Comments received on poems by Wallace



The End.
Goldfinch60 said:

He may well have been sick but help is there, why kill innocent people.

October 12th, 2017 00:48

The End.
Mugsdaddy said:

Inside the mind of a monster.
Mugs

October 12th, 2017 00:35

Who Needs Sleeping Pills.
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, I normally sleep well until that elusive muse calls me at three in the morning.

October 11th, 2017 01:11

Who Needs Sleeping Pills.
Louis Gibbs said:

Would that all my dreams were that peaceful and calming. A fine reflective poem, Wallace!

October 11th, 2017 00:25

Reading Glasses On.
Goldfinch60 said:

Choice is always with us and I chose to read this delightful poem.

October 10th, 2017 00:43

Reading Glasses On.
P.X. Vexxus said:

A nice perspective of things. Everyone has a choice.

October 10th, 2017 00:27

Flat Tyres.
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write.

October 9th, 2017 01:07

My Kind A Lady.
Christina8 said:

Well, congratulations! What a sweet and heartfelt write!

October 8th, 2017 12:13

My Kind A Lady.
Goldfinch60 said:

COR! What a lovely loving write.

October 8th, 2017 02:14

Night Time Stroll.
Louis Gibbs said:

Thanks for taking us on a lovely evening stroll, Wallace. Well penned.

October 6th, 2017 16:16

Taken.
Louis Gibbs said:

Not a bad way to go, and certainly not a bad poem, Wallace. Good write!

October 5th, 2017 05:19

Vocation.
Louis Gibbs said:

We all don our costumes for the play. Well put, Wallace!

October 4th, 2017 12:08

Vocation.
Michael Edwards said:

Great pithy piece which I really like . As a retired lawyer you could add Lawyers wear sombre.

October 4th, 2017 00:29

Yesterday.
Poetic Dan said:

I believe in yesterday! But I\'m now more than half the man used to be.

October 3rd, 2017 02:01

Yesterday.
Goldfinch60 said:

Today is the tomorrow that you worried about yesterday.

October 3rd, 2017 01:49

Prime Time.
Tony36 said:

Great write, I get up between 5:30 and 6 most mornings. I agree with Goldfinch that is the best time of day

September 29th, 2017 12:56

Prime Time.
Michael Edwards said:

Usually between 5am and 6am I write some of my best poetry - like this one Wallace (or is it Lee?)

September 29th, 2017 01:50

Prime Time.
Goldfinch60 said:

I too am up at 6 in the morning, the best time of the day.

September 29th, 2017 01:40

Loneliness Of A Long Distance Walker.
Ravenssongbird said:

A very relatable expression, I think. Somber, but real. Nice piece! 😊

September 28th, 2017 00:59

From Within.
MaddieJ said:

So true!! I live by this code.

September 27th, 2017 00:25

Left For Dead.
Christina8 said:

A well written but sad poem. Hopefully better days are ahead. Great composure and rhyme scheme in such hard times.

September 26th, 2017 07:18

Left For Dead.
Fay Slimm. said:

Oh such a sad piece though appealingly written. I admire the rhyming in this anguished lament.

September 26th, 2017 05:00

Shining Light.
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write Wallace.

September 25th, 2017 00:52

Two For One.
Michael Edwards said:

Two brilliant little works Wallace

September 24th, 2017 00:25

Green.
Louis Gibbs said:

Embrace the journey. We\'ll all get back home. Enjoyed your poem, Wallace!

September 22nd, 2017 16:17

Green.
dusk arising said:

When i was a boy my parents moved me around the country, new school, new friends, new enemies every fifteen months or so (don\'t ask me why i was just a kid) and the net result is i never had a place so familiar i could call home. I envy patriotic people who have ties to one area or another, those who long for the green grass or the magestic hills or the grimy faces of coal miners seen every day from t\'pit. Nomad me (No sane either mind you)

September 22nd, 2017 15:36

Green.
lasergraph said:

Great description of that longing for home. In the words of Dorothy, \"There\'s no place like home.\"

September 22nd, 2017 08:45

Green.
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, the power of home is always there no matter where you are in your world.

September 22nd, 2017 01:44

Green.
Mugsdaddy said:

A true account of a longing for home. Beautiful write.
Mugsdaddy

September 22nd, 2017 00:34

The End.
dusk arising said:

All is dark! And you leave your reade hanging in suspense..... wanting more..... wanting resolution......
Great idea great writing.

September 21st, 2017 17:10

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