Comments received on poems by ummbree
smoke
L. B. Mek said:
great brevity!
smoke, is a word that lends itself
to so much freeing interpretation..
a wonderful write, thanks for sharing
April 14th, 2022 03:11
L. B. Mek said:
great brevity!
smoke, is a word that lends itself
to so much freeing interpretation..
a wonderful write, thanks for sharing
April 14th, 2022 03:11
and still, i wait
FredPeyer said:
I like this poem, ummbree. It is well written, describing the fall in vivid colors, then the rebirth. But at the end I had to ask myself why you are still waiting, and what you are waiting for.
October 2nd, 2017 22:07
FredPeyer said:
I like this poem, ummbree. It is well written, describing the fall in vivid colors, then the rebirth. But at the end I had to ask myself why you are still waiting, and what you are waiting for.
October 2nd, 2017 22:07
art
Goldfinch60 said:
The art within you when expressed onto canvas is always beautiful. Good write.
September 5th, 2017 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
The art within you when expressed onto canvas is always beautiful. Good write.
September 5th, 2017 01:23
empty
FredPeyer said:
Reading this made me think. Had to read it again. We are never empty, at least not empty of words!
August 29th, 2017 14:15
FredPeyer said:
Reading this made me think. Had to read it again. We are never empty, at least not empty of words!
August 29th, 2017 14:15
in my dreams
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written, ummbree! You turned this nightmare into a beautiful, though hard hitting poem. What I see in your writing is a strong, determined soul, who is not scared of anything. The monsters are there, yes, but you named them, thereby containing them. Nothing to be scared of, you are on your way to winning!
August 22nd, 2017 20:29
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written, ummbree! You turned this nightmare into a beautiful, though hard hitting poem. What I see in your writing is a strong, determined soul, who is not scared of anything. The monsters are there, yes, but you named them, thereby containing them. Nothing to be scared of, you are on your way to winning!
August 22nd, 2017 20:29
in my dreams
myself and me said:
\"I\'m not scared of getting old
I\'m scared of turning cold\"
Yes, it is the \'cold\' that horrified me. Depression, no way to exit.
Very well expressed.
August 22nd, 2017 19:38
myself and me said:
\"I\'m not scared of getting old
I\'m scared of turning cold\"
Yes, it is the \'cold\' that horrified me. Depression, no way to exit.
Very well expressed.
August 22nd, 2017 19:38
stone
Heather T said:
This is really good. My favorite lines :
When he says my name
It drops from his lips in every language
I can see every letter carve themselves in the empty side of my bed
August 16th, 2017 21:45
Heather T said:
This is really good. My favorite lines :
When he says my name
It drops from his lips in every language
I can see every letter carve themselves in the empty side of my bed
August 16th, 2017 21:45
stone
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, trust in people can sometimes be destroyed but there ARE trustworthy people out there and they are worth their weight in gold.
August 16th, 2017 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, trust in people can sometimes be destroyed but there ARE trustworthy people out there and they are worth their weight in gold.
August 16th, 2017 02:12
stone
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, ummbree! Yes, sometimes people are not what they seem.
August 16th, 2017 02:10
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, ummbree! Yes, sometimes people are not what they seem.
August 16th, 2017 02:10
careless
Staffnotesoul11 said:
We are all not perfect, but in perfect honesty if you were, i\'d say i am sorry. Never let anyone tear you down like that... I understand i come from a judgemental family myself, just keep going and being who you are. Pain is only momentary and their words can be popped like a ballon once you prove them wrong.
August 13th, 2017 20:04
Staffnotesoul11 said:
We are all not perfect, but in perfect honesty if you were, i\'d say i am sorry. Never let anyone tear you down like that... I understand i come from a judgemental family myself, just keep going and being who you are. Pain is only momentary and their words can be popped like a ballon once you prove them wrong.
August 13th, 2017 20:04
destroyed
burning-embers said:
Superb expression, Very powerful. Courageous too.
July 23rd, 2017 13:15
burning-embers said:
Superb expression, Very powerful. Courageous too.
July 23rd, 2017 13:15
destroyed
Seek said:
Wow! Thanks for reminding us that sanitized humanity should not be on the cards!
July 23rd, 2017 00:37
Seek said:
Wow! Thanks for reminding us that sanitized humanity should not be on the cards!
July 23rd, 2017 00:37
paper skin
Seek said:
\"...and die knowing that we exist in something outside of ourselves...\" Absolutely; oh for the courage needed to acknowledge this!
To know that we aren’t the only ones suffering, \" True, even if we do not actually know fellow sufferers, we are certain in the knowledge of shared human experiences. Fantastic!
July 23rd, 2017 00:34
Seek said:
\"...and die knowing that we exist in something outside of ourselves...\" Absolutely; oh for the courage needed to acknowledge this!
To know that we aren’t the only ones suffering, \" True, even if we do not actually know fellow sufferers, we are certain in the knowledge of shared human experiences. Fantastic!
July 23rd, 2017 00:34
paper skin
Louis Gibbs said:
Amazing what we put ourselves through and still we live on, described so well in this poem, Ummbree. Welcome back to MPS!
July 20th, 2017 11:46
Louis Gibbs said:
Amazing what we put ourselves through and still we live on, described so well in this poem, Ummbree. Welcome back to MPS!
July 20th, 2017 11:46
