Comments received on poems by Syd
Grey
Fay Slimm. said:
You describe the emotionless shade of grey so eloquently Syd - - - it aptly applies to any who are brought low by depression but the image and your clever last line put readers right on what is so well personified - a car with that shade and no colour is sure going to suffer methinks. A great read.
June 27th, 2018 11:47
Fay Slimm. said:
You describe the emotionless shade of grey so eloquently Syd - - - it aptly applies to any who are brought low by depression but the image and your clever last line put readers right on what is so well personified - a car with that shade and no colour is sure going to suffer methinks. A great read.
June 27th, 2018 11:47
Grey
sjc513 said:
“I seem fine on the outside but my smile is fake.” Love that part so relatable very good work!
June 27th, 2018 11:41
sjc513 said:
“I seem fine on the outside but my smile is fake.” Love that part so relatable very good work!
June 27th, 2018 11:41
Moths
Frogspoetry said:
excellent write,i never realized that weare living in prison of self image,wealth and captivity.we hold ourselves captive by trying to live up to societies standards that we are never truly free to be our true selves.great read Syd,excellent
June 22nd, 2018 10:27
Frogspoetry said:
excellent write,i never realized that weare living in prison of self image,wealth and captivity.we hold ourselves captive by trying to live up to societies standards that we are never truly free to be our true selves.great read Syd,excellent
June 22nd, 2018 10:27
Moths
Heartwriter said:
This was a captivating write. A pleasure to read with a hint of sadness. Society isn\'t free either. We each have our problems that cage us. Often it\'s my big mouth. I should put my foot in it. I really enjoyed your take on a disappointing world.
June 22nd, 2018 05:26
Heartwriter said:
This was a captivating write. A pleasure to read with a hint of sadness. Society isn\'t free either. We each have our problems that cage us. Often it\'s my big mouth. I should put my foot in it. I really enjoyed your take on a disappointing world.
June 22nd, 2018 05:26
Moths
orchidee said:
Bzzz, those moths eating your paper money too? All those £50 notes?! Wot, you got none? You\'re having me on?! heehee.
Btu can they eat the plastic-type fivers and tenners now? Dunno. I\'ve not left one out for a moth to try to eat!
June 22nd, 2018 03:36
orchidee said:
Bzzz, those moths eating your paper money too? All those £50 notes?! Wot, you got none? You\'re having me on?! heehee.
Btu can they eat the plastic-type fivers and tenners now? Dunno. I\'ve not left one out for a moth to try to eat!
June 22nd, 2018 03:36
Moths
BlackTie said:
\"I am captive
In society
Anchored in the open sea...\"
Love this. Great read. Very elegant use of your pen. How to many of us don\'t realize how society is a sort of prison.
June 21st, 2018 19:39
BlackTie said:
\"I am captive
In society
Anchored in the open sea...\"
Love this. Great read. Very elegant use of your pen. How to many of us don\'t realize how society is a sort of prison.
June 21st, 2018 19:39
Bottle Of Madness
orchidee said:
Oohh I won\' try it, whatever it is. Might descend into real madness!
June 17th, 2018 10:09
orchidee said:
Oohh I won\' try it, whatever it is. Might descend into real madness!
June 17th, 2018 10:09
Bottle Of Madness
Pintu Mahakul said:
Amazing tie recalls old footprints and think more and more about time\'d effect. Wonderful poem is shared.
June 17th, 2018 09:25
Pintu Mahakul said:
Amazing tie recalls old footprints and think more and more about time\'d effect. Wonderful poem is shared.
June 17th, 2018 09:25
Temporary
orchidee said:
Will the word \'temporary\' be temporary, in that it won\'t last forever?! heehee.
June 9th, 2018 12:49
orchidee said:
Will the word \'temporary\' be temporary, in that it won\'t last forever?! heehee.
June 9th, 2018 12:49
The Darker Side Of Wonderland
MLHnow said:
Again, you give much in every word and truly give WORD to us all
My wordy self has not this beautiful fully open door. My doorway is very cluttered and you have to move odd items out of the way to enter! MLH
June 5th, 2018 21:44
MLHnow said:
Again, you give much in every word and truly give WORD to us all
My wordy self has not this beautiful fully open door. My doorway is very cluttered and you have to move odd items out of the way to enter! MLH
June 5th, 2018 21:44
Languidly Basking
SLR said:
We have to find our relaxation wherever we can. :-) love the lines \'ingesting medicine but I\'m not ill\' and \'a sea of artificial tranquility\' . Well written.
May 18th, 2018 23:09
SLR said:
We have to find our relaxation wherever we can. :-) love the lines \'ingesting medicine but I\'m not ill\' and \'a sea of artificial tranquility\' . Well written.
May 18th, 2018 23:09
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kitcat said:
Full of sorrow Syd you written that Brilliant very deep very sad
April 26th, 2018 10:07
kitcat said:
Full of sorrow Syd you written that Brilliant very deep very sad
April 26th, 2018 10:07
Child Of Change
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful tale Syd and I really enjoyed the form you chose. Great write.
April 26th, 2018 01:53
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful tale Syd and I really enjoyed the form you chose. Great write.
April 26th, 2018 01:53
Consolidation
Laura🌻 said:
Wow, Syd...dark but powerful!
This write packed a punch!
Powerful words that can help many!
Be kind to yourself!
~Laura~
April 24th, 2018 17:40
Laura🌻 said:
Wow, Syd...dark but powerful!
This write packed a punch!
Powerful words that can help many!
Be kind to yourself!
~Laura~
April 24th, 2018 17:40
Consolidation
kitcat said:
Oh Wow! How deep can one get I did enjoy reading it I love deep and dark
April 24th, 2018 14:30
kitcat said:
Oh Wow! How deep can one get I did enjoy reading it I love deep and dark
April 24th, 2018 14:30
Consolidation
MLHnow said:
Thanks for your comments on my first submitted poem! I’m so new I can’t even figure out how to navigate this great space.
I usually write way too much. I send out poems via the mail. I wrote one for the Catholic Church and decided it was too dark to spoil this Pope’s optimism. So I then translated many spirit centered poems I wrote into Spanish and Italian. First international packet of poems! It goes out to the Vatican today. Keep writing and moving us all. Get published- you are that moving and write beautiful visual Art!
April 24th, 2018 14:00
MLHnow said:
Thanks for your comments on my first submitted poem! I’m so new I can’t even figure out how to navigate this great space.
I usually write way too much. I send out poems via the mail. I wrote one for the Catholic Church and decided it was too dark to spoil this Pope’s optimism. So I then translated many spirit centered poems I wrote into Spanish and Italian. First international packet of poems! It goes out to the Vatican today. Keep writing and moving us all. Get published- you are that moving and write beautiful visual Art!
April 24th, 2018 14:00
A Reminder That I\'m Human
Syd said:
Thank you MLH. Such a kind comment again. I\'m glad you read this poem it\'s one of my personal......I wouldn\'t say favourites... but in my view this is as good as my writing ever got, where the wave broke if you like. Now I just tend to write about my own downward spiral. I like to keep myself anonymous also.
Thank again for reading and commenting
- Syd
April 24th, 2018 13:30
Syd said:
Thank you MLH. Such a kind comment again. I\'m glad you read this poem it\'s one of my personal......I wouldn\'t say favourites... but in my view this is as good as my writing ever got, where the wave broke if you like. Now I just tend to write about my own downward spiral. I like to keep myself anonymous also.
Thank again for reading and commenting
- Syd
April 24th, 2018 13:30
A Reminder That I\'m Human
MLHnow said:
You need to get published to the world!
A gift of sensitized realism that touches the humanity coded in us and prompts the soul to listen deeply MLH
April 24th, 2018 13:14
MLHnow said:
You need to get published to the world!
A gift of sensitized realism that touches the humanity coded in us and prompts the soul to listen deeply MLH
April 24th, 2018 13:14
Serpents Kiss
MLHnow said:
Reading poems like yours are why I read , respond and gain substance for myself,
Thereby giving me much to say!
Thank you. MLH
April 24th, 2018 12:52
MLHnow said:
Reading poems like yours are why I read , respond and gain substance for myself,
Thereby giving me much to say!
Thank you. MLH
April 24th, 2018 12:52
Consolidation
MLHnow said:
Emotional tool that maybe could be healing word for word. Wish many teens could read your Word. MLH
April 24th, 2018 12:25
MLHnow said:
Emotional tool that maybe could be healing word for word. Wish many teens could read your Word. MLH
April 24th, 2018 12:25
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brokenmirrors said:
Very creative. I can feel the regret that you so eloquently describe.
March 22nd, 2018 17:02
brokenmirrors said:
Very creative. I can feel the regret that you so eloquently describe.
March 22nd, 2018 17:02
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