Comments received on poems by Wallace



Another Day.
MaddieJ said:

I love this poem! It makes me want a morning like this everyday! Great job!

September 21st, 2017 00:51

Another Day.
myself and me said:

Good morning. Another fresh day start. Beautiful writing.

September 20th, 2017 07:57

Money Grabber.
dusk arising said:

Ha ha ha.... did the young lady teach you anything?
Great story i loved it.

September 19th, 2017 18:01

Electric Blue.
dusk arising said:

Sad loss shouts out from your words. Well written piece of loss grief. If its a part of your recent life then i sympathise. Time will bring you its gift of wisdom and healing. These words give no consolation to pain felt right now but what would? Sit it out or find something which distracts, often another partner.

September 17th, 2017 16:05

It\'s Over.
Goldfinch60 said:

It may well be nearer than we think. Good write.

September 16th, 2017 01:07

Love Needed.
Goldfinch60 said:

Nor can I. Good write.

September 15th, 2017 01:28

Heart Beat.
myself and me said:

That is close. What a day. I am so glad you feel hungry now.
A thrilling read.

September 14th, 2017 11:41

Davy Jones Locker.
Goldfinch60 said:

God write. The sea\'s power is awesome.

September 13th, 2017 01:30

Night Shift.
MaddieJ said:

I find it interesting you chose muggars as your subject for this poem. It was a good read! Were they meant to be literal? Or are they a representation of something?

September 12th, 2017 01:32

Smoker.
Goldfinch60 said:

I used to smoke but gave up 34 years 11 months, 36 days ago.

September 11th, 2017 08:04

Smoker.
orchidee said:

Well, I would try to help - but you\'re dead now! Good write. It is an addiction thing, I agree. I feel sick at cigar smoke.

September 11th, 2017 06:49

About Time.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for the reminder WALLACE ! I\'m only a third through my but already TIM is overtaking me ! Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my ROSES and my new FUSION on \"Where would you like to LIVE ?\" Thanks B.

September 10th, 2017 02:49

About Time.
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true, each moment we have is to be treasured.

September 10th, 2017 01:33

About Time.
Michael Edwards said:

So so true and so much to achieve and time opportunities reduce by the day. Super observation and write.

September 10th, 2017 00:55

I Came, So Did She.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

I SAW ~ I CAME ~ I CONQUERED ~ The congress of the Ram ! But of course it takes TWO ~ YIN & YANG to Tango ! Sometimes ~ apres sex ~ when I lie in the bed breathing erratically and Angela is already singing in the Shower ~ washing me out of her hair ~ Which of us had really SCORED ! Thanks for sharing ~ a hot BUTTERED CRUMPET for Breakfast ! BRIAN Please check \"Strangers in the Night\" Thanks B.

September 9th, 2017 03:18

Ghost Walk.
dusk arising said:

Well at least you won\'t get soaked in that rainfall. Good entertaining read.

September 7th, 2017 04:30

Only.
myself and me said:

\"A man in love.
Has a heart full of empathy.
A man in hate.
Has a heart empty of sympathy.\"
When the heart is empty of sympathy, the evil will occupy it.
Nice writing.

September 6th, 2017 18:20

Only.
dusk arising said:

Wow powerful stuff. Nice writing. Please comment on my stuff.

September 6th, 2017 15:47

Summer Time.
myself and me said:

Thank you for sending such a happy summer. Love summer fun.

September 5th, 2017 21:31

Summer Time.
Mugsdaddy said:

I am more of a winter soul but a summer like this a could enjoy a little longer. Great write I like your style.

September 5th, 2017 01:10

Alone.
myself and me said:

Yes. so alone.
Very well expressed.

September 4th, 2017 16:22

Alone.
dusk arising said:

Nicely written. Time heals. Please comment on my stuff.

September 4th, 2017 08:36

Alone.
Abigail_ said:

*sounds of applause*

September 4th, 2017 02:21

Four Walls.
dusk arising said:

Nice cheerfully decorated room you describe.

September 3rd, 2017 08:15

Down To Earth
Oneyedtoad said:

This is very well written, it flows nicely and also carries the message well, really enjoyed it.

September 3rd, 2017 00:27

Down To Earth
dusk arising said:

Superb writing. It doesn\'t get any better than this standard. Please comment upon my writing.

September 2nd, 2017 04:52

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