Comments received on poems by TN96
Loyal Until the End
MaddieJ said:
I had a guinea pig named Bubba who was my best friend and saw me through rough times. I wrote a tribute poem for him when he passed as well.. I think they do deserve a proper send off! Good write. You did Cleo proud!
September 4th, 2017 23:52
MaddieJ said:
I had a guinea pig named Bubba who was my best friend and saw me through rough times. I wrote a tribute poem for him when he passed as well.. I think they do deserve a proper send off! Good write. You did Cleo proud!
September 4th, 2017 23:52
Loyal Until the End
Accidental Poet said:
Rest in peace Cleo. For again you\'ll be with your human family.
Beautifully written. ; )
September 4th, 2017 15:43
Accidental Poet said:
Rest in peace Cleo. For again you\'ll be with your human family.
Beautifully written. ; )
September 4th, 2017 15:43
Guess the Character
FredPeyer said:
Wasn\'t sure, but did think of Sherlock Holmes. Brilliantly written, TN!
September 4th, 2017 14:01
FredPeyer said:
Wasn\'t sure, but did think of Sherlock Holmes. Brilliantly written, TN!
September 4th, 2017 14:01
Loyal Until the End
FredPeyer said:
A very nice and moving poem. Well done, TN
September 4th, 2017 13:11
FredPeyer said:
A very nice and moving poem. Well done, TN
September 4th, 2017 13:11
Loyal Until the End
orchidee said:
Aww they do stay loyal. Dogs too! We had a semi-adopted neighbours cat recently. Lived with us almost during the past 10 years or so.
September 4th, 2017 08:47
orchidee said:
Aww they do stay loyal. Dogs too! We had a semi-adopted neighbours cat recently. Lived with us almost during the past 10 years or so.
September 4th, 2017 08:47
Guess the Character
orchidee said:
Is it Sherlock, or Conan Doyle, that\'s the answer?
September 4th, 2017 08:44
orchidee said:
Is it Sherlock, or Conan Doyle, that\'s the answer?
September 4th, 2017 08:44
Loyal Until the End
Seek said:
I can relate to this, being a cat freak myself. You write of your queen with such affection!
September 4th, 2017 07:53
Seek said:
I can relate to this, being a cat freak myself. You write of your queen with such affection!
September 4th, 2017 07:53
Guess the Character
MaddieJ said:
Really enjoyed reading this! I love poems about characters! Good write!
September 3rd, 2017 22:28
MaddieJ said:
Really enjoyed reading this! I love poems about characters! Good write!
September 3rd, 2017 22:28
Guess the Character
dusk arising said:
Had to be sherlock. Aaaah tiz quiz nite - evenings draw in and sundays are for huddling around a good quiz - or not. Nice writing. Please comment on my stuff.
September 3rd, 2017 15:03
dusk arising said:
Had to be sherlock. Aaaah tiz quiz nite - evenings draw in and sundays are for huddling around a good quiz - or not. Nice writing. Please comment on my stuff.
September 3rd, 2017 15:03
Guess the Character
TN96 said:
Hood and orchidee, both correct! I got an audio book containing every single book on a trial with Audible for free a while back. Still working through them
September 3rd, 2017 13:15
TN96 said:
Hood and orchidee, both correct! I got an audio book containing every single book on a trial with Audible for free a while back. Still working through them
September 3rd, 2017 13:15
Guess the Character
orchidee said:
Conan Doyle / Sherlock Holmes? He had some weird things, I think.
September 3rd, 2017 11:59
orchidee said:
Conan Doyle / Sherlock Holmes? He had some weird things, I think.
September 3rd, 2017 11:59
The War of Fulfilment
orchidee said:
Hmm, bit like digging a pit, while we\'re still in the pit?! I suppose we can all do that at times.
September 3rd, 2017 08:54
orchidee said:
Hmm, bit like digging a pit, while we\'re still in the pit?! I suppose we can all do that at times.
September 3rd, 2017 08:54
Why Glob Created The Universe
orchidee said:
Well, I dunno about this Glob chappie., but a fine write. I see it a teensy bit different in reality! lol.
September 3rd, 2017 08:53
orchidee said:
Well, I dunno about this Glob chappie., but a fine write. I see it a teensy bit different in reality! lol.
September 3rd, 2017 08:53
The Roots Still Dream In the Land Of the Free
Accidental Poet said:
And relate that I do. I live here in the US and I\'m none too happy with the direction our new (so called) leader is taking us. I hope we can impeach him soon. Great write here TN.
Side note: I love the note you left in BlueDays entry of \"Blood On the Bed\". ; )
September 2nd, 2017 08:50
Accidental Poet said:
And relate that I do. I live here in the US and I\'m none too happy with the direction our new (so called) leader is taking us. I hope we can impeach him soon. Great write here TN.
Side note: I love the note you left in BlueDays entry of \"Blood On the Bed\". ; )
September 2nd, 2017 08:50
The War of Fulfilment
TN96 said:
And thankyou to everyone else! The welcome I have had to this site is heartwarming, I\'m really beginning to enjoy doing these! I have been playing around with a few different ideas and themes, I will be sure to upload them soon.
September 2nd, 2017 05:43
TN96 said:
And thankyou to everyone else! The welcome I have had to this site is heartwarming, I\'m really beginning to enjoy doing these! I have been playing around with a few different ideas and themes, I will be sure to upload them soon.
September 2nd, 2017 05:43
The War of Fulfilment
myself and me said:
\"Now the cure is quite simple,
One must truly decide,
To focus not on the hole,
But on its outside, \"
Thank you for this cure. I really need it now.
Nice poem.
September 1st, 2017 19:49
myself and me said:
\"Now the cure is quite simple,
One must truly decide,
To focus not on the hole,
But on its outside, \"
Thank you for this cure. I really need it now.
Nice poem.
September 1st, 2017 19:49
The War of Fulfilment
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, great meaning, a beautiful and thought provoking poem! Kudos!
September 1st, 2017 12:45
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, great meaning, a beautiful and thought provoking poem! Kudos!
September 1st, 2017 12:45
The Roots Still Dream In the Land Of the Free
FredPeyer said:
Like your poem, NT. I used to know what \'The American Dream\' meant, not so sure anymore. For many it turned into \'the American Nightmare\'. After the 2nd WW, the \'American Dream\' was taylor-made for the US middle class. Unfortunately, this middle class seems to be going the way of the dinosaur. And so is the so-called \'American Dream\'.
Very well written poem!
August 31st, 2017 11:27
FredPeyer said:
Like your poem, NT. I used to know what \'The American Dream\' meant, not so sure anymore. For many it turned into \'the American Nightmare\'. After the 2nd WW, the \'American Dream\' was taylor-made for the US middle class. Unfortunately, this middle class seems to be going the way of the dinosaur. And so is the so-called \'American Dream\'.
Very well written poem!
August 31st, 2017 11:27
Entrapment
FredPeyer said:
Your brain, TN, is a wondrous thing. Something can be brewing without consciousness being aware and then, suddenly, it appears. Looks like this happened to you. Or, maybe, you just watched too much Games of Thrones. :-)
I like your writing, but remember, I am no expert, like your rhyming .
August 31st, 2017 11:19
FredPeyer said:
Your brain, TN, is a wondrous thing. Something can be brewing without consciousness being aware and then, suddenly, it appears. Looks like this happened to you. Or, maybe, you just watched too much Games of Thrones. :-)
I like your writing, but remember, I am no expert, like your rhyming .
August 31st, 2017 11:19
The Roots Still Dream In the Land Of the Free
poetboy123 said:
A world taken by those hidden in shadows. Stupendous write!
August 31st, 2017 09:40
poetboy123 said:
A world taken by those hidden in shadows. Stupendous write!
August 31st, 2017 09:40
Entrapment
TN96 said:
Thanks you everyone for your feedback ☺️ I may try writing something new
August 30th, 2017 16:05
TN96 said:
Thanks you everyone for your feedback ☺️ I may try writing something new
August 30th, 2017 16:05
Entrapment
Louis Gibbs said:
You, or your muse who has introduced itself to you this way, have tapped into the new awareness that is taking hold in more and more minds as our world approaches a tipping point in its evolution. Congratulations, and be pleased with this new level of your consciousness! Same thing happened with me in 2005. Keep yourself tuned into this precious contact, is my advice.
Welcome to MPS!
August 30th, 2017 14:42
Louis Gibbs said:
You, or your muse who has introduced itself to you this way, have tapped into the new awareness that is taking hold in more and more minds as our world approaches a tipping point in its evolution. Congratulations, and be pleased with this new level of your consciousness! Same thing happened with me in 2005. Keep yourself tuned into this precious contact, is my advice.
Welcome to MPS!
August 30th, 2017 14:42
