Comments received on poems by Syd
Languidly Basking
SLR said:
We have to find our relaxation wherever we can. :-) love the lines \'ingesting medicine but I\'m not ill\' and \'a sea of artificial tranquility\' . Well written.
May 18th, 2018 23:09
SLR said:
We have to find our relaxation wherever we can. :-) love the lines \'ingesting medicine but I\'m not ill\' and \'a sea of artificial tranquility\' . Well written.
May 18th, 2018 23:09
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kitcat said:
Full of sorrow Syd you written that Brilliant very deep very sad
April 26th, 2018 10:07
kitcat said:
Full of sorrow Syd you written that Brilliant very deep very sad
April 26th, 2018 10:07
Child Of Change
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful tale Syd and I really enjoyed the form you chose. Great write.
April 26th, 2018 01:53
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful tale Syd and I really enjoyed the form you chose. Great write.
April 26th, 2018 01:53
Consolidation
Lauraš» said:
Wow, Syd...dark but powerful!
This write packed a punch!
Powerful words that can help many!
Be kind to yourself!
~Laura~
April 24th, 2018 17:40
Lauraš» said:
Wow, Syd...dark but powerful!
This write packed a punch!
Powerful words that can help many!
Be kind to yourself!
~Laura~
April 24th, 2018 17:40
Consolidation
kitcat said:
Oh Wow! How deep can one get I did enjoy reading it I love deep and dark
April 24th, 2018 14:30
kitcat said:
Oh Wow! How deep can one get I did enjoy reading it I love deep and dark
April 24th, 2018 14:30
Consolidation
MLHnow said:
Thanks for your comments on my first submitted poem! Iām so new I canāt even figure out how to navigate this great space.
I usually write way too much. I send out poems via the mail. I wrote one for the Catholic Church and decided it was too dark to spoil this Popeās optimism. So I then translated many spirit centered poems I wrote into Spanish and Italian. First international packet of poems! It goes out to the Vatican today. Keep writing and moving us all. Get published- you are that moving and write beautiful visual Art!
April 24th, 2018 14:00
MLHnow said:
Thanks for your comments on my first submitted poem! Iām so new I canāt even figure out how to navigate this great space.
I usually write way too much. I send out poems via the mail. I wrote one for the Catholic Church and decided it was too dark to spoil this Popeās optimism. So I then translated many spirit centered poems I wrote into Spanish and Italian. First international packet of poems! It goes out to the Vatican today. Keep writing and moving us all. Get published- you are that moving and write beautiful visual Art!
April 24th, 2018 14:00
A Reminder That I\'m Human
Syd said:
Thank you MLH. Such a kind comment again. I\'m glad you read this poem it\'s one of my personal......I wouldn\'t say favourites... but in my view this is as good as my writing ever got, where the wave broke if you like. Now I just tend to write about my own downward spiral. I like to keep myself anonymous also.
Thank again for reading and commenting
- Syd
April 24th, 2018 13:30
Syd said:
Thank you MLH. Such a kind comment again. I\'m glad you read this poem it\'s one of my personal......I wouldn\'t say favourites... but in my view this is as good as my writing ever got, where the wave broke if you like. Now I just tend to write about my own downward spiral. I like to keep myself anonymous also.
Thank again for reading and commenting
- Syd
April 24th, 2018 13:30
A Reminder That I\'m Human
MLHnow said:
You need to get published to the world!
A gift of sensitized realism that touches the humanity coded in us and prompts the soul to listen deeply MLH
April 24th, 2018 13:14
MLHnow said:
You need to get published to the world!
A gift of sensitized realism that touches the humanity coded in us and prompts the soul to listen deeply MLH
April 24th, 2018 13:14
Serpents Kiss
MLHnow said:
Reading poems like yours are why I read , respond and gain substance for myself,
Thereby giving me much to say!
Thank you. MLH
April 24th, 2018 12:52
MLHnow said:
Reading poems like yours are why I read , respond and gain substance for myself,
Thereby giving me much to say!
Thank you. MLH
April 24th, 2018 12:52
Consolidation
MLHnow said:
Emotional tool that maybe could be healing word for word. Wish many teens could read your Word. MLH
April 24th, 2018 12:25
MLHnow said:
Emotional tool that maybe could be healing word for word. Wish many teens could read your Word. MLH
April 24th, 2018 12:25
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brokenmirrors said:
Very creative. I can feel the regret that you so eloquently describe.
March 22nd, 2018 17:02
brokenmirrors said:
Very creative. I can feel the regret that you so eloquently describe.
March 22nd, 2018 17:02
Serpents Kiss
Lauraš» said:
Syd,
My condolences for your friendās son! A fine write, nonetheless!
Unfortunately, some ātake the bendā way too young! I see the struggles by those who depend and are addicted to drugs. ( I volunteer at a rehab center) Thereās such an epidemic! Itās horrible!
~Laura~
March 17th, 2018 17:35
Lauraš» said:
Syd,
My condolences for your friendās son! A fine write, nonetheless!
Unfortunately, some ātake the bendā way too young! I see the struggles by those who depend and are addicted to drugs. ( I volunteer at a rehab center) Thereās such an epidemic! Itās horrible!
~Laura~
March 17th, 2018 17:35
A Reminder That I\'m Human
MaddieJ said:
I really love those last lines. The whole poem was great though! Hope to see more soon!
March 9th, 2018 00:57
MaddieJ said:
I really love those last lines. The whole poem was great though! Hope to see more soon!
March 9th, 2018 00:57
Lysergic Tide
Resa71 said:
The read takes you on a trip.
And like many trips taken, thereās
Some beautiful things along the ride.
Also , some scary S**t.
I loved it!
February 27th, 2018 17:59
Resa71 said:
The read takes you on a trip.
And like many trips taken, thereās
Some beautiful things along the ride.
Also , some scary S**t.
I loved it!
February 27th, 2018 17:59
Midnight Hours
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. The lines
\"These two souls will never be separated....
Only by death\"
need not be true as your Spirits will go on to eternity.
February 12th, 2018 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. The lines
\"These two souls will never be separated....
Only by death\"
need not be true as your Spirits will go on to eternity.
February 12th, 2018 01:59
Midnight Hours
Syd said:
Thank you so much Lauren. Do I know you from another site? The flower emoji looks familiar. I look forward to reading your work when I get the time.
- Syd
February 11th, 2018 16:43
Syd said:
Thank you so much Lauren. Do I know you from another site? The flower emoji looks familiar. I look forward to reading your work when I get the time.
- Syd
February 11th, 2018 16:43
Midnight Hours
Lauraš» said:
Syd,
A glorious friendship expressed by your exquisite choice of words! The strokes of your pen have created a well executed write like the strokes of a brush that create a beautiful painting! Enjoyed the total experience of the read! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
February 11th, 2018 09:26
Lauraš» said:
Syd,
A glorious friendship expressed by your exquisite choice of words! The strokes of your pen have created a well executed write like the strokes of a brush that create a beautiful painting! Enjoyed the total experience of the read! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
February 11th, 2018 09:26
Partner In Crime
Resa71 said:
I think those of us who have often taken up residence with in the darkness, feel all emotions deeper than those who have not.
This makes us truly appreciate that light that someone brings to our lives.
Beautifully written tribute to the light of your darkness:)
February 4th, 2018 12:08
Resa71 said:
I think those of us who have often taken up residence with in the darkness, feel all emotions deeper than those who have not.
This makes us truly appreciate that light that someone brings to our lives.
Beautifully written tribute to the light of your darkness:)
February 4th, 2018 12:08
Partner In Crime
Lauraš» said:
Syd,
Loved reading your poem in its entirety; especially the lines, āSheās the rose, to my thorns...ā, āSheās the mother to my childrenā...
A gem of a woman by your side that deserves that crown! An awesome tribute to your wife! Thank you for sharing the poem and the visual ( one of my favorite movies)!
~Laura~
February 4th, 2018 10:56
Lauraš» said:
Syd,
Loved reading your poem in its entirety; especially the lines, āSheās the rose, to my thorns...ā, āSheās the mother to my childrenā...
A gem of a woman by your side that deserves that crown! An awesome tribute to your wife! Thank you for sharing the poem and the visual ( one of my favorite movies)!
~Laura~
February 4th, 2018 10:56
Partner In Crime
Lorna said:
Whoa! Good one.......... Bonnie to your Clyde. I spent oodles of time reading about them. There was a romantic side to their story for sure! (Let\'s ignore all the death and destruction though). But it makes a powerful comparison for your poem.
February 4th, 2018 08:33
Lorna said:
Whoa! Good one.......... Bonnie to your Clyde. I spent oodles of time reading about them. There was a romantic side to their story for sure! (Let\'s ignore all the death and destruction though). But it makes a powerful comparison for your poem.
February 4th, 2018 08:33
The Aviary
Lauraš» said:
Syd,
A subtle yet POWERFUL message!
Awesome!
Enjoyed the read!
~Laura~
January 31st, 2018 18:08
Lauraš» said:
Syd,
A subtle yet POWERFUL message!
Awesome!
Enjoyed the read!
~Laura~
January 31st, 2018 18:08
A Reminder That I\'m Human
FineB said:
Thsnk you Syd.
We are only human at the end of the day and not infallible.
Superb write.
Keep writing
FineB
January 25th, 2018 15:15
FineB said:
Thsnk you Syd.
We are only human at the end of the day and not infallible.
Superb write.
Keep writing
FineB
January 25th, 2018 15:15
A Reminder That I\'m Human
FredPeyer said:
Syd, I like the poem, the subject, the writing, and the rhyming. Well done!
January 25th, 2018 14:36
FredPeyer said:
Syd, I like the poem, the subject, the writing, and the rhyming. Well done!
January 25th, 2018 14:36
A Reminder That I\'m Human
orchidee said:
A fine write Syd. I\'m not human. I\'m half-human, half-guinea pig, as in my pic! Well, sometimes, in my mad moments I\'m inhuman! Are we all?! lol.
January 25th, 2018 14:17
orchidee said:
A fine write Syd. I\'m not human. I\'m half-human, half-guinea pig, as in my pic! Well, sometimes, in my mad moments I\'m inhuman! Are we all?! lol.
January 25th, 2018 14:17
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