Comments received on poems by Appletree
Darkness in and Darkness without
Keith said:
Impressive. Some superb imagery.
January 10th, 2022 14:39
Keith said:
Impressive. Some superb imagery.
January 10th, 2022 14:39
They deserve no less.
SLR said:
Great example of the love and devotion/obsession we feel for our children. Great write. Great word combos.
June 16th, 2018 22:16
SLR said:
Great example of the love and devotion/obsession we feel for our children. Great write. Great word combos.
June 16th, 2018 22:16
Mistakes
SLR said:
Great post, very relatable. And you use humour to express frustration, refreshing change from all the anger around.
June 13th, 2018 22:15
SLR said:
Great post, very relatable. And you use humour to express frustration, refreshing change from all the anger around.
June 13th, 2018 22:15
I\'ve got no time for poetry.
ElenaGrace said:
This was really funny and relatable too
March 31st, 2018 16:25
ElenaGrace said:
This was really funny and relatable too
March 31st, 2018 16:25
I\'ve got no time for poetry.
Michael Edwards said:
I enjoyed this write - good work.
March 31st, 2018 14:59
Michael Edwards said:
I enjoyed this write - good work.
March 31st, 2018 14:59
I\'ve got no time for poetry.
orchidee said:
Dunno how you found time to write this, with having all that to do! You got that manure? That\'s the most important thing - yes?! lol.
March 31st, 2018 10:05
orchidee said:
Dunno how you found time to write this, with having all that to do! You got that manure? That\'s the most important thing - yes?! lol.
March 31st, 2018 10:05
My favourite drink
Appletree said:
Thanks Littlegift. I really appreciate the feedback.
March 4th, 2018 06:02
Appletree said:
Thanks Littlegift. I really appreciate the feedback.
March 4th, 2018 06:02
Pills
Appletree said:
Is should point out this is more reflective than a desperate cry for help. I have a situation but I know it well. I am new to the idea of writing poetry but I think it might help.
October 24th, 2017 11:21
Appletree said:
Is should point out this is more reflective than a desperate cry for help. I have a situation but I know it well. I am new to the idea of writing poetry but I think it might help.
October 24th, 2017 11:21
Pills
orchidee said:
I should look at the pills - the correct dose of course. Those knives are dangerous, I say!
I don\'t know your situation though.
October 24th, 2017 08:52
orchidee said:
I should look at the pills - the correct dose of course. Those knives are dangerous, I say!
I don\'t know your situation though.
October 24th, 2017 08:52
Pills
Christina8 said:
Good for you for asking for help. You wrote a good poem and I hope you continue to write and get your feelings out. It helps.
October 24th, 2017 08:24
Christina8 said:
Good for you for asking for help. You wrote a good poem and I hope you continue to write and get your feelings out. It helps.
October 24th, 2017 08:24
Plastic
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Welcome APPLE and thanks for a great first poem ~ more please ! MPS is a great site and we will all encourage you to write more POETRY ! Your poem has great rhythm & flow which makes it easy to read and recite. The subject is very apt in today\'s \"Buy now ~ Pay later\" philosophy. The average HOUSEHOLD credit card debt in the UK is in excess of £13,000 and many are paying very high interest rates and getting deeper into debt ! Paying for CHRISTMAS on Credit is a big culprit ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
October 21st, 2017 05:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Welcome APPLE and thanks for a great first poem ~ more please ! MPS is a great site and we will all encourage you to write more POETRY ! Your poem has great rhythm & flow which makes it easy to read and recite. The subject is very apt in today\'s \"Buy now ~ Pay later\" philosophy. The average HOUSEHOLD credit card debt in the UK is in excess of £13,000 and many are paying very high interest rates and getting deeper into debt ! Paying for CHRISTMAS on Credit is a big culprit ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
October 21st, 2017 05:09
