Comments received on poems by Marek
In Exchange
sorenbarrett said:
Belief is the key to virtually all things. Very nicely written my friend.
April 28th, 2026 14:36
sorenbarrett said:
Belief is the key to virtually all things. Very nicely written my friend.
April 28th, 2026 14:36
In Exchange
Friendship said:
nicely written. Your poem \"In Exchange\" revolves around the complexities of relationships, the interplay of choice and consequence, and the enduring nature of feelings despite past mistakes.
April 28th, 2026 09:50
Friendship said:
nicely written. Your poem \"In Exchange\" revolves around the complexities of relationships, the interplay of choice and consequence, and the enduring nature of feelings despite past mistakes.
April 28th, 2026 09:50
Vital Wind
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last two lines that give ultimate meaning to this poem that speaks of breath as life itself and so it was thought anciently with the verb to be coming from the word for life for it was only if a thing was breathing the it could be said to be alive. And so the biblical word for god I am is the derivative of life itself. Lovely and a fave
April 25th, 2026 10:36
sorenbarrett said:
It is the last two lines that give ultimate meaning to this poem that speaks of breath as life itself and so it was thought anciently with the verb to be coming from the word for life for it was only if a thing was breathing the it could be said to be alive. And so the biblical word for god I am is the derivative of life itself. Lovely and a fave
April 25th, 2026 10:36
Mutual Matters
RSM0812 said:
The quaility of companionship in this poem is explained elegantly and with a lurid wisdom. Nicley done.
April 25th, 2026 04:19
RSM0812 said:
The quaility of companionship in this poem is explained elegantly and with a lurid wisdom. Nicley done.
April 25th, 2026 04:19
Sightless Insight
Doggerel Dave said:
Medications available for use in a psychiatric environment are crude with multiple side effects. But they are all psychiatry has at its disposal.
I hope that laying it out as you have here provides some relief(if only a little.)
April 23rd, 2026 17:18
Doggerel Dave said:
Medications available for use in a psychiatric environment are crude with multiple side effects. But they are all psychiatry has at its disposal.
I hope that laying it out as you have here provides some relief(if only a little.)
April 23rd, 2026 17:18
Sightless Insight
sorenbarrett said:
This is an existential reflective poem that flows well. Nicely done
April 23rd, 2026 11:31
sorenbarrett said:
This is an existential reflective poem that flows well. Nicely done
April 23rd, 2026 11:31
Sightless Insight
Friendship said:
A well-written poem. Your poem delves into themes of mental illness, societal indifference, and the burden of medication. It addresses feelings of despair, loneliness, and the desire for freedom from one\'s own mind while also critiquing the stigma and misunderstanding surrounding mental health.
April 23rd, 2026 07:41
Friendship said:
A well-written poem. Your poem delves into themes of mental illness, societal indifference, and the burden of medication. It addresses feelings of despair, loneliness, and the desire for freedom from one\'s own mind while also critiquing the stigma and misunderstanding surrounding mental health.
April 23rd, 2026 07:41
Mutual Matters
Marek said:
Thanks so much for your comments, I always like to read them.
April 22nd, 2026 21:51
Marek said:
Thanks so much for your comments, I always like to read them.
April 22nd, 2026 21:51
Mutual Matters
sorenbarrett said:
Clever rhyme scheme AA, BB. CCC, DDD nicely done
April 22nd, 2026 16:09
sorenbarrett said:
Clever rhyme scheme AA, BB. CCC, DDD nicely done
April 22nd, 2026 16:09
Always With Me
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of relationship and family. A lovely write
April 21st, 2026 11:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of relationship and family. A lovely write
April 21st, 2026 11:43
Trust In Each Other
marissa said:
The power of healing,beautiful poem it would’ve helped for when i was 18 and thought a breakup was the end of my world
April 18th, 2026 14:53
marissa said:
The power of healing,beautiful poem it would’ve helped for when i was 18 and thought a breakup was the end of my world
April 18th, 2026 14:53
Morning Sunlight
sorenbarrett said:
You are right a nature form is a haiku those about relationships are senryu. Nicely done and nicely imaged. Very nice
March 14th, 2026 11:22
sorenbarrett said:
You are right a nature form is a haiku those about relationships are senryu. Nicely done and nicely imaged. Very nice
March 14th, 2026 11:22
A Friend In Me
sorenbarrett said:
It is inspiring and very nicely said. A lovely write
March 13th, 2026 19:09
sorenbarrett said:
It is inspiring and very nicely said. A lovely write
March 13th, 2026 19:09
Free To Fly - Version 2
sorenbarrett said:
The issue of how we indiscriminately interrupt nature and the lack of wisdom in this. Well done
February 28th, 2026 16:48
sorenbarrett said:
The issue of how we indiscriminately interrupt nature and the lack of wisdom in this. Well done
February 28th, 2026 16:48
Past Ablaze, Awakened Today
HangingbyaHalo said:
Sometimes it is difficult to walk forward without turning around. In a sense the Lookback can offer you A new perspective on what used to be. It’s only when you allow it to stop you from continuing to put one foot in front of the other that it controls you. I wish you all the love in the world in your journey forward.
May 30th, 2018 21:23
HangingbyaHalo said:
Sometimes it is difficult to walk forward without turning around. In a sense the Lookback can offer you A new perspective on what used to be. It’s only when you allow it to stop you from continuing to put one foot in front of the other that it controls you. I wish you all the love in the world in your journey forward.
May 30th, 2018 21:23
More Than Words
Alf W said:
Your words are full of feeling and emotion and I can read your heart as I absorb what you have written. You are right.. sometimes we love with our heads and not our heart. Words come easily, but feelings run deeper.
November 29th, 2017 07:08
Alf W said:
Your words are full of feeling and emotion and I can read your heart as I absorb what you have written. You are right.. sometimes we love with our heads and not our heart. Words come easily, but feelings run deeper.
November 29th, 2017 07:08
I Hurt Too
dusk arising said:
On it\'s own it stands up well. Romance, mystery, loss. pain, love.... inviting my minds eye to paint pictures, my imagination to create story, my heart to enjoy the loving warmth. What more could your reader ask for - its all there. Exceptional. Please comment on my stuff.
September 6th, 2017 20:32
dusk arising said:
On it\'s own it stands up well. Romance, mystery, loss. pain, love.... inviting my minds eye to paint pictures, my imagination to create story, my heart to enjoy the loving warmth. What more could your reader ask for - its all there. Exceptional. Please comment on my stuff.
September 6th, 2017 20:32
I Hurt Too
myself and me said:
Your love will be remembered for sure. Nice writing.
September 6th, 2017 12:59
myself and me said:
Your love will be remembered for sure. Nice writing.
September 6th, 2017 12:59
Me And You
myself and me said:
I know that kind of pain. I was killed by the pain, now I was reborn and much stronger.
Nice writing.
September 5th, 2017 17:46
myself and me said:
I know that kind of pain. I was killed by the pain, now I was reborn and much stronger.
Nice writing.
September 5th, 2017 17:46
The Stone Tower
myself and me said:
The stony tower might be a good place for a short break, but not for a life-long living. What happened to the lonely man inside?
Feel the lonely in the writing.
September 4th, 2017 20:06
myself and me said:
The stony tower might be a good place for a short break, but not for a life-long living. What happened to the lonely man inside?
Feel the lonely in the writing.
September 4th, 2017 20:06
The Stone Tower
dusk arising said:
Now this i could fancy. Living on my own chunk of earth like a cloud. And neighbors similarly existing but ever changing. I like it, but would i feel grounded? Inspirational writing.
September 4th, 2017 08:51
dusk arising said:
Now this i could fancy. Living on my own chunk of earth like a cloud. And neighbors similarly existing but ever changing. I like it, but would i feel grounded? Inspirational writing.
September 4th, 2017 08:51
Half Of My Heart
myself and me said:
I can feel your sorrow and only love shall fill the hollow. Hope you get the strength to overcome the fear.
Beautiful yet sad writing.
September 3rd, 2017 09:12
myself and me said:
I can feel your sorrow and only love shall fill the hollow. Hope you get the strength to overcome the fear.
Beautiful yet sad writing.
September 3rd, 2017 09:12
Half Of My Heart
Mugsdaddy said:
Taking the death of others leads us to a dark place. Beautifully written terribly sad...
September 3rd, 2017 07:05
Mugsdaddy said:
Taking the death of others leads us to a dark place. Beautifully written terribly sad...
September 3rd, 2017 07:05
It Felt True
myself and me said:
That is how you grow with your \"true love\". Love is not for hold but for give and share.
Wonderful writing. Friend.
September 2nd, 2017 16:26
myself and me said:
That is how you grow with your \"true love\". Love is not for hold but for give and share.
Wonderful writing. Friend.
September 2nd, 2017 16:26
Light And Darkness
myself and me said:
\"True Love Need Not Try\"
My favorite line.
Beautiful poem, beautiful picture.
August 31st, 2017 20:15
myself and me said:
\"True Love Need Not Try\"
My favorite line.
Beautiful poem, beautiful picture.
August 31st, 2017 20:15
