Comments received on poems by NaomiRayne
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Neville said:
it never ceases to amaze me just how many truths can be contained in brevity... a little gem and one to be remembered.... Neville
February 21st, 2019 06:25
Neville said:
it never ceases to amaze me just how many truths can be contained in brevity... a little gem and one to be remembered.... Neville
February 21st, 2019 06:25
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dusk arising said:
Yes it sure is. Collect as many as you can. Write them for your memory\'s sake. Reading them 40 years from now will take you straight back to them just as if you could smell the perfume of the first flowers a lover gave to you.
February 21st, 2019 01:55
dusk arising said:
Yes it sure is. Collect as many as you can. Write them for your memory\'s sake. Reading them 40 years from now will take you straight back to them just as if you could smell the perfume of the first flowers a lover gave to you.
February 21st, 2019 01:55
Choosing To Be Strong
psychofemale said:
been there, totally know how you feel with this ....hang in there.
January 30th, 2019 18:26
psychofemale said:
been there, totally know how you feel with this ....hang in there.
January 30th, 2019 18:26
Choosing To Be Strong
dusk arising said:
I see your learned wisdom reigning here. I read that you have suffered before and know that it is a part of life and that it will ease.
Wisdom comes and stays. Enigmatically it doesn\'t stop us making the same \'mistakes\' over and over.... well, there has to be some fun doesn\'t there!
January 30th, 2019 12:26
dusk arising said:
I see your learned wisdom reigning here. I read that you have suffered before and know that it is a part of life and that it will ease.
Wisdom comes and stays. Enigmatically it doesn\'t stop us making the same \'mistakes\' over and over.... well, there has to be some fun doesn\'t there!
January 30th, 2019 12:26
Choosing To Be Strong
kevin browne said:
Either way of your last 2 lines they\'re no choices. As maybe of these impossible and dreadful things could be happening to you there where your pain exists in your mind, heart and a desperate soul. Life is to understand how so many beautiful things in and around us are and to grab them to place them in your heart. Not to fear the clouds of confusion or frustrations, but to create landscapes of though in your mind so beautifully placed that you\'ll almost declare yourself a God. Keep your spirits up, not down.
January 30th, 2019 06:54
kevin browne said:
Either way of your last 2 lines they\'re no choices. As maybe of these impossible and dreadful things could be happening to you there where your pain exists in your mind, heart and a desperate soul. Life is to understand how so many beautiful things in and around us are and to grab them to place them in your heart. Not to fear the clouds of confusion or frustrations, but to create landscapes of though in your mind so beautifully placed that you\'ll almost declare yourself a God. Keep your spirits up, not down.
January 30th, 2019 06:54
Tell Me A Story
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Naomi, you\'ve written these lines from the heart, so from that perspective it is an enjoyable read.
Yet, I have one question on the last verse. You state your eyes won\'t open, then you say \"You need to come and put me to sleep.\"
If your eyes are already closed, didn\'t you mean you need to come to awaken me?
Just wondering. I still liked your poem. :-)
November 20th, 2018 18:10
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Naomi, you\'ve written these lines from the heart, so from that perspective it is an enjoyable read.
Yet, I have one question on the last verse. You state your eyes won\'t open, then you say \"You need to come and put me to sleep.\"
If your eyes are already closed, didn\'t you mean you need to come to awaken me?
Just wondering. I still liked your poem. :-)
November 20th, 2018 18:10
A Beautiful Area
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories are so great as are your words.
November 8th, 2018 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories are so great as are your words.
November 8th, 2018 01:42
Trust and Respect
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Lovely and emotional poem with depth, Rayne.
Nicely done! :)
September 26th, 2018 13:11
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Lovely and emotional poem with depth, Rayne.
Nicely done! :)
September 26th, 2018 13:11
Quiet
Frogspoetry said:
VERY GOOD,IT MAKES ME IMAGINE WHAT SHE IS HIDING FROM AND WHY.AS TIGER SAID,VERY MYSTERIOUS.
June 28th, 2018 22:00
Frogspoetry said:
VERY GOOD,IT MAKES ME IMAGINE WHAT SHE IS HIDING FROM AND WHY.AS TIGER SAID,VERY MYSTERIOUS.
June 28th, 2018 22:00
Starvation
poelove said:
this is beautiful/ I especially love the dichotomy of this line:
\'But instead I satisfy my physical wants
only speeding up the process of my weight loss.\' wonderful!
January 19th, 2018 21:23
poelove said:
this is beautiful/ I especially love the dichotomy of this line:
\'But instead I satisfy my physical wants
only speeding up the process of my weight loss.\' wonderful!
January 19th, 2018 21:23
Beautiful Wave
poelove said:
I agree /fear is the barrier to talents unaccomplished and trust is the threshold..nice write Rayne
January 17th, 2018 20:41
poelove said:
I agree /fear is the barrier to talents unaccomplished and trust is the threshold..nice write Rayne
January 17th, 2018 20:41
Only Response
WL Schuett said:
My only response is that this speaks to me of art ...and fun
January 16th, 2018 12:56
WL Schuett said:
My only response is that this speaks to me of art ...and fun
January 16th, 2018 12:56
The Old Personality
poelove said:
nice!
I enjoy reading as you seach for the truth, it is uplifting indeed, I am not trying to sound too archaic but I know with each correct step your eyes will be allowed to open a little more and the verses should begin to take on \'other\' meanings as they work there way to the one truth..be cautious the struggle as much as the reward is real.
January 16th, 2018 07:02
poelove said:
nice!
I enjoy reading as you seach for the truth, it is uplifting indeed, I am not trying to sound too archaic but I know with each correct step your eyes will be allowed to open a little more and the verses should begin to take on \'other\' meanings as they work there way to the one truth..be cautious the struggle as much as the reward is real.
January 16th, 2018 07:02
Only Response
Aislinn Wilson said:
This is very attention grabbing for a piece so bare
January 15th, 2018 20:30
Aislinn Wilson said:
This is very attention grabbing for a piece so bare
January 15th, 2018 20:30
Only Response
Michael Edwards said:
I don\'t know why but this really appeals to me - I love short works and often write one-liners - have you written any others.
January 15th, 2018 12:09
Michael Edwards said:
I don\'t know why but this really appeals to me - I love short works and often write one-liners - have you written any others.
January 15th, 2018 12:09
Focus
poelove said:
yes, staving desires like starving anything causes them to shrink...well said. peace
January 14th, 2018 14:58
poelove said:
yes, staving desires like starving anything causes them to shrink...well said. peace
January 14th, 2018 14:58
My God
poelove said:
Made me wnt to touch Jehovah..beautiful, He surlely sees you...peace
January 14th, 2018 14:55
poelove said:
Made me wnt to touch Jehovah..beautiful, He surlely sees you...peace
January 14th, 2018 14:55
Beautiful Wave
FredPeyer said:
What I really like about your well written poem is that I can read it literally. The wave really is a wave. Or, I can substitute nearly anything I want for the wave. Use it as a metaphor for love, for example.
Well done Rayne (or do you prefer Naomi?)
January 5th, 2018 11:14
FredPeyer said:
What I really like about your well written poem is that I can read it literally. The wave really is a wave. Or, I can substitute nearly anything I want for the wave. Use it as a metaphor for love, for example.
Well done Rayne (or do you prefer Naomi?)
January 5th, 2018 11:14
Her Breath
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written, Rayne!
You know, I don\'t think we will ever \'know\' a person completely, no matter how long we live together, no matter if they are related or not. Part of ourselves will always be hidden to others.
Your poem is thought provoking.
January 4th, 2018 22:32
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written, Rayne!
You know, I don\'t think we will ever \'know\' a person completely, no matter how long we live together, no matter if they are related or not. Part of ourselves will always be hidden to others.
Your poem is thought provoking.
January 4th, 2018 22:32
My God
FineB said:
Thank you Naomi
That was lovely.
God is good all the time.
Keep writing
FineB
November 28th, 2017 09:23
FineB said:
Thank you Naomi
That was lovely.
God is good all the time.
Keep writing
FineB
November 28th, 2017 09:23
The Old Personality
WL Schuett said:
Very nice I am searching also for the answer , maybe we don\'t have the same question but I definitely get your longing good writing , Rayne
October 16th, 2017 07:58
WL Schuett said:
Very nice I am searching also for the answer , maybe we don\'t have the same question but I definitely get your longing good writing , Rayne
October 16th, 2017 07:58
Focus
WL Schuett said:
Good write full of personal introspection, keep feeding that focus
October 11th, 2017 07:33
WL Schuett said:
Good write full of personal introspection, keep feeding that focus
October 11th, 2017 07:33
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