Comments received on poems by C.L.
The Road not Taken
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Many are cautious about taking that road but that first step on it can open up our future lives.
August 25th, 2017 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Many are cautious about taking that road but that first step on it can open up our future lives.
August 25th, 2017 01:06
Mine.
destinyk said:
Your\'e mind is so passionate. I have a large appreciation for your work.
August 24th, 2017 20:59
destinyk said:
Your\'e mind is so passionate. I have a large appreciation for your work.
August 24th, 2017 20:59
Mine.
destinyk said:
Your\'e mind is so passionate. I have a large appreciation for your work.
August 24th, 2017 20:59
destinyk said:
Your\'e mind is so passionate. I have a large appreciation for your work.
August 24th, 2017 20:59
The Road not Taken
FredPeyer said:
Very well penned, C.L.
We tend to wonder if the other road would have been better, where it would have led us, and if there really is a pot of gold at the end of the rainbow. But, alas, we will never know.
August 24th, 2017 20:14
FredPeyer said:
Very well penned, C.L.
We tend to wonder if the other road would have been better, where it would have led us, and if there really is a pot of gold at the end of the rainbow. But, alas, we will never know.
August 24th, 2017 20:14
Mine.
FredPeyer said:
I truly like your poem, C.L. When you are in love this is exactly how it is. But when you get married it changes a little bit to: What is yours is yours, and what is mine is yours too!
August 23rd, 2017 22:39
FredPeyer said:
I truly like your poem, C.L. When you are in love this is exactly how it is. But when you get married it changes a little bit to: What is yours is yours, and what is mine is yours too!
August 23rd, 2017 22:39
Tomorrow
b-LAH-que said:
I read this poem like, four times in a row because I liked it so much. And wraps up so perfectly at the end. Buuut, you might wanna re-read the first line of the third verse though, I think you may have forgotten something there.. Anyway, Well done!
August 22nd, 2017 23:51
b-LAH-que said:
I read this poem like, four times in a row because I liked it so much. And wraps up so perfectly at the end. Buuut, you might wanna re-read the first line of the third verse though, I think you may have forgotten something there.. Anyway, Well done!
August 22nd, 2017 23:51
