Comments received on poems by Shine



Past Ablaze, Awakened Today
HangingbyaHalo said:

Sometimes it is difficult to walk forward without turning around. In a sense the Lookback can offer you A new perspective on what used to be. It’s only when you allow it to stop you from continuing to put one foot in front of the other that it controls you. I wish you all the love in the world in your journey forward.

May 30th, 2018 21:23

A Shadow Of My Own
Maxine Smith said:

Lovely emotive write, portrays well the overwhelming feeling of sadness when your alone.


April 8th, 2018 14:19

More Than Words
Alf W said:

Your words are full of feeling and emotion and I can read your heart as I absorb what you have written. You are right.. sometimes we love with our heads and not our heart. Words come easily, but feelings run deeper.

November 29th, 2017 07:08

I Hurt Too
dusk arising said:

On it\'s own it stands up well. Romance, mystery, loss. pain, love.... inviting my minds eye to paint pictures, my imagination to create story, my heart to enjoy the loving warmth. What more could your reader ask for - its all there. Exceptional. Please comment on my stuff.

September 6th, 2017 20:32

I Hurt Too
myself and me said:

Your love will be remembered for sure. Nice writing.

September 6th, 2017 12:59

I Hurt Too
Santita said:

Nicely done on part 3, of the love trilogy.

September 6th, 2017 12:54

Me And You
Santita said:

I like this part 2, looking forward to part 3! Sorry for your pain, my friend. Writing always helps me through it, Shine. See my piece \"the clown and the contortionist\", a piece of my story. Nicely done.

September 5th, 2017 22:19

Me And You
Accidental Poet said:

If love is meant to be, it will be. If not, then it will let you know. Listen to your heart, it knows the truth. One day soon you will shine for real. ; )

September 5th, 2017 19:32

Me And You
myself and me said:

I know that kind of pain. I was killed by the pain, now I was reborn and much stronger.
Nice writing.

September 5th, 2017 17:46

Me And You
LAWLESS said:

I found out recently that haikus usually don\'t have titles. This one is heartfelt regardless of that. Well done!

September 5th, 2017 16:58

The Stone Tower
myself and me said:

The stony tower might be a good place for a short break, but not for a life-long living. What happened to the lonely man inside?
Feel the lonely in the writing.

September 4th, 2017 20:06

The Stone Tower
Santita said:

A vivid tale - of a lonely man cast to spend the slowly passing time alone in his tower. Very well done!

September 4th, 2017 12:35

The Stone Tower
dusk arising said:

Now this i could fancy. Living on my own chunk of earth like a cloud. And neighbors similarly existing but ever changing. I like it, but would i feel grounded? Inspirational writing.

September 4th, 2017 08:51

Half Of My Heart
myself and me said:

I can feel your sorrow and only love shall fill the hollow. Hope you get the strength to overcome the fear.
Beautiful yet sad writing.

September 3rd, 2017 09:12

Half Of My Heart
Mugsdaddy said:

Taking the death of others leads us to a dark place. Beautifully written terribly sad...

September 3rd, 2017 07:05

It Felt True
Goldfinch60 said:

Good loving write.

September 3rd, 2017 01:14

Light And Darkness
Santita said:

A superbly written piece, with layers of meaning! That last line lingers with me \"darkness knows no time\". Excellent straight to my faves.

September 2nd, 2017 17:23

It Felt True
Santita said:

Great piece, Shine!

September 2nd, 2017 17:20

It Felt True
myself and me said:

That is how you grow with your \"true love\". Love is not for hold but for give and share.
Wonderful writing. Friend.

September 2nd, 2017 16:26

Light And Darkness
myself and me said:

\"True Love Need Not Try\"
My favorite line.
Beautiful poem, beautiful picture.

August 31st, 2017 20:15