Comments received on poems by Appletree



They deserve no less.
SLR said:

Great example of the love and devotion/obsession we feel for our children. Great write. Great word combos.

June 16th, 2018 22:16

They deserve no less.
minak said:

beautiful flow, and lovely vocabulary

June 16th, 2018 09:46

Mistakes
SLR said:

Great post, very relatable. And you use humour to express frustration, refreshing change from all the anger around.

June 13th, 2018 22:15

Mistakes
minak said:

Beautiful 💗

June 13th, 2018 15:41

I\'ve got no time for poetry.
ElenaGrace said:

This was really funny and relatable too

March 31st, 2018 16:25

I\'ve got no time for poetry.
Michael Edwards said:

I enjoyed this write - good work.

March 31st, 2018 14:59

I\'ve got no time for poetry.
orchidee said:

Dunno how you found time to write this, with having all that to do! You got that manure? That\'s the most important thing - yes?! lol.

March 31st, 2018 10:05

My favourite drink
Appletree said:

Thanks Littlegift. I really appreciate the feedback.

March 4th, 2018 06:02


My favourite drink
LittleGift said:

Oh I loved reading this, Whisky is a nice winter warmer and its freezing here. Great little poem :)

March 2nd, 2018 05:31

Pills
Appletree said:

Is should point out this is more reflective than a desperate cry for help. I have a situation but I know it well. I am new to the idea of writing poetry but I think it might help.

October 24th, 2017 11:21

Pills
Candlewitch said:

the knife isn\'t the kind of help that you need! you need to be here with us, writing out your heart and the pain, too. very clever poem!

*hugs, Cat

October 24th, 2017 11:09

Pills
orchidee said:

I should look at the pills - the correct dose of course. Those knives are dangerous, I say!
I don\'t know your situation though.


October 24th, 2017 08:52

Pills
Christina8 said:

Good for you for asking for help. You wrote a good poem and I hope you continue to write and get your feelings out. It helps.

October 24th, 2017 08:24

Plastic
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Welcome APPLE and thanks for a great first poem ~ more please ! MPS is a great site and we will all encourage you to write more POETRY ! Your poem has great rhythm & flow which makes it easy to read and recite. The subject is very apt in today\'s \"Buy now ~ Pay later\" philosophy. The average HOUSEHOLD credit card debt in the UK is in excess of £13,000 and many are paying very high interest rates and getting deeper into debt ! Paying for CHRISTMAS on Credit is a big culprit ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)

October 21st, 2017 05:09