Comments received on poems by Thoff1

F Words
Michela Vismara said:

Away I love the humour in this. I say F it and go send her that letter!

July 3rd, 2018 13:43

Happy? #28319
onepauly said:

by all means.
be yourself.

May 3rd, 2018 07:26

A Field In Misery
FredPeyer said:

Well written, am trying to decipher the hidden meaning. Guess, need a little more time or some help.

January 25th, 2018 23:11

Fruit Salad
El_Pretzadente said:

Nice work!

January 11th, 2018 23:36

Mary\'s Mind 1
FredPeyer said:

True and something to think about.
Good poem, Tomo

January 4th, 2018 22:00

Citrus Runs Down Your Chin
FredPeyer said:

Great advice to anybody growing into adulthood!

December 7th, 2017 19:51

Citrus Runs Down Your Chin
Poem Goals said:

Like it! Try working on maybe the spacing

December 6th, 2017 22:15

In Flight
FredPeyer said:

And this well written poem proves your last line, Tomo!

December 5th, 2017 04:38

You are What is so Wonderful About this World
FredPeyer said:

A beautiful declaration of love, tomo!

October 31st, 2017 11:22

Wrapper in a Larger
FredPeyer said:

A tender and moving poem, Tomo! I assume the \'little lips\' belong to a child?

October 26th, 2017 23:21

Start Moving Soon
WL Schuett said:

Sounds like a lot of soul searching trying to find your way ,your own philosophy and to put it in play ... good for you to be able to write it all out

September 26th, 2017 22:20

Start Moving Soon
FredPeyer said:

Interesting read, Tomo. Sometimes you have to move on, sometimes it is better to put down roots. The more you give, the more you receive!

September 26th, 2017 21:32

My Rich Girl
malubotelho said:

I like the way you write. Very relaxing reading. Interesting story. Wish you luck with your girl.

September 21st, 2017 07:28

My Rich Girl
FredPeyer said:

Nice writing, Tomo, rich girls do have a different way about them. But usually they are also high maintenance.

September 21st, 2017 02:58

Examine Before Seventeen
FredPeyer said:

Well written, a lot of emotion. While it is true that you are who you are, you can also be who you want to be! :-)

August 31st, 2017 21:47

Just Thinking
WL Schuett said:

A tornado of a poem hope you work it out and fall to the side of hope

August 24th, 2017 21:03

Just Thinking
FredPeyer said:

Well written, Tomo!
As for the subject, I do not know you, but from what you are saying, you seem to be torn between throwing the towel and \'man, this life is great!\'. What is the right thing to do? Only you know the answer to that. As an old guy who has been around the block a few times, I would suggest not to worry too much. Don\'t overthink. Just do. If \'the girl\' is not interested, there are many more girls. Most people do not have more than two or maybe three really really good friends over a lifetime.
You seem to like writing, and you are good at it, so continue to write. I for one would like to read more from you.

August 24th, 2017 20:08

Just Thinking
dusk arising said:

Chill out and enjoy whatever your life brings to you.

August 24th, 2017 19:40

Just Thinking
myself and me said:

\"What will I be remembered as?
What will people think of me?
Will I be remembered at all?\"

Why it matters? Life is so short, simply live it with someone you love or live it alone, what ever way that you pleased.

It seems you are overwhelmed by your thoughts.

Well expressed.

August 24th, 2017 19:35

Inside Out and Double Thinking
myself and me said:

\"Life is only happy when you don\'t care very much\",
Good point, that\'s how simple happy is.
Love your writing.

August 20th, 2017 20:55

Sestina 1
myself and me said:

It is such a hard poetic format to follow. Congratulation, you did such a good job.

August 12th, 2017 20:55

Cheer Up, It Ain\'t So Bad
malubotelho said:

Awesome writing. I really like your poem. It begins sad but after it is cheerful.

August 10th, 2017 20:32

Cheer Up, It Ain\'t So Bad
WL Schuett said:

Heartfelt it helps to write about the easy times and hard times . A good release

August 10th, 2017 19:57

Cheer Up, It Ain\'t So Bad
myself and me said:

Life without challenge is boring, isn\'t it? You have a good start, so keep going, have as much fun as you could. Nice writing.

August 10th, 2017 12:08