Comments received on poems by Tirzah Juarez
Still Desire You So
edwinknox said:
I read this poem three times. Loved it a little bit more with each read. Great writing!
April 4th, 2018 21:10
edwinknox said:
I read this poem three times. Loved it a little bit more with each read. Great writing!
April 4th, 2018 21:10
Nocturne 82
dusk arising said:
\'I wasted life upon the brink
A barge floating across the kitchen sink\'
Thats just so damned funny or sad - can\'t make my mind up which way to see it.
Nice work.
January 28th, 2018 12:52
dusk arising said:
\'I wasted life upon the brink
A barge floating across the kitchen sink\'
Thats just so damned funny or sad - can\'t make my mind up which way to see it.
Nice work.
January 28th, 2018 12:52
It\'ll be Dark Soon..
orchidee said:
Cooeee! Daylight now? Where do you go in the day?! Eeek, I shall carve poetry on wood or something, not on my skin!
September 5th, 2017 08:07
orchidee said:
Cooeee! Daylight now? Where do you go in the day?! Eeek, I shall carve poetry on wood or something, not on my skin!
September 5th, 2017 08:07
Today is No Longer Mine
Tirzah Juarez said:
A quintain. What an observation. I didn\'t think of that. You are a character. Thanks Brian!
August 29th, 2017 06:25
Tirzah Juarez said:
A quintain. What an observation. I didn\'t think of that. You are a character. Thanks Brian!
August 29th, 2017 06:25
Today is No Longer Mine
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for your first poem TIRZAH ~ Perfect inits structure ~ Gothic in its substance ! It resembles the Japanese form SEDOKA in which two quintains are presented as one poem ~ with the same subject but from a differing perspective. Our life on Earth is not Eternal and we must all pass into the next plane of consciousness sometime. The poetic contemplation of that can be very cathartic. This is expressed perfectly in your first QUINTAIN and it made me less afraid of physical death ~ gracias. The comets are indeed only visible in the absence of the SUN ! In the second Quatrain I love the concept that you hand \"this life\" back to Mother Earth as you journey into the next Astral Plane. Please let me know if you appreciated my interpretation of another Fantasy Poem ~ Yours BRIAN
August 28th, 2017 07:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for your first poem TIRZAH ~ Perfect inits structure ~ Gothic in its substance ! It resembles the Japanese form SEDOKA in which two quintains are presented as one poem ~ with the same subject but from a differing perspective. Our life on Earth is not Eternal and we must all pass into the next plane of consciousness sometime. The poetic contemplation of that can be very cathartic. This is expressed perfectly in your first QUINTAIN and it made me less afraid of physical death ~ gracias. The comets are indeed only visible in the absence of the SUN ! In the second Quatrain I love the concept that you hand \"this life\" back to Mother Earth as you journey into the next Astral Plane. Please let me know if you appreciated my interpretation of another Fantasy Poem ~ Yours BRIAN
August 28th, 2017 07:59
Feeling Alive
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HOLA TIRZAH ~ i have started to read your Poems ~ and I love them ! They have a mystical quality about them (often missing from other MPS Poets) which leaves the interpretation to the reader and most (because of this ?) seem reluctant to comment. Love the title ~ it\'s a holiday in the Uk so \"i\'m feeling alive !\" When we are young we all enjoy being lifted through \"substances\" to a \"higher astral plane\" ~ Rhythms of our brainwaves heightened\" \"halcyon days experienced\" and when we are young Death seems a distant fantasy ~ so we laugh in his face ! Thanks for sharing ~ please comment on my comment ~ yours BRIAN (UK)
August 28th, 2017 07:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HOLA TIRZAH ~ i have started to read your Poems ~ and I love them ! They have a mystical quality about them (often missing from other MPS Poets) which leaves the interpretation to the reader and most (because of this ?) seem reluctant to comment. Love the title ~ it\'s a holiday in the Uk so \"i\'m feeling alive !\" When we are young we all enjoy being lifted through \"substances\" to a \"higher astral plane\" ~ Rhythms of our brainwaves heightened\" \"halcyon days experienced\" and when we are young Death seems a distant fantasy ~ so we laugh in his face ! Thanks for sharing ~ please comment on my comment ~ yours BRIAN (UK)
August 28th, 2017 07:40
Not for Me
FredPeyer said:
Great poem Tirzah, I like all of it, but these lines somehow stuck out and grabbed me: \'For the pine\'s been uprooted, I fathom, room for the weeds\'
August 22nd, 2017 12:16
FredPeyer said:
Great poem Tirzah, I like all of it, but these lines somehow stuck out and grabbed me: \'For the pine\'s been uprooted, I fathom, room for the weeds\'
August 22nd, 2017 12:16
After You Left
rrodriguez said:
Now you\'re not at MPS. We\'re here to share with you and encourage you. Nicely done!
August 20th, 2017 19:15
rrodriguez said:
Now you\'re not at MPS. We\'re here to share with you and encourage you. Nicely done!
August 20th, 2017 19:15
Rays of Sun
rrodriguez said:
I found you poem intriguing. Very metaphorical and unique.
August 19th, 2017 21:19
rrodriguez said:
I found you poem intriguing. Very metaphorical and unique.
August 19th, 2017 21:19
Today is No Longer Mine
Nicholas Browning said:
Passing of the torch? Can\'t say. What I can say is that I enjoy the darker theme. Nice.
August 17th, 2017 13:08
Nicholas Browning said:
Passing of the torch? Can\'t say. What I can say is that I enjoy the darker theme. Nice.
August 17th, 2017 13:08
My Dead Compadre
Frank Prem said:
I like the flow and feel of this piece. Well done.
August 14th, 2017 23:55
Frank Prem said:
I like the flow and feel of this piece. Well done.
August 14th, 2017 23:55
Old Ruin
Heather T said:
Tirzah, welcome! These images tessallate the page with emotive mosaics. An old ruin can be a deep well.
August 13th, 2017 23:31
Heather T said:
Tirzah, welcome! These images tessallate the page with emotive mosaics. An old ruin can be a deep well.
August 13th, 2017 23:31
Old Ruin
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to MPS, Tirzah!
Beautiful poem, \'While I waltz alone in the midnight sprinkles\', great imagination and choice of words.
I really like your poem and hope to read more in the future.
August 13th, 2017 22:05
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to MPS, Tirzah!
Beautiful poem, \'While I waltz alone in the midnight sprinkles\', great imagination and choice of words.
I really like your poem and hope to read more in the future.
August 13th, 2017 22:05
