Comments received on poems by darknessrises

Goldfinch60 said:

Good emotive write, being alone and being lonely are different.

December 13th, 2018 01:24

The Voices In My Head..
Candlewitch said:


I can truly identify with the feelings behind this piece of work! your message is heartfelt and compelling. it is familiar territory to me. I understand because I\'ve been there...that is now in the past due to intense therapy and a loving mate. I hope that you find your peace in life. I wish you all the best that life has to offer!

*hugs, Cat

June 15th, 2018 13:53

The Voices In My Head..
FineB said:

Hello darknessrises,

I have worked in mental health in the past and I understand what you are going through.

Please be strong. Stay the course with life. You are much stronger than you think.

A deep vivid poem on your experiences.Thank you

Keep writing

June 15th, 2018 09:46

The Voices In My Head..
orchidee said:

I can\'t \'understand\' this in one way, not having experienced it, or not to this degree. Writing about it can help, hopefully bringing peace to troubled mind.

June 15th, 2018 08:51

The Girl I Want
Gabriella said:

that\'s so good!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it

June 15th, 2018 08:28

The Girl I Want
Frogspoetry said:

I would let her know how you feel,you never know,she might feel the same.Maybe even be your saving grace

June 12th, 2018 12:18

The Girl I Want
Dai\'lynn Green said:

I love it but looking from the guys that has been through relationship after another. Enjoy the days with her but um don\'t forget about you. Don\'t forget to find your own happiness that doesn\'t have to do with her. Writing poetry, writing books, and giving advice is what I love. Just remember to find things to love within yourself and love yourself...

June 12th, 2018 11:32

The Girl I Want
Snowflake Incorrigable said:

You\'ve got \'jungle fever\' mate!
Jaunt to the doctor quick, mate, and mind you don\'t trip or you\'ll be munching carpet with a busted lip.
very romantic if a little OTT.

June 12th, 2018 10:48

My imperfections
ForeverJesus6 said:

Hey, I like the way you wrote your piece. believe me. I know what it is like. I used to live that life. You say that you do not like it. You can always turn to Jesus. Believe me. He is the best answer. Again, your writing flows very well.
Christ loves you.
Persistence is key

June 11th, 2018 14:20

My imperfections
Frogspoetry said:

Don\'t think like that!regardless of what you have done or where you have been,there is a light.Jesus is waiting for you with arms open wide.He wants you to be with Him.I know you think that there is no way out.There is.Ask Jesus Christ for forgiveness and He will.He loves you,no matter what.He will change your life.Granted,it won\'t always be easy,but you will make it.Believe in the Lord Jesus Christ and you will be saved.If you need a friend or someone to talk to,I\'m here.Don\'t give up.

June 11th, 2018 13:12

dark night
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 9th, 2018 13:56

Drug abuser
Syd said:

Hi there darknessrises, I like this poem it\'s along the same vein (pardon the pun) as some of the poems I write. I look forward to reading more from you - Syd

November 3rd, 2017 13:29

Simple-Man87 said:

Wow. That is terrible. Unfortunately, it\'s real. Happens damn near everyday. I\'ve been a victim of bullying, but the best revenge, is showing it has no affect on you. Great write.

November 2nd, 2017 13:41