Comments received on poems by Liberty_Shadows
Tainted
peto said:
Quite the journey
Can\'t forget ourselves whilst pleasing everyone else
You seem afloat
My answer to last line
A great writer
June 24th, 2023 03:14
peto said:
Quite the journey
Can\'t forget ourselves whilst pleasing everyone else
You seem afloat
My answer to last line
A great writer
June 24th, 2023 03:14
Tainted
Bobby O said:
I see hope amongst the ravage of your phrase and not for a moment do I believe you battle for hope and worry about the losing strife and I sense a resilience that might propel should you decide to slightly alter your goals. Only prove things to you. Set not a standard that beckons to others.
June 23rd, 2023 22:46
Bobby O said:
I see hope amongst the ravage of your phrase and not for a moment do I believe you battle for hope and worry about the losing strife and I sense a resilience that might propel should you decide to slightly alter your goals. Only prove things to you. Set not a standard that beckons to others.
June 23rd, 2023 22:46
Fake
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Your poem is so filled with emotion, and because it is so heart-wrenching it touches the reader\'s heart.
Keep writing and your depression will eventually leave. Cheer Up! :)
October 8th, 2018 15:59
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Your poem is so filled with emotion, and because it is so heart-wrenching it touches the reader\'s heart.
Keep writing and your depression will eventually leave. Cheer Up! :)
October 8th, 2018 15:59
The Ways I Love You
tanvir H said:
nice poem about love👍👍👍
\"The way you describing that person\"
nice
November 27th, 2017 21:17
tanvir H said:
nice poem about love👍👍👍
\"The way you describing that person\"
nice
November 27th, 2017 21:17
When People Cry (Song)
Mugsdaddy said:
Beautiful sentiment excellent writing
Mugsdaddy
October 2nd, 2017 14:46
Mugsdaddy said:
Beautiful sentiment excellent writing
Mugsdaddy
October 2nd, 2017 14:46
You\'re My Sunshine
dusk arising said:
This was all flowing lovely until that last line threw me..... it could go one of two ways....... a real baby (cooo) or your boyfriend baby (dad) LOL
Nice writing tho.
September 15th, 2017 21:04
dusk arising said:
This was all flowing lovely until that last line threw me..... it could go one of two ways....... a real baby (cooo) or your boyfriend baby (dad) LOL
Nice writing tho.
September 15th, 2017 21:04
Suicide Note
MendedFences27 said:
L.S. - Listen to Seek. Consider today the first day of YOUR life. Build it the way you want it to be. Just make sure that poetry is a part of it.
Great emotional write. _ Phil A.
September 15th, 2017 17:39
MendedFences27 said:
L.S. - Listen to Seek. Consider today the first day of YOUR life. Build it the way you want it to be. Just make sure that poetry is a part of it.
Great emotional write. _ Phil A.
September 15th, 2017 17:39
Suicide Note
Seek said:
Wow so frank and so open about your anger! Perhaps the best way to get your revenge is to live your life as a free lady ready to move on.
September 14th, 2017 20:23
Seek said:
Wow so frank and so open about your anger! Perhaps the best way to get your revenge is to live your life as a free lady ready to move on.
September 14th, 2017 20:23
Suicide Note
Simple-Man87 said:
Wow... Incredible. Reminded me a lot of Marshalls song to his mom. I too have been in a similar situation. You are so passionate and blunt. Very talented.
September 14th, 2017 17:19
Simple-Man87 said:
Wow... Incredible. Reminded me a lot of Marshalls song to his mom. I too have been in a similar situation. You are so passionate and blunt. Very talented.
September 14th, 2017 17:19
Suicide Note
G84 said:
If you aren\'t musical you should be, I say this because your writing has a rythym to it that fits well in some music styles that I like too.
As for the subject of your poem, it shows immense feeling and bravery to unleash that level of darkness, I\'ve had some shit in the past that messed me up for several years and ruined several relationships, I wrote all the way through it never shared it and some poems are lost for good but they needed to be written m, keep writing, it\'s a clear talent and it\'s also therapy, trust me!
Above all else keep smiling 🙂
September 14th, 2017 12:38
G84 said:
If you aren\'t musical you should be, I say this because your writing has a rythym to it that fits well in some music styles that I like too.
As for the subject of your poem, it shows immense feeling and bravery to unleash that level of darkness, I\'ve had some shit in the past that messed me up for several years and ruined several relationships, I wrote all the way through it never shared it and some poems are lost for good but they needed to be written m, keep writing, it\'s a clear talent and it\'s also therapy, trust me!
Above all else keep smiling 🙂
September 14th, 2017 12:38
Hero
Poetic Dan said:
Nice work, a lot lighter than my first read of yours ;) love it
September 14th, 2017 11:49
Poetic Dan said:
Nice work, a lot lighter than my first read of yours ;) love it
September 14th, 2017 11:49
Suicide Note
Poetic Dan said:
Such a powerful read
Took me back 20 years
I killed myself to everyone
Took on the world alone
Luckily I made it through
Have children of my own
But this world is still Full of men
Just like the ones we know
I\'m thankful for your truth
Such hard pain to share
Never stop being who you are
An amazing piece of art
September 14th, 2017 11:47
Poetic Dan said:
Such a powerful read
Took me back 20 years
I killed myself to everyone
Took on the world alone
Luckily I made it through
Have children of my own
But this world is still Full of men
Just like the ones we know
I\'m thankful for your truth
Such hard pain to share
Never stop being who you are
An amazing piece of art
September 14th, 2017 11:47
Suicide Note
Ternic73 said:
A lot of truth and power in your words I hope you find peace
September 14th, 2017 11:36
Ternic73 said:
A lot of truth and power in your words I hope you find peace
September 14th, 2017 11:36
Suicide Note
Allysnewworld said:
Powerful, honest and rightfully brutal. Well written indeed, I hope you find comfort in those that you do have. Fuck your dad, I hope you find better love.
September 14th, 2017 11:19
Allysnewworld said:
Powerful, honest and rightfully brutal. Well written indeed, I hope you find comfort in those that you do have. Fuck your dad, I hope you find better love.
September 14th, 2017 11:19
Left Behind
Mugsdaddy said:
I just think your flow is amazing you subject is always clear and thought provoking. You have a great talent and a bright future.
Mugsdaddy
September 12th, 2017 21:44
Mugsdaddy said:
I just think your flow is amazing you subject is always clear and thought provoking. You have a great talent and a bright future.
Mugsdaddy
September 12th, 2017 21:44
Left Behind
FredPeyer said:
I like the way you write, Liberty. Straight forward, you tell it how it is. And it is hard to find out that a love you think you share is actually a one-way street. Unfortunately, hindsight is 20/20, and the old saying that love is blind still seems to be accurate in some cases.
September 12th, 2017 21:05
FredPeyer said:
I like the way you write, Liberty. Straight forward, you tell it how it is. And it is hard to find out that a love you think you share is actually a one-way street. Unfortunately, hindsight is 20/20, and the old saying that love is blind still seems to be accurate in some cases.
September 12th, 2017 21:05
Hero
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Nice end rhyme and dominant heptameter in this sweet sestet. The prophetic meaning in your poem very beautifully conveys the message of God\'s unique and total love for each one of us and so this poem in particular, resonates spiritually and very highly with me this evening. Thank you.
September 11th, 2017 22:44
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Nice end rhyme and dominant heptameter in this sweet sestet. The prophetic meaning in your poem very beautifully conveys the message of God\'s unique and total love for each one of us and so this poem in particular, resonates spiritually and very highly with me this evening. Thank you.
September 11th, 2017 22:44
Hero
Mugsdaddy said:
Great write, excellent flow and a beautiful sentiment.
Mugsdaddy
September 11th, 2017 20:31
Mugsdaddy said:
Great write, excellent flow and a beautiful sentiment.
Mugsdaddy
September 11th, 2017 20:31
