Comments received on poems by Wallace



Lady Eleanor.
TrystanBehm said:

Wallace - I really like this. Won\'t pretend to know your specific underlying context, but this for me reminds me of when my inner muse disappears. Like a massive hole in my soul is gone and everything I experience is missing the context I once knew.

Great write!

February 2nd, 2018 09:44

Peace Of Mind.
Fay Slimm. said:

The peace which comes from such night-walks is so aptly described by these well rhymed lines Wallace - - a beautiful read.

February 1st, 2018 09:36

My Thoughts.
dusk arising said:

I read this like it was meant for me. Thank you.

January 30th, 2018 16:07

My Thoughts.
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 30th, 2018 09:52

Angel.
Aislinn Wilson said:

Delicious word use

January 29th, 2018 14:10

Angel.
dusk arising said:

Has she got a sister by any chance?
Nuff said?

January 29th, 2018 12:34

Angel.
FredPeyer said:

Wallace, I wish you luck! You might have to look far and wide to find this kind of angel!
(Except for Angel G, but she is already taken!)

January 29th, 2018 05:05

Angel.
Lorna said:

Very sweet!!

January 29th, 2018 05:02

May.
Lorna said:

Cute & funny.........

January 27th, 2018 09:42

Karma.
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write, my firts laugh of the day (6:10 am in the UK) - thank you.

January 25th, 2018 01:09

Words Of Wisdom.
kevin browne said:

perfectly put, my friend.

January 23rd, 2018 16:47

Priceless.
Michael J. Schaeffer said:

Classic. It’s all in the Game of Life?

January 22nd, 2018 09:43

Hi Ho, Hi Ho, Its Off To Work I Go.
Caring dove said:

i would much prefer to listen to the sounds of nature and animals then have to go to flipping work lol not that i have a job but yes so much nicer to eat toast and listen to the birds a nice and comforting feel to this piece

January 22nd, 2018 04:43

Frowning.
Caring dove said:

great ! i am agreeing with martina here, i love the repetition of these words here. what made them frown? was it the rain , it sounds like it was and maybe their happiness faded and they became miserable , i guess their happiness did not last very long then

January 22nd, 2018 04:33

Words.
Caring dove said:

aaw, this is sweet :-) she sounds like a very gentle lovely person .. nice read :-)

January 22nd, 2018 04:29

Groundhog Day.
Caring dove said:

and i am glad it does not rust ! lol. i would not want that ...

January 22nd, 2018 04:27

Perfect Day.
Caring dove said:

lovely :-) i love your reference to the strawberry tarts and the sheep laughing .. a very peaceful feel to this , right , i often find nature to be very calming .. enjoyed

January 22nd, 2018 04:24

Safe Haven.
Caring dove said:

heaven does indeed sound like it may be a nicer place then earth but who truly knows... this earth and this world is too much pain , too many unkind people , too much depression , too many unhappy people.... when we are in a bad place we just want to be in a happy place right, i can understand this .. i like your reference to the pearly gates ... lovely wording there

January 22nd, 2018 04:21

Hell On Earth.
Caring dove said:

so many evil and nasty people here on earth and that is so wrong for there should not be, everyone should be nice and caring ,

January 22nd, 2018 04:18

Nice Day.
Caring dove said:

* nice piece of writing *

January 22nd, 2018 04:16

Nice Day.
Caring dove said:

completely true , nature does indeed speak to us , it talks to me too .. i find nature to be very very lovely and i am sure it speaks to many people .. nice people of writing wallace, enjoyed this i like the reference to the cows mooing lol cows are nice

January 22nd, 2018 04:15

Heart Felt.
Caring dove said:

so embaressing to fart in public lol i am sure anybody who does would be truly embaressed..why does she smile when she farts again lol she sounds like she is enjoying annoying people lol

January 22nd, 2018 04:12

Honey.
Lorna said:

Love it.

January 21st, 2018 08:26

Honey.
Caring dove said:

lovely 😊

January 21st, 2018 04:56

Thoughts.
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and that last line is so right.

January 20th, 2018 01:41

Thoughts.
Aislinn Wilson said:

Good and beautiful repetition

January 19th, 2018 13:59

The End.
Aislinn Wilson said:

Well writ, Wallace

January 18th, 2018 11:29

Ruby Murray.
Aislinn Wilson said:

One of my favorites I\'ve had the pleasure to read today! Very funny!

January 17th, 2018 09:17

Ruby Murray.
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, I have been there - is the toilet paper in the fridge?

January 17th, 2018 02:52

Morning Has Woken.
Tony36 said:

Wonderful write, gave me a smile

January 12th, 2018 09:47

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