dig down)
You must find a way

Dig down
Dig down
Dig down
Find faith
We won\'t let them divide (dig down)
We will never abide (dig down)
We will find a way

Dig down
Dig down
Dig down
Faith
Dig down
Dig down
Faith...

by Muse....

This song by Muse helped me get over my pain in darkness...

June 10th, 2017 03:55

I Prefer Small Circles•
orchidee said:

And I swear...... you must be watching \'Neighbours\' too much! That\'s enough to make anyone.........whatever! heehee.

June 8th, 2017 10:05

I Prefer Small Circles•
Gino said:

People will always disappoint you, no matter who they are. Common sense usually prevails and keep faith till the very end. You are very talented, please keep writing...

June 8th, 2017 09:57

I Prefer Small Circles•
germanamericanchurch said:

Why is humanity such a cruel vision when life is a love song ?
As if our animal is twisted from the greed and lies to the earth

June 7th, 2017 22:30

Do You know what it\'s like?
Gino said:

Great write! Stay safe, and pray...

June 7th, 2017 15:27

Fearful Love
alisha said:

amazing

June 7th, 2017 12:12

Do You know what it\'s like?
Hopey_xx said:

A close friend of mine just admitted that she cuts to me. Do you have any advice? I want to help her stop, but im overwhelmed with my own thoughts and worries. Great write, by the way

June 7th, 2017 01:14

Do You know what it\'s like?
LAWLESS said:

I was in the asylum with a girl that was a model and a cutter, it was sad to witness but I guess there is a fascination with one\'s own blood. I\'m too chicken shit to do it.

June 6th, 2017 18:11

She Taught Me How To Trust.
The Invisible said:

Awe that\'s great! I\'m happy you have her.

June 5th, 2017 18:50

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