Comments received on poems by Brie
Wind
FredPeyer said:
Brie, I do like this poem! It is short, but well written. Nobody wants to be a wind-up toy, but too often we expect our loved ones to dance according to our tune.
As far as the threats are concerned, I have no idea who would even think of writing like that, and want you to know that I for one feel sad to see you go. But whatever you do, I do wish you all the best! :-)
October 9th, 2017 20:36
FredPeyer said:
Brie, I do like this poem! It is short, but well written. Nobody wants to be a wind-up toy, but too often we expect our loved ones to dance according to our tune.
As far as the threats are concerned, I have no idea who would even think of writing like that, and want you to know that I for one feel sad to see you go. But whatever you do, I do wish you all the best! :-)
October 9th, 2017 20:36
Burn
Simple-Man87 said:
This was powerful. Very descriptive and sad. Well done. I loved it. Thank you for sharing.
October 3rd, 2017 16:29
Simple-Man87 said:
This was powerful. Very descriptive and sad. Well done. I loved it. Thank you for sharing.
October 3rd, 2017 16:29
Liars
Pintu Mahakul said:
Just probably this is lied and this triggers mind. Amazing sharing is done.
October 2nd, 2017 15:35
Pintu Mahakul said:
Just probably this is lied and this triggers mind. Amazing sharing is done.
October 2nd, 2017 15:35
Liars
Mugsdaddy said:
A Razor\'s Edge you\'ve described here playing both sides of the mirror when it comes to the truth is how we lose ourselves.
Excellent write,
Mugsdaddy
October 2nd, 2017 15:30
Mugsdaddy said:
A Razor\'s Edge you\'ve described here playing both sides of the mirror when it comes to the truth is how we lose ourselves.
Excellent write,
Mugsdaddy
October 2nd, 2017 15:30
My Chains
FredPeyer said:
Strong writing with a clear message! You did well here, Brie! But forget the \'if\'. You WILL be whole again!
September 27th, 2017 21:40
FredPeyer said:
Strong writing with a clear message! You did well here, Brie! But forget the \'if\'. You WILL be whole again!
September 27th, 2017 21:40
Thief
Christina8 said:
Very nice poem! I remember early loves. I hope you heal soon!
September 26th, 2017 18:42
Christina8 said:
Very nice poem! I remember early loves. I hope you heal soon!
September 26th, 2017 18:42
Thief
FredPeyer said:
Brie, that\'s the problem with thieves, they don\'t care about the mess they leave behind.
Very nice poem, loved reading it!
September 26th, 2017 17:25
FredPeyer said:
Brie, that\'s the problem with thieves, they don\'t care about the mess they leave behind.
Very nice poem, loved reading it!
September 26th, 2017 17:25
Thief
WL Schuett said:
Nice poem my favorite part is that you didn\'t want to be fixed I\'m sure you will heal up fine
September 26th, 2017 16:20
WL Schuett said:
Nice poem my favorite part is that you didn\'t want to be fixed I\'m sure you will heal up fine
September 26th, 2017 16:20
Why
Isabella said:
This one is beautiful. I would be lying if I tried to comprehend the huge beast that is love. I don\'t know crap. But I love that you know how to just feel it.
September 22nd, 2017 21:19
Isabella said:
This one is beautiful. I would be lying if I tried to comprehend the huge beast that is love. I don\'t know crap. But I love that you know how to just feel it.
September 22nd, 2017 21:19
Why
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks BRIE ~ In my experience Love is elusive ~ Just when you think you have it and then it disappears ! I do ask WHY ~ but also (being older) I have to also ask HOW ~ WHEN ~ WHAT & WHERE ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poem ~ SEVEN ROSES .......... Thanks B.
September 10th, 2017 03:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks BRIE ~ In my experience Love is elusive ~ Just when you think you have it and then it disappears ! I do ask WHY ~ but also (being older) I have to also ask HOW ~ WHEN ~ WHAT & WHERE ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poem ~ SEVEN ROSES .......... Thanks B.
September 10th, 2017 03:39
She, He
FredPeyer said:
Sometimes it takes a lot to open somebody\'s eyes. Nicely penned!
August 29th, 2017 17:11
FredPeyer said:
Sometimes it takes a lot to open somebody\'s eyes. Nicely penned!
August 29th, 2017 17:11
Silver Moon
Egyptianqt79 said:
Wow !!!! This is definitely getting reread like a hundred times. This is absolutely amazing!!!!!
August 28th, 2017 23:20
Egyptianqt79 said:
Wow !!!! This is definitely getting reread like a hundred times. This is absolutely amazing!!!!!
August 28th, 2017 23:20
I\'ll be Here
Louis Gibbs said:
You sound like a good friend to have, Brie. Thanks for sharing this fine example of friendship with us.
August 12th, 2017 18:56
Louis Gibbs said:
You sound like a good friend to have, Brie. Thanks for sharing this fine example of friendship with us.
August 12th, 2017 18:56
I\'ll be Here
FredPeyer said:
Brie, thank you for a beautiful poem on how we should live! How often do we use the excuse \'no time\' instead of being there for somebody who truly needs us.
August 12th, 2017 17:20
FredPeyer said:
Brie, thank you for a beautiful poem on how we should live! How often do we use the excuse \'no time\' instead of being there for somebody who truly needs us.
August 12th, 2017 17:20
I see you, I know you
FredPeyer said:
Brie, I do like the way you structured this poem with all the repetitions. And I do feel the emotions of love, hurt, regret, and maybe a little bit of hope.
Well penned!
July 29th, 2017 20:36
FredPeyer said:
Brie, I do like the way you structured this poem with all the repetitions. And I do feel the emotions of love, hurt, regret, and maybe a little bit of hope.
Well penned!
July 29th, 2017 20:36
Dull Blade
FredPeyer said:
Brie, like your poem. Maybe a knife sharpener might have helped, but then you could not have written such a good poem.
July 28th, 2017 20:53
FredPeyer said:
Brie, like your poem. Maybe a knife sharpener might have helped, but then you could not have written such a good poem.
July 28th, 2017 20:53
Heartache
Saima said:
I absolutely love this...I understand how you feel...I promise it\'ll be okay after time, time will heal you x
July 27th, 2017 16:01
Saima said:
I absolutely love this...I understand how you feel...I promise it\'ll be okay after time, time will heal you x
July 27th, 2017 16:01
Promises
kevin browne said:
well covered and there is no forgery here. great reminder Brie.
July 23rd, 2017 18:43
kevin browne said:
well covered and there is no forgery here. great reminder Brie.
July 23rd, 2017 18:43
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