Comments received on poems by private poet



Betrayal
myself and me said:

Being betrayed is a deep wounds and takes a while to heal. Hope you out of this soon.
Well writing.

August 28th, 2017 15:35

Dark into Light
Nicholas Browning said:

Becoming better people one step at a time. Well said.

August 19th, 2017 06:59

After
Goldfinch60 said:

Super write. He will always be there looking after you. May your life be blessed with joy and love.

August 17th, 2017 00:34

After
myself and me said:

Hug from me. follow your heart. One thing for sure, he want you to be happy.
Well expressed.

August 16th, 2017 22:45

After
Accidental Poet said:

Separations are never easy. In time you\'ll learn to fly again, and with a new sense of pride. Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing.

August 16th, 2017 20:44

After
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 16th, 2017 13:27

After
Louis Gibbs said:

You sing the sad song of the widow so sweetly herein, PP. Well expressed!

August 16th, 2017 13:12

After
alissa said:

This is just lovely. I hope you find everything you are looking for.

August 16th, 2017 11:23

Low
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Wow what a beautifully sentimental poem on a soulmate passed on. Superbly lyrical and marvellous rhyme scheme. The soulful lonely feel described in appealing wording. Kudos.



Nice to read from u again. Hope u will write your thoughts too about my latest poem, under it. I have been writing on other sites and they say they get fun and things from It.

August 15th, 2017 13:10

Low
FredPeyer said:

PP, your beautifully written poem shows the struggle and pain inherent after a loss of a loved one. But it also shows that there is a light at the end of the tunnel.
It also reminded me how fortunate I am, and how grateful I have to be.

August 15th, 2017 12:19

Low
Night Owl said:

Yep feeling that-- authentic write!

August 15th, 2017 10:26

Low
Louis Gibbs said:

A plight shared by so many, women and men alike, as we age. You nailed it with this fine poem, PP!

August 15th, 2017 09:39

Without you
Heather T said:

My goodness, this heart just aches for you. I hope the love of family can help guide you through this tragic life change. You\'ve penned this so well.

July 30th, 2017 14:05

Without you
Fay Slimm. said:

The sudden loss of a loved one is always so challenging and your words in this verse outline the grief which loneliness brings - sincere condolences dear poetess and tho the saying seems trite I know from experience that time dulls the pain - keep hold of those memories that make you smile knowing he would want that.

July 30th, 2017 12:23

Ken
onepauly said:

I could feel love as I read this one.

July 27th, 2017 18:25

You
onepauly said:

I read a lot of poetry today and this is one of the few that deserves to be called a poem. I really enjoyed it. sad for your loss.

July 27th, 2017 18:17

Ken
Louis Gibbs said:

Two faces that unmistakenly radiate the beauty of their souls! So sorry for what has been lost to you, though only for a while. This is a beautiful tribute to him, p.p., thanks for sharing it!

July 27th, 2017 10:14

You
willyweed said:

Love is grand

July 25th, 2017 15:38

You
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

July 25th, 2017 11:30

You
charlesbarrett said:

Beautiful piece. Thank you for sharing. And Im very sorry for your loss.

July 25th, 2017 09:03

You
Louis Gibbs said:

He exudes goodness and contentment, and reflects the qualities your poem portrays. A fine tribute to a special man, p. p. Welcome to MPS!

July 25th, 2017 08:17

You
burning-embers said:

That\'s a beautiful poem PP. I hope you were rewarded with years of happiness and love. Many wonderful times to look back upon. Bless you.

July 25th, 2017 07:27