Comments received on poems by Justagirl
I hurt me
2781 said:
It\'s interesting how somehow we are hell bent on destroying ourselves.
I can relate, although it took me more years to realise.
November 18th, 2023 15:41
2781 said:
It\'s interesting how somehow we are hell bent on destroying ourselves.
I can relate, although it took me more years to realise.
November 18th, 2023 15:41
The love story that ends
Bobby O said:
It’s the perfect way to be. Authentically without agenda, offer up and share at high levels.
May 16th, 2023 02:28
Bobby O said:
It’s the perfect way to be. Authentically without agenda, offer up and share at high levels.
May 16th, 2023 02:28
The sounds in our head
L. B. Mek said:
when it comes to love - true love, there is no room for judgement, because it transcends our capacity to comprehend, just choose to trust:
yourself,
your \'chosen\' partner,
and whatever fate equates of your effort\'s,
only thing you can insure
is that there is no room for regret, give it all you\'ve got
and \'hope\' that\'s enough, if not...
allow yourself time to accept
taking baby steps, \'brush yourself-off, and begin again,\'
making the best of every opportunity you\'re gifted!
ikr so damn easy to type how-to manuals, that read so insensitively, generic...
(forgive my little impromptu sermon, I couldn\'t resist
thanks for inspiring me)
January 28th, 2021 05:21
L. B. Mek said:
when it comes to love - true love, there is no room for judgement, because it transcends our capacity to comprehend, just choose to trust:
yourself,
your \'chosen\' partner,
and whatever fate equates of your effort\'s,
only thing you can insure
is that there is no room for regret, give it all you\'ve got
and \'hope\' that\'s enough, if not...
allow yourself time to accept
taking baby steps, \'brush yourself-off, and begin again,\'
making the best of every opportunity you\'re gifted!
ikr so damn easy to type how-to manuals, that read so insensitively, generic...
(forgive my little impromptu sermon, I couldn\'t resist
thanks for inspiring me)
January 28th, 2021 05:21
The sounds in our head
Goldfinch60 said:
Love can always win even at a distance.
Andy
January 28th, 2021 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Love can always win even at a distance.
Andy
January 28th, 2021 01:51
The sounds in our head
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, great presentation. Distance relationships are difficult, but sometimes they do work. Look at it this way: If after college you two are still an item, it will last a lifetime. I know, I am married nearly 45 years! Good Luck!!!
January 27th, 2021 22:41
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, great presentation. Distance relationships are difficult, but sometimes they do work. Look at it this way: If after college you two are still an item, it will last a lifetime. I know, I am married nearly 45 years! Good Luck!!!
January 27th, 2021 22:41
Time
MendedFences27 said:
Write it all down girl. Your thoughts, your dreams, whatever you think about, write it down. It will open pathways for you. It will make contacts for you. It a great big world with room for everyone.
See what your poem did for me. A fine write. - Phil A.
July 22nd, 2020 22:38
MendedFences27 said:
Write it all down girl. Your thoughts, your dreams, whatever you think about, write it down. It will open pathways for you. It will make contacts for you. It a great big world with room for everyone.
See what your poem did for me. A fine write. - Phil A.
July 22nd, 2020 22:38
Smiles
FineB said:
Hello Trust,
A deep , sad and poignant poem.
Good!
Keep writing FineB
July 27th, 2019 10:16
FineB said:
Hello Trust,
A deep , sad and poignant poem.
Good!
Keep writing FineB
July 27th, 2019 10:16
What a WOMAN can do
Goldfinch60 said:
I agree with dusk arising, in my long life I have always treated women with respect and equality, and I am not alone in this. There are so many good men out there as there are ladies.
July 25th, 2019 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
I agree with dusk arising, in my long life I have always treated women with respect and equality, and I am not alone in this. There are so many good men out there as there are ladies.
July 25th, 2019 00:44
What a WOMAN can do
dusk arising said:
Oh dear, what a narrow perspective you have of men.
July 24th, 2019 17:37
dusk arising said:
Oh dear, what a narrow perspective you have of men.
July 24th, 2019 17:37
Music
Goldfinch60 said:
Music is in your soul and will be with you to eternity, as it will be with me.
July 24th, 2018 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Music is in your soul and will be with you to eternity, as it will be with me.
July 24th, 2018 01:24
Night\'s secrets
Rainbow said:
This is lovely. I love how you have expressed what the moon, the sky and the stars show you
July 23rd, 2018 00:49
Rainbow said:
This is lovely. I love how you have expressed what the moon, the sky and the stars show you
July 23rd, 2018 00:49
My love story
burning-embers said:
All of these things are manifestly true. Dont mock the man who is not yet man enough for you though. It could do him and his future partners harm.
July 26th, 2017 06:49
burning-embers said:
All of these things are manifestly true. Dont mock the man who is not yet man enough for you though. It could do him and his future partners harm.
July 26th, 2017 06:49
Too late
Gary Edward Geraci said:
\"Whomever\" with a capital \"W\"? To me, this can only come from one Lover; your Creator. Young women whom enter a religious community marry this Bridegroom, this Whomever. It\'s never too late. Or, a young women who finds a holy husband, marries him for life, and starts a family and has lots of children - through her marriage she is witnessing to all of her friends the true meaning of marriage: Christ\'s faithful love to his Bride - the Church. Your poem is quite prophetic- indeed you were \'made\' for this sort of nobility, this sort of Love. My prayer is that he finds you soon...
July 17th, 2017 22:26
Gary Edward Geraci said:
\"Whomever\" with a capital \"W\"? To me, this can only come from one Lover; your Creator. Young women whom enter a religious community marry this Bridegroom, this Whomever. It\'s never too late. Or, a young women who finds a holy husband, marries him for life, and starts a family and has lots of children - through her marriage she is witnessing to all of her friends the true meaning of marriage: Christ\'s faithful love to his Bride - the Church. Your poem is quite prophetic- indeed you were \'made\' for this sort of nobility, this sort of Love. My prayer is that he finds you soon...
July 17th, 2017 22:26
Too late
burning-embers said:
Sooner or later you\'re going to find the guy in your arms is a bit better and worth noticing. I only hope he isn\'t displaying the sentiments you are in your poem.
July 17th, 2017 21:56
burning-embers said:
Sooner or later you\'re going to find the guy in your arms is a bit better and worth noticing. I only hope he isn\'t displaying the sentiments you are in your poem.
July 17th, 2017 21:56
Suicidal
SorrowfullyHappy said:
trust me its not worth it i\'ve tried many times and many relatives dead to suicide it solves nothing
July 9th, 2017 01:16
SorrowfullyHappy said:
trust me its not worth it i\'ve tried many times and many relatives dead to suicide it solves nothing
July 9th, 2017 01:16
Growing up
FredPeyer said:
I am a father of three, all grown up with kids of their own. Believe me, it is as hard for parents to let go as it is for kids to find their own way.
Your poem is very good, and you give us all a lot of food for thought.
June 27th, 2017 19:42
FredPeyer said:
I am a father of three, all grown up with kids of their own. Believe me, it is as hard for parents to let go as it is for kids to find their own way.
Your poem is very good, and you give us all a lot of food for thought.
June 27th, 2017 19:42
King of mixed signals
FredPeyer said:
Good poem! What if you let him dangle for a change? The more you are NOT interested, the more the guy IS interested. Might be worth a try.
June 27th, 2017 19:40
FredPeyer said:
Good poem! What if you let him dangle for a change? The more you are NOT interested, the more the guy IS interested. Might be worth a try.
June 27th, 2017 19:40
My hell
FredPeyer said:
It has been a long long time, but I still do remember the pressures to \"fit in\". I don\'t know if it will help, but maybe read my poem \"Symphony\", it just might give you some answers.
June 27th, 2017 19:37
FredPeyer said:
It has been a long long time, but I still do remember the pressures to \"fit in\". I don\'t know if it will help, but maybe read my poem \"Symphony\", it just might give you some answers.
June 27th, 2017 19:37
King of mixed signals
P.H.Rose said:
I think this is a really
Good poem, very personal
To you but something
Everyone can relate to
June 23rd, 2017 17:26
P.H.Rose said:
I think this is a really
Good poem, very personal
To you but something
Everyone can relate to
June 23rd, 2017 17:26
My hell
Lars Persson said:
Nice work. Is high school a bad place? Or just a place where bad things happen? How can one be true to one\'s best self and still \"fit it?\" Keep writing!
June 22nd, 2017 18:19
Lars Persson said:
Nice work. Is high school a bad place? Or just a place where bad things happen? How can one be true to one\'s best self and still \"fit it?\" Keep writing!
June 22nd, 2017 18:19
