Comments received on poems by DarkNationLocal



The Death of Me
Poetic Dan said:

Well expressed from the heart
I could remember this for my ex-wife

I remember every part of me that has died
Pay your respect my friend and live a taller life

Thank you for the inspiration, I now need to go write ;)

Keep up the work! much peace and respect


May 30th, 2018 09:21

My True Love
SLR said:

There is no love like the love parents have for their children. Great write. She\'s beautiful! Such a sweet smile.

May 17th, 2018 06:42

Ill Set You Free
SLR said:

Tragically beautiful.

May 16th, 2018 20:44

Your #1
onepauly said:

that\'s a nice way to put it.

May 6th, 2018 03:31

I Love You the Most
onepauly said:

you sound very sincere.
its coming from your heart.

May 1st, 2018 07:11

I Love You the Most
Lorna said:

Just love this.... have always loved the line \"I love you most\"........

May 1st, 2018 05:01

Some Day You Will Too
Caroline Elizabeth said:

Wow. Very dark, very though provoking. Just my kind of poem haha. Great read. :)

April 25th, 2018 10:54

My True Best Friend
DarkNationLocal said:

Thanks everyone, it was really important to get this out there. The main thing I’d like to share is this True Best Friend I speak of taught me a lot but more so one thing I’ll never forget. She said, “Your real family is sometimes the friends you choose to become family, cause in birth the family you have is given without choice “ it’s so true cause there are some family in my life that don’t even act like family

January 5th, 2018 18:08

My True Best Friend
RebeccaRose.x said:

An amazing write! Love it !!! Definitely doing as a favourite

January 5th, 2018 17:40

My True Best Friend
angelinamc101 said:

Beautiful poem it made me cry. Those type of friends are the ones we really want to keep and treasure.

January 5th, 2018 12:55

My True Best Friend
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, best friends are with you in both the good and the bad times and always remain loyal.

January 5th, 2018 09:26

The Living Curse
David creekmoore said:

Great poem

November 3rd, 2017 16:13

Take Me God
Anna Marg said:

Don\'t give up on life so easily. Always stay strong and there will be times and people that will make you think that it was definetely worth it to give it another chance and start again!

November 1st, 2017 02:51

Take Me God
ray_06 said:

Wow, very nice, been there, sometimes you have to allow yourself to feel so much pain in order to process what’s going on

October 31st, 2017 19:08