Comments received on poems by Syd
Bottle Of Madness
orchidee said:
Oohh I won\' try it, whatever it is. Might descend into real madness!
June 17th, 2018 10:09
orchidee said:
Oohh I won\' try it, whatever it is. Might descend into real madness!
June 17th, 2018 10:09
Bottle Of Madness
Pintu Mahakul said:
Amazing tie recalls old footprints and think more and more about time\'d effect. Wonderful poem is shared.
June 17th, 2018 09:25
Pintu Mahakul said:
Amazing tie recalls old footprints and think more and more about time\'d effect. Wonderful poem is shared.
June 17th, 2018 09:25
Temporary
orchidee said:
Will the word \'temporary\' be temporary, in that it won\'t last forever?! heehee.
June 9th, 2018 12:49
orchidee said:
Will the word \'temporary\' be temporary, in that it won\'t last forever?! heehee.
June 9th, 2018 12:49
The Darker Side Of Wonderland
MLHnow said:
Again, you give much in every word and truly give WORD to us all
My wordy self has not this beautiful fully open door. My doorway is very cluttered and you have to move odd items out of the way to enter! MLH
June 5th, 2018 21:44
MLHnow said:
Again, you give much in every word and truly give WORD to us all
My wordy self has not this beautiful fully open door. My doorway is very cluttered and you have to move odd items out of the way to enter! MLH
June 5th, 2018 21:44
Languidly Basking
SLR said:
We have to find our relaxation wherever we can. :-) love the lines \'ingesting medicine but I\'m not ill\' and \'a sea of artificial tranquility\' . Well written.
May 18th, 2018 23:09
SLR said:
We have to find our relaxation wherever we can. :-) love the lines \'ingesting medicine but I\'m not ill\' and \'a sea of artificial tranquility\' . Well written.
May 18th, 2018 23:09
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kitcat said:
Full of sorrow Syd you written that Brilliant very deep very sad
April 26th, 2018 10:07
kitcat said:
Full of sorrow Syd you written that Brilliant very deep very sad
April 26th, 2018 10:07
Child Of Change
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful tale Syd and I really enjoyed the form you chose. Great write.
April 26th, 2018 01:53
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful tale Syd and I really enjoyed the form you chose. Great write.
April 26th, 2018 01:53
Consolidation
Lauraš» said:
Wow, Syd...dark but powerful!
This write packed a punch!
Powerful words that can help many!
Be kind to yourself!
~Laura~
April 24th, 2018 17:40
Lauraš» said:
Wow, Syd...dark but powerful!
This write packed a punch!
Powerful words that can help many!
Be kind to yourself!
~Laura~
April 24th, 2018 17:40
Consolidation
kitcat said:
Oh Wow! How deep can one get I did enjoy reading it I love deep and dark
April 24th, 2018 14:30
kitcat said:
Oh Wow! How deep can one get I did enjoy reading it I love deep and dark
April 24th, 2018 14:30
Consolidation
MLHnow said:
Thanks for your comments on my first submitted poem! Iām so new I canāt even figure out how to navigate this great space.
I usually write way too much. I send out poems via the mail. I wrote one for the Catholic Church and decided it was too dark to spoil this Popeās optimism. So I then translated many spirit centered poems I wrote into Spanish and Italian. First international packet of poems! It goes out to the Vatican today. Keep writing and moving us all. Get published- you are that moving and write beautiful visual Art!
April 24th, 2018 14:00
MLHnow said:
Thanks for your comments on my first submitted poem! Iām so new I canāt even figure out how to navigate this great space.
I usually write way too much. I send out poems via the mail. I wrote one for the Catholic Church and decided it was too dark to spoil this Popeās optimism. So I then translated many spirit centered poems I wrote into Spanish and Italian. First international packet of poems! It goes out to the Vatican today. Keep writing and moving us all. Get published- you are that moving and write beautiful visual Art!
April 24th, 2018 14:00
A Reminder That I\'m Human
Syd said:
Thank you MLH. Such a kind comment again. I\'m glad you read this poem it\'s one of my personal......I wouldn\'t say favourites... but in my view this is as good as my writing ever got, where the wave broke if you like. Now I just tend to write about my own downward spiral. I like to keep myself anonymous also.
Thank again for reading and commenting
- Syd
April 24th, 2018 13:30
Syd said:
Thank you MLH. Such a kind comment again. I\'m glad you read this poem it\'s one of my personal......I wouldn\'t say favourites... but in my view this is as good as my writing ever got, where the wave broke if you like. Now I just tend to write about my own downward spiral. I like to keep myself anonymous also.
Thank again for reading and commenting
- Syd
April 24th, 2018 13:30
A Reminder That I\'m Human
MLHnow said:
You need to get published to the world!
A gift of sensitized realism that touches the humanity coded in us and prompts the soul to listen deeply MLH
April 24th, 2018 13:14
MLHnow said:
You need to get published to the world!
A gift of sensitized realism that touches the humanity coded in us and prompts the soul to listen deeply MLH
April 24th, 2018 13:14
Serpents Kiss
MLHnow said:
Reading poems like yours are why I read , respond and gain substance for myself,
Thereby giving me much to say!
Thank you. MLH
April 24th, 2018 12:52
MLHnow said:
Reading poems like yours are why I read , respond and gain substance for myself,
Thereby giving me much to say!
Thank you. MLH
April 24th, 2018 12:52
Consolidation
MLHnow said:
Emotional tool that maybe could be healing word for word. Wish many teens could read your Word. MLH
April 24th, 2018 12:25
MLHnow said:
Emotional tool that maybe could be healing word for word. Wish many teens could read your Word. MLH
April 24th, 2018 12:25
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brokenmirrors said:
Very creative. I can feel the regret that you so eloquently describe.
March 22nd, 2018 17:02
brokenmirrors said:
Very creative. I can feel the regret that you so eloquently describe.
March 22nd, 2018 17:02
Serpents Kiss
Lauraš» said:
Syd,
My condolences for your friendās son! A fine write, nonetheless!
Unfortunately, some ātake the bendā way too young! I see the struggles by those who depend and are addicted to drugs. ( I volunteer at a rehab center) Thereās such an epidemic! Itās horrible!
~Laura~
March 17th, 2018 17:35
Lauraš» said:
Syd,
My condolences for your friendās son! A fine write, nonetheless!
Unfortunately, some ātake the bendā way too young! I see the struggles by those who depend and are addicted to drugs. ( I volunteer at a rehab center) Thereās such an epidemic! Itās horrible!
~Laura~
March 17th, 2018 17:35
A Reminder That I\'m Human
MaddieJ said:
I really love those last lines. The whole poem was great though! Hope to see more soon!
March 9th, 2018 00:57
MaddieJ said:
I really love those last lines. The whole poem was great though! Hope to see more soon!
March 9th, 2018 00:57
Lysergic Tide
Resa71 said:
The read takes you on a trip.
And like many trips taken, thereās
Some beautiful things along the ride.
Also , some scary S**t.
I loved it!
February 27th, 2018 17:59
Resa71 said:
The read takes you on a trip.
And like many trips taken, thereās
Some beautiful things along the ride.
Also , some scary S**t.
I loved it!
February 27th, 2018 17:59
Midnight Hours
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. The lines
\"These two souls will never be separated....
Only by death\"
need not be true as your Spirits will go on to eternity.
February 12th, 2018 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. The lines
\"These two souls will never be separated....
Only by death\"
need not be true as your Spirits will go on to eternity.
February 12th, 2018 01:59
Midnight Hours
Syd said:
Thank you so much Lauren. Do I know you from another site? The flower emoji looks familiar. I look forward to reading your work when I get the time.
- Syd
February 11th, 2018 16:43
Syd said:
Thank you so much Lauren. Do I know you from another site? The flower emoji looks familiar. I look forward to reading your work when I get the time.
- Syd
February 11th, 2018 16:43
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