Comments received on poems by Jewels



One for Domestic Abuse/Violence
Jewels said:

That\'s it, love is truly blind. When we take off out blinkers and see what\'s around us, that\'s when we see things from a different perspective and can act on it accordingly. Thank you for your comment.

June 1st, 2018 07:47

One for Domestic Abuse/Violence
Goldfinch60 said:

Very strong write, it is difficult to understand these type of relationships but they more common than is realised, our daughter was in a bad relationship, there was no physical abuse but the mental abuse was so profound, she did evetaully get away from him but the love was a harder thing to come to terms with.

June 1st, 2018 04:11

Govan lass (written in Glesga slang)
orchidee said:

A bit of French there?! I dunnae ken these things! I cannae say it\'s a bad write, cos it\'s good!
Or in posh English - very spiffing poem, old bean. Tally-ho, and all that rubbish! heehee.

March 29th, 2018 08:31

Govan lass (written in Glesga slang)
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write. Those weans certainly grow up fast, treasure them.

March 29th, 2018 01:29

Depression
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Great piece of “confessional” poetry. Your readers might also benefit from the excellent resources posted on NAMI.

March 28th, 2018 22:56

Govan lass (written in Glesga slang)
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Refreshing to see something like this every now and then. A good write and something different for a change. Got a good laugh too...

March 28th, 2018 22:53

Depression
Autumn May said:

Great message as someone who\'s fought this battle for many years before, I loved how you were able to put it in a way that could show people what the fight is like. Keep writing!

March 27th, 2018 19:08

I want you
Laura said:

An exquisite loving write, Julie!
Being a mom myself, I sincerely appreciate this poem! You have succinctly penned and expressed a parent‘s unconditional love for their children! As parents, that is what we want for our children. A love they deserve!

~Laura~

March 27th, 2018 18:11

Depression
WildMoonChild said:

This spoke to me on another level, so powerful and emotive! Made me really put myself in the shoes of someone going through this - I’ve never suffered myself but seen other people fight depression & they have my complete respect. Awesome write!

March 27th, 2018 17:54

I want you
Goldfinch60 said:

Fabulous write Jewels, your daughters will grow up strong and loving and you will obviously will always be there for them as my wife and I are for ours.

March 27th, 2018 00:22

I want you
Resa71 said:

I have a beautiful, amazing daughter.
Your poem brought tears to my eyes.
Well written poem.
It speaks directly from the heart, of a loving mother:)

March 26th, 2018 12:28

Heavenly stranger
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write about the power that Faith can achieve.
Welcome to MPS.

March 26th, 2018 01:04

Heavenly stranger
ron parrish aka wordman said:

it`s great when an act of kindness can mean so much

March 25th, 2018 21:23

Heavenly stranger
blessednloved said:

This is amazing! Glad I stopped to read this!

March 25th, 2018 20:00

Heavenly stranger
Laura said:

Beautiful poem, Jewels...
the writing and the act of
kindness!

~Laura~

March 25th, 2018 19:17

Heavenly stranger
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME JEWELS ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ thanks for sharing ! Well written and full of pathos and answered Prayer ! My experience is GOD does hear and answer Prayer ~ whoever we may be and however we may pray ~ AMEN Yours BRIAN ~ Loved the Picture ~ Beautiful ~ Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B

March 25th, 2018 18:23

Heavenly stranger
Noah said:

Such a beatific story with great rhyming. In a way I can relate to the woman at hand. I love that picture too!

March 25th, 2018 18:10