Comments received on poems by Masking
Moments
L. B. Mek said:
such moments, visit me too
sometimes
but always, fleetingly...
(thanks for sharing, dear poet)
June 17th, 2022 04:10
L. B. Mek said:
such moments, visit me too
sometimes
but always, fleetingly...
(thanks for sharing, dear poet)
June 17th, 2022 04:10
Inside of me
L. B. Mek said:
you had me at \'A schism\'..
and the Me, I recognised
in your words, made its presence
felt
all through, the rest of the read
as-if, I was in one of my
meditatively introspective, moments..
I laud your bravery!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 31st, 2022 04:03
L. B. Mek said:
you had me at \'A schism\'..
and the Me, I recognised
in your words, made its presence
felt
all through, the rest of the read
as-if, I was in one of my
meditatively introspective, moments..
I laud your bravery!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 31st, 2022 04:03
Inside of me
Lelouch Lamperouge said:
If happiness had a form, what would it look like? It might be something like glass, because one doesn’t notice it normally. However, it is actually there. As proof, if you look at it from a different angle, the glass will reflect light. It will state its presence and existence more eloquently than any other thing in this world.
May 30th, 2022 20:31
Lelouch Lamperouge said:
If happiness had a form, what would it look like? It might be something like glass, because one doesn’t notice it normally. However, it is actually there. As proof, if you look at it from a different angle, the glass will reflect light. It will state its presence and existence more eloquently than any other thing in this world.
May 30th, 2022 20:31
A Dobermann
M.E.M. said:
Love the repetition and the connected lives. I love that we can create stories in poetry but without all the fluff of a novel.
January 4th, 2022 00:25
M.E.M. said:
Love the repetition and the connected lives. I love that we can create stories in poetry but without all the fluff of a novel.
January 4th, 2022 00:25
A road I know
L. B. Mek said:
I can relate to the wording of despair in your yearning:
\'Your address, I forget it sometimes.
But I remember how to get there.
It hurts whenever I go by,
But that\'s alright with me.
Cause I still love a ghost,
Who\'s too far away to see.\'..
thanks for sharing
July 15th, 2021 05:06
L. B. Mek said:
I can relate to the wording of despair in your yearning:
\'Your address, I forget it sometimes.
But I remember how to get there.
It hurts whenever I go by,
But that\'s alright with me.
Cause I still love a ghost,
Who\'s too far away to see.\'..
thanks for sharing
July 15th, 2021 05:06
Cycle
L. B. Mek said:
\'It\'s an odd pattern,\'
how our cynically cyclical, innate traits - tend
to warp the simplicity, in our gifted experience of life..
an absorbing read, full of unique insights
thanks for sharing
July 8th, 2021 02:43
L. B. Mek said:
\'It\'s an odd pattern,\'
how our cynically cyclical, innate traits - tend
to warp the simplicity, in our gifted experience of life..
an absorbing read, full of unique insights
thanks for sharing
July 8th, 2021 02:43
Dancing In The Rain
L. B. Mek said:
\'I laid down to get some rest, but woke up floating away.
I\'m in an ocean now, drowning I say.
Suffocating on an unending pour,
I wake up outside your door.
Dancing in the rain,
outside your door.\'
this is so relatable, reminds me
of Dickens\' portrayal of unrequited, yet devoted love
in \'a tale of two Cities\'
especially how Sydney paces the streets outside
Lucie\'s house, every night;
its like your words capture that desperate scene
so well,
at least for me anyway, lol
a great read thanks for sharing
July 6th, 2021 03:47
L. B. Mek said:
\'I laid down to get some rest, but woke up floating away.
I\'m in an ocean now, drowning I say.
Suffocating on an unending pour,
I wake up outside your door.
Dancing in the rain,
outside your door.\'
this is so relatable, reminds me
of Dickens\' portrayal of unrequited, yet devoted love
in \'a tale of two Cities\'
especially how Sydney paces the streets outside
Lucie\'s house, every night;
its like your words capture that desperate scene
so well,
at least for me anyway, lol
a great read thanks for sharing
July 6th, 2021 03:47
Dancing In The Rain
Goldfinch60 said:
“Life isn\'t about waiting for the storm to pass… It\'s about learning to dance in the rain.” -Vivian Greene.
Andy
July 6th, 2021 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
“Life isn\'t about waiting for the storm to pass… It\'s about learning to dance in the rain.” -Vivian Greene.
Andy
July 6th, 2021 01:37
Dancing In The Rain
Caring dove said:
Interesting read . You really make me feel sorry for the person who is dancing in the rain ..,
July 6th, 2021 00:58
Caring dove said:
Interesting read . You really make me feel sorry for the person who is dancing in the rain ..,
July 6th, 2021 00:58
Done Wrong
L. B. Mek said:
(what a quirky and wonderful read you\'ve shared
and thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply, dear poet)..
\'those \'lost-in-translation\' - conversations
clouding our history: of failed relationships...
so then, we are back at that unending, starting-line
deep breaths, shallow steps - onwards
to that next opportunity, we yearn - doggedly
to not waste: again...\'
May 24th, 2021 04:21
L. B. Mek said:
(what a quirky and wonderful read you\'ve shared
and thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply, dear poet)..
\'those \'lost-in-translation\' - conversations
clouding our history: of failed relationships...
so then, we are back at that unending, starting-line
deep breaths, shallow steps - onwards
to that next opportunity, we yearn - doggedly
to not waste: again...\'
May 24th, 2021 04:21
Room
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully worded, such a naturally rhythmic flow to your style
thanks for sharing
May 13th, 2021 06:23
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully worded, such a naturally rhythmic flow to your style
thanks for sharing
May 13th, 2021 06:23
A Dance
L. B. Mek said:
(an intriguing read,
and thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply dear poet)
we are but fallible human\'s, after all
although - once we\'ve inked words
of such self-revealing insight
we have no place to hide
for Acting - on
those Unsavoury and animalistic Urges...
(let us always: Strive to Better
those Based - and shadow-less, aspects
within our Self loathingly, weak-willed traits
of depraved Cruelty: we are All born
with the Capacity to Inflict, thoughtlessly...!)
\'So instead:
Choosing to Love - considerately
as We, also
would like to be appreciated - Amorously\'
May 10th, 2021 06:12
L. B. Mek said:
(an intriguing read,
and thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply dear poet)
we are but fallible human\'s, after all
although - once we\'ve inked words
of such self-revealing insight
we have no place to hide
for Acting - on
those Unsavoury and animalistic Urges...
(let us always: Strive to Better
those Based - and shadow-less, aspects
within our Self loathingly, weak-willed traits
of depraved Cruelty: we are All born
with the Capacity to Inflict, thoughtlessly...!)
\'So instead:
Choosing to Love - considerately
as We, also
would like to be appreciated - Amorously\'
May 10th, 2021 06:12
Bury me alone
M.E.M. said:
I really like this poem. It’s dark, I like dark. I especially like the line \"Like a mirror broke from the inside out,” but it’s impact seems to deflate with the next line \"Does that make any sense to you?” maybe that’s just me, but it’s a really good poem overall.
May 6th, 2021 19:03
M.E.M. said:
I really like this poem. It’s dark, I like dark. I especially like the line \"Like a mirror broke from the inside out,” but it’s impact seems to deflate with the next line \"Does that make any sense to you?” maybe that’s just me, but it’s a really good poem overall.
May 6th, 2021 19:03
Don\'t forget me
M.E.M. said:
The way you repeated the lines, and the mention of singing, makes me think this was a song with the music stripped away. If not, it totally could be.
May 6th, 2021 18:58
M.E.M. said:
The way you repeated the lines, and the mention of singing, makes me think this was a song with the music stripped away. If not, it totally could be.
May 6th, 2021 18:58
Bury me alone
L. B. Mek said:
\'There\'s a cold here I feel slightly,
Just as I close my weary eyes.
I was scared at first and then always\'..
these are lines I categorise, as lived-in words
thanks for sharing
April 23rd, 2021 05:51
L. B. Mek said:
\'There\'s a cold here I feel slightly,
Just as I close my weary eyes.
I was scared at first and then always\'..
these are lines I categorise, as lived-in words
thanks for sharing
April 23rd, 2021 05:51
Island
L. B. Mek said:
it feels that way, I think most can relate to your depiction of stale: self-inflicted solitude..
but islands are connected by the sea, like we - to society
and what more connection to everything in existence, do we need
than water, we just need to give-up that tap of easy access
and go outside to excavate, our own pools
while connecting with those like-minded
aquifer - integrity: enthusiasts...
April 20th, 2021 05:32
L. B. Mek said:
it feels that way, I think most can relate to your depiction of stale: self-inflicted solitude..
but islands are connected by the sea, like we - to society
and what more connection to everything in existence, do we need
than water, we just need to give-up that tap of easy access
and go outside to excavate, our own pools
while connecting with those like-minded
aquifer - integrity: enthusiasts...
April 20th, 2021 05:32
Deathly hollow
L. B. Mek said:
is it ok if I found this a fun read?
quirky, yet with purpose, an intriguing read - especially that last line..
thanks for sharing
April 13th, 2021 04:55
L. B. Mek said:
is it ok if I found this a fun read?
quirky, yet with purpose, an intriguing read - especially that last line..
thanks for sharing
April 13th, 2021 04:55
Don\'t forget me
Goldfinch60 said:
With words like these you will not be forgotten.
Andy
April 6th, 2021 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
With words like these you will not be forgotten.
Andy
April 6th, 2021 00:44
Who can sit still
Goldfinch60 said:
Each season is a wonder for us to go out and explore.
Andy
November 8th, 2020 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Each season is a wonder for us to go out and explore.
Andy
November 8th, 2020 01:45
Government
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Very powerful! I enjoyed your sociopolitical statement and often have similar feelings.
I\'m new to this site and are unable to determine whether what is posted is considered a poem (classical or free verse) or prose, etc.
Is there some type of topic to be checked for each submitted form or is it all just considered poetry?
Thanks for your input.
Best,
Tamara Beryl Latham
September 24th, 2018 13:06
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Very powerful! I enjoyed your sociopolitical statement and often have similar feelings.
I\'m new to this site and are unable to determine whether what is posted is considered a poem (classical or free verse) or prose, etc.
Is there some type of topic to be checked for each submitted form or is it all just considered poetry?
Thanks for your input.
Best,
Tamara Beryl Latham
September 24th, 2018 13:06
Together
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have our own paths but occasionally paths join for a short while.
September 2nd, 2018 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have our own paths but occasionally paths join for a short while.
September 2nd, 2018 00:39
Steam Machine
sylviasearcher said:
Perhaps we should plant you by the windy river with just enough light and shade for you to grow out of your metal cage.
The sound of flowing water and singing of birds!
August 1st, 2018 06:56
sylviasearcher said:
Perhaps we should plant you by the windy river with just enough light and shade for you to grow out of your metal cage.
The sound of flowing water and singing of birds!
August 1st, 2018 06:56
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